|Jalwa| MN FF Chp17 P122 22/8/2010 - Page 65

nidz it was not pathetic

Originally posted by: 2112ization

Yay yay yay! Mera 1st comment! Shru- Jealous!!! 😈
First of all congratulations for completing 100 pages 🥳

Lovely lovely lovely Update Nidz!! 😃 But why so short? 😔 I wanted to read MORE! DIl maange more, you see! 😉
SG part was very sweet 😃 I loved their convo 😛
MN was rocking 😳 *dances on twist* Mayank-Nupur in red 😍 Mayank drunk 😍 😍 Droooools! 🤪

Now that you're back, I want you to update fast and i mean F-A-S-T! 😆
I have no idea as to why I used so many emoticons 🤣

Awwww thanks Aye 🤗
Arre me tired naa😳

Yup boss and thanks!😃

Fabulous update Nidz....

Originally posted by: ShruAtIF

Itna Chota....Saari mehnat ka phal sirf itna?
I want a hugeeee update tomorrow!! 😡

And now, for this update 👏 and 🤗

Thanks Motii....I loved the part and the dedication!
Really awesome SG scenes, Gunjan-Sam hug was so cute! And Gunjan stayed up just for Sam...aww...she's choo chweet! Sam bechari se gadhe ki tarah kaam karwaata hai...hmph!
And as for MN, I have nothing to say...I'm speechless...They were mesmerizing on the dance floor and I felt like joining them right away...You should have used Uff Teri Adaa....It would have looked the best..but twist looks hawwwt too! Flirty Mayank...When are you going to confess?

Thanks for the dedi again Motii...and congo on the century...hope you join me on the second thread very soon! 😊 🤗

Finally a big comment from you😃😃😃😃😃
Dil khush ho gaya😳

I'm so glad you liked it😛

Originally posted by: ThIsgalluvSAJAN

1st of all u didnt pm me very bad plz plz add me in ur pm list its a request as i loveeeeeeeeeee dis ff a lot n nw to da update i loveeeeeeeeeed it so much aww gunji didnt went to dance club jst coz of sammy how sweet n den oohoo sammy was kinda jealous wen gunji said i have to find another partner yay he agreed to go wid gunji n den wow loved mayur dance lol nups told mayu to flirt wid DJ jst for song lol hahaha n wow twist song my fav. song awesome loved da update continue soon cant wait for sajan dance nw n plz next time plz pm me plz n congrats ur ff has nw 100 pages aweosme

Hey I'm so sorry😳
Haven't PMed anyone acc. Only close buddies. Now am gonna do the rest😃

Awesum update

Hii Nidz,

never read ur jalwa FF...soo thnc for the Pm...i decided to check it out...I looks preetty good and interesting.

so i'll read from part 1. LOL

keep up da good work

WOW....!!!
Awesome Update...
Mayank Nupur were great...
Waiting for Drunk Mayank scenes...

Pls update soon...
Thanxx for the pm...

- Pooja

Hiii Nidzy,
This is a wonderful ff.
I just loved it.
Twist is one of my fav songs...
Please add me to pm list 👏