Yaadein-Memories Forever [MN FF] #2 Note: Pg 79 - Page 48

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Posted: 15 years ago
hwy zoah, this is cheating... 😆

u said u'll update next day but u betrayed..😭

plz yr update it soon
please
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Posted: 15 years ago
please do continue dear....
and please add me in ur pm list!!! plzz....
loved ur story to the core.....it is FAB FAB FAB!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Okay guys, I am extremely sorry about the great delay
I am typing the update now and it'll be the last part of the FF
Will update by tonight :)
Thank you for waiting and sorry once again
x x
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: pagli91

Hi Zoah, i'm fahi...

I am in love with this FF of urs, its so fabulously written, i read the whole thing in one go, just couldn't stop i loved it, plz add me to ur pm list and pm me wen u update. Oh and also plz dnt end in 4parts... plz carry it on. 😃

Hey Fahi
Thank you so much for taking time out and reading my crap FF lol
I really do appreciate it :)
I shall update the next part tonight
x x
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

Okay guys, I am extremely sorry about the great delay

I am typing the update now and it'll be the last part of the FF
Will update by tonight :)
Thank you for waiting and sorry once again
x x



Calls for real celebration!

Waiting!!😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
"Mayank, ye koi waqt hai ghar aane ka? Kab se intezaar kar rahi hoon mein tumhara? Koi fikar hai tumhe ya nahin? " Nupur burst out as soon Mayank walked inside the house. It was 12o'clock at night and as always Mayank was late from the office. Although, he asked Nupur not to wait for me, but being Nupur it was hard to do so. So there she was, pacing down the room, waiting for her sadu husband to come so that she can give him a big lecture. But deep down in her heart, she knew that behind the fake annoyance and anger, there was extreme concern towards her husband.

As soon as hearing a long lecture, Mayank smiled to himself and sent a silent prayer to the one above for giving him such a caring and loving wife. Typical Nupur, Mayank thought to himself as walked towards her.

"Take it easy woman." Mayank replied with a grin on his face which made Nupur even more furious.
"It's not funny, Mayank. Yahan mein pareshan ho kar pagal ho rahi hoon aur tumhe hasi aa rahi hai." Nupur cried, controlling tears which were craving to come out. She was worried like hell and there he was standing, grinning like an idiot.
"Ok, sorry." He started, before holding Nupur from shoulder and making her look in his eyes, "Nupur, mein janta hoon ki tum pareshan thi lekin meine tumse kaha tha na ki so jana, mujhe der ho jayegi phir? He continued, while cupping her face between his hands.

"Theek hai, ab itna senti hone ki koi jaroorat nahin hai. Tum fresh ho jao mein khana lagati hoon." Nupur changed the topic as she made her way towards the kitchen.

"Dramaqueen." She heard him whispered.

**

"Mayank ek baat puchu?" After the dinner, both Mayank and Nupur were lying down on the bed.

"Haan pucho." Mayank replied in a flat tone.

"Did you really mean what you said the other night?" Don't know what made her ask that question. She was way too curious.

*Flashback* (continuation of the date; however I haven't included the song. Sorry )

After the dance, Mayank and Nupur sat on their respective chairs to have dinner. The new feeling of love was taking over Mayank's heart. Although, he was unaware of the attraction towards Nupur, he loved the feeling. He had this sudden urge of giving their relationship a chance. He knew that was the right thing and that's what Nupur wanted. She suffered more than enough in the past, so now the only thing that would bring happiness in her life was Mayank and his support.

"Nupur..." He tried to initiate the conversation and seeing the magical smile on Nupur's face, he was certain that what he was going to do was the right thing.

"Mayank, thank you for everything, for making me feel special. I truly appreciate this but you shouldn't have bothered. A simple dinner would be enough." Nupur was overwhelmed with everything that Mayank did to bring a smile on her face. She couldn't ask for more. This was everything she always wished for.

"You deserve all the happiness in the world, Nupur. You truly do. And thank you for coming in my life." He got up from his chair and sat down on his knees front of Nupur. Taking Nupur's hand in his, he said, "Nupur can we give a chance to our relationship, please?" He simply asked with tons of emotions flowing out in his voice. He knew this was the right thing and more of it, he wanted to do this.

On the other hand, Nupur didn't know how to react. She was silent, while hundreds of thoughts made their way in her mind and heart. She could sense the sincerity and love in Mayank's thoughts. Although, it wasn't the love she expected – it was a best friend's love – she knew he truly meant what he said. The beating of her heart got faster with each passing second.

"Yes." That's all she could manage before Mayank got up on his feet and hugged her with all the love and affection.

*Flashback ends*

It had been over a week since that incident but Nupur was still kind of confused about it. Well, being Nupur, it was quite predicted. On the other hand, Mayank was pretty surprised at Nupur's sudden question.

"What do you mean?" he asked.

"Don't get me wrong here but I just wanted to know if you really wanted to give a chance to this relationship. I mean, kahi tum ye sab..." She couldn't finish her sentence as Mayank cut her in between.

"Nupur, I truly meant what I said the other night and I still stand on what I said. Trust me, ok?" Mayank replied in a calmest manner ever. He knew the uncertainty, that Nupur was going through and being honest, he didn't object it. It was quite expected.

**

Next morning, after feeling the warmth of her husband's arms, Nupur woke up to find her daughter Arti playing cheerfully in her coat. She smiled at the scene and thanked God for everything that He gave. She freed her body from Mayank's tight grip and walked towards her daughter.

"Oh my bachcha, good morning." She wished her little one as she kissed her pink cheeks. Arti was now 4 months old but was too clever at the age of 4 months. Nupur moved towards their bed with Arti in her arms, where Mayank was sleeping peacefully. Nupur's heart skipped a beat at the view. With his black vest and messy hair, Mayank looked adorable as ever. Keeping her emotions aside, she sat beside Mayank and kept Arti near his head to do what she is best at – pulling Mayank's hair.

Much expected Arti started pulling Mayank's hair, while Nupur was simply enjoying the sight. As he felt something pulling his hair, Mayank's opened his eyes lazily to find his daughter pulling his touch – me – not hair while Nupur was simply grinning.

"Good morning sweetheart."He wished his daughter and he sat up to take Arti in his lap. Knowingly, he ignored Nupur and busied himself in playing with Arti. Nupur was kind of shocked seeing this. She faked a cough but no use. Mayank was grinning within.

"HELLO, mein bhi yahi par hoon." She couldn' take it anymore. Such ignorance, that too from her dear husband and her darlind daughter.

"bachcha, aapne kisiki aawaaz suni." Mayank was loving it.

Nupur was about to reply him when Gunjan entered the room with a smile on her face.

"Good morning people" She greeted cheerfully.

"Good morning Gunjan" Both Mayank and Nupur replied.

"Bhai – Bhabhi, kya mein Arti ko walk pe leke ja sakti hoon, please? It's such a nice weather." Gunjan asked in politeful manner. Mayank nodded positively while Nupur smiled giving her permission.

After Gunjan went away with Arti, Nupur got up from the bed and gave evils to Mayank who was smirking. Nupur ignored the smirk and was about walk away from their when Mayank forcefully held her from her wrist and she ended up falling on top of him.

***
So guys, here is the update
I am sooooooooooooooooo sorry for the great delay 😭
Specially dedicated to AK for forcing me to update.
Thank you hun
Disclaimer: Guys, the idea for this update was AK's aka ak12. She helped me a lot so I owe a big thank you to her. Thank you so much hun. You're a life saver. 🤗
Plus, I know this update isn't upto the mark, but do bear with me guys. Fee free to critisize.
Another thing, I will be continuing this FF for 3 more parts. 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awwwww! Zo! Thank you so much for the dedication....you didnt have to do that! I told you theres no owing thing between friends! Anyways you've left me with awe! Thank you!

@All! People i wont take credit for any ideas! Zoah! Has done an amazing job. I just helped her with potholes on the way! So all round of applauses to certain someone called Zoah!

Coming back to the update....

Dary! Legendary! Lol! I've been watching too much of 'how i met your mother'

Anyways zo! That was B-E-A-Utiful!

You write amazingly hun!

I so love the way you portrayed their relationship throughout this ff! N when he assures her that he was serious! Ah! Mayank Sharma should stop killing people with his charm! He's hazardous!

Enjoyed it hun!

And you better update regularly!

-AK!

Edited by ak12 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Finally zoah u updated

loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
Edited *

Finally you updated....

It was as usual a great update....

I guess I didnt comment earlier, bcz i was never active that time on IF
sorry for that

Last update, the date one
I actually read that in the bus, early morning at 7:30,
and I was grinning all the way, people were actually looking at me...
how embarrassing... but I just couldnt help reading anytime anywhere...
and the whole day in college too I was grinning like a complete idiot. 😆

This ff was totally different, simply outstanding👏
It was really interesting, all the events were simply fabulous!!!
Nupur's past, Mayur marriage....perfect!
I totally loved it..

Now pleaseeeeee dont take much time to update...
Pleaseeee
continue soon......

samidha 😃

@aku- you are truly amazing..love you...
back to earth please 😆
Edited by -sam- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanx zoah for updating it
and thanx to akshi for forcing u to update this awesome ff

i m little bit busy
so will comment later.


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