'mayur' the temptation....page 44 part 12

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kulsumd

@kulsumd

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#291

haey..dear
Ua ff z amazing..lykd it.
Plzz add me 2 ua pm list..
Do continue soon...

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adi_gupta

@adi_gupta

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#292

lovley update
awwwwwwwwwww blush blush alot of ok
and nups slap rv ya love it
soon update ok

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#293

not fair.....i want an update!

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jaldi karo...........

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samira

@-Samira-

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#294

hi pari wonderful ff dear mayu is cute n sweet i loved mayur their bonding
ur rocking dear

n update soooooooooon dear plzzzzzzzz

thanks

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adi_gupta

@adi_gupta

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#295

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sana

@arhi.sarun

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#296

nice updates
writte more soon
and pm me whenever u rite

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#297

loved ur ff dear......
its jst mind blowing
awwesome
and wen u gonna update

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pari sharma

@kiarathediva

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#298

guys finally i hav updated......... here goes the update..

n: MRS NUPUR MAYANK SHARMA...... got it.......... (with a voice full of anger and t was so sharp)
rv: got it.... by the way tumhe iske liye bahut badi keemat chuukaani hogi nupur........
n: keemat to tumhe chukaani hogi,,,,,,,, jo tumne kiya hai usse koi nhi bhula sakta hai.................. aur mujhe ab darrne ki bhi koi zarurat nhi hai kyuki mayank mere saath hai......... wo mujhe kuch nhi hone dega........
mayank was lyk aweeeee,,,,,,,
n: aur tum............

wen a lady arrived and took rv with her.... while mayank entered.,.

nupur was facing the other way and so she did not notice mayank entering.....

mayank hugged her from back........

n: mayank tum..... kahaan the tum,,,,,,,,,,

and she quickly turned and hugged him back like anything.... as if never to leave.......

her nails were digging his back and mayank was just in n mood to leave her.......

m: nuppur hum ghar chale.....

nupur nodded in a yes......

in the car.......

m: nupur.....

n: hmm....

m: i love you..

n: i love you too mayank...... aur achaanak se yeh kese kahaa?

m: bas yuhi.......

n: yuhi?

m: haan yuhi.....

wen the car stopped with a bang......

m: ab isse kya hua?

mayank went out to check....

m: nupur gaadi kharaab ho gyi hai.....

n ab kya karein??

m: wese ghar zyaada door nhi hai..... lets walk...............

n: walk??? ,,,,, thik hai......

it was night tym and the road was empty........

wen the wind blew heavily and the weather was getting cold........

they did not hav any warm clothes but mayank was having a jacket ...

he made nupur wear that.. firstly nupur denied but then agreed.......

n: ab tumhe thand nhi lag rhi kya?

m: bilkul nhi......... mujhe bas hug kar do saari thand utar jaayegi.......

and he hugged nupur from back......

nupur was smiling wen she felt something wet on her neck.........

and sumthing moving...... it was mayank's lips......... moving all thru her neck......

nupur turned..... and saw mayank lost in her.........

n: mayank.......

m: hmm......... (completely lost.)

n: mayank kya kar rhe ho......

m: i need to explain? (he asked moving his way towards her lips)

n: maynak.... (and she pushed him and ran away)

mayank ran towarrds her........ and there started a tom and jerry sequence...........

wen mayank sneezed....... "aacchhhooo"........

nupur stopped.....

n: mene kahaa tha na tumhe sardi ho jaayegi..... lo isse peheno ab.......

and she made him wear that jacket

wen nupur was going to move ahead....... mayank pulled her towards him.....

nupur banged into him......... the jacket was not zipped ... and suddenly the sound of the lightning came and nupur hugged mayank,,,,, her hands were inside the jacket.........

and mayank quickly zipped up the jacket......... (i hope you are getting the scene)

nupur blushed at this........ and did not dare to look up into mayank;s eyes......

she hid herself in his broad chest..... they moved that way only,,,,,,,,, nupur put her feet on mayank's feet and now they were walking lyk wen we do paper dancing and all........

and they reached home......

in the room

nupur went in the bathroom to change... and mayank opened his shirt and switched on the tv.....

nupur forgot to bring the clothes and was calling mayank but bcoz mayank was in the kitchen preparing coffee , he cud not hear it........

nupur saw one of mayank's shirt hanging in the bathroom........

she wore that and came out.....

wen she came out of the bathroom, mayank came in the room.........

his eyes widened and he was amazed by the scene in front of him.......

nupur was looking damn hawt,.,,,,

nupur blushed hard thru his gaze...............

m: ummm......... coffee........

n: (taking the coffee) thnx.....

nupur was hell embarrased......

they drank the coffee.... and in embarrasment nupur forgot to wear her clothes........

she went to keep the mugs in the kitchen........ followed by mayank.........

in the kitchen

wen she turned , she was at first startled to see mayank standding just toooo close to her.....

n: mayank.....

but mayank was in no mood to talk.....

he came closer to nupur....... nupur a step backward mayank a step forward.... until nupur was stopped by the wall.........

mayank sealed her into the wall and put his hand on both the sides of the wall.....

he kept coming closer and now their lips were just inches away....

soon the gap was filled by mayank while he brushed his lip with hers....

the kiss became more passionate wen mayank pullled nupur by her her waist and nupur's hand reached his hair......

soon they were out of breath and broke to breathe....

but mayank again kissed her to which nupur just responded........

mayank took nupur in his strong arms and made his way to bed.....

he made nupur lie on the bed and soon he was busy undressing her and himself.......

then he pulled the cover on them and LIGHTS OFF.......

next morning.......

nupur woke to wind his hubby sleeping peacefully..... his arms were covering her as he was half on her............

she tried to get up.......... but cud not as she did not want to disturb his sleep......

finally lyk a squirrel she got out of his strong grip and stood up....

mayank was deep asleep......

she went to bathroom to freshen......

mayank woke up....... and his hand searched for nupur on the bed......

soon he sat on the bed and not finding nupur looked here and there......

m: nupur u in the bathroom?

n: yes mayank

mayank smiled remembering the last night.....

nupur came out wearing a white suit...... anaarkali one...

mayank was once again lost in her.....

nupur made her way to the dressing table....

she was trying to zip up her suit but it was of no help.....

she signalled mayank to help..... and mayank jumped out of the bed as if he was waiting for it so eagerly......

mayank went to nupur and slowly put her hair in front from her left shoulder.....

he zipped up slowly and slowly...... her hands movin all thru her bare back.......

then he purposely pretended as if thethreads were cuming btw and put her mouth closer to break the thread,,,,,

naughtilly he put his lips on her back and stard moving them...... he was having fun seeing nupur's reaction from the mirror...

she was bluching badllyyyy ................

he zipped up finally leaving butterflies in nupur's stomach.....

"tum white mein bahut acchi lagti ho"...........

so here is the update......... hope you lyked it..... plz do comment/critisise.......... finally finished writing.................. ohhkk i m waiting for yur response........

Edited by pari.theprinces - 15 years ago

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#299

Pariiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
after long time u update this ff
wah wah what a romantic update.

maza agaya

loved mayur romance a lot
ye mayu bhi na romance ki ek bhi mauka nehi chodte
loved the jacket scene
and then sweet, cutey morning was also very nice.

excellent update PAriiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
wonderful
loved it to the core
keep it up.

take care

Edited by fariaa70 - 15 years ago