YuNa FF ~ Yeh Pyaar Toh Hai ~ Part 8 Pg.10

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Yuna FF - Yeh Pyaar Toh Hai

Yuvraj - a brillant doctor who loves his family and cud go to any extent to keep them happy. He does not believe in love and hates every girl besides his mom and sister.

Naina - a simple girl who dreams about her raj kumar everyday waiting for the day he will come in his white horse and take her away. All she believes in is love but she has no clue wht's in store for her.

*•* NOTE*•* the rest of the charaters will be introduced later in the story
Legend Key= the star * is the start of wht they are thinking and another at the end of the thought *

This is my first FF so plz if anyone has suggestions please let me know. I do not know how to write in Hindi I can speak it but I don't know how to spell so I'll try my best but likely it is gonna be all in English.
This is purely fan- made I do not know wht the rules are so if some one can tell me plz thanks

Y= yuvraj
N= naina
T= tamana



T: shaadi mubarak ho naina
N: thank you she said sadly * sab mujhe shaadi ka mubarak kehere hai and mein yeh nahi janti kai mera pati kyon hoga. Mera sapna ka kya hoga baghwan.

All of a sudden naina heard someone yell.

N: kya huwa
T: barat ageeya

Tamana took naina downstairs to do the garland exchange. While there naina tried to look at hus face but she cud only get a glimpse of him. After thata ceremony they both sat in the mandap. They took there saat pheres and sat down again. The dulhah put the tye manglasutra on naina and sindoor. At tht moment naine thought her dream will never come true.

N: * ab sirf baghwan janta hai kai mein khush hogi yeh nahi is duffer se*

Now naina and her pati went and took the blessing of the elders. Soon it was time for her to leave. She was crying not only because she was leaving her family but because she wud never meet her rajkumar.

As soo. As she reached her new home the ceremonys of a new bahu coming into the house started. After everything happened naina was about to go to her pati's room when she was stopped.

YS - bhaiya bhabi ko kamra uthkar lehna hai
YM - yuvraj beta tumaru behan nah kaha toh karo

Yuvraj lifted naina up. While being lifted up naiane cud finally see his face.

N: * wow yeh toh bohat handsome hai kya muscles hai unka*

Being set down on the bed she came back to her sense. Yuvi walked to the door and locked it. He walked towards the bed. Naina felt scared now becuse he was a complete stranger to her. He bent down close to her about to touch her, she closed her eyes and ten seconds later she opened them. He was walking towards the bathroom with a towel and his night clothes. He shut the door.

N: wow what a room, very nice.

She saw the bed decorated with flowers. Tye door to the bathroom opened. There he was with a black tank top with pants. He threw his salwar on the chair next to the dresser. Hegrabbed a pillow from the bed and threw it on the couch. He was about to lay down when all of a sudden.

N: what are u doing? Why are you sleeping on the couch?
Y: tumse matlab? He said with anger
N: patni hoon tera hak hai mera jaana kahliya
Y: well patniji for ur info i dont even know u, maine tumse pyaar bi nahi karta, i hate women
N: meine kab kaha kai mein tumse pyaar karti hoon. And why do u hate women do u hate women so much
Y: i hate them because they are self-centered they always think aboutthem selves and never somebody else. Pyaar karta hai toh sirf paise kahliya. Kabhi sacha pyaar kar hi nahi sakti.
N: matlab?
Y: women are...

Before he cud finish naina slapped him

N: sharam nahi aata. Tumara ek maa or ek behan hai kuch toh sharam kar

Hearing tht yuvi's blood started to boil he felt hi cheek and went towards naina and trapped her against a wall. He was so close tht naina cud fiil his breath.

Y: mera ma or behan ki barhe kuch bi math kehna

Yuvi inched closer and closer to naina. She started to cry. He hit the wall hard with his hand and turned towards the couch. Naina slid down to the ground and cried. She cudnt believe that she got married to a man like tht.

Y: aur ha pyaar to ek stupid cheez hai sirf dard dehta hai mein koi pyaar vyar mein believ nahi karta.

He hit the light switches and went to sleep. All he cud hear was naina crying as nite slowly past away.

There was a knock on door. Naina got up at the sound sh was still against the wall in the floor. She looked around everything was the way it was last nite she got up.

N: ab kya karo maa hoga toh kya karogi mein *ill have to wake up yuvraj*
N: yuvraj utho

She saide shaking him, poking him. Someone was still knocking on the door

Y: hmmm leave me alone.

Naina went to the bed and messed up the sheets looking like they were together last nite.

N: yuvray utho darwasa paar koi hai
Y: leave me alone

Naina walked up ti the door she didnt know who it was but she didjt know wht tht person wud say whem they saw yuvi on the couch. She turned the nob slowly giving time for yuraj to wake up but he didnt she opened the door all the way. All of sudden she yuvraj's mom at the door in a state of shock.

Thts it for right now i will continue if people say it sounds gud and if it doesnt thanks for takjng the time to read
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One more YuNa FF.....yippie..!!!!
That was really good.....do continue.
Btw, what's their profession here..??
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hey nice part.....do continue soon......n do pm me wen upd...
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very nice,plz continue soon and plz include me in ur pm list.
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awesome part plz pme me wen u updt!!!tnx
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YM: beta tumne abhi taak shower nahi kiya

Naina turned around to see yuvraj walking towards the bathroom with a towel around his neck. Naina sighed with relief.

N: * thank god voh uthgaiya *

YM: beta get ready and come downstairs ajaa tumare pehle din hai is ghar mein to tumhe puja karna hai teek hai
N: ha maa mein athi hoon

Yuvraj's mom goes downstairs and naina closes the door to find yuvraj right there.

N: yu yu yuvraj m meine
Y: tune mujhe utthaya kyun nai ( with anger)
N: m meine kiya lekhne
Y: lekhne kya? ( hitting the door hard )
N: lekhne lekhne you didnt wake up i tried but u didnt
Y: is bar hume bach gaaye kyunki mein uttgaya lekhne aglibaar before careful

Yuvraj left the room and left naina there shocked.

N: i tried to wake him up but its his fault he didnt wake god i hate him bohat nafatra kartha hoon ise

Naina went to the bathroom to get ready and went downstairs

N: namaste papa namste mama
YM & YD: jeete ro
YM: naashta tayare hai beto

Naina sat down next to yuvi who was waiting for the food. Everyone was seated yuvraj ki behan roshni uska mama aur papa and uske dadi. The servant came and served everyone paratha. Yuviraj was about to start eating when....

R ( Roshni ): mama meine suna hai ki jab koi shaadi karte hai to ek dosara ko kiletha hai.
YM: ha meine toh yahi to suna hai aur jab meri shaadi hui toh meine bhi kiya tha
R: toh chalo bhai bhabi ko kelho aur bhabi tum bhai ko
Y: lekhne ma
YM: lekhne vekhne kuch nahi

Yuvraj and Naina looked at each other. Yuvraj took a small piece of paratha and was reaching towards Naina he stopped when he saw Naina's head bend down. She looked up again and leaned forward and took a bite of the paratha. Yuvraj put his hand down and Naina took a piece of paratha and slowly brought it to his mouth he took a bite and by accidently bute her finger. She felt a sting on her finger.

Y: sorry
N: its ok

Naina looked at her finger and then back at yuvraj they had a eye-lock session. Naina had this weird feeling her but she didnt know what it was, she gave a little smile.

R: uhh hmm

Yuvraj and Naina broke out of the eye-lock session and looked towards roshni.

Y: kya hua
R: kuch nahi
Y: teek hai mein sanjeevhni jao rah hua, ill be late so dont wait for me.
YM: teek hai beta tum jao
YM to N: ja kar yuvraj ka lunch lakar ana
N: ji ma

Naina goes to the kitchen to get his lunch and comes back to give it to him.

N: bye

Yuvraj leaves without saying bye

N: *uska problem kya hai*

Naina goes back to the dining table where everyone is still eating she sits down to eat.

N: kya mein Tamana meri dost ki ghar ja satha hoon kam ki badh
M: hai tum toh abhi bi ja sathi ho
N: teek ma

Afte eating breakfast she goes to her room to unpack her stuff. After doing she goes downstairs to tell ma tht she is going

N: ma mein ja raha hu
M: teek hai sambal ka jana
N: teek hai ma bye

Naina leaves. It takes her 30 mins to get to tamana's house.

T: koi darwasa peh hai, mein dekhti hoon

Tamana is shock to see Naina and runs to hug her

N: hi
T: hi tum kaise ho
N: mein bilkul teek hu tum batho
T: mein toh tip top hoon

Both Tamana and Naina go to Tamana's room to talk

T: toh batho jiju kaise hai
N: teek hai…… i guess
T: what do you mean you guess
N: voh is shaadi se khush nai hai
T: kyun
N: kyun ki uska ma or bauji na force ki. Voh lardkiyan se bohat nafatra hai

Tamana after hearing that is shocked

T: toh tum kya karogi
N: i dont know but i hate him
T: kyun
N: kyun voh mujse nafatra karta hai, choro koi aur bath karta hai

Naina and Tamana sit there and talk for while. Naina leaves when she arrives home yuviraj is still not home

YM: tu aghaya
N: ha ma
YM: chal dinner kehliya bet ja

Naina soon eats dinner goes to her room and into the bathroom to change.
She comes out to see the window open. It was very windy she tries to close it but the force of the wind is too great. She keeps trying, when all of sudden she feels somebodys hands rubbinv against hers going towards the window. She turns around to see yuvraj. He helps her close the door, once shut his hands were still on the door trapping her. She looked up at him and tried to get out but he wudnt move. She pushed his hands away and walked towards the bed and started to read a magazine. Yuvi looked at her and went to the bathroom to change. She was reading when the lights went out.

N: YUVRAJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Thts it for today

Hey guys u know how very couple has a song like armaan and ridhima is asmani rang ho and dill mill gayye well i need one for this couple im gonna chose the best suggestion i think wud go with them and there songs i will use as song sequences
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N: YUVRAJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJ
N: Yuvraj kaha ho tum
N: Yuvraj mujhe bohat dar laghra hai

Naina hears a door open.

N: AHHHHHHHHHH
Y: Shut Up Naina sirf mein hoon

After hearing Yuvraj's voice she runs towards him and hugs. She hugs him, shaking because she is scared.

N: Yuvraj mujhe bihat dar laghara hai lights ko kya hua
Y: mein dekthi ho tum yahan beto

Yuvraj leads Naina to the bed seating her down

N: Please maat jaana mujhe bohat dar laghara hai please

She said grabbing his hand so he couldnt leave. Yuvraj looked down at her hand that was on hers. She slowy took her hands down

Y: teek hai chalo meri saath

Naina grabs Yuvraj's hand while he takes her downstairs and outside.

Y: yahi roko mein light on karke athi hoon
N: lekhen

Yuvraj takes out a lighter and turns it on. She didnt notice how close she was to him. They were inches apart Yuvraj turned and went to towards the light box. Naina could still see him because if the light.

[Hulcul Hui Zara Shor Hua ?Dil Chor Hua Teri Aor Hua]2
[Esi Chale Jab Hawa, ?Ishq Hua Hi Hua ]2

Naina stood there looking at Yuvraj trying to fix the light. The wind started to blow his hair a little.

[Ishq hua haaye, Ishq haaayyyyyyyyeeeeeeeiiiiiinnnnn]

N:* wih kitna cute hai dil karta hai ka mein uska ek bara sa hug dai du*

All of sudden the lights turned on. She broke out of her trance.

N: kya hua
Y: lights on hogaya hai
N: oh
Y: chalo uppar chalte aur so jao
N: teek ka

Naina followed Yuvraj to their room.

N: * what was a i thinking, i want to hug him. Naina whats wrong with you, why are u thinking of him stop remember what he said to you.*

Naina lied on her bed thinking about what happened tonight. And soon fell asleep.

Next morning Naina woke up early to make sure they dont get in trouble she went downstairs.

Yuvraj woke up later and heard something lovely he thought it was his mom he goes downstairs to see Naina in the mandir

N: Om jai Jagdish hare
Swmi jai Jagdish hare
Bhakt jano ke sankat
Ds jano ke sankat
Ksha men door kare
Om jai Jagdish hare

Yuvraj comes downstairs. Naina biws her head diwn and turns she sees Yuvraj there. He takes arti and Naina gives him ladoo as prasad she goes to the rest of the family. Yuvraj stands there surprised that Naina knew this stuff.

The family eats breakfast as the day before Naina goes to the kitchen to get Yuvraj's lunch. Naina goes to Yuvraj to give him his lunch

N: yelo tumara lunch

Yuvraj takes it.

N: bye

Once again Yuvrajs turns to go without saying bye. He turns back as Naina starts walking towards the kitchen.

Y: Naina

Naina stops and turns around.

N: kuch bhol gahi
Y: nai mujhe tumse kuch kehna tha
N: kya
Y: tum bohat achi ghati ho

Naina smiles

N: thank you

Yuvraj turns and walks out the door. Naina starts to walk towards the kitchen again and smiles. Naina is in her room cleaning when there is a knock on the door.

N: maa undar aao na
YM: beta mein tumhe batane aya ka ajaa raat ek party hai tumara aur yuvraj kehliya
N: teek ma
YM: aur ha Yuvraj ko bathana
N: teek ma

Yuvraj's mom leaves. Naina takes the phone and calles Yuvraj

Y:hello dr. Yuvraj here
N: * wow he sounds so professional* uh mein hoon Naina
Y: oh kya hai phone kyun kiya
N: maa na kaha hai isliye
Y: sab teek ha na
N: ha meine phone kiya kyunki aja raat humara liya maa aur papa na ek party raka
Y: teek ka aur kuch
N: nai

Yuvraj hangs up before Naina could say bye.

N: bye toh bhol sakthi

Naina finished cleaning her room and decided to decide what she was gonna wear that night. She took out the five best ones.

N: kyonsa pehnu green, red, purple, white, yah blue

Naina chose one and set it down and picked out her jewelry.

The party was about to start and Yuvraj was still not there. Naina decided to call Yuvraj to find out where he was.

Y: hello
N: kaha ho tum
Y tumse kya
N: woh....um.... Party shuru hone wale hai isliye phone kiya
Y: ok im coming

Naina went to the kitchen to help wirh any last mintue things. Yuvraj came home and went upstairs to get ready. After he got ready he came downstairs Naina didnt see him. She goes upstairs to get ready.

Guest are coming in.

Girl: wow Yuvraj you look hot in that
Y: thank you
Girl2: you look great
Y: thank you

Yuvraj was talking with his friends.

Guy: wowwwwwwwwww

Yuvraj turns around to see…

Thts it for today thanks for reading plz leave ur comments and i need song suggestions please romantic ones. Thanks again.
Edited by pink95 - 15 years ago

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