Yaadein-Memories Forever [MN FF] #2 Note: Pg 79

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Posted: 15 years ago

#501

Originally posted by: -afsha-
Thanx for updating this FF
Loved the part but it was too short

Liked the way Mayu thought of giving their relation a chance

Mayu never leaves a chance to make Nups angry

Loved it

Hop we'll get update faster n longer

Thank you Afsha

Will update sooner

x x

Originally posted by: -Jess-
res - will update my comments later...

Zoah... what a surprise after long time... and thank u Akki for helping her... I was missing this FF a lot....

@Akki - 22-17

Hey Jess

Will be waiting for your comment

Edit it soon :)

x x

Originally posted by: Shafoo
tht was awesome

Thank you so much

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Swati

@SwatiBeanyBrown

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#502

oh zoah.. u r back at last.. 😊it was such a terrible time wen u suddenly stopped updating... i knw wat made u so apathetic..😭we all mayurians/artians went thru a hellish phase..🥺 so i forgive ur delay...sachhi mein tujhe maaf kiya!!!🤗
n thanx a lot akansha 4 ur bright idea..luv ya..🤗

ok abt d upate,.. ya i expected much more frm u as i knw wat u r truly capable of.. but m hoping 4 d best in d coming 3 parts.. i knw uwill rock huny!!!⭐️..so god bless..update soon dis time..plzz😊

luv mayur always!!!🤗

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t-mayur-sajan-j

@t-mayur-sajan-j

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#503

hey zoah
loved it
finally u remebered this ff :)
it was lovely, love mayur all way through
cont soon
thx for the pm

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Archana

@a-little-hope

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#504

updated my comment on last page Zoah...😃

Edited by -Jess- - 15 years ago

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amrutha,akhila

@ammuakhi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#505

oh my god zoah....!!!!!!!!!! you updted this ff...????😲😲😲 its been a really long time naa.....???

anyways mayur were simply adorable.....

loved mayank to the core.................😳😳

ab jaldi se update karna................

Edited by ammuakhi - 15 years ago

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stuti

@stuti123

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#506

zoah , i am soooooo happy to see you back with a bang with such a mindblowing and adorable update of my favourite FF .........i realy missed you lots dear and this ff also and finally you updated it .............. i loved the way you have described the growing relationship o fmayank and nupur ....... it wasa treat to read it ......... nupur has agreed she wants to give their relationship a chance .........and the part where

Arti isplaying with her dad and her mom seeing this aww it soo lovely ........... soo this ff will end in three parts .......makes me sad but still i cant wait for the next update .............do update soon ................... you rock .............

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#507

awesome update
cont soon
plz pm me nxt time

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.SilentPrincess

@.SilentPrincess

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#508

Wow great update.. even if it was short it was simply awesome...

But whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy are u ending it in 3 partss?? soo fast plzz do continue for some time more plzzz...

But i have A question abt ur ff... Nd the bridge between ur 1st thread nd 2nd thead...

Okay plz explain to me cuz im kind a confused....

After confessing everything to mayank that night (1st thread last part...)
He obviosuly accpeted the fact and nd told her that it wasen't her fault she was not herself that nite on the valentine party/ball... nd then u skipped to after the marriage that nite... I do get it as far as this...

But then u wrote abt that letter nupur gave mayank on the wedding nite and he read it and he got to know that it was ajay who raped nupur that nite... But after that u skipped to valentines day i didn't get it... the story further on was rlly sweet nd after that mayank started having feelings for her nd all was very sweet nd cute.. but the thing i didn't get is why he (Mayank) didn't react or try to find ajay... after reading the letter.... I felt like Ajay just disappeared...Nd i didn't get it how come he didn't do anything like finding ajay nd question him abt the rape nd why... what had nupur done him..etc...

well actually what i thought u might do further in the story was that somehow ajay would one day appear in nupurs life again nd create misunderstandign between mayank nd nupur... or some thing like that.. I thought u would go back t ajay further in the story but now ur saying that ur ending in 3-4 part nd i don't get it... Please explaine her... what happened in between that nite where mayank reads sanam's letter abt the rape nd valentines day (mayur's first after their marriage)...??

Edited by princez_94 - 15 years ago