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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Sorryyyyyyy....F.i.r ka ful form galati se main galat likh diya tha...ha ha ha... Thanxxxx to Pinka n Dr Mana actually maine kabhi F.I.R nahi likhwayi hai na...isiliye... galati se mistake ho gaya...😆

Love FIR aise hi hoti hai 😆 😆

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#542

Ek Vishesh Soochna...Priiiiii..Joh Maine Tumse Waada Kiya Tha kii Main 'Tere Naina' Par Lamba Sa Comment Karungi, Woh Comment Bas Kuch Hii Pal Mein Tumhe Milne Waala Hai..Intezaar Karne Ke Liye Dhanyawaad aur Dairi Ke Liye Maafi....😆😆

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 14 years ago

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priii madam...namasthe...kaisi hai...sab theek hai na...dekho jaise maine promise kiya tha tujhse kii main tere fanfics part comment karungi..tho yeh lo first here is my comment for 'Tere Naina'... tu tho waise bhi jaanthi hai na tere saare fanfics mein, tere naina is my most favorite... arre tu tho jaanthi hii hogii, after harr seven ya eight days mein, main tujhko pm karthi hoon aur kehthi hoon priiiii update kidarr hai.....usse tho tujhe patah chal hii gaya hoga na kii mujhe tera yeh fanfic kitna achcha lagtha hai....😆😆😆waise pri main jaanthi hoon tu yakeen tho nahii karegi lekin phir bhi bata rahii hoon tujhe patah hai do din pehle i was getting bored aur karne ke liye kuch nahii tha...main soch rahii thii kii main kya karun, kya karun, tab hii meri nazar tere naina fanfic kii thread par gayi aur phir maine dubare se tere naina shuru se padhna start kiya...aur as usual mujhe bohat mazaa aaya....& i enjoyed reading the fanfic once again...ab ismein tho koi nayi baat nahii hai na after all tum itna zyada achcha likhthi ho kii readers tumhari writing mein khoo jaathe hai...i know kii tumhe lagega kii main tumko channe ke jhaad par chada rahii hoon, lekin yeh sach nahii hai prii madam...tujhe agar meri baaton par yakeen nahii aatha tho tum mujhse ya mujh jaise kayi fanfic readers se poocho joh tere fanfics ke update padhne ke liye besabri se raah dekhthe rehthe hai...seriously yaar jab tum update nahii karthi ho na, you know main kitni zyada dukhi ho jaathi hoon...waise tho yeh baat bhi tumko patah hii hogi, kyunke jab tum update nahii karrthi ho tho tumhare pm box mein, mere se messages hothe hai jis mein sirf aur sirf sad smileys hii hothe hai..hehahaha....😃😊😃😃😊😃waise tho tu na abhi aur bhi zyada good girl bann gayi hai.. jaldi jaldi joh update karne lagi hai...par tu bas issi baat ko maintain karna aur apni fanfic ke updates post karne mein zyada dair matt karna...aur suri jaisi goodddd girl ko updates padhne ke liye tadpana bhii matt..... hehehehehe....😆😆😆😆😆😆😉😉😉😉waise tere naina bohat hii dilchasp daur mein hai...mujhe is fanfic ke twists & turns bohat hii zyada achche lagg rahe hai....raj tho hamesha kii tarah is a sweetheart....so nice... understanding..caring...you know tere naina mein when i read raj's scenes na tho mera mann kartha hai kii i just pull his cheeks....😳😳😳story bohat achcha jaa raha hai madam jii.. love the way raj is balancing everything in his life...aur is process mein he is not hurting anyone....all he is giving to others is just smile & more reasons to smile...raj is way toooo, tooooooo, toooooooooo damn adorable...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️lekin haan prii main tujhse sach mein keh rahii hoon i seriously hate woh theeno useless, brainless, bojh on earth....i think you know whom i'am hinting at, lekin phir bhi main bata hii dethi hoon....i'am talking about the dushmaano kii tolli...the villians gang...the useless vikram, the brainless gaurav & the dumb jigyasa.....jab bhi main in theeno ke baare mein padthi hoon na mera mann kartha hai kii main ek bada se bada waala patharr uttaun aur unke upar phekkarr unke sarr ko phodun...is baat se atleast woh theeno raj aur naina ka pecha tho chod denge.... i'am telling you they deserve such a painful punishment for their deeds...best prii ek kaam karthe hai we will lock up these three in one old darawana room aur andar we will leave 100 mad dogs & hounds....tab shayad un theeno ko dinaak aayega & they will understand kii they should not take panga with our hero....😡😡😡😡😡on the other hand i should say our hero jee is so intelligent....mujhe kitna achcha lagg raha hai after reading the ideas raj used to torture the theen dushmann....he taught them a good lesson, but that was enough only for the day...for the pain they have given raj, naina, & raj's family they should be tormented with this & more amount of pain every single day...& they completely deserve it...👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼waise mujhe yeh bohat hii zyada achcha laga jis tarah naina ne raj ko sambhala..👏👏👏👏the way she was there with in the farmhouse...awww...that was just too nice...it felt good to know that raj had someone on whose shoulder he could rest his head upon & tell her his fears & everything without any sort of hesitation.... naina is so understanding..she took away all of his pain & gave him nothing but love & comfort, from the bottom of her heart...i feel raj and naina ka relationship is so pure, so true....😳😃😛😊😳liked where finally vishal & aditi are together..they make a very sweet pair..& finally they have let their feelings out, as to how much they feel for each other.... this is very very cool....😊back to the farmhouse i liked raj & naina's next day morning which is filled with full of sweetness, cuteness...aur raj naina ke scenes padhkar the song which was coming to my mind was love is in the air..jaaniye..heeriye.....& then how can i forget naina's soutan mallika..hehehe....the i love & i hate you banter was nicee...raj was being so romanticcc.....hyeee.. main marr jawaan...their romance was justtttt...ufffffffff..toooo hottt....me tho blushing.....😳😳lekin yeh kya romance ke beech woh theen dushmann tapak pade..unki tho main...woh theeno na, na chaine se jeene dethe hai aur na marrna aur na romance karrne....priiii dekh tu in theeno ka jaldi kuch karr...warna main teri fanfic main aakar un theeno ko thikhaane laga doongi.....hehahahaha....🤢🤢🤢then adi teasing naina was sweet...& the name you have given the three dushmann is zabardast....kumbh-karan, surpanaka & raavan..hahaha.....then raj planning to show them there place...naina saying she would handle the situation....raj ka mana karna...but naina ne aakhir uskko mana hii liya..that was very sweet scene...& jis tarah adi aur naina raj ka mazaak bana rahe the na, i found it soooooo veryyy cuteeeeeeee....aur main bhi adi aur naina ke saath raj ke haalat parr hassne lagii..hehehehe...bechare raj yeh ladkiyon ke beech kaise phas gaya...aur tho aur naina ne achcha raastha dhoonda hai to get her things done from raj, wohii main maayke chali jaaungi tum dekhthe rahiyo....hahahahahahahahaha........😆😆😆😆so finally humare hero jii yaani kii humare pyaare raj jii ne harr maan hii liya aur unhone permission de hii di naina ko, kii jao karlo apni mannmaani....ab is baat ke liye main raj ko shabaashi dena chahoongi, kii good going...tumne joh kiya ussi mein tumhari bhalayi hai...kyunke after all woh tum hii the jisne naina ko apne dil par rule karne ka aadhikaar diya...ab tum usse apni zindagi bhii rule karne do...warna tho naina tumhe phir main maayke chali jaaungi kii dhamki degi...so smart move raj...hehahaha...aur yeh adi ka dimaak bhi na...pati se ladne ke 101 tareeke yeh book dene waali thi naina ko.......is baat parr main adii se kahungi, adi uski koi zaroorat nahii padegi, kyunke agar tum bas ek ghanta raj aur naina ke saath rahogi na woh dono tumhe sau kya do sau tareeke bhi dikha sakthe hai kii kaise ladne chahiye... tho adi tum apne paise waste matt karna...hehehe...😆😆😆😆😆waise adi is very smart, naina ke liye kapde bhi laayi aur havaldaar ghaaseeta ko seedhi chadwaayi...bechara ghaseeta..sach mein sab log usse ghaseetthe hii rehthe hai...ek tarah arjun tho doosri taraf adi...too funny......😆😃😆& then naina ka making her grand entry in front of the rakshashon kii toli...& naina is back to her drama... i tell naina ismein kitni achchi hai...i think she has surely taken up drama classes along with her career..kitna nataak karthi hai yeh ladki....kabhi kabhi tho acting nahii over acting karr jaathi hai.. & all one can do is hold onto your stomach & roll down with laughter....yeh naina kitni bholi bhali seedhi saadhi bann rahii hai...she acts like her brother has come to meet her & not to arrest her hubby dear...then naina ka acting like raj was with her all night...yeh ladki bhi na....see prii i told you na naina will act like she had a very good time with raj woh exactly wohii karr rahii hai..hahaha... then naina ka acting ghussa that she will break the legs of those who harm her husband..go naina go..jao aur un theeno devils kii thaange thod do...saath mein ankur ke bhi thod dena, yeh ankur hamesha chala aatha hai..koi aur kaam nahii hai kya usko uske police station mein..jab bhi theeno devils raj ke baare mein kuch kehthe hai, aa jaatha hai humare hero ko pareshaan karne... kyun prii idea achcha hai na..issi bahana na ankur aur na woh three devils raj aur naina ke romance mein kawaab mein haddi banenge....🤣🤣🤣🤣hmmm...tho raj understood naina's plan & he comes down.. raj ke neeche aane ke baad tho naina ka drama, ohhh...don't even ask me..it had me totally cracking up..pehle tho raj ko shirt ke three buttons band nahii karne diya..ab aise sharmaaye jaa rahii hai kii un dono ke bedroom secrets bahar aagaye because of his shirt....too funnyyyyyyyyy....then the talk which took place..Myyyy God...naina is really something....the way she was supporting raj & acting like Bharathiya Nari, wayyyy tooo good.....i liked how raj supported naina & stood by her...naina ke ek ek baat se i'am sure raj heart would have been in his throat...bechare ko itne jhatke joh de rahii thi..but it serves those rakshashon kii toli...perfect..it was the best way to jale par namak chidak na...beech mein the jwellery bit was like..it just can't get funnier than this...then the three irritating character & ankur asked naina to prove that raj was with her the previous night...is baat par i would like to tell the four of them..arey thodi tho sharam karo....apne suhaag raat par obviously ek pati apne patno ke saath hii hoga na...aur aap log iska bhi saboot maang rahe hai..totally shameless..hehehehe..😆😆😆😉😉😉😛😛😛then naina ka telling them they can call a doctor & check....& raj ka baat ko sambhaal na diverting the topic....nice move....& raj kii baat ne tho ankur ko bhi sochne par majboor kar diya kii after all why are vikram, gaurav & jigyasa always scared of raj & behind him...good now the villians backed off..serves them right..agar woh log aur choo chaa karthe na tho main pukka se un theeno kii zubaan kheench lethi....then talking about the next scene jahaan arjun is with ankur & arjun's ka getting fake certificate for raj naina's wedding is out....aur phir arjun ka jawaab that he wants to resign & wants to be a politician... where he need not do chamchagiri of the evil...& you know the funniest part was it actually turned out to be that arjun had staged all this, woh jaan bhoochkarr pakda gaya...arjun kii tho dhaat deni padegi...super cool...😎😎😎then the romance between raj & naina..this was so damn sweet....i hope atleast ab koi unke pyaar mein haddi na bann jaaye aur unhe disturb na kar de....waise i really liked the chatter & banter of words between the two of them..woh ek dusare ko chidana, phir pyaar se manana...awwww...all this is so damn sweettttttttttttttt.... actually it is sweeter than the sweetesttt..ab sweetest sweet se bhi kya sweet hotha hai yeh sochna tumhara kaam hai...waise first investigation of romance bada hii shaandaar tha....bole tho ek dum bindaas..raapchik... yaar completely.......phir yeh kya v.i.p ka matlab bhi samjhaya..very idiotic person..& idiot ka i do ishq only tumse...i knew this one..prii waise kya kabhi tumne aur maine pehle kabhi yeh idiot ka fullform discuss kiya hai in the pm's....you know school mein, maine yeh idiot ka doosra fullform seekha...back when i was in standard 8th or something.... hehehe...aur you know Telugu mein ek movie bhi hai, jiska title 'Idiot' this was after the i do ishq only tumse fullform was discovered...anyway good useage... naina kii tho romance class challing raj ke saath........aur saath saath meri achchi class bhi ho rahii hai...learn abbreviations kii..hehehe... raj & naina romance ke tho kya kehne....they are just too much... ahem.. ahem...samaj gayi na prii....☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️& talking about the scene of arjun & ankur...tho finally arjun ne ankur ko sach bataya what happened with raj & his family...goodd..now i'am sure ankur bhi raj kii gang mein shamil ho jaayega aur un theeno dushmaano ko pareshaan karega..i would love to see that..tab aayega mazaa.because once that happens the three irritating characters will have no shelter or support from police...hehehe..waise raj aur naina ke last scene ke tho kya baat hai...mera tho mann karr raha hai kii main seeti maarun.....aur joh shabd raj ne kahii..waah.. waahh... pyaar ne raj ko ab ek kavi bhi bana diya...lage raho raj.bilkul sahii jaa rahe ho tum...hahahaha..😍😍😍😍😍😍anyway the part ended on a very sweet & cute note....story tho bohat achche se jaa rahii hai.....keep it up yaar..i completely love your writing...aur khaas karke after your recent update tho i'am in love with your fanfic aur bhi zyada..where ever i read your fanfic it either brings a smile on my face or it makes me laugh like no man's business....keep the good work going..i for one simply, totally & completely love it from the bottom of my heart....👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏ab yaar next part ka zyada tho i don't know..but i think there will be loads of romance between raj, naina...& shayad woh theen devils will come up with something new to trouble raj, naina & be the haddis...i also feel kii raj, naina,vishal aur adi kii wajah aslam aur nandini kii love story dubara track parr aayegi..aur is barr seedhe track parr jaayegi.... & i also think there will be some sweet nokh, jhonk, some cute moments between raj, naina in the coming update...yeh sab bas ek guess hai...tho batayiye priii madam jiii main sahii hoon yaa ghalat..😉😉😉ab chalo mera itna lamba comment padhne ke baad agar tu so nahii gayi hai tho jaldi se update karr....isse pehle kii main tujhe pm karke pareshaan karun kii update karo, usse pehle tu update kar dena...you know right i love reading tere naina, aur is fanfic ka kitna bhi part padhun kum hii lagtha hai, i'am addicted to it..tho issi liye good girl kii tarah continue soon.... hehehe...😃😃

Edited by Surya.Ravi - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#544

priiiiiiiiiiii...kidar hai re..dekh maine tujge good girl bola aur ab tu hum bechare readers ko update ke liye intezaar karwa rahii hai..not done...not done at all..... chalo ab tu wapas good girl kii mode mein aa jaa aur jaldi se next part post karo....😃😃

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Priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#545

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Baharo phool barsao....TN UD hua hai....😳😆😆😆😆.....main na sach me bahuuuuuut khush hu....in fact I'm listening to the song BAHARA only....😆😆 he he he...vaise phool barse ya nahi...???😆

And yeah....as u knw....I LOVE RAJ....and his EVERY scene.....and mujhe mention karne ki zarurat bhi nahi hai....😳.....but anyways....tumhe pakana aur aapki Dimag ki Dahi banana mera param kartavya hai.....isiliye I'll proceed (without any permission from u😆😆😉...unlike Ankur)😆 ankur ko toh phir bhi Arjun singh k permission ki jarurat padti hai...aur tumhe toh puri chut hai meri taraf se...kahin bhi kuch bhi bol sakti ho...main kaan...khol kar sunungi....ankhen faad kar padhungi...aur daant faad kar hasshungi...😆

Chalo ab shuru se shuru karte hai....Raj-Naina-Adi....whole scene was brilliant....and must say....Naina surely knws to persuade Raj....😉😳.....ab use dhire dhire sab kuch sikhna toh padega hi na...😆and again GHASEETA ka wo packet gassetke lana thru the ladder.....😆😆...badhiya hai!! ha ha ha...ab naina Raj k kapdon me bahar toh nahi ja sakti na...😆😉

And now Naina went downstairs....in the most perfect mood...😆😆...and guess wat iski nautanki to jahan se maine expect kiya tha....usse bhi pehle se shuru hui....I mean of course...its Priya yaar....😆😉....DDPA me aap senior ho mujhse....😉😆😆 thanqq...thanqqq...thanqqq...arre mujhe senior kahne k liye... yaar...!!! har pagal ko khushi hoti hai...jab use senior bola jata hai toh...Dimagless jaisi koi chiz hai ya nahi...😆

And now...Raj murmuring in the room...and Bhagwan ko yaad karna....par phir wo idea cancel karna....as GOD himself is confused abt girls' Dimag....😆😆...kya mast lines the yaar!!! 😃👏 ha ha ha...tab...raj ko do do ladkiyon ne pani pilaya tha na...isiliye bichara...becha yun bol raha tha...😆

Aur phir....Raj ka neeche ana....and the whole scene followed by that....was just perrrrfecccctttttt!!! thanqqqqqqqqq😃

I was specially laughing when Naina told Jigyasa...."Raj ki choice itni kharab nahi hai jo tumhare saath Raat me rahe😆"....and again "Jeeja ka Jeeja" wala dialogue....bestest tha bilkul!! thanqqqqqq... jaldbazi me likha tha...aur bina padhe use post kiya tha...par meri lottery toh lag gayi...tum sab ko jo pasand aa gaya...😆😛😃

And of course...not to forget....our dear Arjun Singh.....he is sooooo cool here (okay main apne BHAI ki drishti se uski tarif kar rahi hu😆😆😆....as I am committed already😉😆😆😳😳 ha ha ha...main tumhare emotions samajh sakti hun...😆 main bhit toh usi POV se use likhti hun...😆)......RAKHI wala dialogue...and then jeweller chori hone wali baat....and phir thak kar Ankur ka usse pochhna...."Main karwayi aage badhau?"....🤣....BRILLIANT!!! 👏👏👏 ab bichara Ankur bhi kya kare...fassa hua hai...😆 aur Arjun bhi kya kare...use bhi toh apni farz nibhani hai na...😆

And of course...how can I forget FIR??? 😆😆 Chalo...I dont learn anything from this....😉😆...but tha to ye bahuuuut badhiya!!! 😃😆he he he...😆

In the midst of all these....I LOVED Raj saying to Jigyasa..."Meri Naina ko dhamki mat dena"...😳😳....okay now I knw...u'll say....mujhe to Raj ki har ek baat se pyar hain....and thats true as well....lekin iss baat me....ek ajeeb si feel thi....just marvellous!! 😃 And yeah....I was imagining Rajeev all the while....during this scene specially....and GOSH....he is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo CHARMING!!!! 😳😳 😍 Not that I didnt knw it earlier....yet yaar.....☺️ main na jab bhi raj k scenes likhti hun...un scenes ko apne dimagless dimag me imagine karte hue likhti hun...toh mujhe us k xpression toh vohin dekhne ko mil jate hain...!!! aur aage k SAMACHAR main nahi batayungi...😆

Am also glad....Arjun ne Ankur par thodi rahem kar di....and he is all set to tell Ankur everything.....after all Ankur is an honest officer.....hope it does sumthing gud!! 😉😉 arre yaar...ab toh sab kuch gud gud hi hoga...fic khatam jo honewali hai...!!! aur agar kuch thoda baht bura hoga bhi...toh us k liye main hun na...??? sab sambhal lungi...😉😛 kyoun ki mujhe na hamesha 'happy ending' hi pasand hai...😃

And now....RN ka cute romantic scene....jahan hamein kuch aur shabdo ke matlab janne ko mile....😆....and yeah....I did guess the song...."Maar diya jaye ke chhor diya jaye"...😉😉 Whole scene was lovely....lekin....madam aapko to bimaari hai na...ghalat jagah rokne ki......I was thinking....kis doctor ko consult karke tumhari ye bimaari bhagau?? Dr. Aamir Ali??? 😉😉 plzzzzzzzzzzzz... tujhe meri dosti ki kassam...bhej Dr Aamir ali ko...!!! main bina chochlate k un k prescribe kiye hue sare medicines hasste hasste kha lungi...😆

Achha....ab bahut hua....I knw....comment already long ho chuka hai....so I'll stop now....warna tum pagal ho jaogi...and agar aisa hua...to TN ka next UD kaise milega?? 😆😆 Toh aaj tak koun se normal inshan ne is fic ko likha tha...is fic ko suru karnewali bhi toh A1 pagal hi hai...!!! aur agar main pagalpan chod dungi...toh likhna bhi chod dungi...kyoun ki ideas toh mere dimagless dimag me hi hai na...!!! account bandh ho jayega...toh kharch kahan se karungi...😆

And yeah.....mujhe pata hai TN khatam hone wala hai....but I just dont wanna think abt it still now.....huh!! So I'll drop that matter as of now...😃 yehi behtar hai...kyoun ki main bhi tum sba ko is fic k thru paka paka kar pakk chuki hun...😆 sayad is k baad...main koi aur fic likhun...aur voh tumhe achha lage...!!! matalb...'sayad'... haan...maine koi plan nahi banaya hai...😆

Oh yeah....coming to the LRL joke....second one....cool...and chweet!!! Loved it....thanqqqqq 😛and yeah.....first one.....ab tumhe to pata hi hoga maine iska zikr anth me kyun kiya?? Kyunki....iska anth padhke main shocked thi....uss Huda ki itniiii himmat.....Raj ki car ki brakes??? 😡😡...Main abhi Shalini ki clinic pohuch rahi hu.....Naina ne jo kasar puri nahi kii...wo mujhe puri karni hai....😡😆....but anyways....badhiya tha yaar....as usual!! tum jaldi se shalini k clinic me pahuncho...main use bol dungi ki voh tumhe tumhare dil ki karne ki puri chut de de...😆

And now finally....THANQQQQQQQQQQQQ for the dedication....(specially for addressing Achhi Bacchi 😳😳 ab kya karennn...tumhare layak aur koi naam milta hi nahi...aur ab toh yeh TAG tumhare naam se reg bhi ho chuka hai...aur vaise bhi yeh TAG sirf tumhara hi hai...😉)...ab main zyada kuch nahi kahungi iske bare me....kaise kahu?? Tumhe khud nahi pata ye dedication kyun dii tumne?😆😆......abhi chalo...bahut pak chuki ho tum...baki ka baad me....take care.....😃 arre mujhe pata hai na ki maine tumhe dedicate kyoun kiya hai...lekin actuaaly baat yeh hai ki voh baat...mujhe yaad nahi aa rahi hai...😆 vaise UD toh ready hai...bass post karne ki deri hai...😃

Luv,

Sumi.😛😳

Thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Sumi...😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

#546

Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi

Oye pri madam....tune yeh update mereko dedicate kiya...aww...love u..🤗 dedicate kiya isiliye 'LOVE YOU'...varna tu mujhe pyar nahi karti...kya...??? bol k toh dekh yeh baat...teri taange tod dungi...😆dekh abhi meri spelling correct karr...surya likh...main jaanthi hoon tune masti mein suriya likha..hehehe....😆😆😆😆😆 arre nahi...maine sach me SURIYA hi likha tha...kyoun k... mujhe tere naam k sath Ghazni k suriya ki yaad aa jati hai...😆abhi main update padthi hoon aur comment bhi bohat jald karoongi.....😳😳😳 okay....hum intezar karr rahe hain...arre yaar...tera comment toh aa gaya...!!! aur voh comment kam...bal ki ek chota sa ud lagta hai...jis me mujhe jane k jhaad par chadane k liye tune bahttttt mehnat ki hai...😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

#547

Originally posted by: rituka7
great
update asap.....

Thanxxxxxxxx Rituka...😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

#548

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1
awesome part.loved it. Thanqqqq😃
naina totally rock. he he he...raj ka asar hai...😛
pehlei baar F.I.R, V.I.P ke kuch new meaning pata chala. ha ha ha...use kisi ko mat batana...😆
enjoy the update. Glad...sweety😃
continue soon.

Thanxxxxxxxx Rakhi......😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

#549

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan
awesome update...............loved naina and her logic...............in all the part was worth the wait.............plz continue soon and thanks for the pm.

Thanqqqqqq Dear...😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

#550

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez
hiiiiiieeeee Pri !!! Hiiiiiieeeeeeeeeee...dekh maine 'eeeeeeee' tujh se bhi jyada likha hai...😆
wonderrrrrrrrrrrrfuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuulllll Update !!!! shukriya...vaid jee😃

Naina ne kya smartness dikhayi !! mera aur Raj ka dono ka asar hai us par...😆

and you know wat? I reaaalllly liked ki tumne ARJUN SINGH( read AALEKH) ko itnaaa intelligent dikhaya !😃 Arjun toh yugon yugon se intelligent hain...!!! Mahabharat me bhi the...LRL me bhi the...aur yahan par bhi hain...😆

yaarrr...main toh agle Update ka intezaar kar rahi hoon... main bhi likh chuki hun...bass...post karne ki deri hai...😃

byeeeee