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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dmgmjht4ever


Yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love being first

It's a competition for me 😆



if that's the case...........

then i am happy to see u comment...........
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey sorry, I won't be first
mom getting mad sorry
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dmgmjht4ever



koi aat nahi.......

tum baad mein comment ka dena......

but i am updating it within 10 minutes......

and its a long one......

so i dont mind u going to sleep.........

but i wud wait for ur comments tomorrow.............

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Posted: 15 years ago


(i guess i keep on making banners for this.....as this is my first and favorite ff)

guys this is a really long update......because i dont have any idea when i would be able to update this again....and tomorrow i am updating "ajeeb dastaan".....

present= no colours.
past= coloured text






mayank- nupur utho na......yaad hai who raat???

Yaad hai who lamha jo humne ek saath jiya tha..??

woh pal jo hamari kismet ne hume ek saath jeene ke liye diya tha?

Woh lamha jab hum do se ek ho gaye the?

Who pal jab humne is pyaare se bandhan ko saakar kiya tha?

Jab hum apni saari haden bhool gaye the?

Jab hum poori tarah se pati aur patni ban gaye the? Tumhe agar yaad hai to utho.....utho mere pyaar ke liye.....

us masoom pyaar ke liye.....

us kabhi na khatam hone waali raat ke liye....

tumhe aaj uthna hoga.....

tum bhagwan par bahut vishwaas karti ho na......

to phir tumhe uthna hoga.....

agar is duniya mein sach mein bhagwan hain to tum uthogi....

maine aaj tak bhagwan ko sirf isiliye mana hai kyunki tum unhe manti ho.....

agar aaj tumhe kuch ho gaya toh main unki pooja kabhi nahi karoonga.....



I wish I had the guts to walk away and forget about what we had. But, I can't because I know you won't come after me, and I guess that's what hurts the most...oh I shuldn't care or wonder where and how you are.....

But I can't hide this hurt inside my broken heart.......

I'm fighting back emotions that I've never fought before, cause I'm not supposed to love you anymore..

but I love u......

mayank was crying hysterically as nupur was still unconscious.... she was not opening her eyes....

I always knew looking back on the tears would make me laugh,
but I never knew looking back on the laughs would make me cry ....



The doctor came to their cabin.....

Dr.- mr. mayank kapoor...please aap apne aap ko sambhaliye...aap tab se jab rahe hain and non stop ro rahe hain......agar aap isi tarah rote rahen....toh aapki tabyet kharab ho jayegi.....

Mayank- Dr. main kaise na roon? Woh meri wife hai ans she is unconscious....i love her doctor.....main uske bina nahi ji sakta hoon.....please aap use kuch bhi karke bacha lijiye......

Dr.- I can understand...par aap dheeraj rakhiye.....woh theek ho jayengi....ab woh pehle se behtar hain.....lagta hai bhagwan ne aapki sun li hai......she is getting normal......unke bachne ke chances badh rahe hain.....so maintain ur calm....

and she leaves..........



Mayank- toh ab mere jaane ka samay aa gaya hai......

Loving someone doesn't mean you have to be with that someone, because sometimes Fate plays a fool on us and we are not meant to be together. But still, there is love between us.

Kyunki agar main yahin par raha toh main tumhe kabhi bhi bhool nahi paoonga.....

aur tumhari khushi samrat ke saath hai...i know that....

par jab tak tumhe hosh nahi aa jaata hai....tab tak main yahin par rahoonga...




Next day in the morning-

Mayank walked up to the bathroom, and tried to open it, but it was locked.

mayank- Angel, please open the door!

"mayank, I'm taking a shower. Please hang on for ten minutes." She called back to him from the bathroom.

mayank- angel, we're married now. Why do you shy away from me even now?

his tone had intensity in it..........

nupur- What do you mean, Mr. Mayank kapoor?

mayank- i will sow you what i mean to......but first open the door.....



Nupur chuckled from inside the bathroom.

nupur- Ok fine, just two minutes. I'm almost done.

mayank- But I don't want you to be done! I want you to open the door now!

mayank was now behaving like a child........Nupur simply smiled at her impatient, loving and childish husband.

She quickly wore her suit and went to unlock the bathroom door.........

But before she could open the door for him to enter, mayank had already pushed the door open and entered the bathroom.........



Nupur stared at him in disbelief..........

Mayank had a naughty smile playing over his lips..........Looking at him smile like that, nupur eventually had a smile on her face too.

Mayank leaned in closer to her, backing her up against the bathroom wall..........

mayank- There's no escaping now, Mrs. Nupur mayank kapoor.

Nupur shut her eyes tight.........

She slowly opened her eyes, only to find him inch closer to her.........

nupur- M-mayank, haven't we romanced enough already? Let's go out somewhere.

nupur tied to wriggle out of his grip....

But mayank simply leaned in closer to her again.

mayank- Angel, it's really hard to resist you now......aur kal raat ke baad toh.......



nupur was blushing now........

nupur- Mayank, stop flirting and go and get ready. We're going sight seeing....vaise bhi maine yahan par koi bhi jagah nahi dekhi hai...

she pushed him away for the second time...........

But this time, before he could come closer to her again, she quickly went away from there.

Mayank looked at his wife lovingly and then smiled to himself.

"She's a real angel." He sighed happily.



Then they went to see the sights...they were very beautiful....

and after yesterday's night of love.....

nupur and mayank had no shy to separate them....

gunjan too escorted them to various sights....

their honeymoon was turning out to be very good.....

many days passed like this only....

they were very happy until.....




Sometimes I miss you so much,I just want to rip you out of my dreams
and hug you! I wish I cud still be with u... Hamari zindagi mein ab sirf aur sirf khushiyaan hi thi......us din hum log ghoomne gaye.....

wahan par maine aur tumne kitna maza kiya tha.....

gunjan bhi toh hamare saath gayi thi.....woh hamari kitni achi dost thi.....

aur us din.....

hamari zindagi ne ek nayi karvat li.....

us din hum log samrat ko milne gaye....




Airport-

Mayank- hi sam

Samrat-hi mayank....hi nupur and hi......?????

He looked at gunjan who was wearing a beautiful pink coloured frock style suit....perhaps he was mesmerized by her beauty.....

Mayank- she is gunjan...hamari dost

Samrat- ohk....hi gunjan.....nice meeting u.

Gunjan- same here.



We thought that they were quiet shy to each other.....

hamne socha ki shayad un dono ko ek doosre mein ek sacha dost mil jaaye...

par aisa nahi hua....

woh dono to ek nahi huye balki hum dono hi alag ho gaye.....




Hum sab us din dinner par gaye the....

hum don one hi us din samrat aur gunjan ke beech ek spark dekha tha....

woh spark jo humne ek doosre ko dekhte hi mehsoos kiya tha...

Din beete gaye aur hum dono ek doosre ke kareeb aate gaye....

aur usi ke saath gunjan aur samrat bhi ek doosre ke kareeb khichte gaye....

hume laga ki woh dono ek doosre se pyaar karne lage the....

sab log kitne khuch the..

But as we say that "nothing lasts forever" we too were now slowly drifting apart......

our love for each other was becoming weakened by the time.....

pata nahi kyun par hum ek doosre se alag hone lage the....




they decided to go back after five days together....

but they never knew even in their wildest dreams that after five days....

their world would be shattered....

they will go back to India but not together....

but separately....

they wanted to be together....

but maybe fate didn't wanted that....

maybe fate had some other plans.....

and that night on which they should have been the most happiest couple....

they got separated....

they got separated on the very special night in their lives.....



they got separated on the night anniversary of their first meeting....

this meant that they knew each other....

or atleast had met first to each other for a year.....

that night which should have been the most prosperous one in their lives.....

they got separated.....

never to be one again.....




mayank - "If you're asking if I need you.
the answer is forever...
If u're asking if I'll leave you,
the answer is never...
If you're asking what I value,
the answer is you...
If u're asking if I love you,
the ans is I do"
Now tell me what do u think? Do I don't only love u? main sirf tumhara hoon nupur.....and I only love u....utho na nupur....

Love works in miracles everyday...such as weaking the strong....making fools wise and making the loved ones recover from any phase of their life....it has so much strength that it can do anything..

Maybe it was the effect of his lines or it was the effect of the creeping sunlight in the atmosphere....

or his prayers.....

or his true love that nupur got conscious....

she slowly moved her fingers and then opened her eyes only to see mayank sitting and crying beside her bed now....

she directly looked into his eyes.....

his beautiful black eyes were now swollen and bloody red in colour....

this meant that he had cried all the night.......

she wanted to caress him.....

she wanted to hug him....

she wanted to say that she was ok so he can stop crying now....

maybe he hadn't seen that she has woke up....




what would nupur do now? what would be her reaction on seeing mayank? will she hug him? will he let her hug him? will they meet or separate?

to know this keep tuned to "life in a movie" by Mahak

and do keep guessing for the next part.......



that's it for today guys....

hope u enjoyed this!

now do shower honest comments on me....... criticisms are always welcome!

and let me tell u that 3 is my lucky number.......and this is the third thread......so i will try to make this thread my best!

and do comment! u know that it means a lot!

and i am telling u beforehand that after this longggggg update........i wont be able to give u long updates......but only short ones......due to practicals from 28th feb.......do pray for me!

and the past will be revealed after some more parts........

till then, stay tuned to Life In A Movie - by Mahak

love u all.....

Love,
Mahak
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Posted: 15 years ago
Mahakkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
I m the first one to comment.
nidzy tu kaha hai?
Ok mahak main pad raha hu and at the same time write the comment.

Ok in the first para-
i loved each and every sentence of mayank .
it proves how much he love nupur.
u wrote it beautifully.

2nd Para-
Oh mayank was crying hysterically.
i could not c him in this condition.
Plz God save nupur 4 him.
he cant live without nupur.


3rd para-
Mayank- Dr. main kaise na roon? Woh meri wife hai ans she is unconscious....i love her doctor.....main uske bina nahi ji sakta hoon.....please aap use kuch bhi karke bacha lijiye..
i just loved this sentences.
tahnx GOD
Nups is getting normal.
dont worry mayu.
At last GOD listen to u.

5th Para-
Oh no mayu dont do this.
nups need u.
i felt really very very sad 4 amyu now.

6th-10th para
wow the flash back part was really very cute and sweet.
i loved mayur scene
nupur was blushing and i m also blushing.
so cute and nice part.

11th para-
they were both happy but then what happened?

12-15th para.
Hey samrat liked gunjan
then they become united.
but whats about mayur.
why they apart frm each other?

Last Para
Wow mahak
thank u so much.
at alst nupur get conscious.
And she saw our worried mayu
she want to hug and carees him.
wow i loved it.
plz mayur ko ek kar do.
pls pls pls i could not c mayur in so much pain.


mahak i try explain my poin of view.
i love ur update.
thnax a lot 4 ur nice part.
and all the best 4 ur practical exam
do ur best dear.


Edited by fariaa70 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice update, i m curious to knw, wat happend, or wil happen?
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Posted: 15 years ago
Congrats Fariii

aaj mai 3rd ho gayi

coming to the update

Mahiiiiiii

tere har part ke baad suspense badta hi jata

I feel curious to read more N more...........

The update was Awwsome dear

past present dono hi bohot achi tarah describe kiya tu ne

I always say I love the way you describe feelings

par please iss baar un ko alag mat karna

Mayank loves her sooo much

aur ek hug tou tu daal hi de

aur haan short hi sahi but update karti rehna

luv
Nidzy

Edited by mayurarti - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi... yes!!! third to commet!!
i don't why i feel like i've read this before
anyways tc
it was a gr8 part
will be waiting for the next part....and the reason for their separation to be revealed..
thanks for ur pm

Edited by cornelia - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
mayank - "If you're asking if I need you.
the answer is forever...
If u're asking if I'll leave you,
the answer is never...
If you're asking what I value,
the answer is you...
If u're asking if I love you,
the ans is I do"
Now tell me what do u think? Do I don't only love u? main sirf tumhara hoon nupur.....and I only love u....utho na nupur....



this part was the best........
love it........
your update is awesome........
suspense is the best part......
hope you update soon.......
Edited by MJHTFANMAHIMA - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
SORRY for the double post.......... 😳
hav commented below......
Edited by shivangi278 - 15 years ago

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