Agar Tum Miljao..(AK) Part4 - May 30 - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Angad-Kripa#1

YAARRRR!! That was amazing! I totally loved it. Poor Angad, He loved Simi....so what happened to her? Kripa and Prithvi's friendship is sooo cute. Angad's 5 years older than Kripa? Thats a lot. LOL Update soon and PM me!!

Love,
~Jot~

Looll heyyy
Thankss
Yes he is 2 years older but itz not too bad
I am gonna update maybe tommorow...maybe Sunday
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: N786

Hi,

Seems like my type of story 😆... Par yeh kya, itna chota part? Not fair 😔 😛... Next time I want a longer part 😉 😆...
Please PM me whenever you update 😃...
Take Care

I am gald you like it :)
Oh sorry i will try 4 a longer part next time
Will do
TC
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

great first part! cant wait to read more...can you pm me when you continue again? please and thank you =]

Hey
Thanks
Will do
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: monikaseth

Angad is soo arrogant, 😆

Kripa and Pritvhi best friends? Hope Prithvi doesn't fall in love with her. i am going to kill orithvi if he is in love with kripa pl add me toooo pm

awesome ff thank you for this part....

😆Yup thats Angad
Ohhh i see a lot of people are worried about that
Thnks
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
Awesome update dear......
Pls continue soon
Looking forward to hot chemistry btwn AK..
thanks
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
thanks for pm nice part
ak r poles apart in their behaviour...imean she is so sweet and he so arrogant
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: ShelDev

Awesome update dear......

Pls continue soon
Looking forward to hot chemistry btwn AK..
thanks

Thank u Shel
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

thanks for pm nice part

ak r poles apart in their behaviour...imean she is so sweet and he so arrogant

Heyy
Thnks
Yeah they are poles apart
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49

Part 2

Simi... Oh how pretty she was, but as much as she had looks she was rude. One of the popular girls who made her self popular by putting others down.
Angad also being upo thier, he also showed of that he had money, ofcouse he had never hurt some one intentionly.
Both had known each other since they were at the mere age of 5. Now if you have been with some one for that long, 15 years it becomes hard for someone to see the bad sides of a person. And the same happened with Angad.
At age 5 they met in Kindergarden and intanstly clicked. At age 7, Simi because Angad's girlfried offcouse as little kids they really diddnt know what girlfirend-boyfriend was. At age 14 they developed physical atrraction towards each other, age of 16 they became a couple and the age of 20 they broke up.
That was thier timeline and thats it, for Simi everything went back to normal but Angad Khanna tries to deny the fact that he is still heartbroken.
***
"Kripa.....Kripaaaaa!!!!" Prithvi yelled at the top of his lungs.
"What????" She came out of her thoughts and looked at Prithvi.
"Chalo na mere saath please" He asked her or more like beg for the 50th time in the last hour.
"NaHII" She gave him a stern answer
"Parr Kyun"
"Kunki, its your fault you forgot about the party, your fault you never found a date..." And she went on and on about how it was his fault. "Aur"
"Pata hai , pata hai, its all my fault. Please yaar chalna mere saath"
"Nahi" Came another stern reply.
"Okay i guess I am not going to the party. After all what can i do? I forgot to find a date yes my fault but this is where friends come in dont they. A freind in need is a friends indeed is what they say...but not in my luck..." Prithvi started his emotinal saga.
"Chup! I am comming okay" she sighed and finally agreed
***
It was a buzy day at Khanna's office.
"Sir, aaj meri beti ka janaam din hai"
"Toh, mein kya karu?" Angad spoke to his employee without looking up form his files.
"Kya muhje chooti milagi addhe (half) din?" He slowly and carefully. Why? Because he was talking to his boss Angad Khanna and he was trying not to lose his job but his daughter's birthday was important too, she was turning 1.
"Nahi" He said with no emotion.
"Par sir please, meri beti ka phela birthday hai" He asked once more hoping he would get the answer he was looking for.
"Nahi kaha na" Irritaiton clearly visible in his voice
"Sir.." He couldnt complete his sentence because he was intrupted.
'Who is going to do your work?? Me?????" He waited for a reponse but he got none. "If its your daughters birthday on a work day is it my fault? "You can tell that he was trying to keep in control. "GO!"
Without saying a word the employe left "Gussa toh jasse nak pe chada rehta hai" The employe muttered.
He went back to his files only to be intrupted again.
"Angad" He looked up to see Naina
"Yes mom?"
"Chalo Mandir"
"Mom, please i dont want to go. I went just last week"
"Angad, mein ne pucha nahi bola. Now lets go"
"Uff" Said a defeted Angad as he got up.
***
"Mama app kaha ja rahi ho??" She asked her mom who was ready to leave.
"Mandir beta" She replied and went to Kripa and put her hand on Kripa's head and than ran her fingers through her hair.
"Mein bhi chalti hoon" Kripa wanted to go aswell she hadnt visited the mandir since last week.
"Kripa beta kal chalijana, I need your help right now" Interverned Suryaban, Kripa's Father
***
Gayatri came out the temple in her thoughts. She had came here to pray for Kripa. Kripa was 22, an ideal age to get married. She just hope Kripa finds a good person who will love her.
Gayatri was aware of Kripa's dreams and prayed that her dreams do come true. She would be broken if her only child wasnt happy.
Her thoughts were broken when she heard a car beep.

She turned and saw a car comming straight at her. He tried to move but too late, the car hit her and went. She fell on the gound with blood all over her head. She had hit a rock on the ground hard. The edge of the rock had periced into her skin.
A crowd geathered aound her.
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That was part 2 guys comment :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50

Hi,

Wow... Poor Kripa... I wonder what'll happen to her mum? 😕...
Par yeh kya 😆... Another short part? 😔 😛...
I hope they get longer once Angad & Kripa meet/get married 😉 😆...
Take Care

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