Yaadein-Memories Forever [MN FF] #2 Note: Pg 79 - Page 40

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Posted: 15 years ago
Thank you so much for the wonderful comments!
Really loved them!
I will update tomorrow morning!
I am including thwewhole date sequence in this part, so it will take time to type up.
I have done half the part, just need to add more, which I will do in the morning!
Hope you can wait that long!
Thanks once again
ZoaH
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey zoah
will wate till tmrw
plz update tmrw!

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Posted: 15 years ago
oh gosh Zoah... amazin promo..👏.
can't wait 4 d update.....
luvd d siggy also....gr8 job...👍🏼
pls update soon... 🤗
-supriya
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey just finished reading the ff...........4m the start.........i loved it.......u write so beautifully bringing out all the emotions nd feelings perfectly👏👏👏.........plz pm me when u update.........add me to ur buddy list 4 both ur ff's.......nd when vil u be updatind Days 2 remember?????
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey guys!
Here is the update!
I have covered the half of the update in this!
I did say that I will update the whole date sequence but I couldn't!
Actually so many things going in life, that hardly get time to update!
I am sorry about that!
Hope you like the part!
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It was about 6'o clock in the evening. Nupur was in her room, looking for the right dress to wear for the date. It's not date, Nupur, just a dinner! She corrected herself with a smile. What ever it may be, she was happy with their relationship. It gave her peace and happiness and that's exactly what is required from a relationship. Yes, of course their relationship was different, for good. They weren't the typical husband and wife. They were friends, best friends, who knew what the other one wants and needs.

It is said that it's very important to have love and understanding between couple in order for the relationship to survive longer. Truly said. Mayank and Nupur had the understanding for sure, but the love was yet to come. Or may be it was on the way. You never know.

Finally after a good 2 hours, Nupur found a white and gold sari. It was beautiful sari with golden border. Nupur went near the mirror to see if the color suits her. She placed the edge of the sari on her shoulder.

Meanwhile, Mayank entered the room and saw his loving wife, trying various dresses and saris. He smiled seeing the unusual expressions on her face. He leaned his head onto the wall near the door and stared at his adoring wife. After few minutes, she finally decided something. It was white and golden sari, Mayank thought. She would look gorgeous in that sari, his heart spoken out his thoughts. Not the beautifully embroidered sari but it was her giving that sari compliment and adding grace to it.

He loved those silly expressions of Nupur. She looked even more adorable with them, Mayank chanted in his heart. He was enjoying the beautiful view in front of his eyes. Nupur was truly an angel in his life. She came and all the worries, all the problems vanished from his life. He could not thank her enough for coming into his life. She was the reason for the happiness and pleasure in his life. Not only his life but Arti's too. She fulfilled the place of a mother with all the motherly love and affection that she gives to Arti. No one could have been proved to be a better mother than her. She was just perfect, a mother, a wife, a woman and the most important a best friend.

Mayank, coming back to reality, walked towards where Nupur was standing near the dressing table.

"You look beautiful!" Mayank whispered in her ear, sending current run down Nupur's body. She was literally shivering with the proximity. It wasn't that she didn't enjoy the closeness. Of course she did. She loved it but she was scared. She was scared thinking this was yet another delightful dream and it would break as soon as she would open her eyes. In reality this closeness would be nothing but a pleasant dream, she thought but soon her fear disappeared as she felt Mayank's touch on her skin. She closed her eyes tightly, due to the nervousness or a fear as Nupur would describe. Mayank entwined his fingers with Nupur's, making Nupur go weak on her knees.

Mayank could see her expressions through the mirror in front of him. He loved the fear on her face. It was the sign of the feelings that Nupur still contained for him. He still had the same affect on her. His closeness would always make her nervous. May be she was scared that she might let her feelings out in the open when she knew that Mayank didn't feel the same way.

The color of Nupur's cheeks was going warmer with each passing second. It was very rare when Mayank would give compliment but whenever he did, he would mean the each word he says. And today was the day, when he truly meant what he said. Nupur was indeed looking beautiful.


After gathering great courage, Nupur slowly opened her eyes, just to find the love of her life staring at her from the mirror. She felt uncomfortable with his intense gaze on her. "Thanks!" Nupur replied to his compliment while her heart was racing.

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"Mayank, hum kaha ja rahe hai?" Nupur asked impatiently when she couldn't bear the long silence anymore. They both were in the car and Mayank was silently driving car, without uttering a word which made Nupur furious. She was keeping on chatting ever since they sat in the car but being the sadu and akdu Mayank he kept his silence. After getting tired from talking to herself, Nupur went quiet but not for so long. As she saw that the road was very quiet and silent, she couldn't hold her silence any longer.

"Mayank? Are you even listening to me?" Nupur's tone was fully irritated and annoyed. He is ignoring my presence. You're so going to pay for this Mr. Sharma Nupur decided in her mind with a sweet evil smile which did not go unnoticed by Mayank.

After a few minutes non sense by Nupur, they finally reached their destination. Nupur was stunned to see the location. It was near the hill where Nupur always wanted her first date to be.

"It should be near the hill." Her own words echoed in the background as she walked moved towards the location."The curtains should be white. The decorations should be strictly of white tulips and few red roses. No compromise in that!" She could hear her stern voice once again. "A table covered with white table cloth and a candle placed in the middle of the table". Nupur's gazed drawn towards the table placed exactly the way she always wanted. She was simply touched by the view in front of her sight. She could not believe that someone could actually do something like this for her. She never considered herself as the deserving one. But little did she know that for someone she is someone who deserves all the happiness in the world. "A path of rose petals." Nupur realized that the path she was walking on was full of roses.

She was stunned, shocked, amused whatever may suit to describe the view in front of her eyes. It would be wrong to say that she could describe what she was feeling right this moment because she couldn't. No word in the dictionary would be enough to explain her feelings and her thoughts. It was like she was experiencing the heaven on the earth. As if she was waving a beautiful dream and don't want to wake up at all.

So many words, she had in her mind but now everything, all the words seemed in vain.

On the other side, Mayank was standing behind her, enjoying Nupur's stunning expressions. It took all day to do all these preparations as per Nupur's wish. He remembered her saying about her first date and all Mayank did was to follow her wishes. He wanted to make her feel special. She deserved all the happiness in the world. He was smiling broadly when Nupur turned around.

"You liked it?" Mayank asked with a smile even though he knew the answer. He could guess from her expressions. She was literally shocked. The happiness she was feeling was reflecting in her angelic eyes. They were glowing with sparkles. Nupur tried to reply using words but her lips seemed frozen. She couldn't get the right word out to say how much she loved this. Her tongue wasn't responding to her heart which had tons of things to say to him.

Mayank was waiting impatiently for her reply. His heart was beating faster with each second. He sighed in relief when she nodded her head in approval. It looked as if she couldn't get the right word out. Mayank felt his heart jumping in happiness as soon she nodded. He has happy that he was successful in making her happy. Her happiness and her smile meant a lot to him. He could easily die for it, without another question.

"Nupur, in the past, I gave you many sorrows, be it unknowingly, but I was the cause for your tears but now I promise I will never let you shed anymore tears. I promise you that. You deserve each and every happiness in the world and it is my job to ensure that you get them." Mayank finished his speech with tears in his eyes, while Nupur was staring at him with joy tears rolling down her cheeks. She was speechless. She felt that she was the luckiest person on the earth to have someone like Mayank in his life. He was just perfect in his way. He can be boring and book warm but the same can be the most romantic person alive on the earth.

She didn't know what she should do at that moment.Should she just stand there like a werido? Or let him know that she truly appreciated what he did for her. She ran and hugged Mayank as tightly as she could. She didn't want to lose this moment of love and affection. She wanted to tell him that what he meant for her.

On the other side, Mayank didn't take a second before responding to the hug. The hug of passion and love. He responded the hug with a equal amount of passion and love. He tighten the hug and Nupur went even more closer.

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So let me know what you think about this part!
Plus if you want me to write any particular scene, then please feel free to let me know either by dropping a comment here or PM me! 😛
Enjoy the update!
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I wanted to ask you something 😳
Do you think I should continue this FF after the confession of MayUr?
Please let me know what you think because I am planning on ending this FF after 4-5 parts 😳
Love
ZoaH
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Edited by Ansh_Arti - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

first to comment........ yay

love the update.......
mayur were too cute........
thx for the pm........
continue soon......
luv
mahima
Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Zoah!! 😉 xx

Amazing!! I loved it!! The way you write is just so GOOD. I mean heck, people here are awesomer than me!! 😛 LOL! 😆 Anyway, loved loved loved it. 😃

Yes, you should continue it. 😃

-Kanky
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow! fabulous update Zoah!👏 gosh, that was so romantic.....😍Mayank strived so much, remembering even the least of the details she had mentioned earlier.....his earnest attempt brought Nupur 2 tears!😳

abt this ff.....if u feel itz better 2 end it....then itz completely fine....itz better than dragging it.....jus my opinion.....after all, u wud soon write other ffs too....😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
I loved this part....it was so emotional nd touching..........loved how mayank cared 4 nupur.........simply awsm update..........nd abt continuing this ff.......its totally ur choice sweety.............
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thats so undoone yaar
U said u will finish the whole date part in one update but u didnt
U toh finished the part jus wen the date strted
Thats so bad bad bad😭😭😭
Cuming to update
Liked the way Mayu was adoring his wife
Liked their closeness
Mayu's speech was speechless yaar
Jus loved it
Aur no Naki n Puch Puch
Cont as much as u want jana
I wuld paka read it

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