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Ally

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Posted: 15 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: -Diya-
Awesome!!!!!
Loved it...Keep it upp=)

aw thank you sooooo much Diya

luvv ya

-Lina-

Originally posted by: angelshy

I loved reading it Lina & hope to read more .

Thanks for the PM dear !

Awwww thnak yuo luvv ya

-Lina-

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Ally

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Posted: 15 years ago

#92

Part 2

Nupur is still standing, holding the baby, and waiting for the rain to stop.

Mayank- I think appko behet na chahiye.

She sits down on a bench.

They say nothing. Many minutes passes, and Mayank finally manages to say something.

Mayank- Ummmm, Ms.-

Nupur- Nupur.😳

Mayank- Haan, toh app jahan jaane wali hai?

Nupur- *Smiles* Woh actually, meri family ke ghar mein, in Goa.

Mayank- Oh, par woh aapka bhi toh ghar hai na?

Nupur- Haan?😕

Mayank- Appne kaha "meri family ka ghar" issliye.

She says nothing, so he decides to change the subject.

Mayank- Pata hai Goa bohat achi jagah hai, mujhe humesha se wahan jaana hai.

Nupur thinking- Tum kitne ache ho na, kash har koi tumhari tarah hota.

Nupur- Haan, toh Mayank tum kya karte ho?

Mayank- Mein bacho ka dehan rak ta hoon, aanta ashram mein.

Nupur- Oh toh tum bhacho ko pasand karte ho?

Mayank- Of corse.

Again they have nothing to say to each other, and again he fills the quitenees.

Mayank- Toh isska naam kya hai?

Nupur- Arti.

Mayank- Nice name, aapki best friend ne rakha hai?

Nupur- *Smiles* haan.

It stops rainign.

Nupur- Dekho baarish ruk gayi hai. Now I think mujhe jaana chahaye.

Mayank- *Smiles* ok bye.

Nupur- Bye

Nupur leaves with Arti.

Later she packs her bag, it takes her a long time, and it is night, so she changes into her nightgown to sleep. She is still thinking about what will happen tomorrow.

She just looks at Arti who is sleeping, and she looks soo cute sleeping.

Nupur smiles and falls asleep.

It is morning, 9:00am, and her alarm clock waking her up.

She gets up, look at Arti who is still sleeping, and she goes to get ready.

She comes out after talking a shower, wearing a pink chooridar dress, with her hair opened.

Nupur- By god, Adhiraj mera wait kar raha ho ga.

Adhiraj is her friend, whom she asked to go with her to Goa, to meet her family, The jiju😆 .....

She wakes up Arti, takes her a bath, dresses her up, and hurry to the coffee shop.

She looks everywhere for Adhiraj, but he was no where to be seen.

She sits down, waiting for him to come.

On hour passes, she still waiting for him to come, with arti sleeping in her arms.

Nupur thinking- God yeh Raj kahan reh gaya? Abhi tak kyun nahi aaya?

She waits for him some more, then decides to call him.

She calls him 4 times, his anwer machine on, and he not answering the call. She calls him the 6th time, and this time he picks it up.

Adhi- Hello? Nupur?

Nupur- Haan mein, kahan reh gaye ho?

Adhi- Woh actually mein nahi aa sakata.

Nupur- Ok phir kal milte hai Goa mein.

Adhi- Nahi mein Goa mein nahi aa sakata.

Nupur- Par kyun? Tum ne mujhko promise kiya tha.

Adhi- Sorry Nupzs, meri maagni hone wali hai soon, aur mein tumhare saath nahi aa sakata.

She says nothing.

Adhi- Ok bye, I have to go now.

He cuts the phone.

She puts hers down, thinking what to do next.

Nupur is still sitting down, when she sees Mayank drinking coffee with his friend.

Nupur thinking- Kya Mayank meri help kare ga?

Guyz thank you thank you sooooooo much for all ur comments. Sachi mein I can't explain how much each of them worths to me. 😭Oh yeh toh khushi ke aansson hai😆 Ok first of all thank you sooo much for Divya di, to tell me how to say aanat ashram in english😆 sach mein I had no idea how to say it. Ok now do check out the character stretch on the first page. Theeke na? Meine appna promise poora kiya. 😆 I know I know, this part is very boring and a lot 😕ing too. But the next part is better. Par again thank you soooooooo much.

Love all and every one of you. 😳

and please do comment na.

-Lina-

Edited by rkmnkp - 15 years ago

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poonam

@P.Kamaljit.Sean

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Posted: 15 years ago

#93

Hey
that was awesome
thankz for pm

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Jassica C

@mjht_fan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#94

wow lina!!!!

i was waiting for it!

but couldn't come online yesterday

had a fever🤢

love ur new ff👏

lemme guess

adhibandar was supposed to act as her husband but cant

so mayank will???😃😉😊

plzzzzzzzzzz update soon

and come to the cc if ur on now

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t-mayur-sajan-j

@t-mayur-sajan-j

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Posted: 15 years ago

#95

hey linz
nice part
the baby is called arti so sooo sweet
i can't beleive ai raj is nupur's friend lol
cont soon
thx for the pm

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maria

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Posted: 15 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: rkmnkp

-Lina-

ur welcome janu

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Shamsa aka Sam

@Shamsaaa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#97

Aww loved this part really Awesome loved the name of the baby ArTi haha.....................😆😆😆

Awesome update..............waiting for u to con............sooon.............

😳😳😳

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maria

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Posted: 15 years ago

#98

hey lina this part is nice i loved the name arti waiting 4 suspence to open soon

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cornelia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#99

ah ha ha 😭 im the (let me see..)
im the 6th one to comment
main jaldi comment nahi kar saki ...
ok now it's getting too dramatic...
it's getting really int.... this part was so sweet..

Mayank- Pata hai Goa bohat achi jagah hai, mujhe humesha se wahan jaana hai.

Nupur thinking- Tum kitne ache ho na, kash har koi tumhari tarah hota.

Nupur- Haan, toh Mayank tum kya karte ho?

Mayank- Mein bacho ka dehan rak ta hoon, aanta ashram mein.

Nupur- Oh toh tum bhacho ko pasand karte ho?

Mayank- Of corse.

sweet like a honey...😆
u go girl...👍🏼
bye bye ta ta ... he he he .. ha ha ha
ok ill stop now