MAYUR FF- REASON TO LIVE (ended) - Page 34

omgggg.....wat a lovely update dear !!

it was sooooo.......romantic....😍😍😍

really cant get over it....!!! wow...Mayu is so romantic....bike....teddy...chocolates....etc...wow loved it yaar !!

the flashback is superb.....brilliant....very romantic.....i'm blushing reading this...!!!

the song was superb.....mayur are so cute.....loved them !!!

great update....loved it to the core !!

hey, Mahima, I am speechless.

I loved ur update to core.

The magival proposal at 12:00 was awsome.

And then the song on v-night....

Drooling completely, yaar.

Continue soon, dear.

Luv,
Shreyu

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

u used the scenes really well.....

i loved what u wrote....

the flashback was really superb..

now i am blushing.....

i know how it feels when u write romantic parts.....i have faced this...

but awesome part.......

loved it loads......

do continue soon........

thx.......... was looking forward to your comment

Originally posted by: ArTiToTheEnd

what an amazing update.................Loved it yaaar to the core.............Esp that one was my fav part...............

NUPUR

I LOVE YOU

WILL YOU BE MY VALENTINE?

MAYANK

Aww i was lost in MayUr Rom and Kiss and Passiontate blushing yaaaar..........

Do con Soooon.................

that was my fav part too

Originally posted by: arunabehere

hey mahima,

You know this is the first work in the morning i did

i got up logged into forum and read ur ff

the morning it self romantic wuth MAYUR

now thinikig abt the whole day n ur next part

plz continue soon plzzz

glad you loved it

Originally posted by: arunabehere

hey mahima,

You know this is the first work in the morning i did

i got up logged into forum and read ur ff

the morning it self romantic wuth MAYUR

now thinikig abt the whole day n ur next part

plz continue soon plzzz

glad you loved it

Originally posted by: harshitaishappy

nice bt "koi dekh lega,koi aa jayega."..yeh do gunjan ka dialog hai na.........

actually nupur was a bit angry at mayank

Originally posted by: luvmayur_raman

first of all Happy birthday mahi
awesome update mahi
its sooo romantic passionating update
mujhe aissa lag raha tha k main yeh sab dekh rahi hoon ☺️
i luv the mayu's dialogues...but nupur nupur kam aur gunjan jaada lag rahi hai
but that passionating scene aur mjht mein bhi ek passionating scene
me gone completely...aaj pta nai kaise dekhugi mjht but dekhna to hai hi
all the best for ur next part...do continue soon

thx for the birthday wishes........
nupur was just a bit angry at mayank........

Originally posted by: mayurlovers

hey, Mahima, I am speechless.

I loved ur update to core.

The magival proposal at 12:00 was awsome.

And then the song on v-night....

Drooling completely, yaar.

Continue soon, dear.

Luv,
Shreyu

glad you loved it............