ABHI-NIKI FF-CONNECTED IN LOVE -Surprise on pg 92) - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
Nice part Michi!!

I hate this Akas!! How dare he touch Nikki!!!
Oh that blast from the past n that horrid secretary have spoilt poor AN....but am enjoying this!! Now I guess it's Nikki's turn to understand the fact that what u see always is not how the reality is!!!

Waiting to read how Akash got the scar n how Akash n Abhi know each other!!

I wish Abhi boxes n gives him another scar😆

Gr8 that Nikki is realising how Abhi n she can't stay away from each other!! N esp sleeping holding his hand over herself nd the lil one!!!
I enjoyed it a lot!! Thank u!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#42

WOW Mich!!!😃 I really love both part 10 & 11!!❤️ ❤️ ❤️ Part 10 is soo sweet!!! Love the bedroom scene where Niki is observing herself in the mirror and Abhi comes in! Niki -who never has to worry about her weight - feeling self-concious!😆 I especially love this part:

"Yeah?" Nikki mocks him. "Can you see my waistline, its disappearing. Look at this, she points at the slight bulge of her stomach." As Abhi flops on the bed and begins to scrutinize, Nikki flushes scarlet. 😳 😳

"Very soon, I'll have to wear sacks," she tries to divert his attention.

Abhi bursts out laughing looking at her action of wearing sacks. 😆

and also when Abhi takes her shopping!! - He finds her so irresistible!! 😳 Especially when they're about to go out to dinner and she asks him how she looks! (Awww- soo cute).

When Niki wakes in the middle of the night for paani-puri - the dialogue interaction between Abhi and Niki is sweet and funny as he tries to reason with her and she is determined to get her paani-puri. 😆

Abhi's thoughts are hilarious when he pictures himself making paani-puris! and later when the waiter persuades Niki to have a kulfi falooda (Abhi's patience is being tested 😆)
Abhi glares at the waiter. How, he wished he could double the guy up as a punching bag and box him till the word kulfi falooda was completely wiped out from his memory box.... 😆 😆

"Can I get you anything Sir?" the waiter asks Abhi.

Seething inwardly, Abhi keeps clenching and unclenching his fists, under the table.

'Yes, I would like to put you in the grinder and make a falooda of you!' 😆

I love Abhi's concern when she is sick - and how he helps her (totally sweet!!)👏 👏. The last few lines were awesome:

"You'll be fine," Abhi soothes her, placing his hand on her stomach and rubbing it gently "Just close your eyes."

Seeking comfort, Nikki leans against his chest and closes her eyes. His protective arm around her, indeed , was comforting. The gentleness of his hand on her stomach begins to calm her insides.

Not realizing the soothing effect his hand was having on her, Abhi removes it and turns to check the time on the bedside table. It was 5 am.
Realising he has removed his hand from her stomach, Nikki felt a sense of uneasiness and panic. Sleepily, she reaches out for his hand and places it back on her stomach. Snuggled up close against him, she falls asleep. Abhi smiles as he watches her sleep. Holding her firmly, he closes his eyes and also falls off to sleep. 😍
Awww - such a cute part!! Love their closeness - the baby is working the magic between Abhi and Niki!! 👏


Part 11 is wonderful!!! you introduced Akash! - Oh no! 😲 It seems like Abhi has met him before? - I totally love the bit where all the girls flirt with Abhi! 😆 and Niki feels a twinge of jealousy! 😆 👏 :

"Well, he exercises well by carrying his pregnant wife from one place to another," Nikki butts in with a tone as sugary sweet. 😆

Going towards an amused Abhi and putting her hand possessively around his arm, she tells the girls "It is a wonderful exercise for him."

Then looking up at his face she teases, "Isn't it Hubby Darling?" Her lips contorts into a twisted smile.

"Absolutely Divine!" he replies dreamily, bringing his face very close to hers, a seductive smile playing on his lips. 😳

I love the conversation between Abhi and Niki at the bar!! 😃 😆 😆 and when Abhi tries to hide behind Niki from Simran! 😆:

"Oh God, here she comes again," he mutters, attempting to hide his face.

"Nikki please save me!" he pleads, holding firmly on to her arm. Nikki turns to look at Simran coming towards them. She bites her lower lip in an attempt to prevent her laughter from erupting. 😆 😆 😆

The part where Niki is lost in thoughts of Abhi and the baby is absolutely great - she needs Abhi - he is so sweet and considerate waking up in the middle of the night to relieve her pregnancy discomforts. (Awww) 😍 👏 👏

OMG - the last line!!! what's going to happen next? can't wait! 😃 👏


Thank you for the wonderful updates Mich!!👏 👏 👏 Eagerly awaiting your next part!!! 🤗 🤗 🤗

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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
omg who is Akash 🤢 and Abhi can get pretty Destructive when someone lays an eye on nikki am pretty sure the scar is a result of that.

Mich luved the update and u stopped at such an interesting part 😡 its like am watching a daily epi 👏

luved how Abhi wanted Nikki to save him from the Gang of girls 😲 Kash Mein hoti i toh would have succeded in asking him to Strip and show his Muscles 😈 🤣
Edited by clars - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
Thanks Sheena, Honey, Aisha and Clars....Glad you liked this part too.
Right now as my thoughts are continuously flowing, I am doing my best to put it down as much as I can, before I forget 😃
@ Sheena I had seen you already reserved a slot so I didn't send the PM..😃 Yeah Akash, is definitely trying to cause problems for AN but secret pssst he is also afraid of Abhi.... So got to wait and see how much harm he can do...
@ Honey, Glad you liked this part...Yeah Abhi has the same grouse with Akash for touching his Nikki.... perhaps this is a good opportunity for Nikki to understand how one can get trapped.. Yeah she and the baby are very used to Abhi's protective arm over them when they sleep.😃
@ Aisha, glad you got to read both parts today.... Glad the paani puri part and Abhi's frustration esp at the waiter has been a big hit...
Yeah the baby is indeed working its magic...
Glad you liked Nikki's jealousy and the bar conversation... Abhi being stripped wld be such a wonderful sight 😳 Well right now Akash is the danger man now..... will have to wait and see how it goes....
@ Thanks Clars, for your comment..... Akash & Abhi and Akash and Nikki's story is definitely going to be revealed in the next part...
Yeah when it comes to boxing a guy up, Abhi finds it very easy, but to ward off attention from beautiful girls, he wants his delicate wife's protection 😃 Can't blame him, he wants attention from only one beautiful girl....He finds it difficult to handle her alone..😃
Thanks guys, once again, will try to post the next part tmrw....I promise its almost done...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45

Hey Mich,

Thanks for a great update and that too so soon. I like daily updates....keep them coming........

Loved Niki's sense of humour ' so cute .......

"Well, he exercises well by carrying his pregnant wife from one place to another," Nikki butts in with a tone as sugary sweet.

Going towards an amused Abhi and putting her hand possessively around his arm, she tells the girls "It is a wonderful exercise for him."

Then looking up at his face she teases, "Isn't it Hubby Darling?" Her lips contorts into a twisted smile.

"Absolutely Divine!" he replies dreamily, bringing his face very close to hers, a seductive smile playing on his lips.

🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

"I have to thank you, dear wife, for rescuing me, or else, I would have been stripped completely, put on a pedestal and made to display every inch and cut of my muscles."

I for one won't mind to be there if this happened.........😉

Loved the part where Niki, realizes how Abhi is taking care of her and the baby. Loved the way she talks to the baby, and also how she and little one need Abhi to hold them at night.......so touching........👏 👏 👏

I am so glad that Niki, is ready to talk to Abhi about the other night........and sort out the mis-understanding......

And you have laid the stone......to make Abhi jealous......I am going to love that.........I can't wait for the angry and jealous Abhi.......😍 😍 😍 😍 😍

already hating the creapy Akash.......😡
Edited by ANfan_1810 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
*gasp*
Michelle you naughty thing! The next update had better be there tomorrow or i'll implode!
Lol, yeah, Akash's scar...I thought it was from Nikki because he overstepped the mark with her or something, but then his reaction on hearing Abhi's full name makes me think otherwise. Now when did that brawl happen? :P
PS yeah, it is amusing that Nikki got trapped in the same position Abhi unwittingly was in a few months ago, but the difference is, whereas Sonali didn't get the slap she deserved (grr Nikki 😛), I'm hoping Akash gets some sense pounded into him. Not likely at a wedding, i know 😆 but most my fantasies are something similar to Abhi shirtless like in the riots scenes and working those muscles for his Nikki's protection. Now I'm going off track. Update soon. 😆
Edited by anyalolita - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
Hey Nice part mich.Loved it..............................
I love all twist and turn in the story as it help it to grow.Well i want all this happen in dmg but now i don't care becauz i get in ur ff.
Wait for next update!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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MICH!!!!! Not a cliff hanger?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hurry and update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh and cute part! I like how Niki's anger is melting!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
oh my god just when niki was realising that she might have made mistake and might have come to conclusion without even asking abhi about it.. She rides in same boat.... Uff... Well Abhi being wiser of two ;-) hope this would help them clear up all their differences and false accusations instead of building up more..

Very nice update girl.. and whats more amazing is you updated it fast ;-) be nice and update next part too soon :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
Hey Mich 😃
Glad that we're meeting more of Nikki's family. I never really pictured her like that. It's nice to see both of them interacting with others 😊

Originally posted by: mich09

When he disconnects, the executive looks at his colleague and says, "Good Lord, that man sounded as if he is pregnant!"

😆 😆 😆

Abhi glares at the waiter. How, he wished he could double the guy up as a punching bag and box him till the word kulfi falooda was completely wiped out from his memory box.

🤣 🤣 🤣 I love falooda! 😛
Great work Mich 😃

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