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awesome update

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EPISODE:-27
Vikram ko taklif ho rahi thi...par voh chilla nahi pa raha tha...!!! Rajveer ka hath us k muh par kafi tightly tha...
Rajveer:- "darr mat...main tujhe marunga nahi...!!! jo tadap maine sahi hai...vohi tadap main teri ankhon me dekhna chahta hun...!!!
Rajveer ne phir se usi knief se Vikram k dushre palm par vaar kiya...
Vikram k ankhon se anshun nikle... par chikh nahi nikal payi...
Rajveer:- "isi railway track par tune Adi ko phenka tha...yaad hai tujhe...!!! use kitni taklif hui hogi...jab tune use itna torture kiya tha...tab...??? us k baad voh jab kai mahine tak hospital me rahi tab use kitni taklif hui hogi...??? mujhe nahi pata hai...par haan jo taklif maine us k liye mehsus kiya hai...vohi taklif main tujhe bhi mehhush karwana chahta hun...!!! us ka voh ghut ghut kar jeena...abhi tak nahi bhula hun main vikram....!!! teri har ek taklif ko main apni ankho se dekhna chahta hun...!!! main tujhe abhi maar sakta hun...par nahi,,,,!!! kyoun ki maine apni choti maa se vaada kiya hai ki tujhe marunga...lekin maut tujhe hazar baar milegi...!!! abhi kuch sec k baad yahan se train gujarnewali hai...agar marr gaya toh thik...lekin agar bach gaya...toh teri maut baht taklif denawala hoga tere liye...!!!"
Rajveer vahan se chala gaya...Vikram chilla raha tha...
FLASHBACK...
Aditi hairan hui...apne aap ko ek anjane jagah me dekh kar...us ne kaha apne father k secreatry se...
Aditi:- "yeh koun si jagah le aaye hain aap mujhe uncle...???"
Hari shankar:- "mujhe maaf karna beta...!!! par main bhi kab tak tumhare baba k piche naukar ban kar phirta...mujhe bhi toh apna bhavishya dekhna hai na...!!! in logon ne mujhe tumhe yahan lane k liye...pure 5 lakhs diye hain...!!!"
us ne mushkurate hue ek taraf ishara kiya....us kamm roshni me bhi Vikram , Jigyasa aur Gaurav ko dekh kar Aditi chaunki...
Aditi us room k bahar bhaagnewali thi ki Jigyasa ne use pakad liya...aur zor se use slap kiya...Aditi k honth phatt gaye...khun nikalne laga...voh dur ja kar zameen par giri...
Gaurav:- "agar chup chap baithi rahogi toh hum tumhe kuch nahi akrenge...varna...tum nahi janti ki hum kya karr sakte hain...!!!"
Aditi:- "agar mere bhaiya ya baba ko pata chala na toh tumhe nahi pata ki tum sab k sath kya ho sakta hai...???"
Vikram mushkuraya aur kaha:- "un ki tension mat lo...hum unhe jaldi hi upar bhej denge...!!"
us room ka door band hua...Aditi k chikhne ki awaz aayi...
kuch der baad...ander se Jigyasa...Vikram...Gaurav...aur Hari shankar bahar aaye...
Vikram ne paas hi pade ek dusbin me kuch phenka...
Hari shankar:- "rai saheb aap ka kaam toh ho gaya...!!! aap ne mujh se vaada kiya tha ki mujhe 5 lakh aur election k liye...aap k party ki taraf se ticket milega...???"
Gaurav ne apne gun me se bullet thik karta hua kaha:- "kaam abhi kahan khatam hua hai Hari shankar jee...??? abhi toh Rajveer aur us k baap ko bhi thikane laga na hai na...!!!"
Vikram:- "aur raton raat Nandini ki shaadi bhi karni hai...Gaurav se...!!!"
Jigyasa:- "par Nandini manegi kya is shaadi k liye...???"
Vikram:- "Nandini maanegi nahi...bal ki maan chuki hai...!!! use bass Aslam sahi salamat chahiye...!!! aur maine us se vaada kiya hai ki Aslam sahi salamat rahega...!!! vaise tumhe pata hai Jigyasa...meri bahn Nandini baht bholi hai...!!! us ne Aslam k bare me toh socha...par Rajveer k parivaar k bare me nahi...!!"
Vikram k ankhon me khauffnaak nafrat dikhai di....
cut to Rajveer......
Rajveer apne hall me baht pareshan baitha hua tha...!!! kahin se bhi kuch bhi khabar nahi mil pa rahi thi...Aditi ki...!!! Rajveer, Aslam aur Vishal use dhundhte dhunte thak chuke the...!!! par Aditi ki koi khabar nahi thi...!!!
raat bhar Rajveer soya nahi tha...Gayatri devi us k paas aayi...
Gayatri devi:- "chal ja kar kuch kha le...!!!"
Rajveer:- "mujhe bhuk nahi hai...aap jayiye...!!!"
Gayatri devi:- "khud ko is tarah se taklif dene se Adi wapas toh nahi aa jayegi na...???"
Rajveer:- "maine kaha na aap jayiye...
Rajveer chillate hue kaha...
Gayatri devi samajh rahi thi...voh vahan se uth kar chali gayi....
un k jane k baad Rajveer ki ankhon me do boond anshun nikle...
voh gaya...Gayatri devi k room me voh zameen me baithi hui ek tashveer dekh rahi thi...
kuch hi dino pahle yeh tashveer Adi ne uthayi thi...Rajveer...Aditi...un k father aur Gayatri devi...
Rajveer aa kar baitha Gayatri devi k paas...un k hathon se voh tashveer liya...
Gayatri devi ne Rajveer ko dekha...anshun toh un k ankhon me bhi the...
Rajveer:- " m sorry...choti maa...main aap par chillaya...!!! pata nahi main kaise bhul gaya ki...jo maine khoya hai...vohi aap ne bhi toh khoya hai...!!!"
Gayatri devi ne Rajveer k sar par hath rakha...
Rajveer...unhe hug kar k rone laga...
Gayatri devi ko taklif ho rahi thi...!!! aaj tak kabhi bhi unhone Rajveer ko is tarah se tutte hue nahi dekha tha...
Rajveer:- "main tutt chuka hun...maa...!!! ab himmat nahi hoti....!!! pahle baba...chale gaye...!!! aur ab Adi ka koi pata nahi...!!! main jiyun toh kis k liye jiyun maa...???"
Gayatri devi:- "Adi...jahan bhi hai thik hai...!!! tu fiqar kyoun karta hai...voh humain jaldi mil jayegi...!!! mera dil kahta hai...!!!'
unhone Rajveer ko samjhane k liye yeh kah toh diya...par ek maa ka dil us waqt kafi taklif me tha...!!! Rajveer aur Gayatri devi samajh nahi pa rahe the ki voh roye toh kis k liye...!!! ek taraf Rajveer k father ki maut aur dushri taraf...Aditi ka gayab ho jana...!!!
achanak Aslam bhaagta hua aaya...sath me Vishal bhi tha
Aslam:- "bhai jee....Hari shankar ka pata chal gaya hai...!!!'
Rajveer ki ankhnon me gussa tha...:- "chalo us k paas..."
Vishal:- "koi faida nahi hai...!!!"
Gayatri devi:- "kya matlab...???"
Vishal:- "us k dead body mili hai...Baini jungle me...aur voh bhi aadhi sadhi hui...!!! us ka khun baht pahle hi ho chuka tha...par laash aaj mili hai...!!!"
Aslam:- "ab kya karen...???"
Aslam ka fone ring hua...ins Arjun tha...
kuch der baat karne k baad...us ne kaha
Aslam:- "bhai jee...Vishal...humian abhi chalna padega...!!!"
Rajveer:- "kahan...???"
Aslam:- "ins Arjun singh ne yeh sab toh nahi kaha...bass itna kaha ki hum sab...jald se jald...railway station par pahunch jaye...!!!"
aslam khud baht confused lag raha tha...!!!"
Vishal:- "sayad use kuch pata chala ho...!!! humain jaldi chala chahiye...!!! par railway station par...us ne kyoun bulaya hai...???"
Rajveer:- "Aslam...tu ghar me choti maa k sath rukk...!!! main aur Vishal jate hain...!!!"
Gayatri devi:- "nahi...main bhi tumhare sath chalungi...!!!"
Rajveer:- "aap samjh ne ki koshish ki jiye...!!! ghar me bhi kisi ka rahna jaruri hai...!!! sayad koi Adi k bare me khabar le kar aa jaye...toh aap aur Aslam sambhal loge...!!! philhaal main Vishal ko le kar ja raha hun...!!! agar kuch baat hui toh main aap ko fone kar dunga...!!!"
Rajveer vahan se Vishal ko le kar chala gaya...
dono railway station par pahunche....
gate k paas hi ek havaldaar khada tha...!!! us ne in dono ko dekh kar...ander railway track par le gaya...!!! tab ins Arjun singh ki nayi nayi posting hui thi...!!! voh Rajveer, Aslam aur Vishal ko janta toh tha...par dosti itni gehri nahi thi...
Rajveer k piche ek jeep ruki...Rajveer ne turn kar k dekha...Arjun singh tha...
Arjun:- "chaliye...mujhe aap ko kuch dikhana hai...
voh unhe railway track par le gaya...vahan par ek ladki ki body padi hui thi...
voh ladki pet k bal track k bichon bich padi hui thi...us ka chehra zameen par tha...aur chehre par us k baal kuch yun bikhre hue the ki pahchana hi nahi ja raha tha..kapde baht dirty lag rahe the...aur phate hue bhi the...!!!
havaldaar:- "sir jee...jaise hi maine is dead body ko dekha...toh turant aap ko fone kiya...!!! kisi ne bhi ise chua nahi hai abhi tak...!!!"
Rajveer k pair kaamp rahe the...Vishal ne use baht tightly pakda hua tha...jab ki us k bhi pair kaamp rahe the...!!! Rajveer jaan chuka tha ki voh ladki ADITI hi thi...us ne vohi dress pahni hui thi...jise us ne us k B'day par diya tha...
us ladki k kareeb ja kar sabhi khade hue...
Rajveer apni ghutne k bal baitha...us body ko sidha kiya aur us k chehre se us k baal hataye...
...us k ankhon se anshun nikal hi nahi rahe the...!!! kahte hain ki agar taklif jarurat se jyada dard de...toh voh mehsush hi nahi hota...aaj Rajveer chaha kar bhi ro nahi pa raha tha...Aditi ko apne samne dekh kar...
thoda dur ja kar batha...voh...apne aap ko samet ne ki koshish karta raha...phir bhi ander hi ander khud ko bikhra hua pa raha tha voh...chah kar bhi voh Aditi k paas nahi ja pa raha tha...us ka dil karr raha tha...zorr se chillane ki...charon taraf aag lagane ki...
Vishal ne Aditi ka chehra apne hath me liya...kafi gaur se dekha:- "tumhe koi haq nahi hai...!!! na tab tha...jab tum mujhe jail se bahar le kar aayi thi...aur na hi ab hai...!!! main thik tha...kyoun tum meri zindagi me aayi...aur aaj phir se...mujhe akela...
Vishal ne apna chehra jhukaya...Aditi ko hug kar k rone laga...
phir ek jhatke se us ne aap ne aap ko Aditi se alag kiya...aur chillaya...:- koi ambulance bulayo...!!! Adi thik hai...us ki saanshe chal rahi hain...use kuch nahi hua hai...!!!"
Rajveer ne Vishal ki taraf dekha...
Vishal:- "haan bhai jee...Adi thik hai...!!! us ki dhadkan suni maine...!!!"
Arjun ne Aditi k nerves chk kiye...aur havaldaar ki taraf dekh kar gusse se chillaya:- "jab dekhi thi...toh chk koyun nahi kiya tha ...??? ab khAde kyoun ho...jaldi se jeep start karo...!!! aur aap...jaldi se inhe le kar chaliye...ambulance ki koi jarurat hi nahi hai...hum inhe jeep me hospital le jate hain...!!!"
Rajveer ne Adi ko apne bahon me uthaya...
driving seat par Vishal tha...aur Arjun us k paas baitha hua tha...!!! piche ki seat par Rajveer ne Aditi ko apne goad me sula kar le ja rahe the...!!! jab ki baki k havaldaar unhe cover kar k baki k jeep se ja rahe the...
Rajveer ne gaur se dekha..Aditi ko...pahchan hi nahi paya...use...
cut to hospital......
Rajveer, Gayatri devi, Vishal, Aslam...sabhi corridor me baithe hue the...
kuch der baad ek doctor bahar aayi...
voh kuch bol hi nahi payi...bass sab ko dekhti rahi kuch der tak....
Rajveer:- "aap chup kyoun hain doc...kuch toh boliye...???"
doc:- "main kya kahun...aur kaise kahun...???
doc kuch der tak ruki...phir ek gehri saansh li aur kaha:- "Aditi pichle kai dino se drugs k high doses le rahi thi...!!! us k bahon me itne sare drugs k injections k nishan hain ki mujhe count karte hue haiarni ho rahi thi...ki koi itne sare doses lene k baad bhi zinda kaise hai...!!! maine apni lyf me aisi koi bhi cases handel nahi ki hai...!!! par ek baat hai...is ladki k ander abhi bhi jeene ki chah hai...!!! par aage kuch bhi kaha nahi ja sakta...!!! philhal main is case ko handel karungi...aur main aap se vaada karti hun ki jitna bhi ho sakega main puri koshish karungi...par...
Vishal:- "par....
doc:- "drugs k heavy doses ki wajah se in k nerves par kafi gahra asar pada hai...!!! sayad...sayad is ki wajah se in k dimag par asar pad sakta hai...!!! phil haal...abhi hum kuch bhi nahi kah sakte...!!! kyoun ki abhi bhi voh behosh hai...!!! par haan...in ki halat itni kharab hai ki kisi bhi waqt kuch bhi ho sakta hai...!!! sorry...
doc vahan se chale gaye...
Gayatri devi baithi bench par aur Arjun singh ki taraf dekh kar kaha:- "Adi k liye hum ne jo FIR di thi...use hum wapas lena chahte hain...officer...!!!"
Rajveer...Aslam aur Vishal ne un ki taraf dekha...
Rajveer:- "main aap k sath abhi police station chalta hun...aur voh FIR wapas le aayunga...!!!"
Arjun:- "par kyoun...??? aap mujh par bharosha rakhiye...main...
Vishal:- "baat bharoshe ki nahi hai officer...!!! baat kuch aur hai...
Arjun:- "main smjha nahi..aap...
Gayatri devi:- "pahle mere pati ki hatya hui...aur usi din meri beti kidnapped hui...!!! aur aaj mili hai voh is halat me...!!! toh is ka matlab toh yahi hai na...ki koi hai...jo mere pure parivaar ko barbaad karna chahta hai...!!!"
Rajveer:- "aur jahan pure parivaar ki baat aati hai...vahan par mujhe kisi k help ki jarurat nahi hai...!!! main dhundhunga unhe...aur unhe un k galati ki saza milegi...jarur milegi...!!!"
Arjun singh aage badha...Rajveer k kandhe par hath rajkha...aur kaha:- "thik hai...aap jo bhi karna chahte hain kar lijiye...!!!1 agar kisi bhi chiz ki ya phir koi madat ki jarurat padi toh...mujhe yaad ki jiyega...!!! vaise bhi main is case me aap ki kitni help kar pata...??? jaisa ki is case se lag raha hai ki in sab k piche baht bade logon ka hath hai...!!! aur in sab k bich hum chote police officer ki awaz dabb kar rah jayegi...!!! is se behtar yeh hai ki aap aapna kaam khud karo...aur main aap ki help karunga...yeh mera vaada hai...!!!"
Arjun singh turn kar k chala gaya...phir ruka...aur Rajveer k paas aa kar kaha:- "phil haal...main yeh pata lagane ki koshish karta hun ki...in sab me kis ka hath ho sakta hai...!!! aur mujhe agar kisi chiz ki khabar mili...toh main aap ko bata dunga...!!! aur yeh main as a police officer nahi...bal ki inshaniyat k naate karunga...!!!"
Rajveer ne Vishal ki taraf dekha aur kaha:- "doc se bol ki...koi kami na rakhen...Adi k ilaaz me...!!! aur paise ki chinta na kare...!!! main police station se ho kar bank ja raha hun...jaldi hi paise le kar aa jayunga...!!!"
Vishal aur Gayatri devi ko vohin chod kar Rajveer chala gaya...Aslam k sath...
par use laute hue der ho gayi...kareeb...6:15 p.m ko voh jab hospital me pahuncha...toh...
toh...Gayatri devi ko dekh kar hairan hua...!!! voh ek kone me darr kar baithi hui thi...aur be-tahasha roye ja rahi thi...!!! kuch hi duri par Vishal khada tha...!!! anshun toh us k bhi ankhon me the...par ek nafrat aur gussa saaf dikhai de raha tha...us k chehre se...
Rajveer...Gayatri devi k paas aa kar baitha..:- "kya hua...??? aap is tarah se...
Gayatri devi...Rajveer ko dekh kar kuch bhi nahi kaha bass use hug kar k rone lagi...
Rajveer:- "aap kuch bolti kyoun nahi...???
Gayatri devi ne bass us cabin ki taraf ishara kiya aur phir se rone lagi...
voh Aditi ka cabin tha...Rajveer bhaaga us cabin ki taraf...par vahan Aditi nahi thi...
voh chilaya:- "Adi kahan hai...???"
tabhi voh doc aayi...aur kaha:- "plz...Rajveer...main samajh sakti hun ki aap kis conditin me hain is waqt...!!! par yeh hospital hai...aur aap yahan chilla kar baat nahi kar sakte...!!!"
Rajveer:- "Adi kahan hai...???"
voh kuch bhi sunn ne aur samajhne k mood me lag hi nahi raha tha...
doc:- "aayiye mere sath...!!!"
kuch hi duri par...ek aur cabin me voh Rajveer ko le kar gayi...sath me Vishal bhi tha...us room me baht andhera tha...!!! par dhime dhime lyt se itna pata chal raha tha ki bed par koi soya hua hai...!!! doc ne lyt on kiya...Rajveer chaunka... voh Aditi thi...!!! jo us bed par soyi hui thi...!!! us k hath pair bandhe hue the...bed k sath...!!!
Rajveer:- "yeh...sab karne ki aap ko himmat kaise hui...???" us ne gusse se kah kar...Aditi k bandhe hue hath kholne ki koshi karne laga...doc manaa kar rahi thi...par phir bhi Rajveer un ki koi bhi baat sunn nahi raha tha...!!!
aage aa kar Vishal ne Rajveer ka hath roka...Rajveer ne use gusse se dekha aur kaha:- "tumhare yahan par hote hue...in logon yeh sab kiya...aur tum yahan karr kya rahe the...??? aur abhi mera hath chodo...
Vishal:- "plz...bhai jee...ek baar doc ki baat sunn lo...!!! phir jo marzi aaye voh karna...!!!"
Rajveer ne us doc ki taraf gusse se dekha...
doc samajh rahi thi Rajveer k mental condition ko...unhone kaha:- "6 bajne me kuch hi min baki the...jab Aditi ko hosh aaya...!!! aur hosh me aate hi voh chillane lagi...khud ko chot pahunchane ki koshish ki us ne...!!! injection lene ki zidd karne lagi...!!! sayad yahi voh waqt tha...jis tym me use...drugs k doses diya jata tha...!!! aur yahan par use na milne par voh khud voh dard bardast nahi karr pa rahi thi...!!! aap samajh sakte hain ki ek drug addetic ko agar apne hi tym par drugs na mile toh voh kaise react karta hoga...!!! par Aaditi toh khud ko nukshan pahunch rahi thi...!!! hum ne socha ki sayad apne maa ko dekh kar voh shaant ho jaye...!!! par voh toh un par bhi hamla kar diya...!!! voh kisi ko pehchan nahi rahi hai...!!! ujaale se darti hai...drugs k injection lena chahti hai...!!! hath me jo bhi aata hai use le kar khud ko chot pahunchana chahti hai...!!! yeh dekhiye...
unhone Aditi k hath dikhaye...kuch jagah par bandage laga hua tha...
doc:- "us ne khud apne nash kaat diye...aur kaha ki jaldi se use injection chahiye varna voh dushre hath ki nash bhi kaat legi...!!! humain majburan use behoshi ka injection dena pada...!!! kahin phir se hosh me aa kar khud ko chot na pahunchaye isiliye use hum ne baandh diya tha...!!! par abhi voh so chuki hai...!!!"
voh aage badhi aur Aditi k bandhe hue hath pair kholne lagi....!!!
Rajveer k pair kaampe...voh statue bann kar sunn raha tha...
Vishal use bahar le gaya...
kuch der baar doc bahar aayi aur kaha:- "maine kaha tha na...ki sayag heavy drugs ki wajah se un k dimag par asar pad sakta hai...!!! toh sayad case yahi hai...!!! hum philhaal un ka ilaaz yahin karenge...!!! lekin agar baat aur bigdi...toh aap ko inhe turant delhi le ja na padega...!!! aap plz...himmat rakhiye...aur apne maa ko sambhaliye...voh ek damm se tut chuki hain...!!!"
puri raat jaagte hue kati sab ki...
Rajveer ko yaad aa rahe the...apne Adi k sath bitaye hue har ek pal...
pata nahi kab us ki ankh lag gayi thi...
subah subah kuch girne aur kisi k chillane ki awaz se us ki neend tuti...
voh bhaaga Aditi k room ki taraf...par nurse ne use ander jane nahi diya...phir bhi Raj ander gaya...
Aditi k hath me ek surgery knief thi...doc aur do nurse...use sambhalne k liyue us k kareeb jane ki koshish karr rahe the...par voh chilla rahi thi...us knief se khud k body par chot pahuncha rahi thi...
Rajveer...tuta hua...khoya hua...apne kamzor kadam ko le kar us k paas jane laga...
doc:- "Rajveer...aap plz...us k kareeb mat jayiye voh kuch bhi kar sakti hai...!!!"
par Rajveer nahi maana...voh aage badhta gaya...Aditi piche hat ti gayi...
Aditi zor se chillayi:- "mere kareeb aane ki koshish ki toh main tumhe maar dungi...
Rajveer us k kareeb pahuncha...toh us ne achanak us knief se Rajveer k kandhon par vaar kar diya...!!!
Rajveer ko apne dard ka ehsaas bilkul bhi nahi tha...par us k ankhon se anshun lagataar bah rahe the...us ne Aditi ko apne dono bahon me samet ta hua...dhire se aditi ko kaha:- "chup ho ja...Adi...!!! dekh...main aa gaya hun na...!!! meri behn ka khyal rakhne k liye...!!! us jo chahiye main la kar dunga...!!! tu plz...rona bandh kar...!!! teri ankhon me anshun nahi dekh sakta main...!!!"
Aditi us k ankhon me dekh rahi thi...par pata nahi kyoun voh chup hui...aur nahi chillayi dhire se kaha:- "mujhe voh chahiye...!!! mujhe dard ho raha hai...taklif ho rahi hai...!!! mera sar fatta ja raha hai...!!! mujhe plz...voh injection de do...!!! koi meri baat nahi sun ta...!!! plz...tum mujhe de do...!!!plz...plz....!!!"
tabhi achanak do word boys ne Aditi ko kabu kar liya...voh phir se chillayi....
doc:- "aap plz...bahar jayiye...Rajveer...
doc ne Rajveer ka hath khinch kar bahar le kar aayi...!!!
doc:- "aap plz...ander mat jayiyega..
doc bhaagti hui...apne cabin me chali gayi...
ander lyt off hui toh rajveer ne khidki se jhanka...dekha...
andhre me voh padi hui thi...khun se puri bheegi hui...!!! khun...jo us ne khud ko chot pahuncha kar nikala tha...khun...jo kuch Rajveer ka bhi tha...!!! us k dono hath baandh diye gaye the...!!! bich bich me voh chilla rahi thi...par andhere me vo dhire dhire shant ho rahi thi...
doc ander ek injection le kar gayi...
Rajveer apni thake hue kadmon se aage aaya...girne wala tha...Vishal ne thaam liya...
Vishal:- " kuch nahi hoga...Adi ko...!!! hum hain na...us ka dhayaan rakhne k liye...!!! voh jaldi thik ho jayegi....!!!"
Rajveer ne ek pal k liye Vishal ko dekha...khud ko sambhal nahi paya...use hug kar k baht rota raha...ankhen toh Vishal ki bhi namm thi...!!! par use pata tha ki voh tut nahi sakta...kyoun ki use sambhalna tha in sab ko...
flashback over.........
Vishal:- "doc ne baht koshish ki...!!! par Adi ki halat me kuch khaash sudhar nahi aaya...!!! isiliye hum use Delhi le gaye...vahan use kareeb 3 mahine lage thik hone me...!!! voh thik toh hui...aur dhire dhire sab ko pahchane bhi lagi...aur purani baton ko yaad bhi karne lagi...par baht kamzor ho gayi thi...!!! hum use wapas le aaye...yahan...!!!"
Naina...na toh kuch bol pa rahi thi...aur na hi kuch react karr pa rahi thi...!!! is pure parivaar ne kitna kuch saha tha...!!! lekin kyoun...???"
Vishal:- "jiss din bhai jee ne aap se zabardasti shaadi ki thi na...usi din unhe pata chala tha ki in sab k piche Gaurav aur Vikram hain...!!! bass...voh apne gusse par kabu nahi rakh paye...!!! aur yeh soch liya ki...agar mere ghar me un k liye dukh hain...toh unhe bhi khush rahne ka haq nahi hai...!!! yahi soch kar gaye the...vahan par...!!! aur aap mil gayi...!!! aur aage toh aap sab kuch jante hi hain...!!!"
Naina:- "Vikram aur Gaurav k bare me sab kuch Adi ne bataya tha...???"
Vishal :- "haan...!!! us din Holi tha...yaad hai aap ko....???"
Naina:- "haan...main kaise bhul sakti hun voh din...???"
Vishal aage apni baat puri kar pata...tabhi Yasmin ki chillane ki awaz aayi...
Vishal aur Naina bhage us k room ki taraf...
Gayatri devi aur Aditi bhi bhaag kar pahunche...
dekha ki Naina k father zameen par pade hue hain...aur un k sar se khun nikal raha hai...aur paas hi Yasmin bhi zameen par padi hui hai...
Naina bhaagti hui gayi un k paas....
Vishal:- "kya hua...??? yeh sab kaise...
Vishal ne yeh kahte hue Naina k father ko utha kar bed par phir se sulaya...
Yasmin k paas Aditi khadi use uth ne me madat karr rahi thi...
Yasmin:- "main pani lene bahar gayi thi...jab ander aayi toh dekha ki ek inshaan muh par kapda bandhe...khidki k paas khada tha...aur us k hath me gun tha...!!! us ne uncle par point kiya tha...!!! mujhe kuch sujha hi nahi ki main kya karun...isiliye maine uncle ko bed se dhakka maar kar gira diya...!!!"
Vishal ne dekha...khidki k bahar koi tha toh nahi...par kisi k shoes k kichad k nishan the...
Naina:- "mujhe pata hai...papa kuch toh jante hi hain Vikram k bare me...!!! jis ki wajah se voh unhe maarna chata hai...!!! par papa pahle thik ho jayen tabhi toh hum kuch karr payenge na...??? aur abhi toh sayad Vikram ko pata bhi chal gaya hai ki papa kahan hai...voh unhe phir se maarne ki koshish karega...!!!"
Gayatri devi:- "inhe kahin aur bhej dete hain...jahan voh safe honge...aur kisi ko shaq bhi nahi hoga ki voh vahan par ho sakte hain...!!! lekin aisi jagah hai kahan...???"
Yasmin:- "ek aur baat...kahna bhul gayi thi...!!! uncle jee abhi apne ryt hand ko thoda thoda movement kar rahe hain...!!! sayad kuch hi dino me voh apna ryt hand se kaam karr payenge...!!!"
Aditi:- "phir toh khatara aur bhi jyada badh gaya hai...!!! uncle jee hi hamari sab se badi hathiyaar hain...vikram ko maat dene ka...!!!"
Naina kuch soch rahi thi...phir us ne Vishal ki taraf dekha...aur use bahar chalne ka ishara kiya...
dono bahar aaye...
Naina ne charon taraf dekhte hue dhire se kaha:- "koi hai...is ghar me jo yahan ki khabar Vikram ko de raha hai...!!! varna Vikram ko kaise pata chali papa ki baat...!!! Raj toh unhe kal hi le kar aaye hai na...???"
Vishal:- "mujhe bhi yahi lagta hai...!!!
Naina:- "achha ek baat batayo...??? Arjun kitna bharoshe ka inshaan hai...???"
Vishal:- "aap ko us par shaq hai...???"
Naina:- "nahi...!!! bal ki main us se kuch karwana chahti hun...!!!"
Vishal:- "Arjun baht bharoshe ka inshaan hai...!!! in fact vohi toh tha...jis ne us din aap dono k fake marraige certificate ko sab k samne drawer me chupaya tha...!!! bhai jee us par itna bharosha karte hain ki us k bharoshe voh apni jaan bhi girvi rakh sakte hain...!!!"
Naina:-" hmm...thik hai...chalo...mere sath...!!!"
dono us room me wapas aaye...!!!Aditi aur Yasmin...Naina k father k sar par lage chot ko dressing karr rahe the...!!! Gayatri devi vohin khadi thi...!!!"
Naina ne ander aane k baad us room ka door bandh kiya...sare windows bhi achhe se band kiya...aur Vishal se kaha:- " mujhe abhi Arjun se baat karni hai...!!!"
Vishal ne use Arjun ka no laga kar phone Naina ki taraf badha diya...
Naina...kuch der tak baat karti rahi Arjun k sath....phir fone cut kar k kaha...
Naina:- " Yasmin...tum apna saman pack kar lo...main papa ka saman pack kar leti hun...!!! tumhe abhi k abhi yahan se jana padega...!!!"
Yasmin...k sath sath sabhi Naina ki taraf hairani se dekhne lage...
Yasmin:- "kahan...???"
Naina:- "Arjun k ghar...!!! tumhe aur papa ko kuch din vohin rahna hoga...!!! Vikram ko shaq bhi nahi ho sakta hai ki tum vahna par ho...!!! aur sab se badi baat yeh hai ki...tum dono jahan rahoge...vahan charon taraf police walon ka qtr hoga...!!! Arjun ne kaha ki voh sari taiyaari kar dega...taki papa safe rahen...!!!"
Yasmin:- "lekin Jigyasa...!!!"
Naina:- "voh vahan nahi rahti...!!! aur tum Arjun ki relative ban kar vahan jayogi...!!! tumhe raaton raat vahan par pahunchni hai...taki koi dekhe nahi papa ko...!!! aur vaise bhi tumhe toh koi janta bhi nahi hai...yahan par...na toh Vikram aur na hi Jigyasa...!!!"
Yasmin:- "lekin...arjun...???"
Naina:- "kyoun...tumhe koi prob hai...!!!"
Yasmin:- "nahin...mujhe laga ki sayad unhe koi prob ho sakta hai...!!!"
Naina:- "nahi...bal ki tum dono k jane ki baat sun kar voh khush hai...!!!"
Yasmin:- "yahi toh mushibat ki baat hai...!!!" Yasmin ne dhire se khud ko kaha...
Naina ne Vishal se kaha ki teen jeep taiyaar rakhen...
ek jeep aa kar ruki Rajveer k ghar par... kuch log kuch dur ek ghar k ander khade sab kuch dekh rahe the...
phir ek jeep me aakar ek ladki baithi driving seat par...phir do aadmi aaye ek bimar inshaan ko utha kar...!!! unhone jeep k piche us bimar inshaan ko rakha...aur jeep me baithe...phir us ladki ne jeep start kiya aur chale gaye...
sara rashta phir se sun saan ho gaya...us ghar se bhi 4 inshhan nikle...aur ghar k piche se apni bike nikal kar us jeep k piche chale gaye...sab k muh par kaal kapda bandha hua tha...aur kamar me gun thi...
phir Rajveer k ghar se ek aur jeep nikli...us me bhi ek ladki thi...do inshaan the...aur ek bimar inshaan piche ki seat par leta hua tha...
us ghar se Rajveer k ghar par nazar rakh rahe log thode hairan hue...voh jeep jab gayi...toh us ghar se phir se 4 log nikle aur us jeep ko follow karne lage...
ek aadmi us ghar me pareshan ho kar ghum raha tha...use samajh nahi aa raha tha ki yeh kya ho raha hai...
tabhi us ne andhere me apne samne kisi ko khada hua paya...
us lyt ON ki...toh samne Aditi khadi tha...
us ka hath apne paas pade table par jata...apna gun uthana...us se pahle Aditi ka kick laga us k tummy par...
voh thodi duri par ja kar gira...
Aditi thoda hairan hui...Rakesh naam k is gunde ko dekh kar...kyoun ki sabhi jante the ki yeh dedh saal pahle hi maar chuka tha...!!!"
Aditi:- "kya baat hai...!!! lagta hai AAHAT k producer B.P. singh ko bulana padega...yahan murde jo jaage hue hain...!!! B.P.singh aa jayenge toh tujh par bhi AAHAT ka ek episode bana lenge...!!! kyoun...???"
tabhi achanak ek aur jeep nikli...Rajveer k ghar se...aur kafi tezi se chali gayi...
Aditi ne ek nazar khidki se bahar dekha aur kaha:- "yeh le...yeh tha voh jeep...jis me Vikram ki jaan hai...!!! aur fiqar mat karna...hum Vikram k jaan ka pura khayal rakhenge...!!! akhir us ki jaan me hamari mushkurahat jo basi hui hai...!!!"
Aditi aage aayi...Rakesh k sarr par ek damm kareeb se gun point kar k bola:- "jeena chahta hai ya marna...???"
Rakesh:- "jeena...
Aditi:- "phir thik hai...jo main kahta hun voh kar...!!! ankhen bandh kar k chup chap zameen par baith ja...aur bolta raha...' bajrang bali ki jay'
Rakesh ne kuch nahi kaha...
Aditi:- "is ka matlab...tu marna chahta hai...!!! thik hai teri yeh murad bhi puri kar leta hun...!!! vaise bhi sab jante hain ki drugs lene k baad main pagal ho gayi thi...!!! aur ek pagal k hathon se maut...matlab tumhe toh sachhi me maut milegi...par kanon mujhe pagal samajh kar chod dega...!!! ek raaz ki baat batayun...main na...baht achhi acting kar leti hun...!!! kisi ko pata bhi nahi cahlega ki main pagal hun ya nahi...!!! sachhi...dekhna chahoge...
us ne apna gun point kiya...lekin tab tak Rakesh ne zameen par baith kar 'bajrang bali ki jay' jaap karna suru karr chuka tha...!!!
achanak Rakesh ne apne hath par kuch mehshush kiya toh us ne ankhen khol kar dekha...Vishal tha...
Vishal ne use kafi tightly pakad rakha tha...aur Aditi k hath me ek injection tha...
cut to Arjun singh's qtr...
Arjun singh mirror k aage gunn gunate hue khade apne upar deo ka bottle ka aadha saaf kar chuka tha...!!! us k father rtd subedaar Karan singh muh par cigar liye Arjun singh ko ghur rahe the...
Karan singh:- "raat k 3 baje...tu is tarah se taiyaar ho kar kahan ja rah hai...???"
Arjun singh:- "main kahin ja nahi raha hun baba...bal ki hamare ghar koi aa rahi hai...mera matlab hai ki kuch log aa rahe hain...!!!"
Karan singh:- "koun aa rahe hain...???"
Arjun singh thodi der ruka...use apne father ko sab kuch toh batana hi padega...kyoun ki us k duty k jane k baad sab kuch us k father ko sambhalna hoga...
us ne apne father ko apne room k ander le kar aaya...bithaya...aur sab kuch kahne laga...
Karan singh:- "hmmm...toh yeh baat hai...??? tu fiqar mat kar...main hun na sab kuch sambhal ne k liye...!!! lekin ek baat samajh me nahi aayi ki tu itna taiyaar kyoun ho raha hai...itni raat ko...???"
Arjun:- "baba...kuch nahi aise hi...matlab voh sab yahan aa rahe hain...aur main thoda sa tayaar hi toh hua hun...!!!
tabhi un k ghar k bahar ek jeep aa kar ruki...
Arjun singh apne father k sath bahar tak gaya...phir lyt OFF kiya...!!! Arjun singh aur us k father aur Aslam ne Naina k father ko us andhere me ghar k ander tak le kar aaye...!!!
Naina:- "hum jyada der tak yahan nahi ruk sakti...humain jald se jald yahn se nikalna hoga...!!! kyoun ki aap k qtr k bahr Rajveer k jeep ka jyada der tak rukna safe bhi nahi hai...!!!"
Naina turn kar k Aslam k sath ja hi rahi thi...phir kuch socha aur Arjun singh k paas aa kar kaha:- "apni zindagi aur Rajveer ki jeet aap k hawale kar k ja rahi hun...
tabhi Karan singh ne kaha:- "tum fiqar mat karo beta...tumhare baba bilkul safe rahenge...!!! main unhe kharonch tak aane nahi dunga...!!!"
Naina k ankhon me pal bhar k liye anshun aaye...voh thodi si mushkurate hue boli:- "thanqqq uncle...

Naina apne father k paas gayi...aur un k paas baith kar kaha: "papa apna khyal rakhna...!!! aur haan yaad rakhna ki aap ko jaldi thik hona hai...taki maa k maut k zimmedar ko hum saza de saken...!!!"

Naina jyada der tak ruki nahi...aur vahan se chali gayi...
Arjun:- "aayiye...main aap ko aap ka room dikha deta hun...!!!"
Yasmin:- "pahle uncle ko un k room me le jayen...???"
Arjun ne ek darr dekha...Yasmin k ankhon me...
Arjun:- "aap mujh par bharosha kar sakti hain...!!! aur jab tak main zinda hun...aap ko aur uncle ko kuch nahi hoga...yeh vaada main karta hun...!!!"
Yasmin:- "aap ko lagta hai ki voh log yhan tak nahi pahunch payenge...??? matlab hum sab akele hain aur...sayad kuch log aur hote toh jyada achha hota na uncle k liye...!!! pata nahi naina ne kyoun...
Arjun:- "Naina jee ne bilkul sahi kiya hai...!!! agar voh kuch aur logon ko yahan le aati uncle k protection k liye...ya phir main kuch aisa hi karta...toh unhe pata chal jati yeh baat...!!! aur aap fiqar kyoun karte ho...hum baap-bete hain na...sab kuch sambhalne k liye...
Yasmin k chehre par ek smile aayi...pahli baar jab Arjun singh se mili thi...use achha nahi laga tha...kyoun ki us ne pee hui thi...par Naina ka bharosha dekh kar use bhi Arjun par thoda bharosha ho raha hai...aur phir aaj us ne Arjun singh ki ankhon me ek sachhai dekhi...ek bharosha...aur ek inshaniyat bhi...
cut to Naina...
Naina ne jeep me se fone kiya...Rajveer ko...switch off aa raha tha...
pata nahi kaise...par Naina me ek ajeeb si himmat aa gayi thi...sab kuch sahne ki...sab kuch sunn ne ki...
us ne kuch sochte hue aslam se kaha:- "firm house ki taraf chalte hain...???"
Aslam ne hairani se pucha:- "kyoun...???"
Naina:- "mujhe lagta hai ki Rajveer abhi vohin honge...sayad...
Aslam:- "haan...sayad vohin honge...!!! chal kar dekh lete hain...!!!
jeep ruki firm house k main gate par...watchman ko Aslam ne bulaya...
Aslam:- "bhai jee yahin hain kya...???"
watchman ne kuch nahi kaha...gate khol diya...
phir dhire se kaha:- "haan...Rajveer beta...abhi abhi aaya hai yahan par...!!! mujhe baht darr lag raha hai beta...!!! us k shirt par khun laga hua tha...!!!"
Aslam k ankhon me bhi darr dikha...par voh itna janta tha ki Rajveer ne kisi ko jaan se nahi maara hoga...
Naina vohin khade khade kuch soch rahi thi...phir us ne Aslam se kaha:- "Aslam...aap ghar jayo...aur sabhi ko kah dena...ki hum dono yahan par hain...aur koi fiqar karne ki jarurat bhi nahi hai...!!!"
Aslam ne Naina ki taraf dekha....
Naina:- "trust me...sab kuch thik hai...aur sab kuch thik hi hoga...!!! ab aap jayo...vahan ghar me bhi sabhi pareshan honge...!!!"
Aslam:- "thik hai...!!! lekin agar kisi tarah ki koi prob hui toh plz...jaldi se fone kar dena...!!!hum pahunch jayenge...!!!"
Naina:- "sure...
Aslam chala gaya...
Naina...Rajveer k room me pahunchi...hairan hui yeh dekh kar ki...kahin bhi Rajveer nahi tha...balcony me bhi nahi...!!! par wash room se pani ki awaz sunn kar naina ruki...
door par knock karte hue kaha:- "Rajjjj....
ander se koi awaz nahi aayi...
Naina ne thodi der wait kiya...par phir bhi koi awaz nahi aayi...toh Naina ne ander jhaanka...
aur dekha...shower k niche Rajveer baitha hua tha...khud ko samet ta hua...
Naina ander gayi...dekha use...
Rajveer ki ankhen band thi...shirt par khun k daag thode phike padd chuke the...par pata chal raha tha ki voh khun k daag hain...
Naina k ankhon me anshun dikhe...us ne shower bandh kiya... Rajveer k kareeb baithi...
us k chehre ko touch kiya...Rajveer ne ankhen kholi...
Naina mushkurayi...ankhon me us k abhi tak anshun the...
par us ne kuch nahi kaha...Raj k shirt k buttons kholne lagi...Rajveer use dekh raha tha...ankhon me dard us k bhi the...
Naina ne voh shirt nikal kar...washing machine me dal diya...aur Rajveer ka hath thaam kar kaha : "bahar chalo...!!! kabb se yahi baithe hue ho...sardi lagg jayegi...!!! aur us k baad mujhe phir se cheenk cheenk kar pareshan karoge...!!! itni raat ko bhi koi nahata hai kya...???"
Naina ne Rajveer ka hath thaame uthne ki koshish ki...toh Rajveer ne rokk liya...
Naina ne turn kar k dekha....Rajveer ko...
Rajveer:- "baht pareshan kiya hai na maine tumhe...baht chot bhi pahunchaya...aur...
Naina...Rajveer k kareeb baithi...
end of the epi
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LRL JOKES in page 58
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hiiiiii all.....😃
mujhe pata hai ki is ud me RN k jyada scenes nahi the...!!! par aap sab hi chahte the ki kuch suspence clear ho...!!! isiliye main RN k jyada scenes nahi likh payi...!!! sorry..........!!! par next kuch parts main RN k scenes jyada rakhne ki koshish karungi...aur phir kisi aur ki love story bhi toh suru honewali hai...
love
Priya😃
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Hiiiiiiii Priya🤗

How r u??

Update was superb,awesome,mind-blowing,fantastic⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏

u describe whole emotions beautifully n brilliantly👏👏👏

Raj ne Vikram k saath bilkul theek kiya👏👏👏 par yeh Vikram itni asani se nahin marne wala😡😡😡,Raj usse tadpa-2 kar marega😡😡😡

Aditi k saath kitna bura kiya hai Vikram ,Gaurav aur Jigyasa ne😡😡😡😡,usse drug addict bana diya I was really feel sorry for her,she suffered a lot….😭😭

Naina was so shocked to know all this😲😲😲,Raj n his family suffered a lot😭😭😭…

Naina made a plan n shifted her father n Yasmin to Arjun's place but Naina's father Vikram k bare main aisa kya jante hai 😕😕

Arjun ne deo ki bottle hi empty kar di jab usse pata chala ki Yasmin aa rahi hai😆😆😆😆 aur uske father to hairan ho gaye ki woh adhi raat ko is tarah tayyar kyun ho raha hai😉😉😆😆😆

Raj farm house main hai aur Naina bhi uske paas who usse kitni achi tarah se samjhti hai😃😃👏👏 par yaar tumne isse galat tym kyu end kiya😡😡😡

Plzzzzzzzz cont soon

Jokes were hilarious n awesome😆😆😆😆😆

Luvs

Naina🤗

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😆LRL JOKE:-1😆

Maj Bharghav:- "alekh...batayo...water ka chemichal formula kya hai...???"
Alekh:- H I J K L M N O
Maj Bharghav:- "tum pagal ho gaye ho kya...??? yeh kya bakwas karr rahe ho...???"
Alekh:- "bakwaas kahan kiya sir...!!! aap ne hi toh kal kaha tha ki water ka chem formula hai H to O( H2O)...!!! toh H to O bole toh...yahi hota hai na sir H I J K L M N O

😆LRL JOKE:-2😆
Neelu k dad:- "dekho beta...Simran ek achhi Yoga teacher hai...voh tumhari help karegi ki tum kaise sharab peena chod sakte ho...???"
Alekh:- "nahi uncle...yeh aadat ab kabhi nahi chut sakti...aap chahe kuch bhi kar lo...!!!
Neelu k dad:- "ek baar try kar lo...!!! dekho...main chata hun ki Neelu ki shaadi tumhare sath ho...par tum jis tarah se sharab peete ho...usi baat se mujhe objection hai...
Alekh:- "thik hai uncle...apun ek mahine tak try karega...!!! lekin agar apni yeh aadat nahi chuti toh aap ko mera ek kaam karna padega...
dono k bich deal hua...aur voh bhi Neelu aur Pooja k samne...
ek mahine baad jab Pooja ko Neelu shaadi ka card dene aayi toh Pooja ne us ne pucha:- "us khuni sharabi ko yoga kar k kuch faida hua kya...???"
Neelu:- "haan...dono ko faida hua...!!!"
Pooja:- "dono ko...???"
Neelu:- "haan...Alekh ko aur dad ko bhi...!!! Yoga karne k baad ab Alekh sar niche aur taange upar kar k bhi puri bottle khali kar deta hai...!!! aur deal k mutabik...dad ko Alekh se yahi yoga sikhni padd rahi hai...!!! aur voh kafi jaldi sikh bhi rahe hain...
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Hey Priya
Ye part to kafi khatarnak part ho gaya nahi?
vese apne humare jazbado ki kadar rakhi aur vikram ko khoob pitwaya uske liye dhanywad.
Adi ka past to kafi khaufnak nikla(I know im behaving like Ahat freak but then...:P)
What these guys did with Adi was really disgusting. And here I would like to applaud your creativity of script.
Gayatri Devi nd Raj k dialogues kafi emotional the...par dont worry, mai nahi roi :D
Its good that Adi survived...varna pata nahi kya hota...
Jis tarah se in sab ne milkar vikram ke admiyo ko bewakuf banaya, mujhe bada maza aya!!!
Dialogues were hilarious as usual.
Arjun singh ki to nikal padi!!! Yasmin uske ghar pe!! waah
Rajveer kafi upset tha...par ab shower k neeche baithne ka kya matlab hai yaar? kuch kasam khai thi k jis din vikram ka band bajaunga uss din raat ko shower ke neeche baitha rahunga?
anyways looking forward to the next part
Sur
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Hiii Priya,

Fabulous part yaar 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Adi ke saath kitna bura hua….kitne gire hue log hain ye vikram gaurav n jigyasa...not to forget that hari ..wo hari shankar adi ke saath aise kasie kar saktha hain ..paison ke laalach main aakar usne kitna ghatiya kaam kiya ..aur kya mila akhir main usko maut…usne raj ke family ko dhoka diya n he believed vikram ..aur uske saath sahi hua.. hari jaise logon ke saath aise hi hona chahiye

Raj ki family ne kitna kuch saha hain ..ek taraf raj ka father ka death n dusri taraf adi ka koi khabar nahin....priya u have written so fabulously the pain of raj n gayatri devi ..aur adi ka haal in the hospital ..specially jab raj came near to adi n hugged her saying dekh main aagaya huna ..apna behan ka khayal rakhen ke liye..its such an emotional scene.....very well written.....hats off to your writting skills 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

thank god aslam n visahl hain raj ke saath usko sambhalne ke liye....khas karke vishal ..andar se wo bhi bahut tuta hua tha adi ko jab usne aise conditon main dekha ..fir bhi usne apne aap ko sambhala aur raj ko bhi
Ins arjun is really a nice person ...usne situation ko samjha n he is ready to help them

Present main naina acted so fastly n she took the right decision in sending yasmin n n her father to arjuns place..Naina ke father aisa kya jaantha hain vikram ke bare main ki wo idiot unke jaan ke piche padha hain

Ins arjun ko jab pata chala ki yasmin aara hi hain uske ghar to deo ki bottle hi empty kar diya 😆😆😆😆😆..uske father bhi usko dekhkar pareshan hogaye hain ki itni adhi raat ko wo is tarah se kyun tayyar horaha hain..ab unhe kaha malum ki unke honewali bahu ka griha pravesh hone jaara hain 😆😆😆😆
So raj farm house main hain ...aur tune ye kaha rokdi yaar..tuna hamesha galat time pe rokdethi hain apne update ko ....chal jaldi se continue karo ..ab humko bhi pata chalna chahiye na ki naina ne kya kaha raj se when he said "Bahut pareshan kiya haina maine"
Asusual the jokes r hillarious ...alekh is so funny
love
yogitha

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