MAYUR FF- REASON TO LIVE (ended)

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Mahima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: nikki028
hiiiiiii mahima.........😃😃😃............2day onli read ur ff.......gr8 updates yaar....toh Angel Mayur ki beti hai????unka break-up ho kaise gaya????????plzzzzz update sooon

they didn't have a break up but drifted away from each other....... you'll get to know more in the updates......

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raman preet

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Posted: 15 years ago

#92

mahi its gr8t yaar
mom aa gaye hai 2nd part parso read karugi
nd im damm sure angel is mayank nd nupur's daughter
mayank ko nai pta ryt...(kahi pehli baar sequence)lolz
chal really nice yaar bye tc

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raman preet

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Posted: 15 years ago

#93

update soon yaar
im shocked too
plz jaldi update do mujhe fb par hi de de
i can't wait yaar 😛 jaldi jaldi
plz maine read karli saari yeh sab mayu par gussa kyun hai 😲

Edited by luvmayur_raman - 15 years ago

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Mahima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: luvmayur_raman
mahi its gr8t yaar
mom aa gaye hai 2nd part parso read karugi
nd im damm sure angel is mayank nd nupur's daughter
mayank ko nai pta ryt...(kahi pehli baar sequence)lolz
chal really nice yaar bye tc

awesome guess yaar....... people guessed after second part and you after first part only......
angel is mayur's daughter.......
it is not pehli baar sequence.......
i have another sequence in mind.........

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raman preet

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Posted: 15 years ago

#95

jaldi update kar yaar...now im going varna mom will kill me aur mujhe upper se aa kar read karni padegi
bye tc
but update soon

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Mahima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: luvmayur_raman
jaldi update kar yaar...now im going varna mom will kill me aur mujhe upper se aa kar read karni padegi
bye tc
but update soon

i'll try to update as soon as possible........
maybe by wednesday...........
i have my board practicals this week so can't be so sure

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Posted: 15 years ago

#97

hey mahima

hun amzingg ff

sorri for not commenting earlier

have finals going on so yeah

waise awaomse story

count me in!😉

-sanam-

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Anamika.5

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Posted: 15 years ago

#98

Hey, fabulos update. Thanks for PM, sorry I read it today, bcz of myinternet connection has many problems nowadays. It gets disconnected every 2 mins. Any ways, plssssssss update soon, and Does Mayank know that Angel is his and Nupur's daughter? Pm me wen u post next part. All the best for your practicals. 😊 😊 😊

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Mahima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: mayurlovers
Hey, fabulos update. Thanks for PM, sorry I read it today, bcz of myinternet connection has many problems nowadays. It gets disconnected every 2 mins. Any ways, plssssssss update soon, and Does Mayank know that Angel is his and Nupur's daughter? Pm me wen u post next part. All the best for your practicals. 😊 😊 😊

hope your internet connection becomes alright soon.......
had my science practicals today....... full marks is a guarantee.........
no mayank has no idea that angel is his daughter.........
will surely pm you.........
i plan to update today........

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Mahima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#100

PART 2- PAGE 8

PART 3

MJHT MANSION

Benji, Dia, Angel, Arjun, Rati, Sanaya and Mohit enter the house. Angel is still in tears and rushes to her mother's room followed by other.

ANGEL:- Muma aap thik to ho na (hugging her)'' main kitna daar gayi thi'..

HER MOM:- Mujhe kya hua hai

ANGEL:- Aap bhi na muma'' lagta hai ' Miss Nupur Bhushan' girne mein post p.h.d karna chahti hai'''.. kabhi toh aapna khayal rakh karo''' apna nahi toh mera hi sahi''

NUPUR:- Sorry''' dil se sorry'''' actually sorry''.. duniya mein jitne sorry sab sorry'''..

ANGEL:- Aap bhi kya yaad rakhoge'''. Angel Bhushan ne aapko maaf kiya''' par agge se dhayan rakna'''.

NUPUR:- Promise'. Aab rona band karoo''. And smile

Angel stops crying.

ALL KIDS:- Aapko pata hai aaj school mein kya hua.

They tell everything.

Samrat, Gunjan, Uday and C.J were also listening to all this.

NAVINA'S HOUSE

MAYANK:- Dia aur Benji ne itni rudely kyun baat ki'' meri baat tak nahi suni''.

SHILPA:- Bata'. Zyada maat soch''

MAYANK:- Kese na sochu maa'' wo sab mere dost hai'' mera matlab thae'.

SHILPA:-Mayu relax'' aab samaj mein aaya ki who saare bache itne jaane pehchaane se kyun thae''.

MAYANK:- Kahi Angel ki wajah se toh unho ne rudely baat nahi ki'.. kal mein usse maafi manguga''

MJHT MANSION

Dia and Benji call Samrat, Gunjan, Uday and C.J outside.

DIA:- Actually who sadu uncle koi aur nahi

BENJI:- Mayank tha''''

OTHERS:- Kya??????????????????

Dia and Benji tell what had happened.

SUNSHINE SCHOOL (NEXT DAY)- BREAK TIME

Mohit and Arjun are playing basketball. Sanaya and Rati are playing with dolls. Angel is sitting on the bench and studying. Mayank sees her.

He goes and sits next to her.

MAYANK:- Hi Angel

Angel does not reply.

MAYANK:- Sorry about yesterday''.. really sorry''' dil se sorry''.

ANGEL:- It's ok'. Hota hai

MAYANK:-So friends

ANGEL:- Main un logo se dosti nahi karti jo meri muma ki insult karte hai'''.meri muma bestest hai.

MAYANK:- Tum jaise beti jiske paas ho uski mom toh bestest hogi hi'. Tumhari mom bahut lucky hai''.

ANGEL:- Main zyada lucky hoon''. Meri muma meri puri duniya hai'' mujhe unke alawa kucch nahi chahiye''.

Mayank dosen't know what to say. Angel continues studying and gets stuck. Mayank notices this.

MAYANK:- Main help karu?

ANGEL:- No thx. Main khud kar lungi.

MAYANK:- Mujhe pata hai'..' par fir bhi agar help chahiye toh''.

ANGEL:- Thik hai'' aap meri help kar do'' waise bhi mujhe kaam school mein hi khatam karna hai''

MAYANK:- Wo kyun?

ANGEL:- Takki ghar jakkar main muma ka khayal rakh saku'.. mujhe pata hai ki wo apna khayal nahi rakh rahi hogi''. Ab baatein band karo aur meri help karoo'''

Mayank starts helping her. He realizes that she is quiet intelligent. They finish the work.

ANGEL:- Thx''' aur sorry maine aapka time waste''..

MAYANK:- In friendship no thx and no sorry

ANGEL:- Par hum friends kaha hai ?

MAYANK:- Baan sakte hai

MAYANK:- (stretching his hand) so friends

ANGEL:- Mere paas better option hai''.. cease fire

ANGEL:- (after few seconds) kya hua uncle, option pasand nahi aaya''.

ANGEL:- (no response) uncle

MAYANK:- Cease fire is a great option (breaking from his thoughts)

They shake hands.

It is the beginning of something new or is it something old?????

PART 4- PAGE 19