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Posted: 15 years ago
awsomeeeeeeeeee luvvvv this FF sooo much
plezzz do continue soon and me in ur pm list plezz
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: angel.ridz

heya mahima..
superb,mind blowing,fabulous.fantastic update..👍🏼

have to say papa aur beti ji jodi kuch zada hi jaam rahi hai..😉😉
😉and whats this mayank though that angel is sajan's daughter ???..
whats the reason all r against mayank , want to now the past..
soooo..

plz cont soon..
me waiting...



you'll get to know the past in part 7
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Posted: 15 years ago
PART 4- PAGE 19

PART 5

SUNSHINE SCHOOL (FRIDAY)

Shilpa and Mayank are talking to the kids. Bell rings. Its chuti time.

ANGEL:- Muma (seeing Nupur)



She goes and hugs her.

MOHIT AND SANAYA:- Massi''.. (going towards Nupur)

Arjun and Rati also run.

MAYANK:- Angel Nupur ki beti???
SAMRAT:- Haan Nupur ki beti'..
SHILPA:- Kya? Par Mayank to keh raha tha'.
GUNJAN:- Ki who meri aur Samrat ki beti hai?
MAYANK:- Mujhe laga ki'.
DIA:- Tumhe galat laga''
SAMRAT:- Haan aur Mayank tum kal keh rahe thae ki Angel apne dad se pyaar nahi karti'' yeh tumhe bilkul thik laga'.. Angel hates her dad'' She hates you''.. get it''



MAYANK:- Kya? Angel meri beti hai?
UDAY:- Aur nahi to kya''. Samrat farsi bol raha hai kya'.
BENJI:- Bhale hi Angel ke saath tumhara khun ka rishta hai par Angel ki mom aur dad dono Nupur hai'.
MAYANK:- Yeh sab kaise?
C.J:- Toh aab tum keh rahe ho ki hum jhoot bol rahe hai''. Nupur jhoot bol rahi hai'' D.N.A reports jhuti hai''
DIA:- Reports dekhni hai kya?
SAMRAT:- Humrae paas wo bhi hann aur'
GUNJAN:- Samart, di issi taraf aa rahi hai'..

ANGEL:- Muma'' yeh hai who so called sadu uncle (pointing towards Mayank)

Nupur looks at Mayank and is shocked.

NUPUR:- Mayank tum'..
ANGEL:- Aap uncle ko janti ho?
NUPUR:- Actually Mayank hamare college ka topper tha'''



SHILPA:-
Hi Nupur beta
NUPUR:- Namaste aunty

She bends down to touch her feet.

SHILPA:- Kya kar rahi ho? (stopping her and hugging her)
ANGEL:- Muma, aap inhe bhi jaanti hai?
SAMRAT:- (changing topic) baccho we have a surprise for you
KIDS:- Oh no'''.
SAMRAT:- Oh no! wo kyun?
ANGEL:- Last time jab aapne surprise ki baat ki thi toh apni boring official party par le gaye thae'..
SANAYA:- Aur waha kitna shor tha aur itne boring gaane
ARJUN:- Khana bhi bakwas tha''.
RATI:- Wo toh Nupur massi thi warna hum toh boriyaat se maar jate''.
MOHIT:- Hum kahi nahi jayege''..
NUPUR:- Tab bhi nahi agar main kahu ki surprise maine plan kiya hai??
MOHIT:- Jaldi chalo kiska intezaar hai''.

Everone laughs. Miss Navina comes.
NAVINA:- Hi Nupur. Kaisi ho?
NUPUR:-Main hamesha ki tarah perfect hoon''.. aur aap?
NAVINA:- Main bhi thik hoon''.. waise tum meri behen aur mere bhatije se mili jinke aane ke baare mein maine tumhe Monday bataya tha''
NUPUR:- Haan'' aacha waise baccho ne zyada pareshaan to nahi kiya na?
NAVINA:- Bilkul bhi nahi.
ANGEL:- Mom lets go na''. Mayank uncle, Miss Navina aur Shilpa aunty aap sab bhi chalo na'..
NAVINA:- Sorry par mujhe public library mein kucch kaam hai'..
ANGEL:- Ok! Mayank uncle aap toh chaliye na'' warna main aapse baat nahi karugi''.. plzzzzzzzz(making a cute face)




MAYANK:-
Thik hai ( couldn't say no)
NUPUR:- Aunty aap bhi chaliye na
SHILPA:- Ok!
ANGEL:- Yay!!
MOHIT:- Hum sab Nupur massi ke saath unki car mein jayege
SANAYA:- Aur antakshari bhi khilege
RATI:- Massi meri team mein hain
ARJUN:- Meri
MOHIT AND SANAYA:- (together) meri
ANGEL:- Kya meri meri laga rakha hai'.. muma meri hai toh naturally meri team mein hi hongi na'..
NUPUR:-Tum sab ek team mein raho aur main akeli and no par war'.
KIDS:- Ok.
ANGEL:- Main apke saath front seat mein bathugi''
NUPUR:-Ok.
GUNJAN:- Miss Navina, hum apko public library tak drop kar dete hai.
NAVINA:- Thx but i'll manage.
DIA:- Humne kaha na hum drop kar dete hai.
NAVINA:- Thik hai waise bhi lagta hai mere paas koi option nahi hai.

So Nupur and kids go in one car. Samrat, Uday, Benji, Mayank and Shilpa go in one car with Samrat driving and Mayank sitting next to him. Dia, Gunjan and C.J take the third car to the public library to drop Navina.

Samrat is driving like crazy. His phone rings.

SAMRAT:- Bolo Nupur
NUPUR:-Car ko side mein stop karo
SAMRAT:- Par kyun?
NUPUR:-Stop the car.

Samrat stops the car. Nupur does the same with her car. She gets down and walks up to Samrat.



NUPUR:-Kaise drive kar rahe ho Samrat? Accident ho jayega
SAMRAT:- Yeh sab Mayank ki wajah se hai''.. who mere saath jo baitha hai''
NUPUR:-Toh phir yeh car mein drive karti hoon aur tum baccho ke saath jao'.
SAMRAT:- No ways Nups
NUPUR:-Samrat, please
SAMRAT:- Ok

Samrat goes to the kids and Nupur sits on the driver seat next to Mayank. Her phone rings.

NUPUR:-Bolo Samrat
ANGEL:- Mom, its not fair aap ne samrat massu ko bhej diya humare paas''. Aab humari game ka kya hoga
NUPUR:-Hum phone par khelte hai'' aur aab toh tum logo ko Samrat bhi apni team mein mil gaya hai''
MOHIT:- Ok massi''.. aap ki bari hai''.
SANAYA:- Aap ko R se gaana hai

NUPUR:-
Rasham se hai yeh hawai sanam
Aao zara paas aaye sanam
Jaage jaage armaan hai Jaage jaage hum

MAYANK GOES INTO FLASHBACK.

Jaage jaage armaan hai Jaage jaage hum
Ho jaane do aab Fasle kucch toh kam
Jaage jaage armaan hai Jaage jaage hum

NUPUR:-M se gao

ANGEL:-
Mere haath mein tera haath ho
Sari jannate mere saath ho
Mere haath mein tera haath ho
Sari jannate mere saath ho
Tu jo paas ho phir kya yeh jahan
Tere pyaar mein ho jaou fanna

MAYANK GOES INTO FLASHBACK.




Mere haath mein tera haath ho
Sari jannate mere saath ho
Mere haath mein tera haath ho
Sari jannate mere saath ho
Tu jo paas ho phir kya yeh jahan
Tere pyaar mein ho jaou fanna
Mere haath mein tera haath ho
Sari jannate mere saath ho

RATI:- Massi H se jao

NUPUR:-
Hulchul hui' zara shor hua'
dil chor hua' teri orr hua'
Hulchul hui' zara shor hua'
dil chor hua' teri orr hua'
Aisi chale jab hawa'
Ishq hua hi hua '

MAYANK GOES INTO FLASHBACK.

Aisi chale jab hawa'
Ishq hua hi hua '
Hulchul hui' zara shor hua'
dil chor hua' teri orr hua'
Hulchul hui' zara shor hua'
dil chor hua' teri orr hua'
Aisi chale jab hawa'
Ishq hua hi hua '
Aisi chale jab hawa'
Ishq hua hi hua '


NUPUR:-A se gao

ANGEL:- Aahista Aahista
ANGEL:- Mujhe Yakeen Ho Gaya
SANAYA:- Aahista Aahista
SANAYA:- Yeh Dil Yahin Kho Gaya

MAYANK GOES INTO FLASHBACK.

MOHIT:- Yun Gira Gira Hai Chand Ya
ARJUN:- Teri Hai Roshni
RATI:- Yun Udi Udi Si Hai Zameen
SAMRAT:- Aahista
SAMRAT:- Ho Ho Ho Ho
SAMRAT:- Hua Yeh Pehli Baar
KIDS AND SAMRAT:- Ho Ho Ho Ho
KIDS AND SAMRAT:- Mujhe Ho Gaya Hai Pyaar
KIDS AND SAMRAT:- Ho Ho Ho Ho
They continue playing and reach their destination. Everyone gets down from the car.
MOHIT AND SANAYA:- Wow''. Kids special mall
RATI:- Yay!!
ARJUN:- Humme kis letter se ganna hai'..
NUPUR:- S se
SAMRAT:- Sajde mein yuhi'..
NUPUR:- Ho chuka hai''. Tick tick 1, tick tick 2''..

ANGEL:-
SAGAR MEIN JAISE
YEH LEHRE UTHE
DIL KO HUA AISA KYA
PUCHO TO NA YEH
KAHE KUCCH BHI
TU HI BAATA HAI YEH KYA

MAYUR GO INTO FLASHBACK

MIL GAYE DO JAHAN
ZAMEEN ASMAAN
AB HUM BAANEGE
DO DIL EK JAAN





TAARE ZAMEEN PAR AA GAYE
JAB BHI PADI TERI NAZAR
DIL YEH BADALOON MEIN UDE
DIL PE HUA AESA ASAAR
BAHOON MEIN TERI SAAMA JAU
KEHTA HAI DIL BAAR BAAR
TERE KHALALOON MEIN REHTI HOON
TUJHSE KAHU KAISE YAAR
MIL GAYE DO JAHAN
ZAMMEN ASMAAN
AB HUM BAANEGE
DO DIL EK JAAN
CHUP TUM RAHO
CHUP HUM RAHE
AAKHON AAKHON MEIN
GUM RAHE
KAHNA HAI JO
PHIR BHI KARE
BAATE DHDKANO
SE KAREEEEEE



PART 6- PAGE 29

Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
i am the first one to comment!

i commented before u cud send pms.......

i knew that angel was mayur's daughter.....

i am happy that mayank came to know abt this and nupur didn't said anything to him.....

and they played antakshri......

nice one yaar......

cool update!
Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

<br><br>all your guesses are absolutely right<br>



thanks........i knew that!

i have this much knowledge abt stories....

serials mein bhi main pehle hi bata deti hoon regarding the next step of cvs......

but thanks.........tumhe bura toh nahi laga na?
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow Mahima

Awwsome update

Loved it to the core

Nupur met Mayank but she's normal

loved the antakshari

plz do continue soon

luv
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Edited by mayurarti - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur



thanks........i knew that!

i have this much knowledge abt stories....

serials mein bhi main pehle hi bata deti hoon regarding the next step of cvs......

but thanks.........tumhe bura toh nahi laga na?



of course not
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

<br><br>of course not<br>



thank u so much.....

vaise i have unreserved my post!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

i am the first one to comment!

i commented before u cud send pms.......

i knew that angel was mayur's daughter.....

i am happy that mayank came to know abt this and nupur didn't said anything to him.....

and they played antakshri......

nice one yaar......

cool update!



thx yaar......
i wanted mayank to know about it......
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Posted: 15 years ago
Mahimaaaaaa
Awesome update.
So now maynk know that angel is his daughter
great
but i want to know the past.
why the apart from each other?
oh u uses all the mjht song brilliantly.
lovely part dear.
keep it up

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