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Posted: 15 years ago
PART-6

The scene starts with all the cadets running here and there. They were discussion about the preparations. Sanjana, Pooja, Ali, Aalekh and Yudi were there. Soon, Neev also joined them.

Neev: - "Chalo, tum sab mujhe batao ki tum sab ki kya planning hai?"

Sanjana: - "Kuch khaas nahin……."

Neev: - "kyun bhai, aisa kya ho gaya?"

Sanjana: - "Kuch nahin bas, sab preparations ho gayi hai, sivaye decoration ke. Jo ki Hoda ko diya gaya tha, but as usual wo kaam nahin kar paya."

Neev: - "To kya hua, tum help kar do."

Sanjana: - "Kabhi nahin.."

Neev: - "par kyn? Wo tumhara dost hai na?"

Sanjana: - "Dost……Hun, wo dost kehlane ke layak nahin hai."

Neev: - "Mein nahin janta kya hua hai, par tum log usse maaf kar do na."

Isse pehle Sanjana answer kar pati, Huda came there.

Huda: - "please Sanjana mujhe maaf kar do na."

Sanjana: - "Tumhe maafi ka matlab bhi pata hai kya?"

Huda: - "Mujhe sach me kuch pata nahin tha." He said making a statement.

Sanjana: - "Jo bhi ho, tumne to ek teacher-student relationship ki bhi koi kadar nahin ki…"

Huda: - "Sanjana, Please meri baat ko samjho…."

Neev speak up in between: - "Koi mujhe batayega, ki hua kya hai?"

Then, Sanjana told him everything that happened a day before. Neev clenched his fist when he heard all those words for Raj, but then he controlled himself. He moved towards Huda and say: - "Dekhiye, Cadet Huda, is baar mein aapko kuch nahin keh raha kyunki aapko Bhaiya ke bare me kuch pata nahin tha. Par, agar aage aisa kuch bhi hua to mein tumhe is academy se bahar phinkwa dunga, aur yeh mera promise hai. Aur tum yeh baat Brigadier se bhi confirm kar sakte ho ki Neev jo promise karta hai wo poora zarur karta hai."

Pooja: - "Yeh BC beech me kahan se aa gaye?"

Sanjana: - "Brigadier Neev ke papa hain."

All opened their eyes in shock.

Ali: - "Neev bhai, aap humhe aur kitne shock denge?"

Neev: - "matlab?"

Yudi: - "bro, u know jab se tum aaye ho tum humhe shocking news hi de rahe ho….."

Neev laughed at this, "Are par mein hoon to acha, dekha nahin mein kitna friendly hoon, me to bas ek pyara sa insaan hoon jo galti se army me aa gaya."

Sanjana: - "Full Nautanki in Aalekh's lango." She said and winked at Aalekh to which he smiled.

They all laughed and due to Neev's continuous pleading, Huda also joined the gang and all of them started to decorate the hall together and really enjoyed their work.

The scene now shifts to Naina who is setting things in her small kitchen and was talking with herself.

Naina: - "Yeh veer bhi na, agar coffee banana hoti to mujhe bata dete, aise sab kharab karne ki kya zarurat thi, ab mujhe kitna kuch saaf karna padega."

Raj has came to his room and has listened to Naina, He smiled secretly and then moved towards her and says: - "Mein kuch help kar dun aapki Dr. Naina."

Naina shocked to see him and then she says: - "No thanks; I can do my work without ur help."

Saying this, she stepped on a stool to place a container on atop shelf, when raj knowing shake the table a little bit. But Naina, who was not paying attention to her work and was lost somewhere, fall on Raj. Raj catch her on right time and she end up in landing over Raj. Raj controlled himself and softly places Naina on floor. Naina was shocked and was only looking into his deep eyes, as she was searching for anything. Raj and Naina were lost in their own world, when Raj's mobile ring up; which brought them in the real world. Naina felt shy and tried to move away from Raj. But their chains stopped them to go away, it's like God don't want them to separate, it's just this world that is separating these eternal soulmates. Raj and Naina looked at their chains and then again lost in some memories.

Flashback: -

It is the time when Raj and Naina gets engaged, it was a grand function. So, Raj has decided to give a separate party to all their friends. The party was planned by Naveen. All the people were present in the party but the couple of tonight was missing and all were asking Naveen to call raj and naina. After sometime, Naveen goes up to the stage and made an announcement: -

"Hey friends!!! Mein janta hoon ki aap logon ko raj aur naina ka wait hai, par mein chahta tha ki un dono ki entry thodhe se special way me ho, isliye uski preparation me thodha sa time lag gaya, par ab wo gadhi aa gayi hai jab mein aap logon ko aaj ke stars se milaunga, and here they comes." Saying this, he pointed out at doors. The doors opened, and there stands the most beautiful couple on the earth….Raj and Naina with hands in hands, looking awesome in their dresses.

Here is a look on their dresses: -

Naina's Dress: -

Raj's Dress: -


As they stepped inside the hall, a balloon is blown out and rose petals fall on them. Raj and Naina got shocked on this sudden rain of roses, but when they saw Naveen standing on the stage with a big smile, they understand that it was his plan. They smiled and then, move towards stage. All the boys were jealous with raj's destiny as naina is just looking like an angel. Same is the condition of all the girls there. They reached the stage…and then there comes another announcement by Naveen.

Naveen: - "Ab jaise ki aap log dekh sakte hain ki is sham ke couple stage par aa chuke hain, to mein chahta hun ki yeh chains exchange Karen?" All the people in hall looked at him in shock as they r not able to understand anything about chain exchange.

Naveen: - "Are, mera amtlab hai ki rings to yeh pehle se exchange kar chuke hain, ab bari hai chains exchange karne ki." Saying this, he signaled Shalini, and she brought a thali which is full of red rose petals and in between there were 2 chains with pendants. Shalini bought and stand near Naveen.

Have a look at chains: -

Raj's chain: -


Naina's chain: -

Naveen: - "Yeh lo aa gayi aapki chains, ab naina raj ko n pehnayegi aur raj naina ko r, mein janta hoon ki tum dono ke dil judhe hue hain aur yeh dil tumhe kabhi bhi alag nahin hone denge, phir bhi yeh chains tanki door raho yan pass, ek dosare ka ehsaas tumhare saath rahe." Saying this, he handled the chain with alphabet N to Naina, and she tied it in Raj's neck….Then, he repeated the same with raj too and raj happily tied R in Naina's neck…Murmuring: - "Isse mangalsutra ki samajh lena, kyunki ab yeh bhi tumhare gale me sari umar rahega jaise ki mera bandha hua mangalsutra."

Naina: - "Par, tumne abhi mangalsutra pehnaya kahan hai."

Raj: - "To kya baat hai, abhi pehna dete hain." She blushed at raj's comment. Naveen who was watching all this, gets emotional and tears start brimming in his eyes, He turned his face so that Raj and naina can't see his tears. But it was too late as they have already seen him crying. Naina also got tears in his eyes and move towards Naveen.

Naina: - "Apne ansoo mujhse chupa rahe ho Bhaiya?"

Naveen: - "nahin Naina, aisa kuch nahin hai………"

Naina: - "Haan, ab aap mujhe kyun batane lage, aapne to mujhe paraya kar diya hai."

Naveen: - "Eh Pagli, aise baatein nahin karte, tu hamesha meri chotti si chuhiya hi rahegi."

Naina: - "Bhai!!!"

Naveen: - "Aur nahin to kya, itne ache mauke par bhi rone lag gayi. Aise party kharab thodhi na karte hain. Chalo ab cake kato aur mujhe khilao."

Raj and Naina smiled at this and then Naveen signaled the manager to send the cake. Raj and Naina moved towards the table and cut the cake. They fed the first piece to Naveen and then to each other.

Then the party begins and all started to enjoy………….

Flashback Ends…..

Raj and Naina are still standing in the same position, holding each other and lost in past, when suddenly Sanjana came inside and watching them, see turned and covered her eyes with her hand, "Sorry Bhaiya bhabhi, mene kuch nahin dekha."

Raj and Naina came to the real world, both were blushing, but none of them was able to move behind. Sanjana came out of the room smiling and Naina started a fight with the chains. But as her mind was not following her, she was not able to do this. Raj signaled her to stop and slowly remove his chain from her's. But, doing this process, He saw mangalsutra in naina's neck which she has nicely tied up in the uniform so that none was able to see this. Raj and Naina parted and Naina left the kitchen and move towards their bed room.

Naina thinking to herself: - "Yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai, mein kyun veer ke samne kamzor padh jati hoon, aaj to usne yeh chain bhi dekh li, ab wo samjhega ki mein ab bhi usse pyaar karti hoon." She take a pause for a second and then again speak up: - "Par galat bhi to nahin hai na, me veer se pyaar karti hun aur hamesha karti rahungi. Kyunki aaj bhi Veer ki aankhon ki Kashish mujhe sab bhool jane par majboor karti hai, aaj bhi Veer ki muskurahat mere labon pe muskurahat lati hai, aaj bhi veer ki care mujhe yeh sochne par majboor kar deti hai ki wo sirf mera hai. Mein kya akrun bhagwan!!!"

Idhar naina ki halat idhar thi to raj ki halat bhi dekhi jaye…Raj apne office me aa gaya hai aur apni chair par bhetha kuch soch raha hai: - "Nia chahe jo marjhi bol le, aaj mujhe pakka yakeen ho gaya hai ki wo aaj bhi sirf mujhse pyaar karti hai aur yeh nafrat ka to bas dikhava hi hai. Aaj uske gale mein wo chain dekh kar, dil ko bahut sakoon mila. Naina ne apna mangalsutra bhi abhi tak nahin utara, isse to sab sach zahir hai na, m really very happy today."He said in his mind bit then, suddenly he spoke up: - "I am really happy today." He said a little bit shouting.

Shalini who was passing the corridor hear raj shouting and then, decided to disturb him a little much.

Shalini entering the office: - "Aisa kya ho gaya Major, ki aap itne khush hain?"

Raj smiled and took her in a hug. Shalini was amazed to saw raj behaving like a kid.

Shalini: - "Are itni khushi ka koi reason to hoga na?"

Raj then told her the whole scene, shalini was very happy to know this: - "Dekha raj, tumhara pyaar jeet ke hi rahega."

Raj nooded and then speak: - "Mera ek kaam karogi shalini?"

Shalini: - "Ek kya hazar karenge…"

Raj took out a gift pack from her drawer and handled it to her: - "mein yeh gift Nia ke liye laya tha, tum usse de do aur kehna ki yeh tum uske liye layi ho, and try that ki wo yehi pehna aaj sham ke liye."

Shalini: -"Yes major!!!" She said saluting him.

Raj smiled and then both of them left the office, Raj moved towards hall to see the preparation and Shalini moved towards their room. Shalini knocked at door, Naina opened it and welcomed her inside.

Shalini: - "So, Naina ball ki sari prep ho gayi?"

Naina: - "Wo to cadets ne ki hai na, humne to kuch nahin karna tha."

Shalini: - "Oh ho Naina, mein hamari prep ki taiyari kar rahi hoon."

Naina: - "matlab?" She said making a confused face.

Shalini: - "matlab yeh ki tumne dress decide akr li?"

Naina: - "Nahin, abhi tak nahin."

Shalini: - "To kab karogi?"

Naina: -"Sach kahun to mene shopping ki hi nahin, aura b time hi nahin hai, samajh me nahin aa raha ki kya karun?"

Shalini: - "Mein bataun?" She said to which naina nodded, "Tum yeh pehno……" She said handling her packet.

Naina: - "Yeh kya hai?"

Shalini: - "Khud khol kar dekh lo na…." She said because she doesn't know what's inside the packet.

Naina opened it and found a beautiful sari along which was not so heavy but just simple and elegant as she loves.

Naina: - "I loved it, par tum yeh kab layi?"

Shalini: - "mein aaj subah apne liye shopping karne gayi thi, to mujhe yaad aaya ki tumne to kuch shopping ki hi nahin issiliye mein yeh le aayi."

Naina: - "Thanku so much Shalini, I am going to wear this for tonight."

Shalini nodded and thought: - "Naina, tumhe tumse behtar raj samjhta hai." Then, both of them leave the room and move towards the hall.

Raj was crossing through the corridor when he saw Aalekh waiting outside his office. Raj moved towards him.

Raj: - "Cadet Aalekh, aap yahan kya akr rahe hain?"

Aalekh: - "Wo Sir, apun to aap hi ki wait kar raha tha."

Raj: - "Meri wait." Aalekh nodded and raj continued: - "Ok, chaliye andar bheth ke baat karte hain."

Aalekh followed him in his office, Raj offered him a seat; he sat but he was looking on the floor, which was very unusual with Aalekh so Raj asked him.

Raj: - "Kya hua Aalekh?"

Aalekh looked at him because it is the first time raj has called him with his name, "Kuch nahin sir.." He said.

Raj: - "Aap mujhe bata sakte hain, I will not disclose it to anyone."

Aalekh: - "Wo kya hai na sir, jab se apun jail me gaya hai na, tab se kisi ne apun se itni izzat se baat hi nahin ki. Sab galiyaan de ke bulate the, dheere dheere apun ko bhi yeh ehsaas ho gaya ki yeh is duniya me apun ke liye izzat bacha hi nahin hai, par aap sab se alag hain, aap wo pehlech insaan hai jinhone apun ko bhethne ke liye kaha. Jis din apun is academy me aaya tha, us din us muchhad ne apun ko galiyaan di thi…" As raj heard this, he clenched his fist in anger, but then he composed himself and stands from his chair and moved towards Aalekh, He placed his hand on his shoulder to which Aalekh looked upon him with teary eyes and then continued, "Aap in sab jaise kyun nahin ho?" He asked Raj.

Raj smiled and say: - "Yeh to mein bhi nahin janta Aalekh, par ek baat jan lo aaj se tum mere chotte bhai jaise ho. Mere liye jaise Neev hai vaise hi tum ho. Tumhe koi bhi problem ho, koi bhi shak ho, tum mere pass aao kisi bhi waqt aur mein wada karta hoon ki kisi bhi halat mein tumhari madad zarur karunga; Samjhe." Aalekh nodded and raj continued: -"Aur rahi baat, Mucchad ki to usse ab hum mil kar sambhal lenge, kyun theek kaha na mene?" He asked him.

Aalekh smiled and then nodded.

Raj: - "Chalo, ab haso aur batao ki tum yahan kyun aaye the, koi kaam tha kya?"

Aalekh: - "Wo Sir…."

Raj: - "Are abhi hum akele hain to tum mujhe Bhaiya keh sakte ho, bas BC aur muchhad ke samne Sir kehna."

Aalekh smiled and then say: - "Bhaiya wo kya hai na ki aaj raat ki party ke liye apun ke pass koi bhi kapdhe nahin hain. Apun to yahan kisi se kuch maang nahin sakta, phir socha ki aap meri madad zarur karenge, isliye yahan aa gaya,"

Raj: -"Yeh problem to pehle hi solve ho chuki hai."

Aalekh: - "Wo kaise?"

Raj: - "Jab mein aur Sanju shopping ke liye gaye the, to humne tumhare liye ek suit liya tha, I think Neev ke aane ke chakar me hum tumhe dena hi bhool gaye. Tum chalo mere saath, mein abhi tumhe de deta hoon."

Raj said and then both of them left for Raj's room. Entering the room, raj took out a packet and gave it to Aalekh. Aalekh took it and said: - "Wo kya kehte hain ki….than u."

Raj smiled and said: - "Than u nahin thank u."

Aalekh: - "Haan voich…" and he smiled, then he left the room and raj was left alone.

The scene now shifted to Neev and Sanjana who were sitting on lake side and were silent because they just want to have some precious time.

Sanjana: - "Neev, tum vaapis kab ja rahe ho?"

Neev: - "Abhi to mein aaya hoon, aur tum mujhe bhagana chahti ho, had hai yaar…" He said making a face.

Sanjana: - "nahin to, mein to yeh is liye pooch rahi thi kyunki tumhare jane ke baad zindagi me phir se wohi boring ban jayegi."

Neev: - "Tum chinta mat karo, yahan par ek international affairs ki classes start hongi within one month aur mene us course ke teacher ke liye application di hai, agar mein select ho gaya to ek mahine ke andar andar mein vaapis yahan aa jaunga."

Sanjana became excited and say: - "Sach." Neev nodded and he hugged her.

Neev: - "Hey Bhagwan!!! Aise news to mujhe roz de tanki yeh mohtarma aise hi mere galle lagti rahe." He said and Sanjana hit him on his arm.

Neev: - "Are yaar, sambhal ke mara karo, tum janti nahin yahan reh reh kar tumhari hadiyaan pathar se bhi zyada strong ho gayi hain."

Sanjana: - "Tabhi to kehti hoon ki sambhal ke raho mujhse." She said and then smiled….

Neev and Sanjana were having an awesome time with each other, when Sanjana realized that ts already 5 and she has to get ready soon. So, she left from there and Neev moved to Aalekh's room as he knows that Aalekh must need his help.

On the other side, Abhi and Nandini were in their room and were discussing about Fresher's Ball.

Abhi: - "To bataiye Nandini ji, aaj aap kya pehan rahi hain?"

Nandini: - "Aapko isse kya matlab?"

Abhi: - "Are, yeh aap aise kaise bol rahi hain."

Nandini: - "Aise na bolun to kya aarti utaru tumhari?"

Abhi to himself: - "Lagta hai, aaj tapman zyada high hai…", then to Nandini: - "Are kya hua, humhe bataiye to sahi?"

Nandini: - "Jaise aapko to kuch pata hi nahin, Aaj fresher's ball hai aur aap mujhe shopping ke liye bhi nahin le kar gaye….Aapko pata hona chahiye ki shopping kitni important hai…"

Abhi: - "Nandini, aap to aise bol rahi hain jaise hum kabhi bhi aapko shopping na le keg aye ho?"

Nandini: - "Par aaj tak kabhi bhi kisi special occasion par shopping le kar gaye ho kya?"

Abhi was feeling short of words and was searching a way to out of this discussion, then raj came to his rescue.

Raj entering the room: - "Kabhi nahin, yeh chauhan sahab hai na inhe sirf praja par hokum chalana aata hai, unka dhyaan rakhna nahin aata."

Abhi: - "Kya Raj, aapko hamari madad karni chahiye, par aap to humhe aur phasa rahe hain…"

Nandini: - "Raj, sirf sach bol raha hai aur kuch nahin." She said making a statement.

Raj: - "Exactly!!!"

Nandini: - "See……."

Raj: - "Chalo, ab yeh sab baatein chodo aur yeh lo tumhara gift." He said handling her packet.

Nandini: - "Yeh kya hai Raj?"

Raj: - "Khood khol kar dekh lijiye na…"

Nandini opened the gift and found a beautiful saree… "Thanku so much yaar."

Raj: - "No problem…" He said winking at Abhi and then t Nandini: - "Chalo, ab tum jaldi se taiyaar ho jao."

Nandini: - "Yah Sure." She said to Raja nd then turning to Abhi: - "Kuch sikho Raj se, hamesha apne bare me hi sochte rehte ho, dosro ka dhyan rakhna hi sikho." She said making a face and then moved towards her bedroom.

As Nandini locked the door, Abhi came and hugged raj: -"Thanks Dost, aapne to aaj humhe bacha liya."

Raj: - "Koi baat nahin Chauhan Sahab…"

Abhi: - "Par, ek baat bataiye pehle unhe gussa dilwane ki kya zarurat thi?"

Raj: - "Wo kya hai na, jab Nandini aapko dhantati hai, to mujhe bahut khushi hoti hai." He said making a naughty face.

Abhi: - "Ok theek hai." But after a second, he realized what raj has said, and before he can do anything, raj picked up a pillow and throw it on Abhi, In return Abhi was about to hit raj, when Nandini opened the door and came outside.

Nandini: - "Kya ho raha hai yahan?"

Raj: - "Wo Nandini mein tumhare liye saree laya na to chauhan sahab mere se gussa ho agye aur wo mujhe marne lage the." He said making a puppy face.

Abhi: - "nahin Nandini…"

Nandini: - "Aap to rehne dijiye, pehle to khud galti karte ho, aur jab raj help karta hai to usse hi galat tehrate ho."

Abhi: - "Are, par hamari baat to suniye."

Nandini: - "Mujhe aapki koi baat nahin sunani. Mein ready hone ja rahi hun, aur agar ab aapne raj ko kuch bhi kaha to mein aapse 2 hafte tak baat nahin karungi."

Abhi: - "kya?"

Nandini: - "ji Haan." She said to abhi and then turning to Raj: - "Agar inhone kuch kaha to mujhe bata dena." Saying this to raj, she again moved towards her bedroom.

As Nandini goes, Abhi tried to hit raj with a pillow but raj has quick and saved himself and called: - "Nandini…"

Abhi signaled him not to say a word and raj just said: -"I am going, sham ko hall mein milte hain." Saying this, he left the room but after giving Abhi a winning look and abhi sat silently on couch as he knows he is helpless.

Raj was going towards his room when shalini spotted him and called him, : - "Raj, ruko tumse baat karni hai?"

Raj: - "haan bolo Shal."

Shalini: - "Mein tumhe tumhare gift ke bare me batana chahti thi."

Raj: - "mein janta hoon."

Shalini: - "Kya jante ho tum?"

Raj: - "yehi ki nia ko wo saree bahut achi lagi aur usne decide akr liya hai ki wo aaj Fresher's ball me wohi saree pehnegi."

Shalini: - "Tumhe kaise pata?"

Raj: - "Wo meri Nia hai Shal, agar mujhe yeh sab nahin pata hoga to aur kise pata hoga."

Shalini nodded and then raj left bidding her bye.

Shalini to herself: - "Kitna pyara rishta hai in dono ka, bhagwan please in dono ko jaldi ek kar do, in dono ke beech ki sari duriyaan khatam kar do, kuch aisa kar do ki in dono ke beech ki deewar toot jaye aur yeh dono phir se ek saath ussi pyaar aur vishwas se rahe." She sadi and then, moved towards her room.

Raj came to his room and saw Naina sitting quietly and looking at the door, it seems as if she was waiting for someone. Raj entered and quietly sat on another couch which is opposite to Naina.

Naina: - "Itni der tak kahan the?"

Raj first got shocked on naina's question, then he said: - "Wo Abhi Nandini ke room me tha, kyun koi kaam tha?"

Naina: - "nahin, kuch nahin..Mein tumhare liye coffe bana ke lati hoon." Saying this, she left the room.

Raj thinks: - "kuch to gadbad hai, let's wait and watch."

Naina came back after 15 minutes and handled him his coffee. Raj was noticing Naina and he was sure that Naina wants to tell him something.

Raj: - "kuch bolna chahti ho kya?"

Naina nodded.

Raj: - "then, Shoot."

Naina: - "Wo mein kehna chahti thi, nahin wo mein pochna chahti thi ki ……ki."

Raj: - "Nia, jo puchna chahti ho pooch lo."

Naina: - "Kya tum bhai ko nirdosh sabit karne me meri madad karoge?"

Raj: - "Yeh bhi koi puchne wali baat hai Nia, obviously mein karunga."

Naina smiled and then say: - "Thanks Veer, mujhe yakeen tha ki tum meri madad zarur karoge."

Raj: - "Karunga, zarur karunga, par aise nahin, tumhe uske liye mujhe kuch dena padega."

Naina: - "Kya?" She said making a confused face.

Raj: - "Apni dosti…"

Naina: - "What?"

Raj: - "haan nia, jab tak hum dost nahin ban jate, tab tak hum is case par kaam nahin kar sakte, yeh ek aisa case hai jo itna uljha hua hai ki isse solve karne ke liye sab uljhi uo kadiyon ko suljhana hoga, aur yeh kaam hum sab ko mil kar karna hoga, kyunki yeh case hum sab se juda hua hai."

Naina: - "Mein kuch samjhi nahin."

Raj: - "Nia, yeh koi chota sa case nahin hai, m sure is case ke solve hone se bahut badhe badhe logon ke naam samne aayene isliye isse humhe bahut hi sincerely solve karna hoga." Naina nodded and raj continued, "Is case ko solve karne ke liye, Naveen ne jo clue diya tha wo tumse, mujhse, Neev, Sanjana, shalini, abhi, Nandini, sab se juda hua hai. Isliye hum sab ko saath mil kar yeh kaam karna hai."

Naina nodded again and then raj continued: - "To kya tum mujhe phir se apna dost banaogi." He said and then moved his hand in front of Naina.

Naina thought for some time and then places her hand in his, which bring a smile on their faces.

Naina: - "thanks."

Raj: - "Dosti me thanks nahin kehte Nia."

Naina: - "Mein janti hoon Veer, par yeh thanks tumhare gift ke liye tha, hamari dosti ke liye nahin."

Raj: - "Tumhe kaise pata."

Naina: - "jaise Veer Nia ko janta hai, vaise hi Nia bhi Veer ko janti hai, aur wo ye bhi janti hai ki Veer ke ilava is duniya me aisa koi nahin hai jisse uski pasand ki itni knowledge hai."

Raj: - "Wo mujhe laga ki agar mein tumhe dunga to shayad tum mujhse yeh gift na lo."

Naina: - "Mein samajh sakti hoon." She said and was about to leave when Raj called her back.

Raj: - "Nia, Ab jab hamari dosti ho gayi hai to kya mein tumhe ek aur gift de sakta hoon."

Naina nodded and raj handled her a small nicely wrapped gift box.

Naina: - "Mein ab iss khol sakti hoon."

Raj nodded and she opened the gift to found a beautiful bracelet in it.

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Naina: - "Wow, that's so pretty, thanku so much veer, I loved it."

Raj: - "mujhe pata tha ki tumhe yeh gift pasand zarur aayega."

Naina: - "Tabhi to mein kehti hoon ki Nia ko Veer se zyada aur koi nahin janta." Raj smiled and then Naina continued, "Ab mein bhi tumhe kuch dena chahti hoon, please mana mat karna." Raj nodded and Naina moved towards her closet and took out a packet and gave it to Raj.

Raj opened it and found a black suit in it.

Raj: - "yeh kyun?"

Naina: - "Yeh isliye kyunki mein janti thi ki tum sab ke liye kuch na kuch le aaoge, par khud apne liye kuch nahin laoge, isliye me aaj yeh le kar aayi tumhare liye."

Raj: - "Thank u so much Nia."

Naina: - "U r welcome."

Raj: - "Ek baat kahun?"

Naina: - "haan bolo na."

Raj: - "Kya mujhe pasta bana ke khilaogi, bahut der ho gayi tumne pasta nahin banaya."

Naina: - "Abhi le kar aayi." Saying this, she moved towards her kitchen and came back after 15 minutes with hot pasta in 2 bowls. Raj was very happy as he loves to eat pasta made by Naina and he has missed it for more than 3 long years.

Raj picked his bowl and was about to eat when he stopped in mid-way. Naina saw this.

Naina: - "Kya hua, beech me kyun ruk gaye?" She asked him.

Raj: - "Aaj tak tumhe khilaye bina kabhi khaya hi nahin. " Saying this, he offered her a spoon of pasta from his bowl, she ate it and then, raj started his attack on pasta. Raj ate in an award winning speed leaving Naina shocked.

Naina: - "Aram se kha lete, itni kya jaldi thi."

Raj: - "Bas, aise hi. Aaj bahut der baad pasta khaya na to."

Naina smiled and nodded, then after finishing her pasta, she moved towards her bedroom to get ready and Raj also started getting ready. After 20 minutes, Naina came out wearing the saree gifted by Raj.

Have a look on it: -


After, 5 minutes, Raj also came there, wearing the suit gifted by Naina.

Have a look on it: -


Raj and Naina smiled at each other and then, Naina sat in front of Dressing table. Firstly, she filled her maang with sindoor. Raj always loved Naina when she applied sindoor. It makes her more beautiful. Then, she took out the bracelet given by Raj to her and wears it. Raj loved it more. Then, she took out her mangalsutra and tried to wear it but was unable to do it. So, she decided to ask Raj for her help.

Naina: - "Veer, meri help kar doge?"

Raj: - "Haan, bolo Nia kya hua?"

Naina: - "Wo yeh mangalsutra nahin bandha ja raha, please isse bandh doge?"

Raj: - "Haan, baandh dunga, bas 2 minute ruko."

He said as he was wearing the tie, finishing it, He moved towards Naina and she gave her mangalsutra to raj.

Have a look on it: -


To be continued……………………………………….

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Edited by preet09 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi Friends…..

I think is baar ki update se aap log naraz nahin honge kyunki is update me mene raj aur naina ke scenes bhi rakhe hain aur Veer Nia ki dosti bhi kara di hai. So, I hope u guys will enjoy this update.

Well Friends, This update is dedicated to one of my best friends on IF- Mana. Now, u must be wondering y? Then, I am not going to tell u the reason, But still dedicating her this update. Hope, she enjoys it. Congratulations Dear….. Par iska matlab yeh nahin hai ki mein tumse baat karungi, mein abhi bhi tumse gussa hoon aur abhi yeh gussa thodha sa bhi kum nahin hua hai, kuch time lagega.

Till then Take Care friends…..

Luv Preet

Edited by preet09 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggg for next asap
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part
so finally Naina aur Raj ke beech dosti phir se ho gayee.
update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update......................good, that raj n naina r friends now.....................thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely part 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏......................
so finally dosti ho gayi raj aur nia mein ..............
hope 2gether be successful in proving naveen innocent 😃 😃 😃
& raj so sweet..........😳 😳 😳..................sabke liye gift laaya............ 😳 😳 😳............
loved his gift 2 nia...........👏 👏 👏
raj & his attack on pasta...........😆 😆 😆...........he really wanted to eat pasta.......... 😆 😆 😆........
now continue soon............ wud wait 4 the party........... 😃 😃 😃.......
continue asap 😃 😃 😃

Edited by Puri_2711 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Preet
How r u??
Update was really gud👏👏👏
Raj is really naughty..Usne pehle khud hi Naina ko giraya aur phir usko baachaya..
Chain scene was really cute..They both remembered their happy past..The pictures were so beautifull
Naveen was the most important person of their lives n his death has created a void in their life..😭😭😭
Even God wants to see them together 😊
Naina is confused abt her feelings but one thing is sure she still loves her Veer..
Raj bought a beauiful saree for Naina..He even bought gifts for Alekh n Nandini..He is real gem..😛
Alekh was so happy to have some 1 who cares for him ...Abhi n Nandini's scene was funny..Raj was so happy to see Abhi in such state😆😆😆
Sanjana is so happy to know that Neev will b posted as a faculty in KMA..
Naina knew dat the saree which Shalini gifted her was actually bought by Raj..he gave her beautiful bangles..picture was really gr8..Then she gifted a smart suit to Raj..😃
Last part was cute...The design of that mangalsutra was really beautiful...😃
Raj was so happy to see Naina like dis..
Pls continue soon
Bye
Edited by suhana_dixit - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome amazing
superb
excellent
great part dear
i hope ab they solve their differences also very soonnnnnnnnnn
tc
ammu
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wow
loved it
contd soon
finally they friends
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Posted: 15 years ago
superb part.......

really happy that they r together.....

Pls try n post the next part sooner......

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