On the threshold of death:(AR)Note on pg 18

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Bhavana Bhaskar

@bhavana92

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Posted: 15 years ago

#41

lovely update Neha....that was a bit short, but nonetheless, amazing! poor Armaan....hisplight is understandable! nobody would like to see the love of their life on deathbed! continue soon....

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naureen

@Norz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#42

great part

hope riddhima is save

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keya

@krazy4kash

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Posted: 15 years ago

#43

hi

g8 job...........really nice.could actually feel their feelings...........update soon

luv
kj

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Tahmina Aliya Begum

@-Aliya-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#44

great update i especially loved the part wen she smiled thru her tears and sed pinch me dats cute.

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koolaries4

@koolaries4

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Posted: 15 years ago

#45

That was amazig Neha.. do continue..

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Pooja

@kweetrockstar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#46

hey Neha

short, but mind blowing

loved it

thanks for the pm

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Mona

@.:.MONA.:.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#47

lovely update.....wow ridz asked him to pinch her and did...lol..that was cute..i really hope ridz will be ok....update soon...thankx 4 the pm..

❤️MONA

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aishar

@aishar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#48

awwww man i really luved tht part!

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topsyturvy23

@topsyturvy23

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Posted: 15 years ago

#49

loved it omg it was so good and plzz update soon

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Ehsaas

@GEhsaas

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Posted: 15 years ago

#50

Loved the part completely !!
It was just sooo Awesome !

Could really feel Armaan's Pain ! 😭 😭

And the Room scene was too good !
"Pinch Me" He he he he.... 😆 😆

Loved it completely !
Add Me to the PM List please.
Thanks,
Ehsaas

Edited by GEhsaas - 15 years ago