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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

the up is very nice plz cont soon

Thanxxxxxxx Ria...😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

wonderful update.loved it.

just too good,
wow, raj and naina scene are too good, so cute and sweet,loved their sweet conversation, raj ne naina ko tease bhi bahut kia....
continue soon dear.

Thanqqqq Rakhi...for ur sweet comments.😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: guglu088

Yaar Priya...

Maine comment tak nahi kiya aur tumne like button bhi click kar diya???😲😲😲 Yaani ki mera kuch na likhna hi tujhe jyada pasand hai???😲😲😲 aaj main baht khush hun...kyoun ki tune proof kar diya ki tu hamare club ki mem hai...varna teri khopdi ulti nahi chalti...!!! ab dekh...maine LIKE button isiliye click kiya...kyoun ki mujhe pata tha ki tu jarur comment karegi...!!! jo insaan mere is fic ko band karne k gusse me aa kar FF section me bhi aur PM me bhi galiyon ki barshat kar sakti hai...voh toh jarur comment karegi hi na...!!! par tune yeh sawal puch kar mujhe khush karr diya...mujhe Garv hai ki hamare club ko tujh jaisi ek ulti khopdi ka mem mila hai...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 ab bol samajh me aaya ya hamare club k rule k hisab se samjhayun...danda le karr...

Fir mai comment karun ya nahin??? ek baar comment na karr k toh dekh...teri voh halat karungi...voh halat karungi ki...😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡??? chod voh toh main tujhe live telicast k sath samjhayungi...jab tu comment nahi karegi tabb...

Chalo kar deti hun. Waise Mana ne itna lamba chauda comment kiya hai ki mere paas kehne ko kuch bhi nahi bacha. Fir Sumi ne bhi keh diya.Ab Yogitha ke post se pehle mai comment kar deti hun... warna bacha khuch kuch bhi hoga toh wo keh degi, aur mere paas kuch bhi nahi bachega kehne ke liye.😆😆😆 ab yeh kya baat hui...sabb ne kuch na kuch likha hai...ab tu kah rahi hai ki tere pass kuch nahi hai...aisa kaise karr sakti hai tu...😭

Well flashback was definitely interesting. Raj ke papa par hamla hua hai aur FIR pe sign karne se pehle Raj ne apradhi ko dekhne ki icha jahir ki. Aur apradhi ko dekhkar Raj aur Vishaal ko pakka 1000 volt ka jhatka laga. Mujhe pata tha Jigyasa ko dekhkar hi laga tha ki kuch na kuch gadbad hai. Poor Aslam... usse apne muh se kuch aisa kubool karna pada jo usne kiya hi nahi hai.CryCryCry Raj ki halat par taras aata hai. Aur Aslam ne kitni chalaki se Vishaal se kaha ki Adi ko bacha lo.👏👏👏 Adi ke saath kya hone wala hai? Kahin kuch aisa toh nahi jiski mai kalpana bhi nahi karna chahti.😕🤢 dont worry...main itni gayi-gujri nahi hun...😆...aur main aisa kuch bhi nahi likhungi jo mujhe khud hi achha na lage...😃

Coming back to present:

Mana ne cameo kiya hai...congratulations Mana.😆 Par Priya ne itni jaldi Naina ko discharge karwa diya ki Raj ka aana jaana shuru hone se pehle hi band ho gaya.😆😆😆 mujhe Mana k intentions par shaq hone laga tha na...isiliye maine naina ko jaldi discharge karwa diya...😆 😆 😆

Adi ne sahi kaha... spl care waali chiz bhai ka dept hai.😆😆😆 So very true. Raj ko sharm aayi kya ye baat sunkar jo usne Adi ko maara???😆😆😆 obviously...sharam toh aayegi hi na...abhi tak kuch kiya hi nahi hai aur pahle se hi adi us ki khinachai karr rahi hai advance me...😆 😆 😆

Beautiful RN scene in the hospital room. Raj ne bina sune hi Naina se wada kar liya. Wo kitna pyaar karta hai aur kitna trust karta hai uss par ye baat bahut saaf pata chal jaati hai.Raj ne abhi tak wo 3 shabd nahi kahe. bolega bolega...tu thoda sa wait kar le...voh jarur bolega...baht jald bolega...😆
Adi ke fule hue muh ka size kam karne ki koshish kar raha tha Vishaal. Hilarious...😆😆😆 he he...😆 😆 😆 thanxxx...

Raj Aslam ke saath jaa raha hai. Par usse kya yaad aaya jo wo uchal pada??? Ab ye toh tum hi bata sakti ho. bata dungi na next part me...😃

So jaldi batao aur batane ke liye agla part post karo. Waiting for the next part...is baar phir se late hun...kya karun...probs mera picha hi nahi chodti...varna maine toh yeh part baht pahle se hi likh rakha tha aur socha tha ki vday k aas paas post karungi...parr nahi kar payi...

Love
Guglu.

Thanxxxxxxxxxxxx Guglu...!!!😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanxxxxxx Dear...😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!!Awesome!!!!! thanxxxx

Main jaanti thi ke yeh Jigyasa zaroor kuch buri khabar lekar aayegi!!!!!!😡 😡 😡

😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 villians ki suppoter hai toh buri khabar hi layegi na..

Raj ke dad par hamla huya hai aur unke secretary ne bhi yeh baat confirm kar di!!!!!

FIR paper pe sign karne se pehle Raj ush insaan ko dekhna chahta tha jisne hamla karwaya!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Both Raj and Vishal are shocked and could not believe Aslam could do this!!!!

😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 aslam un ka dost hai...aur unhe us par pura bharosha hai toh blv kaise karte...

Like them even I am sure ke Aslam ko fasaya jaa raha hai!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

It is good to see that Raj did not believe Jigyasa for a minute and is feeling angry and frustrated!!!!! 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

He can understand that Aslam is saying all this under someone's pressure!!!!

I am sure Aslam ko Vikram hi blackmail kar raha hai!!!!!!😡 😡 😡

😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 ab yeh toh mere aage k uds batayenge...

Yehi uska plan hai taaki Aslam ki shaadi Nandini se na ho sake!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

Poor Aslam!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Usse itni badi baat Raj ke saamne khni padhi woh bhi uski behen ke baare mein!!!!! kuch majburi rahi hogi us ki...

Aslam very cleverly told Vishal that Aditi is in danger!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

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Aditi does not leave any chance to tease Raj and said ke Naina ka special care toh sirf Raj kar sakta hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 adi sis hone ka farz nibha rahi hai...

Aur phir woh Raj ne rooth jaati hai aur Raj ne sahi kaha nautanki!!!!😛 😛 😛

😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
Raj telling the doctor ke woh jaldi hi hospital pahuch jayega was too funny!!!!!
😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 use us ka future saaf dikhai de raha hai

Naina ne Raj se vaada karne ko kaha aur Raj ne bina sune hi kar diya!!!!!😛 😛

😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊How sweet!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina is worried about Raj and does not want him to go anywhere without protection!!!!!!

😔 😔 😔 😔

It was so romantic when Raj said uske saamne uski jaan baithi huyi hai aur uske rehte usse koi khatra nahi ho sakta!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ab raj ki zindagi me ek aur makshad bhi toh judd gaya hai...NAINA

Raj is always teasing Naina and his joke about the washroom was very funny!!!!!😉

😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina told Raj usne ush aadmi ki shakal puri tarah se nahi dekhi thi!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Naina told Raj about her dream and how she has changed her destiny by coming between him and the bullet!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏isiliye toh voh mushkura rahi thi

Naina ne sahi kaha agar usse goli nahi lagti toh Raj usse Shimla bhej deta!!!!!😒

😒 😒 😒 😒

So thanks to Vikram aaj Raj aur Naina saath hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 haan...ek tarah se credit Vikram ko bhi jata hai

Raj and Naina are soo cute and romantic together!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳

😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

I liked Raj's dialogue ke Vishal Adi ke fule huye muh ka size kam karne ki koshish kar raha hai jokes bol kar!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Naina Raj se woh three magical words sunna chahti hai magar Raj ke paas hamesha koi excuse hota hai!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 kisi subh mahurat k talash me hoga...

Pata nahi woh kis muhurat ka intezzar kar raha hai!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Yeh Raj ko ab kya sujha ke woh itna khush ho gaya??😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 ab yeh toh next ud par pata chalega...


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Fabulous update...!!!!

Yaar today I hurt my finger so not typing much...But my comments ditto Mana and Sumi...!!!

Update soon...!!!

thanxxxxx Dhara...kamm se kamm tum ne padha toh sahi...😃!!! aur ab tumhara finger kaisa hai...jarur apple cut karr raho hogi aur finger kaat diya hoga...hai na...???
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Posted: 15 years ago
yaar pls maarna mat.........mujhe pata hai maine kaam pitne waali hi ki hai.tune apne comments par reply bhi kar di hai phir bhi maine apni comments nahi likhi................sorry yaar,really sorry..........aainda aisi galthi nahi hogi...........mana aur guglu ke fics pe comments bhi abhi baaki hai,so mujhe jaldi karnaa hoga.............again chooooooooo choooooooollllllllllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!
*esha kaan pakad rahi hai*

ab aathe hai update par........

iss baar flash back mein bohuth kuch pata chala hai,jaise ki kaise Aslam ki shaadi ruk gayi,kyun Rajveer Aslam pe itnaa bharosa kartha hai aur kaise vo Jigyaasa ko pehle se jaantha hai.par phir bhi ye nahi samajh aaya ki Aslam ko Aditi ke baare mein vo sab kehne ki kya jaroorath thi?was he being black-mailed?aur ussne aisa kyun kaha Vishal se ki Aditi ko bachaa lo?whats happened to her in the past that Rajveer worries about her so much?

wow yaar finally tumhaare fic mein DOC.MANA ki bhi entry ho hi gayi......great.waise kya main jaan sakthi hu ki Naina thik hai ya nahi?vo kya hai na jis DOC.M ko hum log jaanthe hai vo toh abhi tak poori DOC bani nahi hai na bas issiliye Naina ke baare mein chintha ho rahi thi😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

arrey arrey hamaara Rajveer dukhi hogaya?kya yaar Priya tu ne bechaare ko Naina aur Adi ke beech iss tarah phasaa diya ki ab vo khud ko hospital mein admit karvaane ki soch rahaa hai......poor Raj.but dont worry hamaari ye Priya ji jo hai vo bohuth achchi bachchi hai,vo aisi naubath aane hi nahi dengi...........hai na😉😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

sach Kahaa Rajveer ne Naina usski jaan hai aur jab tak vo hai tab tak usski jaan ko kuch nahi ho saktha.aur ha mujhe maalum hai ki vo WASHROOM waala joke sirf tere dimaagless dimaag mein hi panap saktha hai.but that was a good one.😉😆😆😆

arrey Rajveer Naina ke paas itna dimaag kahaa hai jo vo ye sab sochegi.hamaari Priya madam ne usse bilkul khud ki tarah banaaya hai.mujhe lagtha hai ki kahi ye khud Priya hi toh nahi??😆😆😆😆tabhi toh chillane ke bajaay khud daudi chali aagayi tumhaare paas bilkul kisi film ki heroine ki tarah.........poori nautanki😉,kyun priya?

yaar vo senti aur romance ka combo scene bohuth badiyaa tha.too good.aur sahi kaha Raj ne 'kuch cheezon ka sahi waqt hotha hai'..........aur main tujhse pooch rahi hu vo sahi waqt kab aayega Priya?????

aur lastly ye Raj aur Aslam kis chacha ji ke baare mein baat kar rahe hai?aur Raj ko acaanak aisa kya yaad aagaya ki vo itna khush ho gaya?ab isse to tujhe hi clarify kakrnaa hai,so mein iss baat ko yahi chod dethi hu.

waise iss baar main continue soon nahi kahungi kyun ki iss baar main jo itni late ho gayi hu............once again sorry yaar.............................

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Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

Hi Priya .... hi sur...

dekho is baar tumhare ud ki tarah mera comment bhi kafi late hai, but Im sorry ha! I keep forgetting mene kaha reserve kia hai aur kaha comment! Ghajini effect u see! voh toh mujhe malum hai...varan tumhare uds bhi itne late nahi aate...
anyways ud was really great! thanqqqqqqqq sur
Ab thoda thoda suspense samajh me a raha hai... chalo achha hai...kisi ko toh samajh me aa raha hai mera bakwaas😆
I dont believe Vikram cud stoop so low...I mean Aslam pe aisa ilzam! Achcha kia jo usne jate jate Vishal ko warn to kar dia...Vikram aditi k piche pada hai! gira hua insaan kahi ka...ab ise jaldi se Rajveer k hath se ek do aur muh pe padwao aur bilkul niche(zameen k andar) pahucha do! sabb kuch hoga...maam...par tumhare ud k speed se...he he he just kidding😆 😆 😆
chalo ab Rajveer to Naina k pass rahega...sahi kaha tha Naina ne, vo sach me bewakuf hi hai.... is fic k writer k bare me kya khayal hai...jaisi writer vaise hi us k fic k character...😆
Aur usey Naina ko I love you bolne me itne nakhre kyu a rahe hai? I think isme bhi uska apna hi koi apna funda hoga... ab yeh toh rajveer hi bata sakta hai...
Naina ne achcha kia jo rajveer se promise le lia k vo kahi bhi akele nahi jayega- except one place ofcourse! dekha...apna hero kitna practical sochta hai😆
Rajveer aur Naina wala scene kafi romantic tha...aur Naina ka explanation bhi. I just hope Vikram has the sense not to try anything now ...is k liye dimag ki jarurat hoti hai dear...aur vikram k paas toh usi chiz ki shakhat kami hai
Ab bas jaldi se nxt ud kardo
aur is Vikram ki band bajwao, jo mujhe lag raha hai kafi jaldi bajne wali hai since Rajveer k dimag me idea a gaya hai! yippeeee ab raj k dimag me koun sa iodea aaya hai voh toh tumhe pata chal hi jayega next ud me...
love
Sur

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Priya Hi Suhana

How r u??? f9...wat abt u dear
Chalo tumne update karne ki soch hi li😊😊 he he he😆 😆 😆
Update was brilliant👏👏👏 thanqqqqq Suhana😃 😃 😃
I hate Jigyasa so much..😡😡 sabhi karr rahe hain...bichari jiggy😛 😛 😛
Mujhe to lagta hai Aslam ko Vikram hi blackmail kar raha tha...Koi to usse phansa raha hai ,tabhi to usne itni badi baat Raj ke samne bol di woh bhi uski behan ke liye..
Raj ho bhi yakeen nahin ho raha hai ki Aslam uske sath aisa karega..But atleast Aslam ne Vishal ko warn to kar hi diya.. yeh FB scene hai...jahan baht kuch alag hua tha...jiss ki wajah se raj aaj aisa hai...
Aditi Raj ko tease karne ka ek mauka bhi nahin chodti😉😆😆 Doc(I mean Manali) ne Naina ko discharge to kar diya but ab woh Raj se milegi kaise??😉😆 But Raj bhi hospital mein ek bed reserve kara rah hai chalo Manali ki to nikal padi😉😆😆 yeah...par ab Raj ko Mana k intention par shaq hone laga hai...isiliye mujhe nahi pata ki raj Mana k hospital me dubara jayega ya nahi...😆 😆 😆
RN scene was too cute n romanticTongue
Raj is always teasing Naina ...But this scene was just too funny raj ne practical baat kari thi na...😆
"Rajveer:- "har jagah kisi na kisi ko sath rakhuga...yeh baat toh thik hai...lekin ek jagah hai vahan par main kisi ko bhi sath me nahi le ja sakta...!!! vahan par ya toh mujhe akele jana padega ya phir tumhe mere sath chalna padega...!!!"
Naina:- "kahan...???"
Rajveer:- "wash room me...!!!" rajveer hassa zor se"
Raj ko bachane ke liye Naina ne apni jaan ki parwah bhi nahin ki....
Naina bhi Raj se woh 3 magical words sunne ke liye bekaraar hai but janaab ke paas har time koi na koi excuse hota hai... lekin ab Delhi dur nahi...😉
" I use to be this girl

Hoping for a fairytale

With so much love to give

But my heart soon grew frail

Heartbreak was inevitable

Fury had been released

But still the pain was unbearable

The grief could only increase

But you came as my hero

When I no longer could breathe

You promised me security

And that you'd never leave

You saved me from treachery

I trust u completely

How can I tell how much I love

u r in my dreams n in my heart

This isn't a game

I'm certainly no prize

I'm far from perfection

I hope you realize

Tears come so easily

I'm nothing but a mess

You're a knight in shining armour

Saving a damsel in distress

When you hold me in your arms

All the tears just melt away

You're my air; I need you

Your smile can make my day

I'll slowly rebuild myself

To be stronger, to be better

As long as you promise this

Promise you'll love me forever" hey suhana... very nice song dear
Ab Raj ke dimaag mein kaun sa idea aaya hai???? voh toh raj hi bolega na...😃
Continue soon
Bye

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