Agar Tum Miljao..(AK) Part4 - May 30 - Page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
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simi is disgusting....................naina is planning to arrange angad and kripa's meeting happen..................nice part.....................cont soon..............
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ohhh i loved the last 2 parts yaar! I hope Gayatri gets better soon. I just love Angad's character no matter how ruthless or mean he is-it's cool. LOL. Kripa is awesome. I REALLY hope Prithvi doesn't fall in love with Kripa but i'm sure thats what you are planning right? LOL. Simi seems like a really messed up girl and i am glad that she's out of Angad's life. It bothers me that Angad loves another girl other than Kripa but that will hopefully change soon. I'm sorry for replying so late but i was in India and then i had homework to catch up on and lots of other things to do. Naina is a smart women and i am really happy she's chosen Kripa to change Angad. You didn't write Angad's feelings and thoughts clearly enough about what he thought about Kripa or did you do that on purpose? Hmmm anyways i hope this was a long enough comment for the 2 comments i could have wrote if i hadn't gone to India. LOL Update soon and PM me~
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~Jot~
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey gr8 update
AK meetin in a hospital n naina tryin2 hook dem up....interestin.....
cont soon n plz pm me wen u cont
thnx😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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cute part! and thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thank u all for commenting and pressing the like button :) cant reply to comments been really buzy...i am writing the part rite now and mayb update today :) Thanks...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 4

I am gonna give Kripa POV and Angad POV a go tell me if u guys like it :)
Kripa POV
I ran down the hallway i knew i should have gone with mom.
"Gyatri Sharma please" I asked in a hurry the lady looked on her computer and i was becomming more impatient by the second. She pointed towards a direction and me and papa ran.
We came near her room and and saw my moms saviors.
"Is she... okay?" I could tell papa was scared when he asked this.
"They are working on her. The doctors said the wound it deep but she will be fine"
Oh thank god....
"App?" I asked wondering who these nice people, who stopped and saved my mom are,
"Mein Naina Khanna and yeh mera beta Angad" the woman replied.
"Thank you soo much you dont know what you have done for us by bringing her here" Papa thanked them...but i was to busy being self concious this time to notice his tone.
The man kept staring at me. I mean yea he was good looking and all but it was kinda scary too mainly because i dont know him.
I got distracted a bit and looked through the window worrying about my mother who was in there in pain. As wierd as the man was i had to thank god that him and his mother or whoever she was to him were there.
I looked back and he was still staring at me. Whats with this guy and i started to go back into my own wolrd again
The doctors came out and asked for us
"Right here" Papa said. "I am her husband"
"Oh I am Dr. Singh, please follow me" The doctor said and led papa to his office after shaking hands with him and i think he gave me a smile but i diddnt notice.
Suddenly i became aware of my surroundings and remebered that they dont know who we are.
"Hi Ms.Khanna mein Kripa Sharma or woh mere papa Suryabaan Sharma"
"Hello beta" She looked into the mans direction waiting for him to introduce him self but he didn't look intrested. She gave him a nudge. I cant belive it a few minutes he couldnt stop staring at me and now its as if i am not even here. I felt a little anger.
"Hi, I am Angad" He said and went back into his own world
"Hi" I replied and felt a blush come on. I controled it i dont think he noticed.
I looked at him once more and felt slightly dissapointed that he wasnt staring.
Angad POV ( i m gonna suck at this one )
After a little while I couldnt help it I had to look. I looked up to see where she was. I couldnt see her so i looked beside me where my mom for god know what reason was grinning at me. I looked down again wondering when we will leave.
I heard mom talking and I am guessing she was talking to ummm Kripa?? W.E I dont do names anyway.
I looked to see where she was again and caught her looking at me or she caught me looking at her...i dont know. She looked down imediatly and turned red. I couldnt help but smirk. Girls I thought all the same and than sighed.
"Mom" I wishpered. She gave me a confused look saying Why am i wishpering.
"Can we leave?" Her face became stern all of a sudden.
"No" Damn luck just wasnt on my side today.
"Kripa beta, Angad main abhi atti hoon..I need to make a call" She gave us a smile and left. Sh*t I diddnt want to be alone with this Kripa girl, she makes me feel wierd.
She came and sat down beside me.
"Soo.." I could tell she was trying to make a conversation.
"Thanks for bringing my mom here"
"No problem" I looked up at her to see her giving me a sincere smile.
"Soo do u go to the madir often? Aunty told me you guys found mom at Mandir" She tried again.
"No" I answered not even bothering to look up this time.
"Oh" Thats all i heard from her till Mom came back.
"Angad we need to leave" Yes! "Kripa tell Suryabanji that we had to go and we apologise"
"Ji" She answered and greeted mom goodbye.
She stuck her had out to me. I was actully suprised by her her bold behivour. I took it and got that wierd feeling again so imdiealy let go. I would never see her again so it okay I said calming my self down.
"Beta we are having a Pooja this Thursday we would love it if you guys came and maybe Gayartriji will be dischared too by than" I looked at her shocked. You know sometimes i wonder if my mom is out to ruin my life. I tried not to chuckle at that thought. But seriously WHAT POOJA?? We arent having any pooja. Anyway atleast I know what I am doing on Thusday. Not going to the Pooja.
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K guys going bak to third POV :P hoped u like that ^^
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Btw that it for todayy soo tired and have tons of hwrk. Btw i leared today that don leave everythign att the last min....especially on a weekend
Anyway commmettt and press the like button :)
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Edited by starasdf - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77
g8 part.....angad is very funny.....he'll prob be forced to go to the pooja by his mum....who i think is already planning on getting ak married in her mind😆.......thanks for the pm.....plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78
Hey great part... continue soon

thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow angad is too smart he is naughty guy
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Posted: 15 years ago
#80
nice part!!
...hahah..that puja part was funny.

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