Dil Hi Dil Mein ... RA ff ...part 26..25/11

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Sana

@sweetangel_25

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Posted: 14 years ago

#191

hello everyone...i know i will get comment ki the part was small and all...but let me tell you..i had no intentions of putting this scene all on its own...it was supposed to be a small part of a longer updt...but it turned out to be too long than expected.. 😛 .n the rest of the updt that i had planned will be even longer...and will take a lot of effort... and time...in short ...i dont wanna delay my updates from now on...as my readers dnt like it...😊 😉...so this is for now...i dnt think its tht bad...😉...next will come asap for me...so keep reading...and commenting...bye...tc everyone...😊

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

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Posted: 14 years ago

#192

Update was very good.

Muskaan is worried to see Armaan so tensed and so she decides that she will try to help him in any way possible. she knows that he will not speak out his worries at home infront of everyone and so she takes him to a cafe.

At first Armaan hesitates but later he feels lighter after sharing his fear with her. He is worried that Nisha might take a wrong decision and endager her life if he breaks away from her. He is thankful for the solution which Muskaan gives him and realises that in the end it was very easy to share his tension with Muskaan. He is glad for the help which she has offered.

On the other had it becomes very difficult for Muskaan to control her own decisons. Both of them have found a true friend in each other

please continue soon

Edited by dazzling_glory - 14 years ago

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 14 years ago

#193

part 23
nice part...
they are getting close and understanding par ye Armaan when will he see through her emotions?
cont soon...

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swetha10

@swetha10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#194

nice update..

gud to c them getting along well...

continue soon

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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+ 11

Posted: 14 years ago

#195

This was a meaningful part.Muskaan will help Armaan...Muskaan is getting insecure also.too good

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janvi

@janu_2006

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Posted: 14 years ago

#196

Hey

gr8 part..

cont.sooon

thanks for pm dear..

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Purnima

@-purnima-

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#197

Lovely part 😳😳👏👏

good to see Muskaan supporting Armaan all the way 😃😃...& armaan also trusting her 😃😃...
😆 confused boy 😆😆 why muskaan trusts her 😆😆...Darling we all trust u 😳😳

😲... nisha proposed armaan ☺️.poor boy wud have blushed 😆😆...awww so many have done that to him 😳😳... cutie boy 😳😳 ...ur fault boy who told u to be so good 😍 that every1 wants to take u home 😆😆😆

Muskan help poor armaan 😳😳 😆😆 poor boy ki jaan bachao 😆😆...
Armaan 😳😳 nisha se private milne se problem hai 😆😆😆 shall i accompany u 😉😆...

good to see both finding each other "special" 😉

will wait 4 armaan nish meet 🤣...poor boy 😆... Main bhi aau saath mein 😳😳😳...

continue soon 😳😳
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Priya

@pinky901

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#198

sorry for not commenting timely dear..

i knw hw busy u r dese days..happy too...me 2...

uske baad aapne 2 -2 part cont kardiye..👏

well kya kahu..

one word "beautiful"

evryhng every emotions expressed beautifully...

really like the last covo of arman n muskan..

well watever u showed is true..hum har baar ladke ko hi dosh de bedhte hai aur ladkiyon ko innocent but ye fact jo aksar nazarandaz hota hai wo ye ki..ladke bhi insan hai jinke pass dil hai..aur jaise har ladki muski nai hoti waise hi bahut se guys..arman jaise hote hai...

well u r smart..khushi main twist itna cleverly dala hai ki bas..idhar muski ab apni feelings ko cross check karegi,udhar naaz shayd bhap gai muski n arman ka relation n arman janab abhi apne band darwaze khole hai..dhire dhire..aage badenge na..lekin na..daddy ji ne to kuch aur hi bhap liya wo hi dekhliya jo dimag ne dhikhaya wo nai jo ankho ne dikhaya...

well story is going really well..n i knw but kya karo..itna time wait karna padta hai jo acha nai..so jaise apni life ke liye time nikalta hai..apne readers ko bhi lfe ka hissa banalo aur time nikalne ki puri koshish karo..hahaha..hw convienetly i say this..😃

chalo nw i'm finishing my speech ..do try to cont asap..

aur ha..thanks...for alert...

take care..

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Priya

@pinky901

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#199

I'm Sorry

this time is being totally my mistake..actually i read n enjoy but shayad forget abt ur wish...no excuse...pls forgive me friend..

well the earlier part .it was awesome.like the way naaz teasing muskan .the way muski got curious to go with arman..hmm muski ko pata chal raha hi abt muskan dil ki halat. .uske baad jo bahut acha laga dil ko jisne chu liya wo tha arman ka gana.that song was awesome n simply beautiful.aisa laga mano arman ka dard ho koi usme chupa..aur uski life ko bayan kar gaya ho wo gana.the time thy both dance is so sweet yaar,kash itne acha dost koi hamara bhi hota to hum bhi uhi gunguna lete..

well so dat song dedicated to u as i knw wrdings of dis songs ka koi meanig na ho hamare life main but u wrote this part on frndship day so ye gana tere liye teri ek dost ki taraf se..dilse hai dil se kabool karna..

uske baad arman bhi kahi kho gaya wo ek pal tha par bahut hi khubsurat tha.

part 2

usme mujhe arman aur muskan ka whole conversation bahut acha laga.muskan se jo solution diya ek acha insan hi nai .ek ache dost hone ka prateek hai wo.

arman kitna sweet hai use khud se jyada apne dosto ki parvah hai n he is feeling guity n responsible for nisha's condition.hm becus he is a gem of a person.

m the way arman ne apne bare main muskan ko kaha bahut clear wo acha laga.and the way he said ki muskan ne wo darwaze khol diye ..so cute.but ab shayd muskan apni feelings ko reconsider kare as arman use apna close frnd manta hai jaise ki aur logo ko.

wll arman ko samjhane main kafi der lagegi apni aur muskan ka rishtey ko,feelings ko aur muskan bhi shayd ye feelings ko chod degi..but main kaise chod do.as mujhe kuch abhas ho raha hai is dinner ke chakkar main ya sooner hi bomb footne wala hai aur wo bomb jo hoga wo aisa jo abhi khushi dega unhe but dhire dhire apna asli rang shw karega..

but i really love n appreciate the way u r writing.u expressed each n evry moment,emotions,scene very well.mano jaise tere sapne ko tune hi haqikat di hai is fic ke through aur mano ki muskan ,arman,naaz sab real life main ho..bahut khub dear

ps:pls mera intention kabhi bhi janke badi comment karne ka nai hota.main comment main apni sari feelings aur views dene ki koshish karti hoon,length pe kabhi dhyan nai ki bada hi hona hahiye ya chota..is baarr shayad maine dhik se apna part nai nibhaya ..sorry for that.grt going.thank u for the parts...take care