YuNa FF ~ Yeh Pyaar Toh Hai ~ Part 8 Pg.10 - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
hey sorry for the late comment
nice chatper...finally they are taking the relationship to the next
level...
wonder how things with progess once yuvi will find out
that i was naina who saved him by giving her blood
thanks for the pm and update soon :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
Thanx for the update I wonder how their relationship is gonna progress, continue soon!

Love Vibs x
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
Part 7

As her eyes slowly opened she was blinded by the sun rays entering the room. And she blocked the sun rays she tried to get up but was stopped. She looked at her waist and saw Yuvraj's hand around her. She tried to move his hand but his grip got tighter and tighter. She looked at him and didn't notice when her hand start raising up to his cheeks. She slowly rubbed his cheeks and leaned down and kissed his cheeks. Immediately she got up, and got out of the bed not caring whether Yuvraj woke up. She ran to the bathroom.

N: What was that? Did I just kiss him? Oh my god's what happening to me?

He stirred In the bed and opened his eyes. He looked to his side and it was empty, he got out of the bed and was about to go to the bathroom when he heard the shower go on.

Y: looks like Naina is in the shower, ill go downstairs.

Ten minutes later Yuvraj came back to the room, but Naina was not done yet. He did his hair and started to button up his shirt when he heard the door open. Out came Naina with a robe on and her hair wet. Naina looked up and saw Yuvraj looking at her.

N: Um Yuvraj

Y: (break out of his trance) yeah

N: I hope you not getting ready for work

Y: no im not don't worry, im gonna head downstairs

N: ok

Yuvraj finished buttoning his shirt and went downstairs. As he went downstairs Rashmi bumped into him.

R: Bhaiya can I have so money

Y: why

R: um, me and my friends are gonna go shopping

Y: ok

Yuvraj stuck his hand in his pocket for his wallet but it wasn't ther.

Y: I think I forgot my wallet upstairs let me get it

Yuvraj ran upstairs to his room.

Y: Naina do you kn…… (he stopped in his tracks when he saw Naina trying to tie her dori for her sari)

Naina stretched her hands as far back as she can but yet she couldn't reach the dori, she tried harded but she felt someone's fingers against her back she looked up at the mirror and turned around.

N: Yu..Yuvraj (Grabbing her towel to cover herself)

Y: Um sorry ( turning around avoiding Naina) actually I forgot my wallet up here do you know where it is.

N: Um yeah hold on ( Naina walked over to the drawer opened it and took out his wallet but she did ot let go of her towel) yeh lo

Y: Um thank you

N: Yeah ( she watched Yuvraj walk out) uh yeh dori na

She stretched her hands back again but yet couldn't reach it and once she felt someone's fingers on her back she looked up at the mirror and It was Yuvraj again. She grabbed her towel again and turned around to face him.

N:Did you forget anything else

Y: No, umm actually

N: yeah

Y:Do you need help

N: with what

Y: um your dori

N: (turned around to face the mirror ) um no its ok, can you send rashmi she'll help me

Y: she left

N: can you send maa

Y: she also left

N: ohh um no don't worry ill do it

Y: Are you sure

N: yeah

Yuvraj walked out of the room leaving Naina struggling with the dori she tried again but yet it wouldn't reach

Y: (Leaning into her ear) let me do it

Naina turned around shocked to see Yuvraj

Y: Let me do it

Naina brought her hands down and turned around so her back was facing Yuvraj. As she felt his hand on her back, getting a hold of the string she slowly closed her eyes Yuvraj noticed this and smiled. Naina started to breath heavy feeling his hands touch her ever so gently and remember this morning when she kissed him. She opened her eyes and back away and turned around.

N:Thank you ( she quickly put her pallu on and walked downstairs)

As she went downstairs she was expecting no one to be there since Yuvraj said they all left. But there they were the whole family was sitting at the table. Naina walked down slowly and went to the kitchen

N: why would Yuvraj lie to me that Rashmi and Maa weren't here.

She did everything she need to do in the kitchen and went to the dining table and their he was sitting as if nothing happened. Naina walked over there and sat next to him. They ate the breakfast when Yuvraj got a call. He cam back after 15 mintues.

Y: Maa I have to go my friend is having a get together and he invited me so im gonna head out, k bye

YM: ok, but

Y: but what mom

YM: take Naina with you

Y: maa

YM: Yuvraj

Y: ok, Naina do you want to come with me

N: no im fine don't worry

YM: Naina go

N: ok ( she got up and walked out the door with him )

They both sat in the car and drove off. The car ride was very auite till Naina said something.

N: Yuvraj stop the car

Y: why whats wrong ( slowing down the car pulling it to the side)

N: just stop the car please

Yuvraj stopped the car on the side of the rode and Naina got out of the car Yuvraj followed her.

Y: Naina whats wrong

N: Why did you lie to me

Y: Lie about what

N: About thata maa and Rashmi aren't here

Yuvraj had forgotten about tht he walked in front of her

Y: um actually Naina woh

N: woh kya, what is it

Y: Naina I said that because I… I

N: you what

Y: I want to spend more quality time with you and get to know you

Naina was shocked out of her wits


Thanks reading sry I never updated its just tht im not likeing the way this one is turning out im gonna end it soon so expect updates more often now
Edited by pink95 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
cheers for the update!!!

it was sooo sweet.........will wait for ur updates!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
thanks for updating
i think its the show not your story
their characters changed and now its
getting hard fro you to write...that happened
with me as well
but still pretty nice update
looking forward to your next chapter
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56

I missed the last two updates...and they were really good!! lol both are in love but too stuborn to admit :P

Edited by princessuma - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
aww it was just too cuteee luv all the parts
waiting for the next update😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
That was really nice!! Both of them seem to have fallen for each other now......me loves it!
Your ff is really good......I think the current track is just killing your spirit to continue with this......I understand that.......hope to read the next part soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
THIS IS SOOO GOOOOOOOOODDDDdd.....me liking it....😳......wowoyyyy he wants to spend quality time wid one another........hmmm the DORI TIE mission wasss sososo sutipie...........wowowywy this ff is going on gr888......thay have fainnally fallen in lve but tooo ziddi to accpet.......wowowo,.............
Luv,
Sups...........

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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
ooo... kitne time baad padh rahi hu yeh story...
wonderful...
YuNa as a mature couple is something very different and the way you put it makes it worth reading!!!
awesome work darling...
(and plz approve my buddy request... whever i approve you it IF disapproves it... idiot!!!)
keep me posted!

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