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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ~*mishu*~

amazing updt!!! soo romantic!!
mayur r so in love in this updt
i can't help but wonder what happened between them
anyways waiting for the nxt part now
continue soon



i posted that in the last part......
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Posted: 15 years ago

it was so so romatic☺️ ,just love it

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey mahima..
jus read ur ff..
its really nice story..
loved juniors..

hope mayur misunderstanding get clear..

cont soon...


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Posted: 15 years ago
hey
tooo nice
yr cont sooon
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely update......sorry for late comment
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sajan_mayur4eve

hey mahima..
jus read ur ff..
its really nice story..
loved juniors..

hope mayur misunderstanding get clear..

cont soon...




thx.......

i'll try to clear mayur misunderstanding soon but it will take some time.........
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Posted: 15 years ago
Congo Mahi!
Lovely update! Mind blowing, so passinate and romantic!
Sorry for the late and short comment!
Will give a longer comment next time!
Love
Mina
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mina_18secret

Congo Mahi!

Lovely update! Mind blowing, so passinate and romantic!
Sorry for the late and short comment!
Will give a longer comment next time!
Love
Mina



its ok........... even if it is short.........
i was waiting for your comment..........
somehow i just couldn't bring myself to post part 9..........
now i am posting it.......
i think it was because i hadn't received a comment from you on part 8...........
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Posted: 15 years ago
PART 8- PAGE 42

PART 9

SATURDAY

EXCEL COMPANY

Some people are standing in a luxurious office and talking.
RANVEER:- Stop it guys. Samrat, benji and uday you have no right to talk to our new president mr. mayank sharma like this.
SAMRAT:- Sir he has no right to interfere in our lives.
RANVEER:- Lives? He has not spoken a single word so far and don't forget he is your senior.
SAMRAT:- I don't give a damn to him. He is not staying in our house.
RANVEER:- Don't forget it is the companies house''.. and I am the owner of this company'' I wil decide wat to do and'''.
SAMRAT:- We quit.

There is a knock on the door.
PERSON:- May in come in sir?
RANVEER:- Come in.
PERSON:- These are the files with all work done. (handing him the files)
RANVEER:- Thank you nupur. You came at a perfect moment. There is a huge problem and only you can solve it
NUPUR:- Problem?
RANVEER:- Nupur, meet our new president mr. mayank sharma........
And this is our vice president miss nupur bhushan
NUPUR:- Welcome to excel mr. mayank sharma. It will be a pleasure working with you.
They shake hands.



Mayank just couldn't say anything. He didn't know how to react.
SAMRAT:- We don't want to work with him
UDAY:- And he is not at all staying with us
BENJI:- We quit
RANVEER:- Stop it'''. Enough is enough'''.. you had no problem with the old president''.. plus all five(nupur, mayank, samrat, benji and uday) of you need to stay in the same place due to work'''.. also it will only be mayank and his mother''.. no more arguments''.. nupur plzz talk to these three (samrat, benji and uday)''' only you can convince them now'''
NUPUR:- Sure sir, can I talk to them in private?
RANVEER:- Of course nupur

Nupur, samrat, benji and uday go to the canteen. Ranveer (the owner) talks to mayank explaning him company's work. Meanwhile in the canteen things don't seem to be working.

NUPUR:- Listen to me once'..
SAMRAT:- Nupur how can you even think of working with mayank.



NUPUR:- We need to keep our personal and professional lives apart.
UDAY:- He will also be staying with us.
NUPUR:- It is part of work.
BENJI:- But more of a personal affair.
NUPUR:- Who says we need to personal. Mr. mayank sharma will be the same for us at home as at work.

After racking her brains with samrat, benji and uday for half and hour, nupur succeeds in convincing them. They go back to ranveer's office.

RANVEER:- Nupur so you succeed
NUPUR:- Of course
RANVEER:- I knew it'''. So mayank I have already introduced you to nupur and they are''.
SAMRAT:- Samrat'' naam toh suna hi ho hoga'' company's chief executive officier



BENJI:- Benji'' company's finance officier
UDAY:- Uday'' company's managing director
RANVEER:- Mayank you can resume you position after we finish the last compiling work
NUPUR:- But sir that was supposed to be done by today so that we could start the fresh work on Monday.
RANVEER:- I know but the person in charge has fallen sick''.. and nobody else''.
NUPUR:- I'll finish the work by Monday morning''
RANVEER:- It is too much work.
NUPUR:- I'll manage
RANVEER:- It is no use arguing with you as I know I will loose''' but take care of your health
NUPUR:- Don't worry sir
RANVEER:- And I am holding aparty in mayank's honour today at moonlight hotel
MAYANK:- Party?
RANVEER:- Yes and you all need to be there with family
NUPUR:- Sure sir

Nupur, benji, samrat and uday leave. The whole day nupur spends with angel and the other kids. She dosen't get time to work at all. In the evening she somehow convinces the kids to go to the party with them.
Everybody is getting ready.
Nupur is wearing a red dress.
Angel is wearing white.
Mayank is wearing a waist coat and green shirt with jeans.
Others are also dressed in something beautiful.

MOON LIGHT HOTEL

There are about more than 1000 people in the hall. Mayank, shilpa and ranveer are talking. Nupur, samrat, gunjan, benji, dia, uday, c.j and the kids approach them.

SAMRAT:- Rocking party, ranveer



GUNJAN:- Thank you for the invitation
DIA:- The hall is beautifully decorated
UDAY:-The food is also very tasty
BENJI:- It is one of your best parties so far
C.J.:- I completely agree
RANVEER:- Thank you guys but I don't think nupur likes the party
NUPUR:- It is not that ranveer''. The party is fantastic
RANVEER:- No need to lie nupur''.. I know you hate official parties
ANGEL:- Anybody would''. They are so boring''' the songs are so weird'' and no place to play
RANVEER:- You can play in the garden there (pointing to the beautiful garden from the transparent glass of the hall)
ANGEL:- Garden'' wow''. Muma hum sab aap ke saath bahar khelege''
NUPUR:- Chale??



ANGEL:- Thodi dar main'' party par bhi toh rukna important hai na''' aap vicepresident ho na''..
RANVEER:- Wow angel'''.. beauty with brains''.
ANGEL:- Don't flirt with me''.

Everyone laughs. Samrat, gunjan, benji, dia, uday and c.j excuse themselves and go to the dance. Sanaya, mohit, rati and arjun go to grab a snack.

SHILPA:- Angel, aaj tum sach much angel laag rahi hoon'..
ANGEL:- Mom par jo gayi hoon'.. aur main toh hamesha hi'..
MAYANK:- Angel lagti ho'.
ANGEL:- Right, waise congrats uncle'
MAYANK:- Thank you
ANGEL:- Yehi aapki dosti
MAYANK:- Matlab?
ANGEL:- Aap hi ne kaha tha na ki in friendship no thx'.
MAYANK:- Agge se promise nahi bhulunga



ANGEL:- Thik hai'.. es baar maaf kiya'
RANVEER:- You both already know one another??
ANGEL:- Haan''.
And she tells the whole story. During the story shilpa excuses herself as she sees one of her friends.

RANVEER:- Waise nupur, even you are looking gorgeous
Mayank feels like killing ranveer on hearing it but angel's voice stops him from doing so.
ANGEL:- Don't you dare flirt with my muma'..
RANVEER:- Sorry angel''.
ANGEL:- You better be''
ANGEL:- Muma'' main chocolate khane ja rahi hoon''..
NUPUR:- Ok angel''.

In the meantime hindi songs start playing.
NUPUR:- Hindi songs?
RANVEER:- Tum hi ne toh kaha tha ki tumhe hindi songs bahut pasand hai''''
RANVEER:- Mayank, why don't you dance
MAYANK:- No partner sir and i''..
RANVEER:- Nupur is there na'..
NUPUR:- Me?
RANVEER:- Come on guys'' you have to work together'''. And I am not listenning to anything'''. Just one dance'' no arguments'.. plzzzzzzzzz
MAYANK:- Ok
NUPUR:- Ok
RANVEER:- Good''' there's my wife tia''..
MAYANK:- Wife?? (with happiness)
RANVEER:- You don't expect a handsome man like me to remain a bachelor'.. excuse me
Ranveer leaves.



MAYANK:- Nupur, dance???
NUPUR:- Sure, mr. sharma
MAYANK:- Mr. sharma??
NUPUR:- Sir, you are my senior'''. Now can we finish this one dance fast.
They go to the dance floor.

Ek din ..Ek din teri raahon
Baahoon mein panaahon mein
Aungaa kho jaunga
Ek din tera ho jaunga
Ek din ..Ek din teri raahon
Baahoon mein panaahon mein
Aungaa kho jaunga
Ek din tera ho jaunga
Yeh dil to na keh saka yeh baatein
dil to na keh saka
Yeh dil to na keh saka yeh baatein
dil to na keh saka



Tu jaane na tu
Chaahat meri kitni betaab hai
Tu jaane na tu
Chaahat meri kitni betaab hai
Ho jo barso meri palkon mein tha
Tu wohi khwaab hai
Har ghadi har ghadi teri yaadoon mein
vaadon mein iradon mein
Aungaa kho jaunga
Ek din tera ho jaunga
Yeh dil to na keh yeh baatein
Dil to na keh saka
Yeh dil to na keh yeh baatein
Dil to na keh saka
Yeh Jhukti nazar
Jaane jigar hosh le jati hai
Yeh Jhukti nazar
Jaane jigar hosh le jati hai
Mein kaise kahon
Ek ajnabi dard dejati hai
Chupke se Chupke se teri neeedon mein
Khwaabon mein khayalon mein
Chaaunga Khojunga
Ek din tera ho jaunga
Ek din ..Ek din teri raahon
Baahoon mein panaahon mein
Aungaa khojaunga
Ek din tera ho jaunga
Yeh dil to na keh yeh baatein
dil to na keh saka
Yeh dil to na keh yeh baatein
dil to na keh saka



After the song finishes everyone claps for them. Nupur leaves the dance floor. Mayank follows her.

RANVEER:- Mayank you dance really well'.
MAYANK:- Thank you
RANVEER:- Nupur, I never knew you could dance'.. that too so perfectly'''. Now I am wondering wat you do the best'. Work or dance
ANGEL:- Being a mom'''. Isme itna wonder karne wali baat konsi hai''. Muma aab garden mein chale
NUPUR:- Naki aur pooch pooch''.. chalo

Nupur and angel go outside. Samrat, gunjan, uday, dia, benji, c.j and shilpa come and join ranveer and mayank. They chat for a while. After sometime tia also joins them. Ranveer does the intro section. An hour later they are joined by mohit, sanaya, arjun and rati.

SAMRAT:- Tum sab yaha''. Bahar nahi khel rahe'
MOHIT:- Dad barish ho rahi hai
UDAY:- Barish?
SANAYA:- Abhi abhi shuru hui hai
GUNJAN:- Di aur angel kaha hai?
ARJUN:- Who toh as usual barish mein masti kar rahe hai'..
DIA:- Kya? Bimar pad jayege
RATI:- Mom'. Aap toh massi ko janti ho na'..

They all start talking but mayank's mind is not on the conversation. He excuses himself and goes and stands somewhere where he could get a better view of nupur and angel enjoying in rain.



When the rain finishes everyone goes home.
Nupur as usual kisses angel goodnight and then goes to start her office work. Meanwhile mayank is thinking only about nupur.

PART 10- PAGE 55
Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Mahima!!!
see...I was the ifrst person to reserve😆
luvvvvly upd8 dear!!!
twas sooo nice...
mayur danced...
nd they wud liv in the same flat too...
wow!!!
pls pls dear...do cont asap...
thanx 4 d pm.. :)
Edited by A-N-S-H-I-K-A - 15 years ago

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