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Posted: 15 years ago
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Fabulous Part !!! Loved it completely! i want some romantic scenes between Sajan! Update soon!
Edited by Sajan_Ekta - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice parts dear do continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awsomeeeeeeeeee ff please cont soon n add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Great first two parts!!!!
plzzz continue soon
and add me to ur PM list
THANKS!!!!!
=D =D =D =D =D =D
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Posted: 15 years ago
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PART 3

Samrat n Mayank drop Mehak and go to Excel.. Dia , dodo n gunjan get ready soon n go sayin they hav to meet sir n they leav nupur behind....
once in coll
dia: so wat s de plan guys....
samrat.: tonite at 12 we ll make a blast...
mayank: nah.... 12 a blast is de usual ting .. lets do sumting different....
gunjan: different lik......
mayank: tonite n tom whole day we ll pretend tat we dont evn rem her bday(they r referrin to nupur s bday)
dodo: nahin...
mayank:kyun kya hua
dodo.. mein meri same blud gruop wali sister ko yun dhukhi nahin kar saktha...
dia : shut up dodo...
mayank: she ll xpect sumting tonite.. but we all wil busy wit project n stuffs... n tom before 12 we ll surprise her .. wat say guys...
n dey all put deir hands tog n hav a smile......
after sumtime nupur arrives coll...
mayank tum bhi aaj jaldhi aa gaye ..
mayank.. ha woh mehak ko chodke seedha yehan pe aa gaya ...
to class chale...
nupur ..haan k ....
nupur thinks to herself y noone is mentioning bout her bday .. den she assures herself thinkin mayb tonite dey wil hav a surprise party or sumting....
after coll... mayank tum aaj raat ko ghar aa rahe ho na..
mayank: raat ko? nupur yeh tumhe kya ho gay( n he has a naughty smile)
nupur: mayank .. ab bano math...
mayank : kya
nupur:acha teek hain kuch nahin....
nupur goes home she sees evryone in de hall n tinks dat she will go to sleep if dey hav sum plans it wud be difficult wit her around...
she keeps alarm at 12 n goes to sleep........
at 12 her alarm rings n she tinks its her mobile n she says haan hello mayank ..
it keeps ringing....den she realizes n switches off de alarm..
n she sees gunjan sleepin beside...
she goes downstairs n sees dodo n dia all slept
n de hall no signs of party......
she feels very sad .. kisi ko bhi yaad nahin hain.. shaaayad subah wish karenge sab logh...... mayank ne bhi wish nahin kiya woh tho hamesha 11 55 se hi mujhse baath karthey hain thaaki koi mujhe first wish na kar sakey... shaayad subah wish karenge....
sadly she goes to sleep.....
mornin:
hey gunjan...
hi di ... kal raat tum itni jaldhi kyun so gayi
n: woh tabiyath kuch teek nahin thi to isiliye...
g: aaj tho bahuth imp day hain di
n:( in her mind shukar hain ise tho yaad hain)
g: today its samrat s BB match.. di its a very imp day.. please aap uske liye prarthana karna.. mein madir bhi jaungi aaj...
nupur(to herself): har saal mere bday par tho tum mandhir jaya karthi thi... shehar aathe hi sab kuch badhal gaya... ab shaayad dia ya uday bhaiyya ko yaad hoga)
gunjan: di tum kya soch rahin ho
nupur: kuch nahin...
nupur wears a white anarkali churi.. n she luks very gorgeous.. she puts on a lite shade of lipstic n leaves her hair open..... she goes downstairs ....
dia: wow nupur..! u r lukin gorgeous... aaj kuch special hain kya....
nupur( ise bhi yaad nahin hain ... mein afternoon thak wait karungi...mayb kuch surprise ho afternoon ko...)aise hi dia...coll chale...
mayank: he cudn jus take his eyes off nupur.. she ws lukin so pretty...samrat comes near him n coughs... n says muh tho bandh karo mayu....
nupur blushes n smiles seein mayank... she walks and hits a thing and is about to fall wen mayank holds her.. n dey hav a beautiful eye lock... mayanks eyes says it all...
dia samrat dodo: snap deir finger n says hum sab bhi yahan pe hain...
dey come back to deir senses n nupur smiles... n bell rings n they go to their class.... nupur n mayank walk to their class
mayank: aaj tho mein class mein concentrate hi nahin kar paunga
nupur: kya huan mayank tabiyat tho teek hain na .. she asks concerned
mayank: nahin.. dil ki bimari hain .. n winks at her.. ab jub koi itni khubsarat lagegi tho mein bhala usse apni nazar kaise hata sakthey hain ....
nupur: mayank tum bhi na.. n punches on his shoulder...
mayank tum mujhe cover karke kyun walk kar rahe ho
mayank: woh ladka woh tujhe ghuur raha tha isi liye
nupur: oh ho mayank sharma jealous!! they walk n go to class..
from class
mayank: waise aaj koi khaas baath hain kya
nupur : tum bhool gaye na...
mayank: oh shit!!! mein kaise bhool gaya .. ab mein kya karun Shit shit
nupur: koi baath nahin hain mayank...
mayank.. kya koi baath nahin hain humari project presentation hain aur humne puri taiyaari bhi nahin khi aur coll ke samne present karna hain na
nupur: tum project ke baath kar rahe they
mayank: haan aur tum..
nupur: haan mein bhi wahi kar rahi thi....
after one hour they go for presentation ... they give it well .. n nw its 3 o clock.. nupur becomes really impatient.. n she n mayank goes to canteen wehr rest of de gang is dere...
dey congratulate dem on deir project presentation....
nupur(by god ab tho hadd ho gayi.. ab shaam hone ko hain ... in logon ko sach much yaad nahin hain n she feels very sad )
guys will continue later.. i know dis part is loong.. hope its not very borin.... nxt part wud b a grand party wit a gang plus a romantic date for mayur.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey dear
nice part
do continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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all reach home ... its 7 .. by nw nupur is really angry n irritated wit evryone....

upstairs gunjans room : samrat tum..? di abhi thak soyi nahin.. aur tum hamesha chat se kyun aate ho.. agar di ne dekh liya tho usse shak ho jayega surprise party ke baare mein.. samrat is jus mesmerized by her beauty... she s wearin a peach color churi .... gunjan: samrat!! he keeps his finger on her lips... kuch math kaho chasmish iss pall ko jeene do.. dey r near de window n its slightly windy...
n gunjan s her sways wit de wind... samrat cups her face in his hand n moves her hair .... he comes close to kissin her..
gunjan: dia aajayegi
aane do
gunajn:uday bhaiyya aajayega..
aane do he s mor n more close to her lips
gunjan : di
n by den nupur s voice : gunjan !!
gunjan comes out of samrat s hold samrat di.. ab hum kya karenge.. oh woh yahi aa rahi hain
samrat tum kahin bhi chip jao ..
samrat lekin kahan
di.. tum palang ke neeche chip jao.. den samrat hides beneath de cot...
nupur: kya hua gunjan tum itni pareshaan kyun lag rahi ho..
gunjan: kuch nahin di .. woh mein meri ek book doondh rahi thi..
den nupur closes de door to change her dress
gunjan: di !! she literally shouts yeh aap kya kar rahi hain
nupur: mein kapde badal rahi hun gunjan
gunjan: mere samne ??
nupur goes near her n tuches her forehead... tumhe hua kya hain ..
gunjan: kuch nahin di tum bathroom mein jaake change karo.. aur tum fresh bhi ho jao .. mera mathlab hain tum naha lo...n she pushes nupur to de bathroom
nupur: by god isse kya hua......
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Posted: 15 years ago
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loved it ples cont soon n ples add some sajan scenes too
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sajan_Ekta

Fabulous Part !!! Loved it completely! i want some romantic scenes between Sajan! Update soon!

thanks a looooooooooottt
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Posted: 15 years ago
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loved the part dear
continue soon

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