MAYUR SHORT STORY-Tum Miley part6-pg60 - Page 12

Originally posted by: rose.mn

hey nidzy when are u updating this ????????

Hey Rabi

Im updating 2nite

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

wow mayur gallery congrats
yaar

or nice story too
to ye rv ab kisske haatho se maar kahyga next time
jaldi update ker ke bata ok

Thanks dear

im glad you liked it

il continue soon

luv
Nidzy

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

muje be lag raha hein faria ye bhool gayi hein
ja iske liye thode se badam la or mein is ke liye memory tej karne wali medicine balnati hoon

Mai sach mein bhool gayi thi

Fari tere Badam aur adi tere Medicines bohut kaam aaye

In dono cheezo ka mujh par asar bhi hua

isliye chahe kuch jaye

il be updating it 2nite

luv
Nidzy

Originally posted by: mayurarti

Hey Rabi

Im updating 2nite

oh thats great yaar
mujy to laga tum iss ff k bare main bhol hi gayi ho.........
waise you write 3 ff n also one shots on arti..........
arry nidzy kaise manage karti ho tum
aur tum ho bi buhat active...........
sab ff parh k comment bi sab se pehle...........
you know wat abi mere 20 unread pm's pare hove hain......
aur mere pass time hi nahi hota.......
abi to main apni ff ka next part likh rahi hon...........
tum hi mujy koi trick batao...........warna mera to pata nahi kya ho ga?😆
u r great yaar..........hats off 👏👏👏

Originally posted by: rose.mn

oh thats great yaar
mujy to laga tum iss ff k bare main bhol hi gayi ho.........
waise you write 3 ff n also one shots on arti..........
arry nidzy kaise manage karti ho tum
aur tum ho bi buhat active...........
sab ff parh k comment bi sab se pehle...........
you know wat abi mere 20 unread pm's pare hove hain......
aur mere pass time hi nahi hota.......
abi to main apni ff ka next part likh rahi hon...........
tum hi mujy koi trick batao...........warna mera to pata nahi kya ho ga?😆
u r great yaar..........hats off 👏👏👏

Jab kisi cheez ko dil se chaho

tou saari kainath usse mila deti hai

wo kya hai im very addicted to this forum,MAYUR ,ARTI

online aane ka koi mokha nai chodti

kabhi kabhi tou chori chupe college mai bhi shuru hojati hu

tu yeh idea try kar

aur itni tareeef ke liye thanks

and im wating for your FF

i realy love ur FF Mera intezaar karna

awwwwsme yaar

love you dear
muahhhhh...........
luv
Nidzy

Originally posted by: mayurarti

Jab kisi cheez ko dil se chaho

tou saari kainath usse mila deti hai

wo kya hai im very addicted to this forum,MAYUR ,ARTI

online aane ka koi mokha nai chodti

kabhi kabhi tou chori chupe college mai bhi shuru hojati hu

tu yeh idea try kar

aur itni tareeef ke liye thanks

and im wating for your FF

i realy love ur FF Mera intezaar karna

awwwwsme yaar

love you dear
muahhhhh...........
luv
Nidzy

han main shayad kal update karon wo ya shayad aaj raat ko...........
half chapter lika hai abi............
waise idea to buhat acha hai.........main bi try karne ka sochon gi.........😆
wiase nidzy tell me something abt you yaar
i just know ur name............

Part 2

Next day in college

Mayank had arrived early to college for the first time .Everyone was shocked to see him so early in college.He parked his car came out & was sitting on his car bonnet looking towards the gate.

After some time his entire gang came

D-kya baat hai aaj Mayank Sharma itni jaldi college aa gaya

M-wo ..bas yu hi aaj jaldi uth gaya tha tou socha college aa jau

D-aur koi baat tou nai hai na

M-nai aisi kuch nai hai

waise hum ladke hamesha pehle aate hai tum ladkiyon ki tarha make-up mein time waste nai karte

D-(hitting him)Mayank tum na

M-theek hi tou keh raha hu kyu RV?

RV-wrong Mayank yeh beautiful girls hamare liye hi tou taiyaar hoti hai…..he said putting his arm around her shoulder

D-suna Mayank

M-haan pata hai par mujhe yeh sab pasand nai

make-up & all that mujhe simple cheezien zyada achi lagti hai

D-tou phir tujhe koi ladki nai milne wali kyunki aaj kal sabhi aise hai

M-(to himself) siwaye ek ke…..thinking about Nupur

RV-aur hamara Mayank kunwara hi reh jaayega bechara

They all laugh the whole gang was having masti pulling each others leg but Mayank was least interested his eyes were searching just one person

Suddenly he felt cool breeze touch his face he turned around to see Nupur entering through the gate she was wearing peach colour chudidar frock her face glowing in the sunlight, her hair which reached till her waist, few locks of hair falling over her face & she was constantly pushing them back she was so pure ,her beautiful face & calm smile ,anyone could fall in love with her Mayank was just mesmerized by her he kept staring at her she was the first girl who attracted him so much

Nupur's eyes met his as she was passing by he smiled at her she looked away from him & started to walk. Mayank realized he was staring at her

M-(to himself) Oh God mai usse kaise ghoor raha tha wo mere baare mein kya sochri hogi par yeh mujhe ho kya gaya hai pehle kabhi kisi ke liye maine aisa feel nai kiya.

N-(to herself) kaise ghoor raha hai gunda kahin ka ladkiyon ki koi respect nai hai…..she goes to her class

As usual classes were going on in the college some were attending & some were not

In the afternoon there was an announcement

All the students of Excel college seniors, juniors, freshers, are requested to assemble in the hall for a lecture on personality development.

In the canteen

The whole gang was sitting & enjoying

RV-announcement..Huh …ab phir koi budha aayega aur pakaa ke jaayega

D-chalo na kahi bahar chalte hai

Mayank was happy to hear the announcement

M-saare students matlab wo bhi hogi waha

A smile crept on his face

D-Mayank kaha kho gaye

M-kuch nai

D-tou phir chalo na

M-nai mera mann nai hai tum log jao…saying this he gets up & leaves

D-(thinks) yeh achanak Mayank ko kya ho gaya subha sab se pehle college aaya aur ab……. zaroor kuch gadbad hai

Mayank went to the hall he was hesitating initially because he never attended such lectures in his life but he was ready for anything just to see a glimpse of her.

As he entered the hall he saw people staring at him as if he had done some crime

The boy standing in front of him almost dropped his books another one drinking water spilled it from his mouth on seeing him

M-(hitting the boy on his head)kyu bey pehle kabhi dekha nai kya?chalo sab apna kaam karo ….he said loudly

Though everyone's eyes were upon him his eyes were scanning around the hall looking for her

He went & sat in the last row

M-(to himself) wo ab tak aayi kyu nai

The lecture started & some professor in sixties started giving a boring lecture on personality development ,about career ,how to be successful in life..etc,etc…

M-usski ek nazar ke liye kitne papad belna pad raha hai ….his head started aching

He rested his forehead on the table

Nupur was new in the college so she was not aware of the directions she was late finding her way to the hall.She went & sat on the last bench.

M-(still had his forehead on the table )Ahhh…. my head …….he said holding his head

Nupur looked at the guy sitting beside her she observed that something was wrong.

She kept her hand on his shoulder

N-aap theek tou hai is everything alright?

M-(lifting his head)yes I'm ok its just a headach….

He stops seeing Nupur sitting beside him she was so close to him he never thought attending a lecture would give him such luck to see her so close she looked more beautiful her angelic face & big dove shaped eyes

Nupur was shocked to see Mayank sitting beside her his chocolate brown captivating eyes staring at her his intense gaze on her made her feel uncomfortable she removed her hand from his shoulder & looked towards the other side .

Mayank sensed she was feeling uncomfortable sitting inches away from him he got up & left the hall.

Nupur watched him leave from the corner of her eye she felt strange about him those eyes which always stared at her had something but then she remembered the incident on the first day of college.

N-(to herself)there's nothing strange about those eyes wo ek mawali hai.

Mayank was pacing outside the hall thinking

M-wo mujhse itna darr kyu jaati hai…..

obviously Mayank jo tum logo ne uss ke saat first day kiya uss ke baad tou wo darr hi jaayegi

chahe kuch bhi ho …I have to say her sorry I cant stay with this guilt.

He was waiting for her to come out of the hall.

After the lecture Nupur came out

Mayank went behind her

M-suniye…

Nupur turned

As she saw Mayank she started walking away

M-dekhiye please meri baat tou sun lijiye

Nupur stopped

M-I'm really sorry uss din mai aap ki ragging nai karna chahta tha wo tou sab ne mujhse zabardasti…

N-agar koi aap se zabardasti kare tou aap kuch bhi karenge aap ko sharam nai hai ek ladki ko cigratte

peelane tum sab ek jaise ho jo sirf doosron ko satana jaante hai ……….she had tears in her eyes

She didn't knew from where she gathered so much courage to tell him all this she never spoke loudly to anyone , she left from there.

Mayank was silent he knew she was hurt & he was responsible for it if he hadn't stopped her that day she wouldn't have tears in her eyes today.Seeing her watery eyes his heart ached.

That's it for today

I hope you didn't get bored reading it

Plz leave you precious comments

They mean a lot to me.

Luv

Nidzy…

Hi nidzyyyyyyyyyyyyy,

Wow dear at last u update this f.

Maine to soacha that um ye ff ke bade mian bhul hi gaya hoga

But What is this ?

Itna short update.

Padne ke pehle hi khatam hogaya.

Mujhe bada bada update chaiye.

Ok now come to ur update- it was lovely and nice part.

So mayu changed a lot for our sweet Nupur.

He came to college earlier and the attend the boring lecture just to c a glance 4 her.

Awwwwwww so sweet of mayu.

Hmmmmm nups was heart 4 1^st days activities of Mayank.

But he didn't want to do it and he failed to clarify it to nups.

Mayank felt bad after seeing nups tears.

Me also felt sad 4 them

Nidzy kab khatam hoga ye misunderstanding

Hope everything will b all right soon

Good part dear.

Noweagerly waitng 4 ur next part.

But pls try to make it longer

Take care

Hey Nidzy!

the update was really sweet,....waiting 4 their patch up.....