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Nikki

@dmgmjht4ever

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Posted: 15 years ago

#101

edited on Page 2,
and need to write a long review for this too

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Nikki

@dmgmjht4ever

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#102

hai...
loved it
I'm on Google Chrome
and it said I spelt hai wrong
LOL
wow
didn't realize the time
it's 7:02 pm
and it felt like 5 minutes since I have gotten on
when it's really been an hour
I loved the part
long?
it was short
for god's sake
desi girl,
you need to make it LONGER
tikh hai?
loved the silent talks
and this adha-idiot...
iss kahani mein kyun hai?
Kyun???????
and what did he do to Nups
agar kuch galat kiya...
toh mein isko choordogi nahi
LOL
I'm not good at doing that
see,
I'm very weak
okay,
this is shorter than usual
so yeah...
I'm clueless what to say
continue soon!

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ZumSrK.

@ZumSrK.

Stunner

Posted: 15 years ago

#103

Loved it..
It was so nice..
Continue soon..

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nanchie sharma

@mayur-ki-diwani

Navigator

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Posted: 15 years ago

#104

wow yaar
ab serial mein bhi mayur ek couple hain
aur yahan bhi they will act as a couple
double treat

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luv-myur

@luv-myur

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Posted: 15 years ago

#105

Hey Lina,

Thankyou for the pm and add me on to u'r pm list.

Nice story line. ---Wondering if Arti is really her friends daughter or her daughter???? And wondering abt who the guy is for whome she ran away. So i guess i will find out eventually.

Nupur n mayank-----so the journey to goa and back to this place will establish their trust and feelings i guess!

Update soon--aur thoda long update dhena plz.

Thankyou

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Bhavana Bhaskar

@bhavana92

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#106

by god!that donkey Adhiraj is Nupz friend?😲
yeh kis janam mein hua?😆
anywayz, wonderful update hun! & y don't u use orphanage 4 anaath ashram[er....jus a suggestion]....maybe mayank will act as nupz husband now, hez too sweet, i'm sure he'll agree😊.....
continue soon Lina.....

Bhavana

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parminder kaur

@parminderkaur

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#107

hi ...lina😛.....we met first time here😎....thnxx fr friendship request.😃.....u r just 13 years old...n u hv loadd of talent dear i read both the parts of u r ff .......good job..i must say this one is really awesome 1...the best i read till now👏.....u wrote the most of the dialouge that they use in the serials too soo i loved that part n 1 thing more u sereously use the word smile...a lottt😊...keep smiling u r a " shota packet bara dhamaka"😍..kinda girl all the very best.....keep writing....n add me too in the pm list fr sure yr..........n pm me when next part u publish...bbye🤗