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Posted: 14 years ago
Okay...so I read parts 22 & 23 together!! They were very sweet parts u knw...all Armaan n Muskaan..😳..Am glad Naaz ko pata chal gaya...at least someone shud knw...other than these 2...or shud I say Muskaan? As Armaan still doesnt knw...😆

Waise may be I understand his position...bechara ek Nisha ke chakkar me pareshan hai...baki sab kuch kaise samjhega? But now that Muskaan has suggested a solution I hope it works...eventually...😉

Meanwhile...Muskaan's father is here!! Thats a gud thing...lekin I sense trouble..😆...And ye sabko Zaheer kyun dikhta hai? Armaan kyun nahi dikhta...? Huh...

Anyways...Loved that garage wala scene...thats such a wonderful song u knw...evergreen one!! The scene had this beautiful simplicity in itself...wonderful job Sana!! 👏


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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks for the superb update...

Sorry for commenting late...

Good Armaan and Muskan are getting close to each other ...

I just hope nisha doesnt create a misunderstanding between them also Muskaan father is here and he asks muskaan to marry zaheer...

But happy naaz knows abt muskaan's feeling for Armaan...

Pls try n cont soon ...

Waiting for more...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hello everyone...ya i know i know jute chappal tamatar pata nahi kya kya ready hai...but is baar galati meri nahi thi...sacchi...this next part was almost complete and supposed to be up about 3 weeks ago...about a week later than the earlier part...but my damn net ...3 weeks se down hai...aur abhi bhi i have connected it thru my cell phone with difficulties...coz now i cudnt wait...to post this particular part atleast...so here it is...i hope you all...ahem ahem...enjoy...na na kuch nahi...go ahead and read...😃😆
and silent readers...its high time I should get to acknowledge your presence...so plzz...like button...ya one word comment...even if its 'dislike'...thank uuu everyone...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
sorry guys...m nt posting it today...😭...i was occupied whole evening to write something very imp in this part...but m utterly shocked to see it didnt get saved somehow...m getting damn pissed...m very sorry to say...i will update by tomorrow...cant be today...sorry again...😭😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
Its ok Sana...dont stress urself dear!! We are always patiently w8ing for ur updates...no matter how long u take...as long as u are continuing wid the fic...😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 24

Rahim and Sajid arrange for a splendid feast to welcome Feroz. They wanted a dinner at a lavish restaraunt but Feroz insisted he wanted only proper home cooked food. So Farhat and Saba get together to give him a treat. Everyone has a good time over dinner. Feroz gets to know Sajid and his family and adores the relationship shared between both the families.


At night...Feroz is seated in the lounge thinking over his decision. He decides not to delay anymore and goes to Rahim's room to discuss it with him. Rahim and Farhat are overjoyed to hear about it. Their happiness knew no bound as they loved Muskaan as her daughter.


In the morning...


Zaheer was getting ready for office when he hears a knock on his door.

Zaheer: mom..ap is waqt...kuch kaam tha

Farhat: ha...bohot imp kaam tha...

Zaheer: ohk...but mom thoda jaldi plz...meri imp meeting hai

Farhat: tujhe to hamesha kaam hota hai...par pehle meri baat sun...baith yaha...(indicating to the place next to her on bed)

Zaheer: boliye...but plz thoda jaldi

Farhat(sighs): tune shaadi ke bare me kya socha hai beta

Zaheer: shaadi...kiski shaadi ??

Farhat: meri.!!

Zaheer: huh...apki??!!!

Farhat: uff...are baba teri...teri shaadi Zaheer aur kiski

Zaheer: meri?? mom...achanak kyu...mujhe abhi nahi sochna ye sab

Farhat: kyu... abhi kyu nahi...ye time sahi hai...aur waise bhi humne ladki pasand karli hai

Zaheer: kya?!!!! apko ye achanak kya hogya aaj

Farhat: kuch bhi nahi...tu puch to ke ladki kaun hai

Zaheer(sighs): kaun hai

Farhat: Muskaan...

Zaheer is speechless...just staring at her. He quickly stands up and turns to face the other side.

Farhat: Zaheer...beta aramse soch...koi jaldi nahi hai...agar tujhe abhi shaadi nahi karni to na sahi...par...ha to...kar sakta hai na (she tries to peak at him from behind...trying to catch his expressions)...dekh beta...me...tere abbu aur bade abbu...sabka...bohot armaan hai ki...umm...Zaheer...kuch to bol beta


He slowly turns to her as she tries to read his mind.


Zaheer: aap sab khush hoge isse??


Farhat: bohot...par usse zyada teri aur Muskaan ki khushi mayne rakhti hai...tujhe waqt chahiye...to aramse soch le


Zaheer: uski zarurat nahi ma...agar aap sab khush hai...to fir...jaise aap thik samjhe


Saying that he quickly picks up his bag and heads towards the door.


Farhat: par Zaheer...


He stops at the door..and turns to her...a small smile on his face. But in moments that little smile gives way to a blushing and glowing face. He looks down trying to hide it from his mom and quickly leaves.


Farhat was on cloud nine now. She had got much more than just an approval from her son. Now only Muskaan should agree. And something inside her said that even that good news is not far away.


Zaheer was getting down the stairs when he collides with Muskaan. Obviously he was too busy in his thougths to notice anyone in front of him. But looking at her his face instantly lights up, and eyes get hooked.


Muskaan: Zaheer... aaj itni jaldi??

no response.

Muskaan: Zaheer


Zaheer: huh...hmm..

Muskaan: kya hua are you ok

Zaheer: ha...umm...m good

Muskaan: aaj itni jaldi office

Zaheer: um..ha wo...meeting hai...tum nahi ja rahi

Muskaan: i will go late today..Imran is going to call...abbu n I will talk together (smiles)

Zaheer: wow..k then...c u in office

Muskaan: ohk...(she leaves)

Zaheer stares at her all through..till she reaches her dad's room. Embaressed, he slides his hand through his hair and makes his way out of the house.


As he leaves the house he spots Armaan and runs to him.

Zaheer: office ja raha hai na...chal saath jate hai..

He gets in Armaan's car.

Armaan: ohho...waise itni der se ja raha hai

Zaheer: ha wo...(he realizes Armaan is chuckling...he hits him on head)

Armaa: are...tere timings to adhi raat ke hote hai na...so i thgt...

( he looks at Zaheer and realizes hes not even listening)

Armaan: kya baat hai...aaj tewar badle badle lag rahe hai


Zaheer looks at him and gives a wide grin as he relaxingly stretches himself on the seat.


Armaan: hey! What is it?? jaldi bol


Zaheer( dreamingly) kya bolu ab...


Armaan: Oh God...something is seriously wrong...bol na


Zaheer: tujhe batau...usse acha bbc news par post kar du


Armaan: bolta hai ya neeche utaru tujhe


Zaheer: utar de


Armaan: ja mat bol...tujhse to expect bhi nahi karna chahiye...huh


After few minutes of silence on both ends..Armaan turns to take another look of Zaheer...he was staring out of the window dreamingly.


Armaan: agar duniya ka koi bhi aur ladka hota...to aisi shakal dekh kar hi me samajh jata...ki ladki ka chakkar hai...lekin tujh jaise hopeless...(he glances at Zaheer to check his expressions)...se aisa kuch expect nahi karna chahiye.


At this Zaheer decides to reveal it finally...but he stops. He wants to give a surprise cum shock to Armaan. Surprise coz he knew he will be too happy to know it. And shock coz he may kill Zaheer the very next moment for hiding it from him all the while. But he thinks..'na...itna easily nahi...thoda special tarike se bataunga'


Armaan: tu sun bhi raha hai me kya bak raha hu


Zaheer: ha mere baap...aur aisa kuch nahi hai...bas aaj mood acha hai...aur tujhe thoda tease kar raha tha


Armaan was not at all convinced. But he thinks 'mat bata..mujhe bhi pata karna ata hai...itne saal tere saath papad nahi bele maine'


Zaheer: kuch bola tune?


Armaan: nahi to...acha chod...mat bata...mujhe kuch batana hai tujhe..


Zaheer: bolo


Armaan tells him about the conversation between Muskaan and him the previous day.


Zaheer: nice..sounds good...hope it works


Armaan: hmm


They reach the office and head to their respective cabins.


At night...

Feroz goes to Muskaan's room. She was busy writing her diary when knock at the door makes her look up. She quickly closes her diary and hides it under the blanket.


Muskaan: abbu aap...andar aaiye na

Feroz: mai soch raha tha kahi tum so to nahi gayi

Muskaan: bas abbu sone hi ja rahi tha...Naaz nahi na ayi ab tak...tv dekh rahi hogi

Feroz: hmm.. (takes seat close to her on the bed)...beta...jab me tumhe yaha India bhej raha tha...i was not at all sure of it...dar lag raha tha...ki tum yaha settle hopaogi ya nahi...itne din bhi London me...mujhe yahi tension rehta tha...ki tum yaha kaise reh rahi hogi...kya kar rahi hogi...nayi jagah naye log...tumhe pasand ayenge ya nahi...par ab lagta hai...me bekar me tension le raha tha...hai na?


Muskaan smiles.


Feroz: ji abbu...bohot


Feroz: Muskaan...tumne hamesha koshish ki, apne saath saath apni ammi ki responsibilities bhi puri karne ki...jis tarah tumne apne ghar ko..Imran ko...aur mujhe sambhala hai...me hamesha sochta tha...ki jab meri beti ki shaadi hojaegi...tab me..mera ghar aur Imran kaise rahenge uske begair


Muskaan stares ta him quitely.


Feroz: mujhe bohot dar laga rehta tha...koshish karta tha...ki tumhe ghar ki responsibilites se dur rakhu...taki hum sab ko...aur tumhe bhi uski itni adat na hojae...ki tumhari shaadi ke baad...na hum reh sake...aur na tum..kyui me janta tu...tum kahi bhi raho...tumhara pura dhayn hamesha hum par hi rehta hai


He loked at her sternly, yet lovingly, indicating to her frequent calls at home, almost everyday, and even more to Imran, keeping track of every little thing happening with them. Muskaan bit her tongue lightly and looked away as she realized what her father is hinting at.


Feroz: par ab baat ye hai...ki aisa to hua nahi...tumse ab aisa expect karna bhi nahi chahiye...to lets see...koi option dekhte hai


He acts to be thinking, as Muskaan observes him keenly.


Feroz: agar aisa ho...ki koi aisa ladka mile...jo tumhe in sab ke saath na hi accept kare...balki he becomes a part of our family too...to kaisa rahega...aisa ladka ???


Muskaan's mind spontaneously thinks of Armaan. Coz every part of her existence knew...that if such a guy exists...it is only and only him...and its proven over time too. Her mind...and heart... recalls a number of instances when he was there for her...and was a support for her perosnal problems. But only today she realized how perfectly he fits there...its only him who fits in the place her dad is carving.


Feroz: Muskaan...agar aisa ladka mile..to tumhe nahi lagta...usse shaadi karne me koi harz nahi...??


Muskaan gets alerted.'Shaadi?!' she didnt ever think to that extent.


Feroz: Muskaan?


She smilingly nods in a yes.


Feroz: aur waise bhi...we waqt bhi sahi hai shaadi ke liye...hai na


She nods again, her smile widening. Her dad is relieved to see her reaction. Only he knew how against she was of her marriage coz of her responsibilities. Though not verbal, but her dad knew what was cooking in her mind in all the years.


Feroz: to kya me ha samjhu...ki tumhe shaadi se koi objection nahi?


She blushes and nods in approval.


Feroz: are you sure...aisa na ho beta...ki kal mere faisle se tum hurt hojao

Muskaan: nahi abbu...jaise aap thik samjhe (smiles in approval)


Feroz lovingly pats on her head shoulder and leaves the room too happy to control his emotions.


The following evening...everyone is gathered in the lounge...waiting for Feroz to make the 'important' anouncement...as the elders patiently wait for him to speak, the youngsters are wondering what is up...Muskaan was not still not there, stuck with some work...as Feroz begins...


Feroz: Muskaan ne ha kar di hai Rahim...(smiles)


Farhat: kya usne khud ha kahi? Apni khushi se?


Feroz: ha farhat...khushi se..(he smiles as he thinks back of their conversation the previous night)


All the elders rejoice at the news and get in discussions of how grand the wedding should be. Just then Muskaan enters and stops at the door studying the chaos in the room.

Amidst all this...Zaheer was smiling and blushing all through...but Armaan and Naaz had no idea of what was happening...they keep exchanging confused glances...Naaz goes to her mom to ask..


Naaz: mom kya ho raha hai ye sab...kiski shaadi??


Farhat: apke bhai ki shaadi...Zaheer ki...


Naaz(excitedly): what?! Are you serious...kiske saath mom..whose the bride?


Armaan too goes there quickly on hearing her words.


Farhat(with a wide grin): Muskaan ke saath


she says that and moves to Saba who was calling her...and so she failed to see the shocked expressions on Naazneen's face..who was left speechless.

Naazneen looks around for Muskaan...and finds her...rooted at the door.

Muskaan was trying to register in her mind the words that she just heard and make some sense out of them. Just then she notices her dad aproaching her...Feroz lovingly cups her face in his hands and kisses her forehead..

Feroz: thank u beta...for saying yes for this marriage...so much...(he gets teary eyed)

it then hits Muskaan...he was taking into consideration their conversation of the previous night...and slowly everything around starts to make sense to her...she instantly opens her mouth to clear the doubt...but befire she could utter a single word...she finds herself surrounded by all the elders...who came up to congratuate her and give their blessings, while they cheerfully discussed about the wedding.

Amidst all that her eyes fall on Armaan...who was standing with his arms folded to his chest...observing the whole scene...her eyes grew wide in shock as she noticed his blank expressionless face...she baffled at the thought of how will she explain it all to him.

As the crowd around her moved away...Armaan slowly made his way to her...he stood in front of her staring straight in her eyes...she stared at him terrified to answer him...


Armaan: I didnt expect this from you Muskaan...

Muskaan: Armaan...mein...woh...

He raises his palm to indicate her to cut it out.

Armaan: leave it Muskaan...(he glanced around the room)...itna sab hogaya...aur tumne mujhe kuch nahi bataya..

Muskaan: Armaan meri baat to suno...(cuts her again)

Armaan: maine kaha na mujhe kuch nahi sunna

She helplessly puts her head down and closes her tight. In moments she opens her eyes wide as she realizes Armaan has hugged her. She looks up at him and is shocked to see him grinning widely.


Armaan: stupid...mujhe bataya tak nahi...aur sari khichdi pakali...mein hi stupid tha...why couldnt i see it...you two are...are just so perfect for each other...(he is all excited)...damn...you and Zaheer...two of my best friends...getting married...m soo excited Muskaan...tum dekhna...this wedding is gonna rock...koi kami nahi rehne dunga me...after all...it calls for the happiness of my two favourate people...oh m soo happy...


He turns to as he hears Zaheer grinning.


Armaan( to Zaheer): to ye surprise tha ha?


Zaheer doesnt reply. Only gulps as he notices the killer expression on Armaan's face...and he knows he has to run for his life...as Armaan too runs around to catch him...


Naazneen places a hand on Muskaan's shoulder...Muskaan looks at her...and then back at Armaan...who was excitedly bashing and giggling with Zaheer...tears start to make way out of her eyes and down her face...she takes steps backwards...shaking her head slightly...as if trying to deny the reality in front of her...the world around her seemed to come to a standstill...she found her breathing difficult to put up with...she felt suffocating...and as her tears poured out faster without her consent...she ran to her room to escape from everyone...or perhaps the reality that struck her like thunderbolt...she reached to her room and quickly shut the door...she slided along the door...and sat at the floor curling herself bringing her knees closer...as she dug her face in between them and let the feelings bottling in her burst out through her tears...


Part ends.

Comments awaited

Love,

Sana

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Posted: 14 years ago
hinal60, PrincessFlavia, dazzling_glory, pinky901, suhana.dixit, golu_1677, spvd, Sumi_162710, swetha10, janu_2006, -purnima-, jasminerahul, pinky901 , Sumi_162710thank you all so much for liking the parts and for the wonderful comments...sorry i cudnt comment individually...but i read n reread all the comments...😃and loved them...thank u all...love ya all...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
no i am bursting with tears 😆... this is wrong 😭😭 I knew it this kind of confusion gonna happen 😭😆... waise come to think of it ... Armaan has not fallen in love with muskaan ...hope he realises soon 😃...else "main hoon na" 😆😆😆...ready for marriage with him 😍

Armaan is quite happy with his friends getting married 😆😆... will he fall in love eventually 😉😉wanna know that 😛😛

continue soon 😳😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
bada waalaa comment coming soon ...haha ...jus glanced thru the part ...jaldi jaldi ...so thats y (my exams r frm 15th ..u noe )
N yeah ... after mere brother ki Dulhan ... now This will be called
"Mere Dost ki dulhan "... lol...bas Dulhan is some what sane here than that Insane Dimple dixit ...haha
Armaan guy ..wake up soon ..lol ..warna mandap se bhagaa k le jana padega Muskaan ko ..haha
love u
akki
Detailed comment will come soon ..keep updating ..M LOVING IT ..heehee
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 24
this is so unfair...
poor Muskaan...
yaar ye Armaan ko kuch mehsoos nahi hota Muskaan ke liye?
sigh...
i thought Armaan might react in some way par yahan to wo bohut khush hai...
cont soon dear...

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