Together Forever& ever(sajan)-part-21,pg-61 - Page 26

very very beautiful ud. Specially the song and u described the flashbacks so beautifully. Seems everything is in front of my eyes.

AMAZING.......What can I say 👏 👏

The Song Was soooo Sweeeeeeeeet 😳 😳

The part was toooooo good.......

FANTASTIC WRITER 👏 👏

Please continue soon and PM me..... 😛 😛

gr8 goin sush lovely

hey that was awesome yaar.. getting back to all those memories..
U bring out everything in front of my eyes..
So sweet of you....

the update was fantabulous .................

Great update sush!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please update next part ASAP.Waiting to read it.

hey lovely update
sorry for not commenting for last two was kinda busy
thanks for pm

sush i read whole of it again nnn mein phir se bolungi i lovvvvvvvvvvvvvv alisha seriously kash vo sach mein hoti

just refreshing ur mind with a little bit of precap



part 16

ON Stage

Music plays with it a smile too plays on gunjans lips

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dyauNfiMh7E[/YOUTUBE]

Gunjan-o re manva tu to baavra hai
tu hi jaane tu kya sochta hai
tu hi jaane tu kya sochta hai baavre
kyun dikhaye sapne tu sote jaagte

jo barse sapne boond boond{flashback=samrat and gunjans first meeting in rain}
naino ko moond moond
naino ko moond moond

jo barse sapne boond boond
naino ko moond moond
kaise main chaloon dekh na sakoon
anjaane raastein

goonja sa hai koi iktara iktara{flashback=samrat and gunjan on bike with gunjan explaining notes}
goonja sa hai koi iktara
goonja sa hai koi iktara iktara
goonja sa hai koi iktara
dheeme bole koi iktara iktara{flashback=gunjan samrat in beach together while gunjan has her eyes closed feeling the slow wind,samrat suddenly splashes water on gunjan completly shocking her.gunjan when comes back to herself runs away with fear of getting dretched }

dheeme bole koi iktara
goonja sa hai koi iktara iktara
goonja sa hai koi iktara

(as music plays{flash back =

1.samrat and gunjan in samrats house studying

2.samrat and gunjan in coffee shop discussing about songs

3.samrat playing guitar in music room while gunjan sitting opposite to him and singing to his tunes

4.In Balcony-gunjans eyes closed samrat tells her to open her eyes and she sees a very small birthday cake,samrat puts a tiara on gunjans head,she cuts the cake ,they feed each other and at last samrat puts tha cream on her nose as gunjan gets shocked and hit him on shoulder. })

sun rahi hoon sudh budh khoke koi main kahani
poori kahani hai kya kise hai pata
main to kisiki hoke ye bhi na jaani
ruth hai ye do pal ki ya rehgi sada(gunjan closes her eyes)

samrat(in the same dress as in talent parade hugging his guitar whispering to gunjan)-kise hai pata.... kise hai pata...kise hai pata(he moves away)

gunjan (opens her eyes with a smile)-jo barse sapne boond boond
nainon ko moond moond
nainon ko moond moond

jo barse sapne boond boond
nainon ko moond moond
kaise main chaloon dekh na sakoon
anjaane raastein

goonja sa hai koi iktara iktara
goonja sa hai koi iktara
goonja sa hai koi iktara iktara
goonja sa hai koi iktara

dheeme bole koi iktara iktara
dheeme bole koi iktara
goonja sa hai koi iktara iktara
goonja sa hai koi iktara

(as music play-{flashback-1.samrat to feed gunjan icecream but at last moment eats it himself

2.samrat teaching gunjan how to dance}

Gunjan(as she sings the alaap everybody stands in the audience and start clapping)

As the song finishes gunjan hugs all the kids on stage.

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As the song finishes gunjan hugs all the kids on stage.

Aur patah nahi kahan se suhani and alisha too came towards the stage and gave gunjan their jaadu ki jhappi(baki sab bhi ana chahte the par back stage se jaane pe passes toh yahi dono ke paas the)

Suhani kissed her cheeks

Gunjan smiled

Suhani-' too gud yaar .mindblowing.sacchi u r completly januable.u rock!!!!!!!!!!"(gunjan a bit alert)

Alisha-"i agree yaar tune toh aaj sahi main maar diya yaar.aisa lag raha tha jaise tu apne gale se nahi par aatma se ga rahi thi"

Gunjan-"ek minute suhani tune abhi kya kaha"

Suhani-"aaa.. yahi that u rock."

Gunjan-"nahi us se pehle "

Suhani(trying to recall)-"that u r too gud"

Gunjan-"are nahi uske baad"

Suhani-"are yaar tu mujhe confuse kar rahi hai.maine aur toh kuch nahi bola."

Gunjan-"suhani tune.....(now interrupted)"

Alisha-"tum log abhi kya le kar beth gaye.yeh toh apne life ki ek important baat bhul gayee ab tujhse kya boli thi yeh use kahan yaad rahega.ab chal mummy tujhe bula rahi hai "

Alisha drags gunjan to backstage

Suhani still confused 'maine aisa kya keh diya jo gunjan ne aise react kiya.

The whole gang showered gunjan with their praises

They were too proud of her

Gunjan-"chalo ab ghar chalte hai"

Suhani-"aur haan ghar jaa kar ready bhi toh hona hai"

Gunjan-"ready kis liye????"

Suhani-"bhul gayi .......PARTY!!!!!!"

Gunjan-"but its getting late naa"

Diya '"hey babes this is Mumbai.........."

Alisha-"........and its never too late here"

Nupur-"ab chale......."