MAYUR FF- REASON TO LIVE (ended) - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
#21
nice intro dear.. when you update pm me dear...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: KrazyRiya

lovely CS dear !! It looks really interesting !!!

all couples are married....but where are mayur ??

anyways...i loved your concept !!

omg....nupur and samrat are best friends.......this is the best thing in your ff !!

I love SaNu......I will definitely gonna read it !!

plz add me in ur pm list n dont forget to pm me !!



well mayur story will be revealed as the ff progresses

even i love sanu friendship
it will be of huge importance in my ff
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Posted: 15 years ago
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INTRO- PAGE 1

PART 1

YEAR- 2016
DATE- 4 JULY
DAY- MONDAY

PLACE- MUMBAI (INDIA)
SHARMA HOUSE (6 a.m)

A guy is sleeping peacefully. A lady walks in and opens the curtains of the window letting the sun rays come in.



The rays fall on his handsome face disturbing his sleep.



LADY:-
Utho janab utho. Galdi utho. A very happy good morning.
HER SON:- Thank you ma. Wish you the same. Good night ma.
LADY:- Mayu'..
HER SON:- Maa' no Mayu only Mayank
LADY:- Aacha bachu'..
MAYANK:- Plzz maa''.
HIS MOM:- Ok beta (ruffling his hair)
MAYANK:- Maa' baloon ko maat chuo
HIS MOM:- Thik hain baba aab jaldi uth' warna flight miss ho jaygi
MAYANK:- (suddenly getting up) Flight'.. oh no maa''. Flight toh 10 baje ki hain''.. aap ne jaldi kyun nahi uthaya

HIS MOM:- Uthaya thaa par tu pata nahi kiske sapne dekh raha thaa''.. ab jaldi fresh ho jaa'..
MAYANK:- Fine maa
PLACE- AUCKLAND (NEW ZEALAND)
SUNSHINE SCHOOL (afternoon- there is about 7 and a half hour time lag between India and Auckland)

A beautiful girl steps out of a car. She goes upto the school gate. She is wearing a red suit with her hair tied up in a pony tail.


The school bell goes. Children of about the age 5 to 6 start coming out. As soon as she shes the kids she came to receive she goes and kisses them. A school teacher comes up behind them.

TEACHER:- Good afternoon, Nupur.
NUPUR:- Good after noon, Miss Navina. Kya baat hai bacho ne koi gadbad toh nahi ki na jo aap ka chehra 100 watt bulb ki tarah chamap raha hai. Kahi aap shikayat ke mood mein toh nahi ho?
NAVINA:- Bilkul nahi Nupur. Angel, Sanaya, Rati, Arjun and Mohit toh meri class ki shaan hai. Yeh to kabhi shikayat ka moka dete hi nahi. Actually wo kal meri badi behen aur uska beta yaha aa rahe hai aur yaha settle hone wale hai. Meri behen kuch din school mein help karegi aur mera behteja ma''.
ARJUN:- Jaldi chalo'.. mujhe bukh laag rahi hai''.. mujhe chocolate pastry kahni hai
RATI:- Dumbo''.. bukh toh tujhe hamesha hi lagti hai' aur chocolate pastry mein bahut calories hoti hai''.. ek wak padega na tab samaj ayega'' main toh salad khaugi
SANAYA:- Par thodi calaries se kya ho jayega'' main toh ice cream khaugi
MOHIT:- Aur waise bhi exercise se calories burn ho jati haan''. Main bhi chocolate pastry khuga
NUPUR:- Jisko jo kahna hai usse who milega aur Angel tumhe kya kahna hai''
ANGEL:- Jo aap khaoge'..
NUPUR:- Toh chale aab'' bye Miss Navina
NAVINA:- Byeeeeee have fun

PLACE- MUMBAI (INDIA)
SHARMA HOUSE (7 a.m)

Mayank and his mom are having breakfast.


MAYANK'S MOM:- Tu apni nayi job ko leke nervous toh nahi hai na.
MAYANK:- Maa'.. main aur nervous'. Kabhi nahi'. Main sab ko waha dekha dunga ki main Shipla Sharma ka beta hoon.
SHILPA:- Janti hoon ki tu job hi karega best karega par meri hi kismet kharab hai ki itna handsome beta hote hue bhi koi bahu nahi hai'.. mayu beta tu shaddi kab karega'' main toh'..
MAYANK:- (angrily) maa aap janti ho na ki mujhe shaddi ki baat karna bhi pasand nahi hai
SHILPA:- Par'..
MAYANK:- Par war kucch nahi (getting up)
SHILPA:- Aacha baba ab kabhi bhi teri shaddi ki baat nahi karugi'. Naasta to kar le''
MAYANK:- Mujhe bhuk nahi hai'' aur tayaar bhi hona hai'' (goes)

After half an hour

SHILPA:- Mayu taxi aa jayi ha'.
MAYANK:- Aaya maa'..


Both leave for the airport. They board the flight by 9:30. The plane takes off at 10:00 to New Zealand a place which awaits loads of surprises for both Mayank and his mom. These surprises will change their entire life but both of them are unaware about them.

PART 2- PAGE 8
Edited by MJHTFANMAHIMA - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24
oh wow....
loved the way you have illustrated every scene dear!
padhke bohot mazza aaya... pls continue soon!
will wait for mayur to meet!
love
mina
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: mina_18secret

oh wow....

loved the way you have illustrated every scene dear!
padhke bohot mazza aaya... pls continue soon!
will wait for mayur to meet!
love
mina



mayur will surely meet but not so soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26
Hi lovely part.
loved the kids.
loved mayank and mom convo.
good start dear.
keep it up
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27
nice start dear ... !! 👏👏👏

loved all the kids....they are really cute !!

loved my favourite mayur !! 😛😊😛

plz...update the next part soon !!!

good luck 👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
superb update.loved it.
loved the conversation between mayank and mayank's mom.
continue soon dear.
thanks for the pm dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
hey nice style yaar..........
loved the update..........
do cont sooon...........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
awesome update

nice usage of pics...........

awesome!

do continue sooon

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