Mayur FF:The Blind Date:New thrd Link Pg 150

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Mou.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1011

promo is great shru! update soon now.can't wait when they finally confess their love to each other!!!!!!!!!!

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...Nikhita...

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1012

lovely promo.........

waiting for the update!

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The-chosen-one

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1013

of course we like it!!!!
now update soon

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1014

please jaldi update karo yaar itna achha promo hai ki kya kahe

i am dying to read this now

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afsha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1015

Update n promo

Both were fab

update was jus jus jsu so funny🤣😆😆

Loved it to the core

Nups is not gonna leave Sam for sure she will kill him😆

The punjabis r really cute😊

Rakesh was jus the main funnny character here🤣🤣

Liked Mayur talk

Cuming to promo

It was jus fab

Hop its not dream or sumthg

Update ur another FF also

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1016

Loved the promo to bits...

Adorable!

Continue soon!

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prerna_agrawal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1017

awwwww.......yippeeee loved it!!!.......finally confession is round the corner!!!!.........plz plz for any chance don't make it a dream of someone or a piece of imagination......plz plz want it for real!!!!........update ASAP

.........can't wait to read ahead!!!!

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thenarcissist

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1018

Hey Guys...sorry...didn't have the strength to write more and some of the update was deleted by mistake....thanks to stupid comp...but I'll surely update the second part tomorrow....I just wanted to give you the treat you've all deserved for being such good readers. Thanks a lot guys! I love you all!

Blind Date: Part 13 (i) [The Confession]

"I'm not going to stand next to her, I promise you that Sam." Mayank firmly announced his decision, walking away from Samrat, carrying a gargantuan basket of flowers which completely roofed his head. Samrat was not ready to lose. He followed Mayank with determination, trying to induce him to agree to his plan.

"Bro, it's good for you. Today's the wedding. This will be the last chance for you to be able to bring her back in your life again. And I'm sure you can win her over." Samrat casually sauntered, while Mayank stared at him anxiously. He saw Samrat walk back towards him and incline on his shoulder. "So, what's your final answer? I have other work to do. Chashmish is waiting for me on the terrace."

Mayank turned stern. "You can go right now if you want to. I'm not joining you in your dim plan. You'll ensnare me with her again, and her husband will bash me up to death. Then you'll come and apologize. And Sam, this is not about winning anyone. I want Nupur's love; I don't want to play a game with her. Last time I lost my love while playing such games, I don't want to repeat my mistake again." He again took the basket and tried to walk straight. Samrat shrugged his shoulders. "As you wish. Suit yourself." Saying so, he passed a naughty smile and strode away towards the terrace.

Mayank gave his usual sigh and made an unsuccessful attempt to walk straight without dashing into anyone. At last, his muscular arms crashed into a delicate body, which misplaced her equilibrium and let her feet slip off the slick floor. Immediately he let go of the basket and took the body into his arms to stop her from falling. He couldn't help laughing at her trepidation, due to which she had closed her eyes. A few petals flew with the blustery weather while the girl slowly opened her eyes. She looked back into Mayank's eyes and felt relieved. When Nupur was in Mayank's arms, she had to feel the safest of all. Mayank stood standstill, not wanting to let go of her. He had missed the angelic face and chatter and blabbering for so long. He hadn't held anyone so close for so long without feeling queasy. He wanted to tell how enormous the love he had for her was. She didn't move back too. Her terror had gone astray. She had now forgiven him. She could never have stayed so far from him when he was so close to her, right in her heart. She couldn't stay away from the mature, meticulous, humorous and sarcastic Mayank who had taught her to life in a way other than hers. She couldn't stay away from the dimpled, muscular, adorable chocolate boy.

"Oye Nupur Puttar, kitthe hai tu?" a huge voice boomed through the hall, as Mayank slowly brought her up, careful not to leave her in the astonish that had traumatized him.
She cursed the voice, for breaking their perfect moment. She looked at Mayank. He smiled at her and then pushed a few stray locks behind her ear. She shivered the moment his hands brushed against her cheek. He then signaled her to go back to her mother. She nodded heavily, and then slowly dragged her feet towards the shrieks. For one last time, she looked back at him. He was staring at his feet, quietly playing with the flower in his hand. She couldn't help but feel amused. Mayank always managed to get that smile on her face that no one had ever done before. And today, she would tell him that.

"Mayank, Suhaani has arrived." Benji announced happily, bringing along Suhaani and her husband. As far as his eyes could go, he saw the man extend himself way too long. He looked handsome and muscular, and fitted perfectly with Suhaani. Suhaani extended her hand towards Benji. "Wish you a very happy married life, Sir." Adhiraj greeted us too." Hi, I'm Adhiraj." His voice was husky and hoarse. I also perceived that Benji looked a bit perplexed. But I decided to ignore.

"Hello Adhiraj, it's great to meet you. Suhaani is one of our most trusted employees. You must be proud of her." I warmly praised Suhaani in front of her husband as he proudly beamed at the blushing Suhaani. "I know." He inaudibly replied back, his eyes fixed to Suhaani. Just then his mobile rang. He quickly jerked himself and excused himself as he stood behind a pillar. Suhaani just dreamily watched him. "Sir, thanks for inviting us. My husband and I haven't met for days. After so long, we are actually spending some time with each other." She thanked me as I modestly shrugged it off. "I'll go and help Dia Ma'am." She hurriedly rushed off, her bangles jingling throughout the hall.

Mayank stifled a yawn as he tried to smile at Benji and Dia who looked more than jubilant. The flames were burning his eyes, and the smoke prohibited him to get a view of Nupur. He wanted to meet her one last time, if that it was. But would two years of pain die in two days of togetherness?

Nupur here tried hard to loosen the tight and sweaty grip of her mother. The flames already release a lot of heat; she didn't need an addition to it. "Maa, I'll go have some water." Her mom nodded without looking at her. She let go of her while Nupur heaved a sigh of relief. She sneaked out her way to the cool backyard. The grass was a bit wet, but it felt soothing to her bare feet. She sat under the full moon on a white bench as cool breeze blew her hair. Life had changed since two years. She had a blind date, fell for the guy hopelessly, lost and found him again but now she was married; at least in the eyes of others. Silently she shed her tears away. She wanted Mayank back. That was all she needed to live, in simple words.

"Bored?" she heard Mayank standing just behind her. She turned back to him, forgetting to wipe her tears. And as it would go, Mayank noticed them flowing through her cheek like a never ending stream. He quickly walked over and sat on the bench. Apprehensively he asked her as he wiped her tears, "What's the matter Nupur?" she simply sat wordlessly, her expressions had been washed off. He shook her lightly. "Nupur, would you care to answer?"

She gripped him tightly. "Hwy don't you answer me first? Why did you leave Mayank? Why did you tell me that it won't work that day at the ball? Why are you so close to me that I can't breathe when you go away from me? Why should I be so attached to you?"

"When I lived my life these two years, I felt lifeless. I felt as if I had been separated from myself. I was no more Nupur. I was just a body with no soul. I wanted to be with you at that time; to sit beside you and laugh, to lean over you and cry. And when I'd try to find that person, I would just see an empty chair beside me. At the subway, I would scan the crowd to search those two dimples who would await me every time we met. I would scan for that warm face which would hold my hand while crossing the road. And again, I would find no one. I agree Mayank, you don't love me. I know why you look so gauche around me. But I beg of you, please, don't destroy our friendship. It is the only thing I live on; the only hope that we will be reunited one day, at least as friends. At least for those memories we spent together, please Mayank, don't leave me this time."

She poured out all her feelings in two minutes and at that moment, even silence couldn't come between them. He engulfed her into a tight hug shedding all his inhibitions, while she responded back equally, pouring all her grief onto him. She had just confessed everything about her to him, and now, she wouldn't let anyone come between them.
She slowly broke out the hug and sat straight, wiping her tears.

"I'm sorry I wet your…" She trailed off with a whimpering smile. He grinned happily. "I wanted you to do so. It shows how close you are to me." she blushed away. He brought my face right in contact with his. I stared deeply into his eyes, and found only his love in his eyes. "Do you really think Nupur, that I don't love you?" She nodded negatively.

"I love you Nupur. I really do. That's all I know, even If you don't accept me as your lover. You've always been there for me, and now, I'll be there for you." Mayank finished with heartfelt concern shining through his hazel brown eyes and a drop of tear hanging on his eyelid.

Nupur slowly wiped her tears and leaned against him as she felt his arm around her shoulder. "I love you too Mayank, I'll continue to do so till eternity." She took his hand in hers and entertwined her fingers with his, as they sat the whole as the moonlight served as their spotlight and the stars adorned their love.

Edited by ShruAtIF - 15 years ago

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sumaiya

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Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1019

sorry for not commenting for a long time...but I love this story! it's developing really well!!

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Shamsa aka Sam

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Trailblazer

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1020

OMG Shru yaar what an Amazing confession they had soo magical and soo pure Ahhh😍😍😍😍 Gosh u wrote it soo beautifull sooo Amazing and u are such a talented writer 👍🏼 Loved Every Bit OF the part Esp The Falling☺️ Nups In Mayuu Arms oye hoye Sooo Magical

Do Con Soon

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