Tere Naina#2#(RN)Last Part Wid EPI pg 119(4/6) - Page 18

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

Arey Guglu, yeh priya jalti hai mujhse ! 😛

Yaha Raj mujhse baatein kar raha tha, aur iss bechari ko toh yeh mauka nahi milta ! 😛

Hamesha ' Parde ke peeche ' se hi toh sab direct karna hota hai na ! 😉

Issliye, Naina ko jaldi discharge karwadiya 😡 😆

Originally posted by: desaiprachi07

Chal accha hua madam ne update to kiya varna maine socha tha, ki kahin tu bund na kar de update warna mai kabhi reply nahi karti hoon yahan. ud karna band kaise karr deti...tum logg baithe hue ho na...mujhe peetne k liye...

Nice track u develpoed the story. Kaafi ups n downs hain. I mean kaafi jyada is me suspense hai. Raj aur Naina ab kaafi had tak ek doosre k pass aa gaye hain, bhale hi Raj ne kaha nahi i love u but Naina acche se jaanti hai ki Raj bus us se hi pyaar karta hai. ab dil ek dushre ki batain bina kahe samajh hi jati hain...jabb koi apna laggne lagta hai tab...

Ab jaldi hi clear ho jaayega saara matter i think.

update soon.

Originally posted by: desaiprachi07

Sorry yaar to sab se pehle mujhe tujhe wish karna chahiye tha na new thread open karne par. First part jo tum ne update kiya tha new thread open hone par vo bhi kaafi accha tha. Thanqqqqqqqqq Drishti....😃

Naina ko goli lagne ka fayda mila na. Akhir ab Raj us k pass aa gaya hai aur us ko apne se door kahin bhi nahi bhejgea. I loved the way Raj ne acche se dhamki di hai Vikram n gang ko. ab toh raj bhul kar bhi naina ko apne dur karne k bare me sochega hi nahi...😛

Maza hi aa gaya, phir bhi Vikram ne dhamki di, i mean rassi jal gayi par bal nahi gaya. kya karain...kuch logon ko aadat hoti hain laaton se samajhte hain...baton se nahi...😛

update soon.

Originally posted by: sun_423

priya sorry maine itne time se comment nahii kiya.. woh actually mere exams aagaye the, ussi ke preparations mein i got busy... aur issi liye mujhe waqt hii nahii mila kii main tumhare ff par comment kar sakoon.. sorry yaar.. hope you understand...😊 ab chalo yeh baatein chodthi hoon aur badhthi hoon tumhare ff part ke comments kii taraf... sorry kis liye yaar...xams ki tension me kahin par mann hi nahi lagta toh tum comments kaise karti...!!! ab yeh toh obvious hai na...mujhe hi dekh lo....mera bhi baht bura haal hai...😭

well part tho bohat hii interesting tha.. dekha jaye tho tum hamesha hii interesting part likhthi ho.. farq sirf itna hai kii with each part the interesting bit only gets more & more.. the interesting quotient in your ff is always on the rise.. aur mujhe yeh baat tumhare ff's mein bohat hii achchi lagthi hai... you very well know how to get your readers hooked to your writing... tum itne intersting, different twists laathi ho kii the readers are curious to read more & more... after each part the readers are just left craving for more... mujhe tho aisa lagtha hai kii main tumhari ff ko padhthi hii jaaun aur woh kabhi bhi khatam hii na ho.. sach mein tumhari writing se readers ka haal aisa hii hotha hai... joh is part ke starting mein hua... Goddddddd...zindagi me itni tarif ek sath maine nahi suni...!!! matlab jabb maine math me 97 mark rakhe the...tabb dad ne bhi itni tarif nahi ki thi...jitna tum ne yahan par karr diya...!!! thanqqqqqqqq so much Suri dear...

well flashback always confuse me a bit... lekin joh bhi hai i can see that yeh sab bas us vikram kii chaal hai... ussi ne aslam, aur nandini ko dhoke se juda kiya.. aur raj ke father ke death ka zimedaar bhi wohii hai.. i just wish raj vikram kii khoob baand bajaye.. i'll pukka enjoy it very, very much.... FB me vikram ne apni manmani ki thi...par PRESENT toh Raj ka hai na...voh vikram ki kya haal karega voh tum bass dekhti jayo...😉

aur joh baat jigyasa ne kahii na flashback mein kii aslam eyed aditi, is baat pe mujhe bohat ghussa aaya... this villain party surely needs to be taught a lesson.. dont worry dear...sare villians party par Shani dasha padne hi wali hai...😆

i still feel bad for nandin.. naina tho us villain party se durr hai, lekin nandini ab bhi unhi logon ke changul mein phasi hui hai.. & sometimes i feel kii kahiin yeh dushmann party, nandini ko hurt na kare, just taaki raj aur baaki sab ko chot pohanche.. ek do uds me Nandini ka matter clear karr dungi...

but i'am sure raj us vikram aur gaurav kii khaal uded dega agar un dono ne kuch bhi ulta-seedha karne ka socha, uske (raj ke) apno ke saath... ab Raj hai...toh apni sarkaar-raj toh chalayega hi...😉

waise the scene between raj & naina in the hospital was very sweet.. mujhe bohat hii achcha laga woh scene.. glad...ki tumhe yeh scene itna achha laga😃

kitne cute tareeke se pesh aa raha hai raj, naina se.. i can see kii raj aur naina ka bond is getting stronger.. aur unka ek dusare ke liye pyaar bhi badh raha hai.... really very well written scene.. thanqqqqq😃

the kiss was absolutely scintillating.. naina ka raj ke liye fikar karna.. raj ka mazaak... their concern for each other.. naina is still sulking kii agar usse goli nahii lagthi tho raj usse sach mein Shimla bhej detha.. aur is baat par raj ka apne aap ko bewakoof kehna.. all this was this tooo tweettt... thanqqqqqqqq sweety....😃

yeh raj na shaitaan hai.. he says jab woh washroom mein ho tho he can't have anyone to guard him...hahaha... shararthi ho raha hai raj.. it is good to see raj like that.. & this side of raj can be seen only with naina... kyunke woh dushmann party ke kaam ke wajah se aaj raj par itni zimedaariyaan hai.. he has to take care of his sister & mother's safety.. & he is answerable to many.. aur in sab mein mujhe lagtha hai kii the real carefree raj kahiin kho gaya hai.. & i'am happy that this carefree side of raj comes out in front of naina.. atleast for once raj can love one person freely keeping behind the responsibility aspect.... nice.. wowwww...maan na padega yaar...tumhe...tum ne kitna kuch achhe se samajh liya...!!! maine bhi itne achhe se nahi likha hoga tum ne jiss tarah se xplaine kiya hai...😃

i liked what raj said about the proposal bit..... it was so true.. sabke liye ek waqt hotha hai.. & i'am eagerly waiting for that waqt....bohat achche... waise i'am sure raj is planning to tell naina those three magical words in style, in a very romantic way.... hehehe..... yeh baat bhi baht jald tumhe pata chal hi jayegi... 😃

talking about the last scene of the update.. i'am wondering kii raj ko achanak kya soojha.. what is the thought that crossed raj's mind suddenly... i'am very curious to know that... whatever it is i'am sure of one thing that this one thing which has crossed raj's mind, i going to make the next part all the more very very interesting.. next part interesting hai ya nahi yeh toh tumm padh kar hi batana...

keep up the good work going.... the story is progressing damn well.. i'am enjoying it very much... 👏 thanxxxx Suri...tumhare comments na mujhe Horlicks ki yaad dilate hain...matlab health drink...mere liye😃

priya next part please jaldi se update karna.. i'am waiting for the next part eagerly.. aur haan ek request hai ra-naina ke beech thode romantic scenes add karo...😊 sorry yaar...yehi romantic scene likhne me main baht buri hun😕...upar se mujhe is me koi ideas bhi nahi aate...phir bhi try karungi...after all tum ne kaha hai...😃

Originally posted by: esha143

yaar pls maarna mat.........mujhe pata hai maine kaam pitne waali hi ki hai.tune apne comments par reply bhi kar di hai phir bhi maine apni comments nahi likhi................sorry yaar,really sorry..........aainda aisi galthi nahi hogi...........mana aur guglu ke fics pe comments bhi abhi baaki hai,so mujhe jaldi karnaa hoga.............again chooooooooo choooooooollllllllllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!
*esha kaan pakad rahi hai* parr mujhe toh esha kaan pakadti hui dikhai nahi de rahi hai....bal k mushkurati hui dikhai de rahi hai...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆!!! vaiseeeeeeeee...mujhe laga tha ki tujhe sayad yeh UD achha nahi laga isiliye tune comments nahi ki...!!!😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

ab aathe hai update par........okkkkk😃

iss baar flash back mein bohuth kuch pata chala hai,jaise ki kaise Aslam ki shaadi ruk gayi,kyun Rajveer Aslam pe itnaa bharosa kartha hai aur kaise vo Jigyaasa ko pehle se jaantha hai.par phir bhi ye nahi samajh aaya ki Aslam ko Aditi ke baare mein vo sab kehne ki kya jaroorath thi?was he being black-mailed?aur ussne aisa kyun kaha Vishal se ki Aditi ko bachaa lo?whats happened to her in the past that Rajveer worries about her so much?sare flashback scenes ek hi ud me toh nahi likh sakti hun na...isiliye sabb kuch dhire dhire clear karungi...par har ud me thoda sa FB scene jarur hoga...😃

wow yaar finally tumhaare fic mein DOC.MANA ki bhi entry ho hi gayi......great.waise kya main jaan sakthi hu ki Naina thik hai ya nahi?vo kya hai na jis DOC.M ko hum log jaanthe hai vo toh abhi tak poori DOC bani nahi hai na bas issiliye Naina ke baare mein chintha ho rahi thi😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 Mana puri doc nahi bani hai...yeh mujhe pata hai...par naina ko jiss Doc X ne ilaaz kiya tha na...hamari Mana unhe assist karr rahi thi...!!! ab tumhe toh pata hi hai ki senior doc se jyda sincere junior Doc hote hain...!!! isiliye Mana ne pura charge sambhal liya tha...aur Naina ko pura thik karrne k baad hi damm liya us ne😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

arrey arrey hamaara Rajveer dukhi hogaya?kya yaar Priya tu ne bechaare ko Naina aur Adi ke beech iss tarah phasaa diya ki ab vo khud ko hospital mein admit karvaane ki soch rahaa hai......poor Raj.but dont worry hamaari ye Priya ji jo hai vo bohuth achchi bachchi hai,vo aisi naubath aane hi nahi dengi...........hai na😉😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 mera bharosha bilkul mat karna...main writer hun...kuch bhi karr sakti hun...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

sach Kahaa Rajveer ne Naina usski jaan hai aur jab tak vo hai tab tak usski jaan ko kuch nahi ho saktha.aur ha mujhe maalum hai ki vo WASHROOM waala joke sirf tere dimaagless dimaag mein hi panap saktha hai.but that was a good one.😉😆😆😆 dimagless club ki memb hun...main...yeh kya tumhe batana padega...!!! aur rahi baat washroom ki...toh maam aise jokes toh har do min me mere dimag me jump marte rahte hain...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

arrey Rajveer Naina ke paas itna dimaag kahaa hai jo vo ye sab sochegi.hamaari Priya madam ne usse bilkul khud ki tarah banaaya hai.mujhe lagtha hai ki kahi ye khud Priya hi toh nahi??😆😆😆😆tabhi toh chillane ke bajaay khud daudi chali aagayi tumhaare paas bilkul kisi film ki heroine ki tarah.........poori nautanki😉,kyun priya? ab ja kar tum ne sahi pakda hai...!!! actually naina main hi hun...bass use likh pati hun...dikha nahi pati...screen parr😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

yaar vo senti aur romance ka combo scene bohuth badiyaa tha.too good.aur sahi kaha Raj ne 'kuch cheezon ka sahi waqt hotha hai'..........aur main tujhse pooch rahi hu vo sahi waqt kab aayega Priya????? aayega...aayega...aayega...aayega aanewala aayega...aayega😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

aur lastly ye Raj aur Aslam kis chacha ji ke baare mein baat kar rahe hai?aur Raj ko acaanak aisa kya yaad aagaya ki vo itna khush ho gaya?ab isse to tujhe hi clarify kakrnaa hai,so mein iss baat ko yahi chod dethi hu.karti hun na next ud me ...thoda sa confusion toh dur karr hi sakti hun...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

waise iss baar main continue soon nahi kahungi kyun ki iss baar main jo itni late ho gayi hu............once again sorry yaar.............................koi baat nahi...der aaye durusht aaye...tum ne ud se pahle comments toh kiya...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

Originally posted by: sun_423

priya aur kitna wait karwayegi... update kar na.. jaldiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.. veryy jaldiiiiii..😊

Originally posted by: princessyogitha

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

lo...mujhe dhamkane k liye Yogi ne ek naya tarika nikala hai....Raj ko Gun de kar voh mujhe dhamki de rahi hai... lolz😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 par Yogi dear pata hai tujhe...i just love ur siggies🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗