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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyyyyy nidz
Sorry for late comment
Update was damn amazing
Just loved mayur n loved samrats jealousy
Do continue soon
N thanx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago

Dedicated to SHRU for constantly telling me to update while I was on vacation 😆

Chapter 15 (Part 1)


It had been two weeks since the four of them had arrived at Naples, Italy. The rest of the models had arrived too and practice had been going on in full force. Mayank and Nupur were walking the ramp hand-in-hand. Gunjan was very focused, after all being the show stopper wasn't an easy task. She was living her dream and she wasn't going to make a mistake. Especially after reaching this far.


Samrat had gotten very irritable these days, always snapping at the rest of them for silly reasons. Mayank was really annoyed by this, especially since both of them were equals. And he just couldn't bear a godforsaken designer to yell at him whenever he wanted. Gunjan used to calm him down explaining it was all tension.


Mayank couldn't understand why his sister was supporting Samrat and not him. He had observed that the two had gotten much closer than they should have, and this annoyed the hell out of him. He had tried to talk about it to Nupur about it, but she said it was bound to happen. Bound to happen? What the hell did that mean anyways?


"Gunjan a little towards the left," Samrat announced. "Perfect."


Gunjan walked the ramp with perfect finesse and sat down on a bench after another round of practice. She gulped down some water and wiped off the sweat from her face. Samrat came and sat next to her.


"You are doing well except for the attitude," he said. "I want more attitude Gunjan. I don't want the sweet little girl on the ramp."


Gunjan nodded slightly and gulped down a little more water.


"Are you alright?" Samrat asked, truly concerned.


"Yup," Gunjan said. "Just a little exhausted after all the practice."


"You are tired with just this much practice?" Samrat asked. "My models do much more."


"Samrat this is the first time I'm show stopper," Gunjan said. "I need to get used to the rigorous work. Good thing is I'm enjoying it."


"That's nice," Samrat said. "By the way where are Mayank and Nupur?"


"They had gone dancing," Gunjan said.


"Dancing?" Samrat spat. "They had gone dancing instead of rehearsing? Talk about professionalism!"


"There is this really famous dance club down the street," Gunjan said. "I wanted to go too."


"Then why did you stay back?" Samrat asked.


"For you," Gunjan said softly.


"For me?" Samrat asked, shocked.


"I didn't want to disappoint you," Gunjan said. "Moreover, I don't like seeing you upset, I simply hate it."


"Gunjan that's...that's really sweet of you," Samrat said. "You didn't have to. I mean if you really liked dancing, you could've gone. After all, you are working really hard."


Gunjan smiled.


"Hey there is this slow dancing thing in the club tonight," she said excitedly. "Wanna come along?"


"Me and dancing?" Samrat asked. "That's such a funny thought!"


"You were a total rock-star that night in The Sizzlers!" Gunjan gushed. "I've never seen anyone dance like that."


"Coming from you, that's really flattering," Samrat said. "But slow dancing...not my thing."


"Then I will have to find another partner," Gunjan pouted, sulking.


Samrat looked up. Another partner? No ways! Even the remote thought of someone else dancing so close to Gunjan was just totally crazy. He wouldn't let that happen, he couldn't let that happen.


"I will come," he said suddenly.


"Yay," Gunjan said, hugging him.


Both of them felt a warm gush of emotions rush through them as they hugged. They tightened the grip on each other. Gunjan closed her eyes, feeling the moment much more. She took a deep breath and smiled slightly.


Samrat felt the softness of Gunjan against him. He didn't know what this unknown feeling was, what this unknown happiness was, but he knew that he didn't want to end. He wanted it to last forever.


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Nupur, dressed in a red dress, perfect for the "twist" dance, and Mayank dressed in a red shirt and black pants were looking around in the dance club Italiano Dance Time. Both of them weren't very fond of the Italian music.


"Mayank I want some Bollywood song to play," Nupur said. "Kuch karo naa."


"What can I do?" Mayank asked, laughing. "I don't own this place."


""Go dazzle the DJ," Nupur said haughtily.


"Dazzle- WHAT?" Mayank asked.


"Flirt with her na please," Nupur said. "Please please please."


"You are seriously crazy," Mayank said. "And why do you think I'd do that?"


"Because you love me," Nupur said simply.


Mayank was caught off guard. He loved her? Since when?


"What the heck!" he said angrily.


"As a friend," Nupur said calmly. "And for your friend can't you do this much? PLEASEEEEE!"


"Okay alright," said Mayank, grumbling and went to 'dazzle' the DJ.


Nupur watched as Mayank went over to the DJ. He spoke to her in his usual sexy voice and in no time she was fluttering her eyes and nodding to everything he said. She was Indian, so it was easier to get their way.


Round de chak one

Round de chak

Round de chak

Alloma lao say


Nupur looked at Mayank in delight! They DJ had got dazzled by him.


Lets have some raunak shaunak

Lets have some party now

Lets have some raula rappa


Mayank grinned broadly at her and winked. Nupur had a sudden intake of breath. Yes, she had gotten dazzled by him.


Round de chak hey

Round de chak


Mayank went around and whispered something into her ear.


Lets have some dhol dhamaka

Lets call the dholi now

Lets have some matti tappa

Chalo chalo ji lak lachka lo

Chalo chalo ji mauj mana lo

Chalo chalo ji nachlo gao

Pakad kisi ki wrist


Mayank starts lip-syncing the lyrics of the song. He started dancing, and mighty well that too! Nupur was shocked at seeing him dance. He went upto her and pulled her wrist.


And we twist

We twist

We twist

We twist

And we twist

We twist

We twist

We twist

And we twist

We twist

We twist

We twist

And we twist

We twist

We twist

We twist


Both of them did the twist dance. Nupur had never done it before, but Mayank had. He twirled her around the dance floor effortlessly and in reality, it was a delight to watch. They fit perfectly in each other's arms.


Wicked shiked si, duniya chal le

Ther bhi chall le, balle balle

Ho gayi

Haan ho gayi

Oh hassi khushi mein, gham ki gaddi

Hawan mein udi, voka talo

Kho gayi

Haan kho gayi

Chodo chodo sab rone dhone

Chodo chodo dukh aage kone

Dekho dekho dil sone mone

Yeh life ki jist


Mayank and Nupur suddenly did the Bollywood dance. They followed the steps shown in the original music video. The audience was blown away by their effortless dancing and chemistry. They looked like a perfect couple, like a match made in heaven.


And we twist

We twist

We twist

We twist

And we twist

We twist

We twist

We twist

And we twist

We twist

We twist

We twist

And we twist

We twist

We twist

We twist


They once again did the "twist" and once again won hearts. Never once did they leave each other's hands. This symbolized their promise of being by each other's side, always.


We will be singing dancing, hot romancing

Masti all the time

Any season need no reason

For some place and feeling fine

Here's the party, everybody

Move your body

Shake shake

Break your body

Get down on it

Let the music play


He pulled her closer and did the "swing". They "swung" around the room. Mayank was a trained dancer cum model, this was a secret not many people knew. He was so good that it looked like Nupur was also trained in dancing.


Sone mone, mallo malli kar gaye tallli

Aankh waank si ladh gayi

Haan ladh gayi

Botthle shootle kholi bina

Daaru shaaru bin peethe hi

Chad gayi, haan chad gayi


Mayank gulped down a glass of vodka in one shot. Nupur looked at him in shock. He had two more shots and she pulled him from there. But he pulled her closer to him and made her dance with him, again.


Ohhhhoooo
Dekho dekho sab ghoom raha hai

Dekho dekho jag jhoom raha hai

Yahan wahan dil dhoond raha hai

Aab khusiyon ki list


Mayank started turning around in a funny and cute manner. Nupur held him and tried to control him.


Everybody in the spot tonight


Everyone suddenly froze and looked at a drunk Mayank and a nervous Nupur.


And we twist

We twist

We twist

We twist

And we twist

We twist

We twist

We twist

And we twist

We twist

We twist

We twist


The whole crowd starts doing the twist then. They all grab their own partners and do it, while Mayank and Nupur lazily "twist".


And they danced away, one drunk, the other sober, both in the process of falling in love with each other.


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End of Chp15 Pt1

Pre-cap:- Mayank drunk, cute MN scenes.

SG on Tera Hone Laga Hoon 😃


Hey guys!
I'm finally BACK from vaca! Shru paglii has been behind my back to update, so the first thing I did when I got home was type up this update. I'm sorry for the pathetic update, I bet you all expected something better.
SG fans your song seq is in the next chappy :) so don't worry :P
MN fans hope you all enjoyed this song...I just loooove it!

I want your comments and love,
Nidz



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Posted: 15 years ago
Yay yay yay! Mera 1st comment! Shru- Jealous!!! 😈
First of all congratulations for completing 100 pages 🥳

Lovely lovely lovely Update Nidz!! 😃 But why so short? 😔 I wanted to read MORE! DIl maange more, you see! 😉
SG part was very sweet 😃 I loved their convo 😛
MN was rocking 😳 *dances on twist* Mayank-Nupur in red 😍 Mayank drunk 😍 😍 Droooools! 🤪

Now that you're back, I want you to update fast and i mean F-A-S-T! 😆
I have no idea as to why I used so many emoticons 🤣
Edited by 2112ization - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Itna Chota....Saari mehnat ka phal sirf itna?
I want a hugeeee update tomorrow!! 😡

And now, for this update 👏 and 🤗

Thanks Motii....I loved the part and the dedication!
Really awesome SG scenes, Gunjan-Sam hug was so cute! And Gunjan stayed up just for Sam...aww...she's choo chweet! Sam bechari se gadhe ki tarah kaam karwaata hai...hmph!
And as for MN, I have nothing to say...I'm speechless...They were mesmerizing on the dance floor and I felt like joining them right away...You should have used Uff Teri Adaa....It would have looked the best..but twist looks hawwwt too! Flirty Mayank...When are you going to confess?

Thanks for the dedi again Motii...and congo on the century...hope you join me on the second thread very soon! 😊 🤗
Edited by ShruAtIF - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
1st of all u didnt pm me very bad plz plz add me in ur pm list its a request as i loveeeeeeeeeee dis ff a lot n nw to da update i loveeeeeeeeeed it so much aww gunji didnt went to dance club jst coz of sammy how sweet n den oohoo sammy was kinda jealous wen gunji said i have to find another partner yay he agreed to go wid gunji n den wow loved mayur dance lol nups told mayu to flirt wid DJ jst for song lol hahaha n wow twist song my fav. song awesome loved da update continue soon cant wait for sajan dance nw n plz next time plz pm me plz n congrats ur ff has nw 100 pages aweosme
Edited by ThIsgalluvSAJAN - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago


Aye....maine pehle comment kiya tha kyunki maine thikh se padha aur tune ab tak edit nahin kiya...Yay...me first to comment!!![<:-p] 🥳
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Posted: 15 years ago
wohooooo nidz...

Glad to hear you r back... Was missing your updates.....

So, both pairs r falling in love..... Niceeeeeeeeeeeeee.....

Enjoyed the update nidz...

Lookin forward to the mn scenes...

update soooooon!

Love,
Akansha
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ShruAtIF



Aye....maine pehle comment kiya tha kyunki maine thikh se padha aur tune ab tak edit nahin kiya...Yay...me first to comment!!![<:-p] 🥳


Bathroom was calling me 🤣 Tu hi bol kaise control karti? 🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: 2112ization


Bathroom was calling me 🤣 Tu hi bol kaise control karti? 🤣



So What???
I'm the first...You are not!!
ha ha! [:D/] 🥳 😎 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ShruAtIF



So What???
I'm the first...You are not!!
ha ha! [:D/] 🥳 😎 😳


Tera dance wala emoticon does not work kya? My dance emoticon also doesn't work 🤣

Bathroom ko koi kaise control kare???? 😳

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