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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sun_423

priii humko next part ke darshan kab honge....😆😆😆 continue karo jaldiii se..

chinta mat karo balike...darshan jaldi hi honge...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

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Jigyasa kuch karr pati...us se pahle andhere me khade us insaan ne us k neck aur kandhe k bich me apna hath rakha...aur thoda sa press kiya...!!! Jigyasa ko thoda taklif mehsus hui...aur voh behosh hui...
FLASHBACK......
Vishal ko samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki voh kya kare...kahan dhundhe Aditi ko...!!! use bass itna pata tha ki Aditi apne ek frnd Anu ki bahn ki shaadi me gayi hai...!!! voh Aditi ki baat Rajveer ko nahi bata sakta tha...pahle se hi voh apne father ko dhudhne gaya hai...!!! Aditi ki zimmedari khud par lete hue...us ne kuch socha...aur Aditi k us frnd Anu k ghar gaya...!!!
vahan pahunchne k baad voh hairan hua...kyoun ki vahan par Aditi thi hi nahi...!!!us k dost Anu ne kaha:- "Adi toh kal raat ko hi chali gayi thi...!!! koi aadmi aaya tha...bata raha tha ki us k father ka accident ho gaya hai...aur voh hospital me hain...!!! us ne ghar par bhi fone kiya tha...par fone dead tha...!!! isiliye voh us aadmi k sath chali gayi...!!!"
Vishal:- "aap ko Adi ne kuch kaha kya...ki jo aadmi use lene aaya tha...us ka naam ya phir kuch aur...???"
Anu:- "haan...us ne kaha tha ki 'main Hari uncle k sath ja rahi hun'......!!!"
Vishal chaunka ...khud se kaha:- "Hari uncle...??? yeh toh uncle k sec hain...!!! aur abhi abhi bhai jee ko isi ne conform kiya tha Uncle jee k accident k bare me...!!! aur bhai jee vohin gaye hain....is ka matlab....!!! ohhhhh...Shit.....
voh bhaaga...vahan jahan ka pata Jigyasa ne diya tha...Rajveer k father k hone ka...!!!
cut to Rajveer......
sham k 7:00 ya 7:30 bajj rahe the...
hawa kafi tez chal rahi thi...sayad tufan aanewala tha...
Rajveer pahuncha...apne jeep se...us jagah par jahan us k father k hone ki khabar Jigyasa ne di thi...!!!
sadak sun sun tha...Rajveer ne ek jagah par apni jeep roki...niche utra...aur road k dono side par dekha...kahin koi bhi vehicle k aane ki awaz nahi thi...
thodi dur jane par us ki nazar padi...rashte k side par...jhadiyon k ander ek ambulance tha...aur aas paas aur koi nahi tha...
voh hairan hua...ambulance ki door open kiya...ander us k father khun se bheege hue pade the...
Rajveer ne unhe thama aur kaha:- "baba...baba...ankhen kholiye baba...!!!"
us ne baht koshish ki ...par us k father ko hosh me nahi la paya...
Rajveer ne apni bahon me unhe uthate hue...apne jeep ki taraf jane laga...
tabhi kisi ne us k piche se us k sar par vaar kiya...
khun nikla...us k hath kaampe...ankhen be-jhol hui...phir bhi voh apne kaampte kadmon se apne father ko apni bahon me uthaye apne jeep ki taraf jane laga...!!!
phir se kisi ne ek sharp knief se us k back par vaar kiya...!!!
Rajveer gira zameen par...
kuch log...zorr se hassne lage...
Rajveer unhe pehchan nahi pa raha tha...voh 4 log the...aur sabhi k chehre par kaala kapda bandha hua tha...par un ki ankhen Rajveer ko pehchani hui si lagi...!!!
un me se ek ne us ki hathon se us k father ko khinch kar le jane ki koshish ki...par Rajveer ne apne father ko apne seene se jakde rakha...
un sabhi ne...Rajveer k hathon se us k father ko alag kar ki koshish karte hue...Rajveer ko kicks marne lage...par Rajveer ne tabhi bhi apne father ko apne seene se jakad rakha tha...
un me se kisi ne Rajveer k hathon par apne knief se vaar kiya...
Rajveer dard se chillaya...
kisi ne us k hathon se us k father ko ghaseet te hue le gaya...aur rashte k bich me fenk diya...
Rajveer kafi dard aur mushkil k sath khada hua...apne father ki taraf jane laga...
kisi ne us k knee par bullet chalayi...
Rajveer gira zameen par...
voh sab hassne lage...ek ne kaha:- "gud shot...!!! par goli agar seene me lagti toh maza aata...!!!"
phir se Rajveer ne kosish ki jane ki...kisi ne us k kandhe par bullet chalai...
voh phir gira zameen par...
kisi ne kaha:- "bass...karo...use ek mauka toh do...aapne baap ko bachane ka...!!!"
Rajveer badi mushkil se apne father tak pahuncha...unhe phir se uthane ki koshish ki...
piche se kisi ne use kick mara...voh gira apne father k upar...!!! unhe apni bahon me jakde voh vohin pada raha...
ek aadmi age aaya...aur gun point karta hua kaha:- "hatt ja...
Rajveer nahi hata...apne father ko usi tarah se cover kar k ruka raha...
kisi ne kaha:- "maar do goli...!!! ek hi sath baap aur bete ka kaam tamam ho jayega...!!!"
us ne Rajveer par apni gun point kiya...trigger par us ki finger thi...
achanak Rajveer k father ki ankhen khuli...unhone zor se Rajveer ko dhakka diya...Rajveer kuch dur par ja kar gira...bullet lagi...Rajveer k father k seene me...

past...b/w...

ek 5 saal ka ladka...daud raha tha...shirt pahna hua tha...par pant...
pant us k piche us k father le kar daud rahe the...
: Raju...rukk ja...apni pant toh pahn le...
Raju:- "nahi baba...garmi lag rahi hai...
father:- "pant pahn le...nahi toh budhi dayan tujhe chura kar le jayegi...phir mat kahna ki baba yeh pahle kyoun nahi bataya...!!!"
Raju daar kar apne baba k paas aaya...aur un k gale se lag kar bola..."baba agar main pant pahn lunga toh voh dayan nahi aayegi na...???"
us k father ne use pant pahnate hue kaha:- "nahi aayegi...!!! aur jab tak main hun tere paas...tab tak koi bhi burai tujhe chu nahi payegi...!!!!'
Raju ne kiss kiya apne father ko aur kaha:- "baba...aap hamesha...hamesha...hamesha...mere sath hi rahoge na...??? mujhe chod kar kahin mat jana...plomise karo...!!!"
father:- "plomise..." unhone apne bete ka matha chumte hue kaha...
present...col...
Rajveer k awaz band ho chuki thi...voh chaah kar bhi chilla nahi pa raha tha...bass us ki nazrain mili apne father k ankhon me...
past...b/w
unhone kaan pakad kar apne 7 saal k bete se kaha:- "Raju...tujhe kitni baar kah chuka hun ki...padhai k samay padhai kiya kar. par nahi...tujhe apne khel se furshat mile tab toh na tu padhega...??? agar imtihaan me fail ho gaya toh...???"
use dard ho raha tha...us ne kaha:- "baba...pahle kaan toh chodo...dard ho raha hai...!!! aur phir fail ho gaya toh kya...??? koun kahta hai ki har imtihaan me pass hona jaruri hai...!!! sabhi chizon ko test karna chahiye na...!!! toh kya main ek baar fail bhi nahi ho sakta...!!!"
present...col...

us ki father ne mushkurate hue us ki taraf dekha...ankhon me anshun the...!!! nazrain mili un ki Rajveer k ankhon se...

past...b/w...
voh Raju k sar par lagi us chot ko dressing karte hue kaha:- "tu kabhi nahi sudhrega...!!! itna bada ho gaya hai...par nahi...!!! yeh shaitani teri kab khatam hogi...pata nahi...???"
14 saal ka Rajveer:- "baba...main kabhi nahi sudhruga...!!! ab maa-baba k samne toh bachha 60 saal ka ho jayega...tabhi bhi unhe bachha hi lagega na...??? main toh 70 saal tak aise hi shaitani karta rahunga..aap ho na mujhe sambhalne k liye...!!!"
father:- "main kya tere 70 saal tak hone tak zinda rahunga...???"
Rajveer:- "aur nahi toh kya...??? jitne din tak main hun...utne hi din tak aap ko bhi mere sath rahna padega...!!! aap ko apne khandan k bare me bhi sochna hai na...??? mere bachhon ko koun sambhalega...??? voh toh meri sangat me bigad hi jayenge na...??? aap kya chahte ho...aap k pote-potiyan...bhi nalayak bane...meri tarah...???"
present...colour....
Rajveer k ankhon me haar thi...par us k father ki ankhon me us k liye 'jeet' ki dua thi...

past...B/w

voh ek bada sa danda pakad kar us k piche bhaag rahe the...use maarne k liye...aur unhone kaha:- "tune padosh k gaon k Sharma jee k beti ko kyoun cheda...??? teri shaitani din b din badhti ja rahi hai...aaj teri khair nahi...!!!
aage aage Rajveer bhaag raha tha...aur bhagte hue us ne kaha:- "maine use kyoun chedunga baba...??? bal k voh mujhe roz...college se aate waqt chedti thi...!!! mujhe flying kiss kar k bolti thi "...aa na...palat meri jaan...ding dong...sing a song...meri ras malai...meri bhel puri...chalta hai kya nau se barah...???" ab roz mujhe aise hi tung karti thi...aur aaj mujhe gussa aa gaya...isiliye maine bass...use utha kar nadi me phenk diya...aur kuch nahi kiya...sachhi...!!! Adi k lambe balon ki kasamm...main sach kah raha hun...baba...!!"
Adi gusse se chillai:- "bhai main tera sar phod dungi...agar tune mere lambe balon par nazar lagai toh...!!!"
present...colour...
unhone hath badhaya Rajveer ki taraf...Rajveer ne apne father ka hath thaam ne koshish ki...
past...B/W
jab Rajveer ne apne father ka kaam sambhala...us k father ne kaha:- "zindagi hamesha hamari marzi se nahi chalti...!!! zindagi ka pahla sabak...hamesha yaad rakhna...!!! zindagi me hamesha jeet nahi milti...par sachaa insaan haar se dar kar jeena nahi chod deta ...!!! kyoun ki maut se jyada mushkil hota hai jeena...aur voh bhi ek sachha insaan ban kar...!!!insaan vohi hota hai...jo sare dard aur taklif ko sahte hue jeeye aur dushron ko jeena sikhaye...!!! zindagi se...kishmat se...kabhi haarna mat...aur maut se kabhi darna mat...!!! kyoun ki karam...hamare hath me hain...
present...colour
Rajveer k hath ne thama...apne baba k hathon ko......us k ankhon se anshun nikle...!!! us ne ambulance starat hone ki awaz aayi...us ne darr kar us taraf dekha...
voh ambulance kafi tezi se...us k father ki taraf aa rahi thi...
us ne daar kar apne father ki taraf dekha...un ki ankhon me maut ka khauff nahi tha...!!! unhone mushukurate hue Rajveer ko dekha...us k hathon ko apne hath se zor se thama...sayad yeh batane k liye ki...voh jahan bhi honge...hamesha us k sath honge...
ambulance tezi se aayi...aur us father k upar se gujar gayi...
ek sath baht sara khun un k muh se nikla...aur un ka sarir shant ho gaya...!!!ambulanse ka ek wheel toh Rajveer k hath par bhi chadha tha...par Rajveer ko dard nahi hua...us ki ankhen abhi bhi us k father k ankhon me dekh rahi thi...aur us k father ki ankhen...Rajveer ko...
us k father ki thandi nazar abhi bhi Rajveer ko dekh rahi thi...jaise voh abhi bhi apne bete ko dekh rahe ho...
voh ambulance Rajveer ki taraf aa rahi thi...
par achanak voh ambulance ruki aur back karte hue chali gayi...
samne se kareeb 4 jeeps aa rahe the...jin me kafi sare log the...
jeep aa kar ruki Rajveer k kareeb...us k ander se vishal bhaagta hua aaya...Rajveer k paas...
par Rajveer ka hath...abhi bhi apne father k hath me tha...us ne abhi bhi apne father ka hath tightly thaam rakha tha...un ki ankhon me dekh raha tha aur un k pyar ko mehsus karr raha tha...
FLASHBACK over...
Naina...bina palak jhapkaye...vishal ko dekh rahi thi...us k ankhon me anshun jaise baraf bann gaye the...
Vishal:- "jiss din aap ko bhaiya...zabardasti utha kar laye the na...usi din un ko pata chala tha ki in sab k piche Vikram ka hath hai...!!! aur unhe bardast nahi hua ki...un k ghar me matam ho...aur Vikram...apni khushi manaye...!!! isiliye unhone aap k sath....!!! par yakeen maniye...bhai jee itne bure nahi hai...!!!"
Naina:- "aur Adi...us k sath kya hua tha...???
Vishal:- "maine use baht dhundhne ki kosish ki...par voh nahi mili...!!! mujhe laga ki sayad Hari shanakar...jo uncle ka secretery tha...use pata hoga...maine use bhi dhundha...voh bhi nahi mila. do din baad us ki laash mili...Baini jungle me...!!!"
Naina:- "aur Adi...kaise mili...???"
tabhi us ne apne piche se suna:- "Naina...tum yahan kya karr rahi ho...??? aur Raju kahan hai...!!!"
Naina ne turn kar k dekha..Gayatri devi khadi thi...
Naina ne gayatri devi ko dekhte hi pucha:- "Vikram ki is khandan se dushmani ki wajah kya hai maa....???"
Gayatri devi hairan hui...unhone Vishal ki taraf dekha...
Vishal samajh raha tha...Gayatri devi ki uljhan...us ne kaha:- "bhai jee...achanak kahin bahar chale gaye hain...!!!"
Gayatri devi kuch kahti us se pahle Naina ne kaha:- "jab se main Raj se mili hun...unhe ander hi ander ghute te hue dekh rahi hun...!!! Vikram...Gaurav ya Jigyasa agar un k samne aa jate hain...toh unhe apne gusse par lagataar control karte hue dekhti hun...!!! kya us ki dushmani is wajah se hai ki...Vikram aap se shaadi karna chahta tha...???'
Gayatri devi:- "yeh baat tujhe Raju ne batayi thi...???"
Naina:- "haan...voh...
Gayatri devi aa kar Naina k kareeb baithi aur kaha:- "zindagi hamesha...hamare sharton se nahi chalti...kabhi kabhi aise tufan bhi aate hain...jiss se insaan pura tabah ho jata hai...ya phir lachaar ho jata hai...!!! par mera beta kabhi nahi hara...!!! voh jiya...aur humain bhi jeena sikhaya...
cut to Jigyasa...
us k pairon mehalke halke dard ho raha tha...us ne apni ankhen kholi toh chaunki...aur us ka T.V full volume me chal raha tha...
us ne dekha...voh ek chote se tool k upar khadi thi...us ka legs...ek bade se rassi se kafi tightly bandha hua tha...aur us k dono hath bhi...!!! us k muh par bhi ek patti bandhi hui thi...aur gale me ek fanda badha hua tha...jo fan se latak raha tha...!!!
us ne chillane ki koshish ki...par chilla nahi payi...tabhi us ne suna:- "koshish bekaar hai....!!!"
Rajveer apne gun ko dekhte hue aage aaya aur kahne laga:- "Meri behn Adi...yaad toh hai na tumhe...???"
Rajveer:- "voh bhi toh chillai hogi...par tum ne jo kiya...voh sahi nahi tha...!!! mere sath...mere baba k sath aur Adi k sath...!!! tumhare kasurwaar toh main aur baba the na...??? toh tum sab ne Adi ko itni taklif kyoun di...???"
Rajveer kareeb aaya Jigyasa k aur us k muh se patti hataya aur kaha:- "kuch kahna chahti ho...ya chillana chahti ho toh try karr sakti ho...!!! vaise bhi T.V ka volume itna jyada hai ki koi tumhari awaz sunn nahi payega...!!!"
Jigyasa:- "tumhe kya lagta hai Rajveer...mujhe maar kar tum bach jayoge...??? Vikram aur Gaurav tumhe aur tumhare pure parivaar ko zinda nahi chodenge...!!! abhi haal hi main jo hua hai...us se toh Ankur ko bhi tum par shaq hoga aur phir kya karoge...??? socho Rajveer...meri maut k sath sath tumhare pure parivaar ki tabahi judi hui hai...!!!"
Rajveer mushkuraya aur kaha:- "main soch nahi raha hun...bal k main janta hun ki na toh tum mere parivaar ka kuch karr payogi aur na hi tumhare pyare Vikram aur Gaurav...!!! tum logon se ladte ladte...ab mera dimag bhi tum logon ki tarah sochne laga hai...!!! tumhe pata hai...Vikram aur Gaurav...dono hi tumhari maut k bare me chup rahenge...pata hai kyoun...??? kyoun ki agar voh kuch bole...toh sab se pahle yeh sawal uthega ki un se mere parivaar ki kya dushmani hai...??? aur is ka jawab de kar voh dono khud nahi fass na chahenge...isiliye voh chup rahenge..kyoun ki unhe tum se jyada khud ki zindagi pyari hai...!!!"
Rajveer ne phir se us ka muh baandh diya...aur kaha:- "main tumhe sach me marna nahi chahta tha...par main na toh apni baba ki maut bhul sakta hun aur na hi Adi ki voh halat...!!! isiliye saza toh tumhe milegi hi...!!!"
Rajveer itna kah kar bahar aa gaya...Jigyasa ne khud ko chudane ki koshish nahi ki...!!! use pata tha ki agar koshish karte karte kuch gadbad ho gaya toh us ki jaan bhi ja sakti hai...!!!
Rajveer bahar aa kar arjun singh ko fone lagaya aur Jigyasa k bare me batate hue kaha:- "Jigyasa marna nahi chahiye..!!! us ki maut itni asan nahi honi chahiye...!!!"
Arjun:- "aap be-fiqar ho kar...jayo...!!! main kal subah 10 baje k baad us ko bachane jayunga...!!! aur aap fiqar mat karo...voh itni deedh aurat hai ki maregi nahi itni asaani se...!!!"
cut to Naina...
Naina:- "Vikram ne yeh sab kyoun kiya...maa...??? kya is ki wajah yeh thi ki voh aap se shaadi karna chata tha...???"
Gayatri devi:- "hmmm...toh yeh baat bhi Raju ne tujhe bata hi di hai...!!! toh Naina...tune akhir mere bete ko mujh se cheen hi liya...!!!"
unhone mushkurate hue kaha...
Naina:- "nahi...maa...voh hum dono aise hi baat karr rahe the toh unhone kaha tha yeh baat...!!!"
Gayatri devi:- "daar maat...main mazak karr rahi hun...!!! haan...yeh sach hai ki Vikram ki shaadi mujh se hone wali thi...aur voh sirf isiliye kyoun ki Vikram mere father ko apne bas me karna chahta tha...!!! mere father us k manager hua karte the...!!! mere father the voh...bura nahi kahna chahiye mujhe un k bare me...par yeh sach hai ki...Vikram ki sare ulte sidhe kaamon me voh us k sajhedaar the...!!! aur Vikram...achhe se janta tha ki mere father k bina voh kuch nahi kar sakta tha...isiliye us ne mujh se shaadi karni chahi thi...!!! par tab main yahan Raju ko tution karne aati thi...is bachhe se pata nahi kyoun ek lagav sa ho gaya tha...!!! par jab meri shaadi Vikram se tai hui...toh shaadi k ek din pahle main ghar se bhaag aayi thi...aur Raju k baba ne mujhe panah di thi...phir baad me hum ne shaadi kar li thi...!!! par Vikram k dushmani ki wajah yeh nahi hai...!!!"
Naina:- " maa...aap k baba kahan hai ab...???"
Gayatri devi:- "un ki bhi hathya kar di gayi thi...aur un ki bhi laash vohin par mili thi...jahan Hari shanakar ki laash mili thi...!!!"
Naina:- "toh phir Vikram ka is parivaar se dushmani ki wajah kya hai...jiss ki wajah se us ne itne ghinona kaam kiya...???"
Gayatri devi:- "us k ghamand aur gurur ko Rajveer aur us k baba ne toda tha...!!! isiliye us ne yeh sab kiya...!!!! par use apne kiye ki saza milegi...aur voh bhi baht buri maut marega...!!! kyoun ki mere bete ne mujh se vaada kiya hai ki voh unhe hazar maut dega...!!!"
Gayatri devi k ankhon me Naina ne vohi gussa...aur nafrat dekhi...jo aaj tak us ne Raj ki ankhon me dekhi hai...
cut to Gaurav
us ne apni drink khatam ki...us ki nazr padi diwar par lagi Nandini ki tashveer par...us ne apne glass ko....zor se phenka us tashveer k par...aur kaha:- "shaali kahti hai ki mujhe divorce degi...toh kya us Aslam ki ya Rajveer ki ****** bann kar rahegi...???"
us par achanak kisi bhari chiz se hamla hua...voh turn kar k dekh pata...us se pahle voh behosh hua...!!! jab use hosh aaya toh use charon taraf andhera dikh raha tha...!!! kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha use...!!! us k pairon me kuch bandha hua tha...us k hath upar ki taraf the...aur pani ko choo rahe the...!!! us ne niche dekha...toh roshni dikhai di...!!!
voh hairan hua...kyoun ki voh ek kuyain k kafi ander tak ulta latka hua tha...aur us k pair...us kuyain k bahar ek bade se paid k branch par ek lambi se rassi se bandha hua tha...!!! par kuyain k bahar koi khada tha...jo use thik se dikh nahi raha tha...!!!
us insaan ne apne chehre par torch jalayi...Gaurav chauka...kyoun ki voh Rajveer tha...
Rajveer:- "jo dard mujhe mila hai...us k hisaab se yeh toh kuch bhi nahi hai...Gaurav...!!! haan...main chahta hun ki tum marr jayo...!!! par main yeh bhi chata hun ki tum zinda raho...kyoun ki tumhari maut itni asaani se nahi honi chahiye...!!!"
Rajveer chala gaya...Gaurav...chillane laga...logon ko bulane laga...par itne ander se us ki awaz bahat tak nahi aa rahi thi...
cut to Naina...
Naina:- Adi k sath kya hua tha...???"
Gayatri devi k ankhon me anshun the...voh kuch kah pati...tabhi unhone apne piche se suna:- "kya hua...Jaigarh me chor ghusa hai kya..??? jo aap sab yahan baith kar use pakadne ka plan bana rahe ho...??? aur bhabi aap bhi na baht bore ho...???"
Gayatri devi:- "kyoun...Naina ne kya kiya...???"
Aditi:- "ab dekho na maa...meri haq cheen rahi hai bhabi...!!! unhe kya jarurat thi itni jaldi uthne ki...??? subah hone k baad nahi uth sakti thi kya...??? mujhe unhe aur bhai ko chedna tha...par meri khushi toh in dono ko bardast hi nahi hoti...!!! hun...main ja rahi hun...suiside karne...!!!"
Naina chaunki...
Aditi:- "daro mat bhabi...voh actualwala suiside nahi karungi...main bass bed k paas khade ho kar...bed par jump karungi...aur so jayungi...!!! mujhe na aadhi raat ko aap k aur bhai ki tarah jaagna achha nahi lagta...u know...is se kai sari bimariyan hoti hain...!!! jaise ankhon k niche black circle aa jate hain...wrinkels aa jate hain...aur baal jhadne lagte hain...aur pata nahi kya kya...???"
Aditi chali gayi...
Gayatri devi:- "main Raju ko fone kar k aati hun...!!!"
Naina ne Vishal ki taraf dekha aur kaha:- "jis tarah se mere papa ko Vikram ne maarne ki koshish...us baat se pata chalta hai ki kuch toh mere papa jante hain...jis ki wajah se voh unhe maarna chahta hai...!!! lekin voh baat kya ho sakti hai...??? Vishal...main jaan na chahti hun ki Adi k sath kya hua tha...aur is parivaar k sath Vikram aur Gaurav ki dushmani kyoun hai...???"
Vishal:- "main aap ko batata hun...ki adi k sath kya hua tha...aur Vikram, Gaurav aur Jigyasa se bhai ji k parivaar ki dushmanhi ki wajah...!!!"
Vishal ne kahna suru kiya... Naina k hath us couch par tight hote ja rahe the...
cut to Rajveer...
ek sunsan si jagah par...railway line par Rajveer baitha hua tha...
ek knief thi us k hathon me...voh baitha ek lakdi ka tukda cheel raha tha...
us railway line par koi soya hua tha...us k dono hath aur pair bandhe hue the...
us aadmi ko hosh aaya...
use samajh me nahi aaya ki voh kahan hai...ashman me taron ko dekh kar...aur aas paas ki jungle ko dekh kar voh yeh toh samjha ki voh apne ghar se baht dur hai...par yahan kaise aaya use samajh me nahi aa raha tha...!!! use bass itna yaad aa raha tha ki voh...godown se wapas aa raha tha..ghar bass us k kuch hi duri par tha...achanak us k car par kisi ne fire kar diya...aur us ka car puncture ho gaya tha...jab voh chk karne bahar aaya toh...kuch bhari chiz se us k sar par vaar kiya gaya tha...
use abhi bhi apne sar par dard mehsus ho raha tha...
us ne turn kar k dekha...kuch hi duri par Rajveer baitha hua tha...distracted sa...
Vikram chillaya:- "tu....
Rajveer ne baht calmly...par dhire se kaha...:- "tujhe yaad hai Vikram...yeh vohi jagah hai....jahan tune meri behn ko marne k liye phenk diya tha...
Rajveer ne apna hath upar uthaya...aur voh knief se zor se vaar kiya...Vikram k plam par...Vikram chilla pata...us se pahle Rajveer ka left hand us k muh par tha...
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Posted: 15 years ago
LRL KAVITAA

ek din capt Rajveer...capt Abhimanyu se bole

'apne chehre se yeh kanchan-jungha ka jungle
hatao...dadhi-muchain saaf kar k apna haseen
chehra hum sab ko dikhayo'

Rajveer ki baat maani...aur Abhimayun ne
dadhi banwayi...
phir ghar aa kar door bell bajayi...

dharam patni k rup me Akriti ka personallity
bahar aaya...
aur Abhimayu ko dekh mushkuraya...

Abhimanyu romantic ho kar puche...
'hum aap k hain koun...???'

Akriti k chehre se mushkurahat ho gayi gayab...
gusse se Abhimanyu ka coller pakad kar boli...
'aap ko kis se milna hai bhai sahab...???'

Abhimanyu mushkura kar bole...
'aap se'...
Akriti gusse se boli...
'mujh se...ya mere honewale bachhe k baap se...???'

Abhimanyu bole...
'achha thik hai...ab jane dijiye...humain ander aane dijiye...'

Akriti ne ek mukka marte hue boli...
'tum jaise road romeo ko achhe se janti hun...
tumhe ander nahi bulayege...
kal aa jana
tab tak Chahuan jee bhi laut aajayenge...'

Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Sorry for replying so late?although I had read the update when you had posted it.

Superb update. Romance with a twist?.and a new suspense.👍🏼

Raj ko bhi kya masti sooji ki usne naina ko apne saath pine ke liye offer kiya. Naina ka gussa hona bhi toh sahi tha?ab shadi ki raat koi thodi pee ke aata hai.😆

Par Raj ne naina ko bade hi aasani se mana liye. Raj ne ek baat bahut acchi kahi?that he is not perfect?he is just a ordinary person and will not change?because then he would not be able to recognize himself. Naina ko bhi raj ki yeh straight forwardness bahut acchi lagti hai?who waise he rehta hai jaisa who hai.😳

Both of them are attracted towards each other. Both of them are enjoying the closeness...dono ek dusre mein khoye hua hai?😳

Par itne romantic maahol mein naina ko apne dad ki yaad kaise aayi. 😉😆

Naina itne sawal poochti hai ki raj ko use jawab dena hi padta hai?who use batata hai ki naina ke papa use kahan mile the?aur phir usne unka kaise khayal rakha.

Raj ka gift bahut hi special tha aur use dene ka tarika uar bhi khoobsurat.😍 Ek baar phirse unke romance mein train ki awaz se break pad jati hai.😔

Raj ko aditi ke paas aise pareshan betha dekhkar Naina ko chinta hoti hai. 😲

Aditi ke saath kisne bura kiya hai?

Raj gun lekar kahan chala gaya?

Aur Jigyasa kise dekhkar chonk gayi?

Waiting to know the answer to all of these questions and more?.so please continue soon.

Reserved
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi Priya

How r u???
Update was gud but it was really depressing to read abt Raj's father....👏👏👏
Jigyasa,Vikram n Gaurav have committed sins n I think they deserve all this..😡
Raj has seen his father getting killed n he cudn't do a thing to save him..His anger,frustration r at its breaking point..He has beared this pain all alone..He was really close to his father n seeing that man die infront of him has shaken his very existence..😭😭
How can he forget all this..Everything his family has suffered is all because of these people..
Raj did the right thing..he is now torturing the 3 of them ..n these people deserved a more hard punishments for their crime..😡😡😡
Naina came to know abt the truth behind Raj's anger..She was shocked to know abt his sufferings..
Wat happened to Aditi??? I think she has been tortured the most..poor girl!!
I hope Raj teach a gud lesson to these people..
Pls continue soon
LRL joke was funny..😆😆
Continue soon
Bye
When will u update Zindagi n Ehsaas???
bye
Edited by suhana_dixit - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Radhe radhe priya ji !! 😃
Mujhe lagta hai, main bolte bolte aur tum sunte sunte thakk chuki hogi ki Update superb, outstanding, mindblowing, wonderful tha ! 😃 👏 👏 👏
Bosss !!! Kisi pahuche huye script writer ki ishtyle mein likha hua tha !!! loveeeeddddd it !! muaaaaahhh !!! 😃
flashback padhte waqt toh mere roungte khade hogaye...Koi EMOTICON bhi nahi hai meri feelings describe karne keliye !
Ab kis cheez ki taarif karu???
but sabse jyaaada touching, attractive, superbly koi cheez describe ki gayi, toh woh thi Raj aur uske father ka mute convo....aur unke flashbacks !! 👏 👏👏 👏
YOU ROCKKKKK GIRLLLL !!!! You are a starrrrrr !!! ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
Pri...mere paas words nahi hai yaar !!!
I liked Naina-gayatri-vishal-Adi convo!
Aur jo kuch Jigyasa, vikram, gaurav ke saath ho raha tha na, mann kar raha tha ki isse bhi bura ho !
Aur i really loved apne HERO ka style !!!
Keep it up dearrr !!!
AUr plzzzz.... ab Update karna !
P.s. : LRL joke....well kya kahu??? tu toh jaanti hai...Jab bhi ABHI ke saath aisa kuch hota hai toh mujhe kitnaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa mazaaa aata hai ! 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆
Edited by Revolutionbreez - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
mindblowing update
awsome
too good
u rocked
just fatafati
beautifully written
great going
plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hii Priya….

Sorry for the late comment

Awesome part 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏bahut sad n emotional part tha ….tune to mujhe rula diya 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 …lekin u have written it so fabulously 👏 👏 👏 👏👏 👏👏👏👏👏

Rajs family sufferd a lot because of that idiots vikram,gaurav,jigyasa.. Raj ki papa ko kitna berahmi se maara ….kitna torture kiya hain unko ….past aur present ko mix karke tune bahut beautifully likha yaar ....hatts off to your writting skills 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 bechara raj …apne papa ko apne aankhon ke saamne marte hue dekhna pada

Adi is so funny when she said suicide karne jaa rahi hun ..liked the convo between gayatri jee n naina

Jigyasa ,gaurav ,vikram ke saath bahut accha kiya raj ne ..i really liked it

Adi ke saath kya hua? …hope u clear it in your next update

Please continue soon

Edited by princessyogitha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
mai is update ke liye bas itna kahungi.. tumne mujhe rulate huye hasaya 😛aur .. hasate huye rula diya....😭
ab agar mujhe gaurav, vikaram aur jigayasa mai se koi bhi mil gaya toh mai unhe rajveer is phele tarpa trapa ke marungi...😡 so unse keh dena mere samne na aaye... warna unki halat aisi hogi🤢
Wonderful update ... As a writer this is your best update of TN......👏👏
And sorry for not commenting on last updates... pls meri pitai mat karna comments na dene par....

And thanks ki tumne us jungali (Abhimanyu) ka itna buara haal banaya.... tusi mera dil kush kar dita..👏
Edited by kads_8302 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
kya time pr break mardi tune
agage likhe break marsakthi na
yeee part bohat acchaaaaa tha
awesome work dear
present paast were tooo goodddddddd
loved it to the core
expecting more raj naina scenes in the next part cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

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