Life In A Movie - mayur ff - #3 - NTL page 152 - Page 12

Hi Mahak sorry had been really busy with studies so wasn't able to keep up with the readings but now it's weekend so i'm up to date :) lovely framing of the story so far ~ great work👍🏼

Roma

Originally posted by: fariaa70

<font color="#cc33cc">Mahakkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk<br>I m the first one to comment.<br>nidzy tu kaha hai?<br>Ok mahak main pad raha hu and at the same time write the comment.<br><br>Ok in the first para-<br>i loved each and every sentence of mayank .<br>it proves how much he love nupur.<br>u wrote it beautifully.<br><br>2nd Para-<br>Oh mayank was crying hysterically. <br>i could not c him in this condition.<br>Plz God save nupur 4 him.<br>he cant live without nupur.<br><br><br>3rd para-<br>Mayank- Dr. main kaise na roon? Woh meri wife hai ans she is
unconscious....i love her doctor.....main uske bina nahi ji sakta
hoon.....please aap use kuch bhi karke bacha lijiye..<br>i just loved this sentences.<br>tahnx GOD<br>Nups is getting normal.<br>dont worry mayu.<br>At last GOD listen to u.<br><br>5th Para-<br>Oh no mayu dont do this.<br>nups need u.<br>i felt really very very sad 4 amyu now.<br><br>6th-10th para<br>wow the flash back part was really very cute and sweet.<br>i loved mayur scene<br>nupur was blushing and i m also blushing.<br>so cute and nice part.<br><br>11th para-<br>they were both happy but then what happened?<br><br>12-15th para.<br>Hey samrat liked gunjan<br>then they become united.<br>but whats about mayur.<br>why they apart frm each other?<br><br>Last Para<br>Wow mahak <br>thank u so much.<br>at alst nupur get conscious.<br>And she saw our worried mayu<br>she want to hug and carees him.<br>wow i loved it.<br>plz mayur ko ek kar do.<br>pls pls pls i could not c mayur in so much pain.<br><br><br>mahak i try explain my poin of view.<br>i love ur update.<br>thnax a lot 4 ur nice part.<br>and all the best 4 ur practical exam<br>do ur best dear.<br><br><br><br><br><br><br></font>

Originally posted by: annie07

nice update, i m curious to knw, wat happend, or wil happen?<br>

Originally posted by: shivangi278

omg mahak............
what an update........⭐️
👏
loved it to bits....... 🤗
now i cannot wait for the next part......
the suspense is growing.......
plz try to update soon......😊

Originally posted by: mayurarti

Congrats Fariii<br><br>aaj mai 3rd ho gayi<br><br>coming to the update<br><br>Mahiiiiiii<br><br>tere har part ke baad suspense badta hi jata<br><br>I feel curious to read more N more...........<br><br>The update was Awwsome dear<br><br>past present dono hi bohot achi tarah describe kiya tu ne<br><br>I always say I love the way you describe feelings<br><br>par please iss baar un ko alag mat karna<br><br>Mayank loves her sooo much<br><br>aur ek hug tou tu daal hi de<br><br>aur haan short hi sahi but update karti rehna<br><br>luv<br>Nidzy<br><br>