Tere Naina#2#(RN)Last Part Wid EPI pg 119(4/6) - Page 40

Originally posted by: kads_8302

mai is update ke liye bas itna kahungi.. tumne mujhe rulate huye hasaya 😛aur .. hasate huye rula diya....😭 yaar paheli kyoun bujha rahi ho...saaf saaf bolo na...achha laga ki nahi...😊

ab agar mujhe gaurav, vikaram aur jigayasa mai se koi bhi mil gaya toh mai unhe rajveer is phele tarpa trapa ke marungi...😡 so unse keh dena mere samne na aaye... warna unki halat aisi hogi🤢 maine un teeno ko PM kar diya hai...!!! voh toh tumhare daar se NEPAL bhaag gaye hain...!!! kah rahe the ki is se kads se bachna bhi ho jayega...aur Manisha Koirala ka shaadi bhi attened kar lenge...😆

Wonderful update ... As a writer this is your best update of TN......👏👏 yeppiiiii...paheli toh sulajh gayi...matlab...tumhe yeh UD achha laga...!!! isiliye tum kabhi mujh par roti thi...toh kabhi Raj par hassti thi...ryt....😃 ....n THANXXXXX a lot kads...😃 😃

And sorry for not commenting on last updates... pls meri pitai mat karna comments na dene par.... nahi ab hum Gandhi jee k AADARSH se chal rahe hain... isiliye kisi ki peetai nahi karte...par kabhi kabhi hum Subash Chandra Bose k AADARSH par bhi chalte hain...us tym me hum kya karenge...us ka pata nahi...😆

And thanks ki tumne us jungali (Abhimanyu) ka itna buara haal banaya.... tusi mera dil kush kar dita..👏ab aise kaam toh hum karte hi rahte hain...😆

Originally posted by: rituka7

great part
awesome
update soon

Originally posted by: ammuakhi

kya time pr break mardi tune ha ha ha...yeh toh meri bachpan ki aadat hai...😆

agage likhe break marsakthi na toh phir tum sab mujh par gussa kaise hote...hai na...😆

yeee part bohat acchaaaaa tha thanxxxx😃

awesome work dear Thanxxxxx😃

present paast were tooo goodddddddd Thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxx😃

loved it to the core thanqqqqq😃

expecting more raj naina scenes in the next part cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Originally posted by: nihatri

wow

Originally posted by: Puri_2711

wud not say lovely update................... it was an emotional update..😭........... My rajveer............ kitna dukh saha........ apne papa ko apni aankhon ke aage marte huye dekha..........😭 😭............ 😭 😭... apni behan ko railway track par......😭...........thank god use bacha paya Raj.... haan...yeh UD thoda emotional toh tha...!!! par yeh rajveer ka past tha...jiss ki wajah se voh aisa bann gaya tha...

but a good thing.......ki ab vo ek-ek se chun chun kar badla le raha hai..............😃.......... ab yeh sab toh use karna hi hoga na...

not to mention.....loved flashbacks of raju..........imagined raju running without pants 😆 😆 😆 😆.................. also third flashback was also good ladkiyan rajveer ko chedti thi... 😆😆😆....... ab galti raj ki hai..... itne handsome ladke toh chedenge.........😆 😆 😆 ha ha ha... 😆 😆 😆kafi mehnat karni padi thi mujhe in FB scenes k liye...!!! actually mere dimag me koi ideas aa hi nahi rahe the...phir yeh sab achnak likh diya.... n finally tum sab ko pasand bhi aa gaya...😃 😃 😃
& i'm with aditi.............😃....... rajveer ko tease karne ka mauka toh milna chaiye 😳 😳......... afterall it wud be first morning after wedding..........😃 tabhi toh voh gussa hui thi...par voh apna haq le kar rahegi...😉
so now itne emotional update ke baad next shud be a light hearted one...........😃😃😃............ thoda romantic bhi chalega........😉 😉 😉............. oh yes, sabse pehle rajveer ko vapis ghar lekar aayo.....😃 😃.. romance karne k liye Rajveer ko ghar aane ki jarurat hai kya...???😉 😆...kuch samjhi...???ab samajhdaar k liye ishara hi kafi hota hai...
continue asap😊

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

wow!!!dis was really a breath taking updt....👏👏👏👏 ab aap k saanshon ka kya haal hai...😛

too good d way u depicted past and mixed it present was amazing....⭐️⭐️👏👏👏👏👏 thannnnnnnqqqqqqqqqqq Lipi😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

really very emotional yet very nicely depicted anger and made readers go thru the same emotions as welll.....tooooooo gooooooddddddddd.......👏👏👏👏👏👏 aap ko nahi pata...mujhe is ud k liye apne dimag ka kis tarah se dahi banana pada tha😆...matlab mujhe FB k liye koi scenes mere dimag me aa hi nahi rahe the...n finally jo bhi aaya likh diya...aur aap ki tarif bhi mil gayi mujhe... 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

loved it.........👏👏👏👏 thanqqqqqq😃 😃 😃 😃

waiting for next b'coz cant wait to read abt "vikram ka haal" 'vikram ka haal BEHAL toh hoga...par itna bhi nahi...kyoun ki rajveer ka plan toh kuch aur hi hai...😉

Originally posted by: prerna1

that was really good
i hope raj vikram and gang ko achacha sabak shikhaye
plz continue soon

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Gud episode. thanxxxx Vertika...😃
Kaafi had tak confusions clear ho rahe hain ab. ab is fic ko band karne ka tym jo aa gaya hai...isiliye sare confusions toh clear karne hi padenge na...😃
Raj k father ki death kaise hue ye baat clear ho gayi aur Raj k father ki death k peeche Gaurav n Vikram ka haath tha ye baat bhi pata chal gayi. haan...lekin is ki wajah abhi tak clear nahi hui hai...
Jahan tak baat rahi Naina ko sab sach pata chalne ki to mujhe lagta hai aaj raat Vishal us ko sab sach bata k hi rahega. Gayatri jee k baare me bhi Raj ne Naina ko bata hi diya tha. dekh lo...vishal kina bata pata hai...😃
Gayatri jee k pita ki bhi hatya ki Vikram ne tabhi itne nafrat karta hai vo Vikram se. is kaabil hi hai vo. Kya solid jhatka diya hai Raj ne Zigaysa , Gaurav n Vikram ko. abhi toh shuruwaat hai...aage aage unhe aur bhi baht jhatke milnewale hain...😃
Theeno ko aise jagah aur is tarah se latkaya hai ki chaah k bhi mar nahi paayenge , vaise sahi kaha Arjun ne ki Zigyasa itne asaani se nahi marne waali hai. rajveer unhe maarna chahta hi nahi hai...us ka plan toh kuch aur hi hai...😃
Vikram aur Gaurav bhi itne asaani se nahi marenge na kyounki bahut moti khaal hai in theeno ki. Raj ka kehna bhi sahi hai ki Zigyasa ki maut k baare me kisi ne nahi kahenge Vikram n Gaurav kuch. haan...kyoun ki unhe pahle apni jaan bachani hogi...
Raj ki aakhon k saamne us k pita ki maut aur us ki babasai pe bahut taras aa raha tha. Kaash Vishal thoda time se vahan pahuch gaya hota to vo bacha leta Raj k dad ko bhi. haan...par tab voh Aditi ko dhundhne gaya tha...
update soon dear

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

the up is superb hope

plz cont soon and do pm me