Yeh Hai Zindagi- NEW NOTE!! PG 137!! - Page 2

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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow pooja! i liked their house! lol...i didn't read it but that's okay...u should definiately cont. 😆


love ya.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey Pooja!! That was good... I helped u soo ya it has to be...lol..haha... Well plzz cont soon!! I have no clue wht u have stored for ur fanfic!! If u have something plzz tell me so i can help too... OK GTG finish this stupid essay.. C ya at skool TOM!!! Luv ya!!!

UR BFF AND OLDER SIS.. DEEPA(DIPTI)
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wowowwww fab starting 👏 pooja
plz cont soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~Angel~

wowowwww fab starting 👏 pooja
plz cont soon 👏 👏 👏

totally agree! now hurry up and update...i have a bat right next to me...lol😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
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im continuing....gimme a moment i just wrote it...it will be up in a second...

love you all
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Posted: 19 years ago
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alright alright.....i know that all of you are anxious for me to cont so here it goes!! keep the comments coming!!

As soon as Kripa gets home shes runs inside to see if her father is at home b/c she knew that if her dad knew about this accomplishment he would surely be extremely happy for her. She ran into the kitchen where she found her mom.

K:hi mama, papa kaha hai?...mujhe unko ek bohat hi acha good news dena hai!!...

G:hi beta, im sorry lakin tumhare papa toh office main hai....office se der se ayenge

K:(at the sound of it what seemed like the happiest day of Kripa's life went totally wrong and her smile weared off) oh...she said sadly

G: kya tum apni mama ko nahin batasakti ki apne papa se kya kehna tha?...she said as she knew that Kripa was quite upset that her dad wasn't there

K:sure mama! (her face lightened up a bit) vaise baat hai ki mujhe UK ki sabse achi hospital mein jake experiment karne ke liye chunna gaya hai....aur mujhe ek hafte ke liye jaana hoga!

G:Wow beta!....khush raho!...khab jaana hai?...

K:barso jaana hai....ab kya mein jaake apni packing shuru karu?

G: thik hai....khaana kahlo phir jao.

K: thik hai
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Now on the other hand Angad goes home to find everyone home....

A: Mom!!

N: haan beta kaho...itna chilla kyun rahe ho?

A: mom baat hi aisi hai

N: acha?...toh mujhe bhi pata chale ki mera beta itna khush kyun hai or itna chilla kyun raha hai

A: mom, mujhe UK jaane ka mokha mila hai....school ki taraf se ek experiment ke liye mujhe ek hafte ke liye UK jaana hoga

N: wow!...this calls for a celebration!...we will all go out for dinner tonight for ur major accomplishment tonight ok?.

A: ok....but mom abhi mujhe jaake packing karni hogi kyun ki barso jaana hai

N: thik hai beta ....agar kuch kam ho to mujhe bula le na
(angad leaves to his room and calls his best friend who is also his cousin,Reema, as he packs)

A: hey yaar!...kaisi ho?

R: angad!!!...mein toh bilkul thik hoon tum kaise ho or itne dino se phone kyun nahin kiya?

A: arre im so sorry...mujhe laga ki tum apni shaadi ko lekar bohat busy hongi..anyways maine yeh kehne ko phone kiya ki mein barso Uk ja raha hoo college ke liye..ek hafte ke liye....

R: wow!! im so happy for u!.....lekin tum meri shaadi ke liye vapas ajaoge na?

A: haa mein apni choti behen or best friend ki shaadi ko bhool sakta hoo kya?....ill be back for your wedding....suno abh mujhe jaana hoga ok?...ill talk to you later..bye

R: thik hai..bye....take care and best of luck!

A: thanks!...and hangs up the phone.
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The day that they leave!!

Angad and Kripa bid their goodbyes to their families....the only thing is that angad's whole family is there to see him away, but at kripa's house all are there except her dad...as usual...by this kripa gets very upset and starts crying. Prithvi goes to Kripa and consoles her.

P: hey....yeh kya hai meri pyaari behen ki ankhoon mein asooon?....kripa c'mon cheer up....tum ek bohat hi ache kaam ke liye jaa rahi ho or jab hum ek ache kaam karne jaate hai toh rote nahin...ok?...

K: i love u bhai!!....(he wipes her tears and hugs her)
(aww how much love there is between the two....how sweet!!!)

Kripa soon leaves the house and goes to the airport and gets right onto her plane. As she sits in her seat she slowly starts to fall asleep. however, angad is already there at the Glasgow Hospital(hospital where they will be conducting the experiment). Soon kripa reaches there as well and goes inside where she sees a whole crowd of ppl...she walks into the hall whhere she is greeted by one of the senior doctors of the hospital..

D: ms. Kripa Sharma rite?

K: yes sir....she says as calmly as she can

D: i have talked to ur school principle and looked over ur academic results and i am happy to say that u will be my helper ok?....so i need u to cooperate with me ok?

K: you have all my cooperation doctor...thank you so much!

D: no thank you....we needed an ambitious student like you here with us.....umm...well i suppose u need to go put ur stuff in ur room.... here i will take u to ur room..

K: thanks doc....lol
kripa and the doctor go to kripa's room and kripa takes her boooks and then the doc and her head out to the doctor's cabin when the doc gets called to Dr. Khan's (another doctors office)and leaves kripa is now walking to the doc(her name is dr. bose) cabin.

As kripa is going down to Dr. bose's cabin she bumps into a very dashing young man...and thinks "wow he is gorgeous" but shakes the thought off and leans down to pick up her books in anger!!😡

Preview:
who is this someone?....what does he have to do with the future of kripa and wat importance does he have in our story?....read more to find out!!

let me know how this one was.....continue later....hope u liked it!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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love it! didn't read it but it looked gud! 😆 i am sure that it's awesome! check out the jay sean and naina one! i updated it so....go read 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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c'mon guys i need the encouragement!!>....write me some more comments letting me know how u liked it and wat u like about it...thanks
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey, good job..I liked it a lot 👏 please continue
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey Pooja!!! And Zula I help u guys for your fanfics so I wont be talking.. 😆 Well the part was great please cont and just pm me or something so i can help u..u too zula if u read this.. Luv ya guys.. C ya at skool..

Ur big sis and BFF.. Deepa🤗
Edited by angadlover<3 - 19 years ago

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