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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
Hey, nice part. Oh, Nupur feels wen she hurt him by mistake. So sweet. Pls update soon. Thanks for PM. Will wait eagerly for your next PM abt. update.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
what is this yaar?

again short part

pls make it long baby

btw its a amazing update

i loved the nock jhock b2in mayur

loved the part
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
gr88 prt
thanxxx 4 d pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
Amazing update i read yours ff from the begining till the part in page 7...........Please add me to the pm list..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
nice part.
loved it.
but it was too short.
try to make longer next time
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
naice one...... nupur feeling for mayank.... so sweet!
continue soon!
love
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
wow...i love the way they hate each other..!!!
LOL
awesome FF...do continue soon...!
plz PM me when you update....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome ff yaar!!!!>..please update soon.pm me😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hello everyone!!! Finally found some spare time so I decided to write! Once again, will probably be only a short part because I've got to study for some exams! So plz bare with me for a little while! Thx for ur patience and I hope u enjoy the next part!

Chapter 4: Kya pyaar ho jayega???

Nupur's POV:

I didn't know what to do. What would I say to him? Apologize? No… I couldn't do that. Nupur Bhushan never apologizes. I bit my lip. Hmm. Well, I had to find him first… . God knows where he went off to. I sighed and began searching the halls, I a sudden desperation. I had to find him. Make sure he was ok. But why? I had never cared so much for anyone before! Why now? I ignored the nerve wracking thoughts and traipsed in circles around the college. Suddenly, I heard someone calling my name.

'Hey Nupur! Kahaan jaa rahi ho itni jaldi me?!'

It was none other that Samrat, the college's hottest guy. Well, I suppose he was also my to-be jijaji! I grinned.

'Oh! Tho tumhe finally meri behen se phursat mill gayyi ke tum mere saat baat karo…jeejaji!'

Samrat smiled knowing my teasing attitude.

'Actually, tumhaari behen ke baareme hi poochne aaya tha. Pata nahi kahaan gayab ho gayi hai! Waise tumne mera sawaal ka jawaab nahi diya! Tum itni jaldi me? Jahaan tak main jaanta hoon, tum class ke liye tho itni tez nahi bhaagthi ho! Aaj kya khaas baat hai?'

Samrat nudged me on the shoulder. His eyes were sparkling. I rolled my eyes.

'Samrat. Tumhe pyaar ke ilaawa aur kissi baat pe dhyaan rehta hai kya? Main Mayank se milne jaa rahi hoon. Actually, who bhi pata nahi kahaan challa gayya! Bechaara college me bhi nayya hai… iss liye madat karne jaa rahi hoon.'

Samrat raised his eyebrows.

'Sirf madat karne jaa rahi thi… ya…?'

I frowned.

'Samrat! Tum hamesha bakwaas kyun karte ho?'

Samrat laughed.

'Bakwaas nahi babes! Dekho. Iss college me abhi tak at least 4 nayye students aaye honge. Unhe tho tumne help nahi kiya! Iss student me itni diljaspi kyun?'

I opened my mouth, and closed it. I didn't have an answer for that. I was in the midst of fishing for a response when my sister Gunjan appeared and saved me.

'Samrat! Tum yahaan Di ke saat kya kar rahe ho?'

she asked. I smiled. Thank god! She had come just in the nick of time. Otherwise I would have been dead meat!

'Acchca hua ke tu aa gayyi Gunjan aur mujhe iss museebat se bacchaliya! Warna yeh tho mujhe paagal kar deta!'

Gunjan frowned.

'Di! Samrat ko museebat mat bulao!'

She pretended to be angry. Samrat laughed.

'Babes! Mujhe pata hai ke main tum dono se zyaada achcha lag raha hoon, par iska matlab ye tho nahi ke tum dono mere baareme jhagda karo!'

'Samrat!'

gunjan and I cried at the same time!

Samrat winked at Gunjan.

'Tho Chashmish, film dekhne kab jaa rahe hain?

Gunjan blushed.

'Samrat…tum bhi na!'

I gave them a teasing look.

'Oh! Tho meri choti behen aur jija, film dekhne jaa rahe hain!'

I turned to samrat.

'Poora hall tho book karwa diya na? Warna tum dono araam se film enjoy nahi kar paoge, aur bhot saari unneeded disturbances honge!'

Samrat grinned and Gunjan blushed.

'Di! Tum bhi na! Challo Samrat!'

I was still snickering as the duo left hand in hand. Now. To look for Mayank.

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I still hadn't found him when the bell rang, signaling the end of college a half hour later.

It was dark and quiet on the streets outside.

'Kahaan gayya hoga?'

By now, the halls were eerily empty. I gulped. Shoot. I hadn't meant to stay this long!

'M-Mayank…?!'

I called, my heart pounding In my chest. It was starting to rain heavily as well.

'M-Mayank?! It's not funny anymore! Mujhe buhot darr lag raha hai! Bahaar aa jao na!?'

I pleaded again. No response. Ok. Now I was scared. I ran into the library. That's where I'd seen him the first time. Maybe I would get lucky again?

Suddenly, I heard a lock click in the door, then footsteps walking away. With each leaving footstep, my heart sunk lower. It was a while before reality struck me. I was locked in. I was locked in, no one was in college except me, it was dark and it was raining. That was the worst combination possible.

'Ok. Don't panic nupur. Just relax.'

Too late. Before I realized it, I was banging on the doors, and screaming at the top of my lungs.

'Helpppppp!!!!!! Koi haiiii!!!!?????Bacchao!!!!!!!!! '

I was met with only an echo. My hands were shaking in fright. I'd never ever stayed alone before. I felt tears lingering in my eyes. I blinked them back. I didn't even have a cell phone! I sobbed. What would I do now?? What if no one found me??? I knew that was a stupid thought. Of course they would find me…tomorrow morning. I could taste the bitterness of the saliva in my mouth. That meant that I had to stay a whole night…in this abandoned college…in the dark…alone. I laughed nervously. That wasn't so bad! My lie was so bad that I wasn't even able to convince myself. I had almost given up hope when I remembered the phone that was in the library! I blinked back my tears and felt my way around to the phone. Sanjana! I would call Sanjana! I quickly dialed the number and waited. 1 ring…2 rings.

'Phone utha! Phone utha!'

I commanded. I waited. Finally, I was met with a voice. It was a boy.

'hello?'

Mayank. It was Mayank.

'hello Mayank?!'

I cried into the phone. I could detect the worry in his voice.

'Nupur? Tum hi ho na? Sab theek tho hai na?!'

I sniffled.

'Nahi Mayank! Kuch theek nahi hai!'

I narrated the entire story to him.

'Tum wahin rukko Nupur. Main abhi aa raha hoon. Tum bilkul ghabraana mat. Main hoon na?!'

For some reason, his words succeeded in assuring me.

'Theek hai Mayank. Main intezaar karoongi. Plz jaldi aa na!'

There was nothing I could do but wait. Wait for my hero to come and save me. My hero Mayank.

End. That's about it guys!!! I hope u liked it! Plz leave me ur lovely comments!!! And press the like button if u enjoyed this update!!!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: nihakapoor

Wow great part . Really well written . s. Aha is strict ha . Do cont soon and thanks for the pm .

Hi! Thx so much for commenting! i hope u enjoyed the last part!! Plz do read the next oart and tell me what u think!!!
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