The Beginning of an End. RT-MC FF/Ud on PG 16 - Page 2

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

wonderful start, Superb character sketches,prologue and part 1.

Character sketches are just too good.

prologue are just superb and very interesting.

suspense bahut aacha dia. good.

Part 1 are just brilliant. loved the convo between prithvi and Vaidehi

loved the convo between Vaidehi, prithvi and dada jee.

loved the bonding between prithvi and vaidehi.

wow nandini aarehi hain, great.

loved the full update.

continue soon dear.

thanks for the pm dear.

Originally posted by: SwatiAgrawal

its perfect..lovely FF dear.....keep it up....

Originally posted by: maria_awan

he guglu its soooooooooooooooooooo great i loved prithvi and vaidehi 😊 jaldi update karna plz its so exciting dear cannt wait to read more

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

Hi Guglu!!! Hi Mana

A big Thanks to all those RT-MC fics!!! Batau kisliye??? bcoz u only said na you were tempted to write this fic because of that? You are right. Aisa hi hua hai.😊

And thus , I'm sure, we got a brilliant writer and a wonderful fic to read !! bass...sirf TMS aur TDQ ko bhool mat jaana...waise main tumhe bhoolne nahi dungi !😉 Oh thanks for the compliments Mana. mai itni brilliant nahi hun, bas ek idea aaya dimag me aur liklhne lagi😃. tum sabko bore karne ke liya.😛

Nice character sketch ! Thanks...

And Prologue was intriguing...but as you said, tum hamein thoda pareshaan karne waali ho, issliye I've decided to wait and watch ! 😆 Oho! Aur zara guess bhi toh karo ki wo dono kaun the.

Wonderful first Part !!! 👏 👏 👏 Thanks!

So it's Prithvi who gets all those nighmares! Yes its Prithvi who is getting these nightmares.

Prithvi- Vaidehi scene was very nice and sweet ! I just loved it !!

By the way who is playing vaidehi??? I haven't decided yet, but what about the one who played Jwala in PRC? Or do you think the one who played Vaishali will be more suitable?😕

So, friend of Prithvi's dadaji is coming along with his grand daughter Nandini...hmmmm...

Aur Prithvi ko Nandini ka khayal bhi rakhna hai!!! Ab aisa hi kuch karna hai Prithvi ko...😆

I guess that's our heroine... Yes, its our heroine. You can rest assured about it.

lets see....

Update soon !😊 Sure dear.

Originally posted by: khushi909

starting is gud Thanks khushi

👏

characters seems to b interesting Really!!! That's so nice of you .

pm plz me wid next update soon Without fail.

@chutki

thnx for the pm Chutki deserves a big round of applause.

Originally posted by: bhuvana3

Very well written dear.. its fun to read :) am waiting to read next part.. Good writing .. DO continue n pm me when you update..

Originally posted by: preet09

hiii guglu 😛 Hi Preet...
how r u? M fine, how are you. BTW I really didn't know that you read RT-MC fics as well. Or else I would have sent you a pm about this fic... This a very pleasent surprise.

this is just brilliant yaar ⭐️ Thanks yaar.
the character sketch was superb 👏 Thanks again...

the prologue was amazing
the suspense in prologue was gr8 Awww.... Thanks yaar.

the part was really nice.
i really liked the bonding between prithvi and vaidehi Then I'm really happy that I could show the bonding clearly.
it is clear from the first part that the duo share a very good relationship They most certainly do.

now nandini is coming.......wow
i am looking forward to read this ff 😍 Haiiiiiiii... you are day dreaming. Aise toh mai bhi tumhara saath dene sapno ki duniya me chali jaati hun. Ek se bhale do.😉 But anyways will be continuing soon.

please continue soon Sure. And I will send you a pm as well.
luv preet 🤗

Luv u too
Guglu