NewAbhi-Nikki&AR FF~Caught by Surprise~Part 3 pg11 - Page 10

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Posted: 15 years ago
#91
Luved this chapter! Gud job both of you!! I lyke how u showed nikki's inner emotional turnmoil - it must b hard to be friends w/ a guy u love n work w/ a guy u hate; ok not hate but dislike hehehe
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Aww Honey & Ratz, I had such a lovely time reading your update...It made my breakfast even more delicious..😃
I have to rush out, but still wanted to give my feedback, as the smile is still so fresh on my face, so do forgive my scattered comments
1) guys u need to change the header...adding ur new update 😉
2) Became nostalgic on the bumping into each other scene....always loved that part when he stands like a pillar with hands across chest & she walks into him...😃
3) The watch scene was beautiful..... and the smell part had me laughing because last night before sleeping, I just wrote something similar in my one of my upcoming updates....
4) You guys had me there thinking that Armaan knew of Nikki's love for him and then Ridz was suspicious...but thankfully it was normal..
5) Thoroughly enjoyed the part when Nikki is ranting to Armaan abt Dr. Modi and he tells her " he is not my friend but yours"😆
6) And Wow ! Fantastic Challenge...Looking forward to see how he goes about..... Will make some great viewing oops I mean reading.....😃
BUT, I so disagree with Dr. Modi....
I will make sure that the girl falls in love with me too
He doesn't have to make sure... Its a very natural process when it comes to him...😆😆😆
Great Update ! Looking fwd to the next!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93
Hey girls that was an amazing chapter!!!! I absolutely loved it!!! I loved how u put in the bits showing just how aware of each other AN r and subconscienly extremely attracted to one another...i can tell abhi is already falling for abhi though i suppose his decision to make niki his target in their bet is just to prove his point that he can make a girl fall in love with him then b/c he wants her....i guess this challenge will be not only him making her fall but he himself falling for her as well! Really nice update once more....loved everybit of it! and please please update soon!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#94
Wow Honey n ratz amazing.I thinks old days back of AN.Both r their in original characters.I just loved them.

Like thread scene a lot remember me lab scene when she hurt him on shoulder.I loved her expression in that scene.

Ur ff also hav a challenge.I liked it.I know this time also He is goin to win this.I want it.

Thanx for update guyz.Keep rocking this ff. 🤗 🤗
Big hug for both of u.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@ Khushbi....thank u for such a long, detailed comment!! Me likes 😃....Now I do remember my promise.....will make all the girls swoon!! Yeah the smell part....its my fav too!! hmmm will have to figure iut the aftershave now!!😆 and as for whether he will win or not....keep reading!!😃

@Hinal....thank u sweetie!! Yeah Armaan is pretty irritating at times and sweet Nikki is at wits end!!

@Ditto....thank u ....well its all confusion right now....as has been AN's Lovestory always!! the bet...lets say keep reading....the fun will continue!! Both AN are not the ones to easily give up!!

@Pri...thank u dear!! We are so glad that u enjoyed it!! The fun will continue!!

@Fati....I agree....Armaan wudn't have done these things for her or mabbe wud have....he goes all out for frds!!The bet was again Nikki's bright idea....this girl never gives up!!

@Nanthini...wat an apt way to put nikki's position...stuck between a wall n a hard place!1 God help her!!

@Michi....thanks .... updated the header 😃......we missed Abhi's posture too....always liked how he crowded her space and planted himself while talking to her!!OOOO can't wait to read your scene which as the smell part 😆. agree....when its Modi....its not easy not to fall for that man!!

@ Ivy....glad u enjoyed the whole chapter....well with the bet the fun begins!!😃

@ Shale....thank u for being so kind!! appreciate your ovation!! well when has Dr. Modi lost anything...except his heart😉....hope u enjoy what we come up with next!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome.. get going.. yaar.. you are doing a great job
pooja
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Honey dear!!!🤗 😃 Awesome update! Totally loved it! 👏 👏 👏 👏 You guys are doing an awesome job with this FF!!! Feel sorry for Niki when Armaan asks her if she loves him! - what she must be going through! - poor Niki! 😭 My fav part was the watch and labcoat part! - Niki unknowingly showing that she cares for him when she sees his pain - 😍 and Abhi's uncontrollable feelings for her starting to kick in! 😉 Love this part:

He could smell her perfume as she was at close quarters and her closeness gave rise to funny feelings, those feelings which were absolutely alien to him and he really needed to step away from her to get his control back. He shook his head to sort himself out and Nikki looking at him shaking his head and trying to untangle the thread gets impatient.

"He smells good "kept playing in her head like a stuck tape. Irritated by the constant voice in her head she snatches the coat from him and tries to break the thread which refuses to break. 👏 👏 👏

I also loved the part where Niki is saying what she hates about Abhi and unknown to her, he is right behind her. I love the challenge!! Can't wait to see how it will all unfold!! Loving this FF!! Can't wait to read the next part!! Thank you for a wonderful update! 🤗 🤗 Oh and I LOVE ur new 'Caught By Surprise' Sig!! ❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago
#98
UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

btw which one of u girls made the siggy????

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Oh, interesting bet! Ironic, after all that time in DMG Abhi spent insecure over Armaan, this fic starts with this 😆!
Sparks already and they're ignoring them stubbornly. Typical.
Great guys, am curious about this bet these two have...! Update soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago

"I mean Dr. Nikita" he says tucking her hair back behind her ear and at his touch, Nikki jumps almost a feet away but is unable to say a word. He raises his eyebrow and continues, "If I do that then will you do what I ask?" he throws a challenge back at her.

What is Abhi gonna do now........I never waited for DMG episodes so eagerly as I am now waiting for your update.....

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