MayUr FF *Phir Milenge* (Last) Part 19 @ Pg 147 - Page 10

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Posted: 15 years ago
#91
yaar update kab milegi
soon update ok
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Posted: 15 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: Favouriteofall

Hey Daksha

thnx 4 the pm
interesting plot dear,
continue soon 😊

I'll continue asap
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

yaar update kab milegi
soon update ok

Update jald se jald karne ki koshish karungi
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Posted: 15 years ago
#94
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Hi main Nupur……. waapas aa gayi……. Aaj meri film release ho rahi hai….. to bhagwaan se yehi dua karti hoon ki hit ho jaaye…….ya phir superhit……..hogi na ?????

Daksha ko mat bataana……. Wo chahti hai ki ye jo bhi hai… haan…. FF…… ko bohot readers milein par wo kuch bolegi nahin……….to usse uski duniya mein chod do……..

Haan….. to shuru karte hain….

Once upon a time……. Kya hua fairy tale lag rahi hai…….

Accha seedhe seedhe shuru karte hain……..

Main uss waqt shayad 8th standard mein thi…….. dekho gussa mat karna ye bacchon ki kahaani nahin hai……..par shuruat to shuru se hi karni padti hai na…..

Main bachpan se class mein first aati thi……accha lagta hai… teachers aapko jaante hain…..sab aapko pasand karte hain…….mummy papa khush rehte hain…….

Bas ek baar bimaar ho gayi thi to 2nd aayi thi….. Gunjan 1st aayi thi…….. mujhe to bohot bura laga tha….haan….. Kyunki dost first nahin aa pata to bura lagta hai…par jab aa jata hai to aur bhi bura lagta hai………main uss baat ko bhool chuki hoon…..

Jab 8th standard mein promote huye to pata chala ki ek naye ladke ka admission hua hai…… mujhe kya…….. bohot aate jaate rehte hain…… par usske baare mein suna bohot…… bade shehar se aaya hai…..English bohot acchi aati hai….. kya naam tha….. haan….. Mayank…… Mayank Sharma…

Mera section A tha uska admission B section mein hua tha……..

Ek baat to hai hoshiyaar to tha……wo apne section mein aur main apne section mein first aaye……

Sach bataaon to uski shakal bhi nahin dekhi thi……. Mujhe kya karna tha uski shakal dekh kar……achaar daalti uska……..

Phir 9th standard mein promote huye……. Students ki shuffling hui to usse mere section mein daal diya…… Hunhhh…. Competition badha diya……..

Uss din jab class mein enter hui to main khush ho kar jaake Gunjan ke paas baith gayi……my sweet chonu monu Gunji……. Bag ko bench par rakha to Gunjan ne neeche kheench liya…..kaan mein boli…. Dekh wo hai Mayank…. arre wo hi jo Samrat ke saath baitha hai……..Gunjan ko bhi wo pasand nahin tha…… ye ek fact hai no one likes competiton…… par kya karein zindagi hai…. aasan nahin hoti …….

Mujhe dikh nahin raha tha phir jab teacher class mein aa gayi tab dikhaai diya…… Theek thaak tha………

Shayad usne bhi mere baare mein sun rakha hoga……Nupur the great……..wo to main hoon……

Teacher boli ek ladka aur ek ladki class ek monitors chune jaayenge…….. unhone apne aap hi mera aur Mayank ka naam le liya…….. teachers ko kya matlab……sochte hain har koi jo hoshiyaar hota hai leader ban sakta hai………… zaroori nahin ki aisa ho………

First Semister mein main first aayi……. Wo second……..aur meri Gunji third……. Mera to mann kar raha tha bench utha ke usske sar par mar doon…….. par maine socha abhi session khatam nahin hua hai dikha denge usse…….. par jaane kya padh ke aaya second semester mein ki wo first aa gaya…. Uss waqt to bas mujhe gussa aane wala hi tha ki Samrat bola Mayank first aa gaya…..nananaeene….. aur mere haath mein mera pencil box tha aur wo pada Samrat ke moonh pe……. Bach gaya……phir to maine bhi thaan li………. Aur jab finals ka result lene ke liye gate mein enter hui…… udhar se Gunji aa rahi thi boli " Toone Mayank ko pachaad diya" . Hum dono ka khushi ka thikaana nahin tha….. aakhir ek ladke ko zameen mein jo gaad diya tha……….

Phir kya……….. 10th class mein promote huye………..

Hum sab ek hi class mein the…….phir se…… kehte hain na museebat peecha kabhi nahin chodti…….

Toh hum kaunsa darne waale the………. Moonh tod jawaab dene ki shamta rakhte the……

Zindagi guzar rahi thi…….chali jaa rahi thi………. ek din mujhe pata chala ki Mayank ki girlfriend hai……….. I was like……..kya….. hoshiyaar bacche to aisa kaam nahin karte……ye meri thinking thi……..

Hi Guys this is Daksha……… I hope Nupur ne aapko bor nahin kiya hoga…….. main kya karti keyboard leke khud baith gayi aur mujhe bhaga diya……….

Kahaani ussne shuru se shuru ki kyunki wo aapko……. uski aur Mayank ki ladaai………ya kahen to competiton dikhana chahti thi…….. lekin main aapko bataaon to wo dono ek doosre se shuru se attracted the….. jo unhe kabhi pata hi nahin chala……shayad issliye……khair chodo

Nupur ne socha ki hoshiyaar bacche aisa kaam nahin karte par shaayad kahin dil ke ek kone mein ye zaroor socha hoga ki…….. kya sach mein issi wajah se usse Mayank par gussa aaya ya koi aur wajah thi……… wo aapko kabhi nahin bataayegi main bataati rahungi………..

Kyunki unhone kaha tha PHIR MILENGE…………..

Hi Nupur this side…….. paani peene gayi thi………..

Mayank ki girlfriend thi mujhe kya karna tha………… Actually na……… tenth class mein ladkon ka status symbol hota hai girlfriend rakhna…….. aur shayad bevakoof ladkiyon ka bhi……. Par mera aisa maan na nahin tha……… pehle 10th to pass kar lein phir dekha jaayega……….

Padhaai ki……. Tv dekha……..film dekhi……. Aur kya tenth class bhi khatam ho gayi………. main poore school mein FIRST aayi……… aur Mayank SECOND………. Yehh….isse kehte hain dhobi pachaad……….. mujhe to ye bhi sun ne mein aaya ki wo depression mein chala gaya tha……..hahaha……

Phir hamaari farewell hui……… ussmein kyat ha……. Jaisi baaki saari party hoti hain ……. Khaao-piyo naacho gaao…….. phir sabne……haan baba……sabne ek doosre se haath milaaya……. Mayank se aur uss Samrat se bhi haath milaana pada…….

Sab jaa rahe the kuch alag school mein……. kuch ussi school mein……… Mayank was going to another city for his further studies

Samrat bola "Abhi toh first aa gayin…. Mayank dekh lega tumhein…….."

I was like "Zaroor Mayank ne hi isse ye kaha hoga"

Phir Mayank se haath milaaya……

M: Congrats Nupur……..

Pehli baar meri aur uski conversation hui………. Maine kaha bada bhola ban raha hai……..

N: Thanks and congatulations to you too………

M: Thanks………

Phir pata nahin kyun dono ek saath bole "PHIR MILENGE"…………….


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Please tell how you liked the idea.......
Please do comment whatever you think just write it...........
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Daksha
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Posted: 15 years ago
#95
yupiee i am the first one to comment i like the first thing is nups telling the story very lovely effort or he bai kahani bhi start to karni hein

an so story start or to or nups ke first aane wali baat be true hein really jab hum second aatein hein or hamari best friend first aati hein to thoda bad to feel hota hein lakin phir hum bhool jaatien hein na so sweet arre yaar nups to veg he to vo mayu ka achaar dal ker kha nahi sakti thi.......

lovely dialouge ya life aasan nahi hein daksha your this ff contain childhood 's fact lovely thoughts of nups ,it just remind me that we also do the same thing .jassie he koi new intelligent boy admission leta to ye soctein ke jassiae koi mahan person aa gaya hein.......

lovely days sam art kya jarurat thi usse chikne ke .......l

o ab kha liya na maar nups se...... happy ke nups ne usse marks gain kiye maynk ke gf or vo bhi 10 th mein nahi yaar usse to study mein consentrate karna chayia tha you are right nups ye stupid boys they are not have mind and nor sense tooooo......
i like this dhoobi pachad ........
i appriacte nups thought lovely ff ,pata hein tera writing style se aisa lag raha hein ke tu rajasthan se belong karti hein did you belong to rajasthan ,if you don't mind then tell me ok very beautifully written i love this
Edited by adi_gupta - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#96
Hi Daksha
At first i want to say i loved ur writing style.
it was really very nice and different.
Or mujhe nupur ki bate bahut acchi lagi.
And i also loved mayur competition.
But what is this- mayank have a G.friend-yuck.
Plz aisa kuch maat karo.
Or jo kehna tha wo adi keh diya. so main or jaida kuch nehi kahungi.
I loved the whole part.
it was wonderful update sweety.
keep it up.


Edited by fariaa70 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Doodiii our Daksha 😆
Kaha thi...? 🤗
I feeeeeeelt like flying when i recived ur PM 🤪
Kya idea hai yaara?
Nupur tum tohhhh bohut mehnat dali ham sabko samjane ke liye :D
I just loved how u start the story from childness but not tooo much xxx
Its really DIFF idea,
OMG! I enjoyed everything about Mayu too,
Mayur 1st meet, Congrating herrrrr,
YAAY!! Just love this,
Sam linee wasssss OMG ⭐️
It was supeeeer dupppper update,
Ur editing KILLS me 👏
Keep rocks Merrri doodi,
I mustttt My one of besttttttt FF writer ,
I know next part will be more intersting,
You'll add new fresh parts 😳
Kya pata kya hoga? Kyon ki tumne kaha tha ''Phir milenge'' 😊
PM me as always,
With love,
Aisho .
Edited by Karan.P.Rocks - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#98
awesome yaar.please continue!!pm me!!😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#99
hey Daksha dis part was awesum!!!
i luvd d narration style u adopted!!
twas really gr8...entirely!!
pls do cont soon...
thanx 4 d pm.. =)
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Daksha

Awwwsome update dear

loved your writing style

And the story concept is really nice

do continue soon

Luv
Nidzy

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