YuNa FF ~ Yeh Pyaar Toh Hai ~ Part 8 Pg.10 - Page 7

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Originally posted by: Chandni-

Yuna FF - Yeh Pyaar Toh Hai

Yuvraj - a brillant doctor who loves his family and cud go to any extent to keep them happy. He does not believe in love and hates every girl besides his mom and sister.

Naina - a simple girl who dreams about her raj kumar everyday waiting for the day he will come in his white horse and take her away. All she believes in is love but she has no clue wht's in store for her.

*•* NOTE*•* the rest of the charaters will be introduced later in the story
Legend Key= the star * is the start of wht they are thinking and another at the end of the thought *

This is my first FF so plz if anyone has suggestions please let me know. I do not know how to write in Hindi I can speak it but I don't know how to spell so I'll try my best but likely it is gonna be all in English.
This is purely fan- made I do not know wht the rules are so if some one can tell me plz thanks

Y= yuvraj
N= naina
T= tamana



T: shaadi mubarak ho naina
N: thank you she said sadly * sab mujhe shaadi ka mubarak kehere hai and mein yeh nahi janti kai mera pati kyon hoga. Mera sapna ka kya hoga baghwan.

All of a sudden naina heard someone yell.

N: kya huwa
T: barat ageeya

Tamana took naina downstairs to do the garland exchange. While there naina tried to look at hus face but she cud only get a glimpse of him. After thata ceremony they both sat in the mandap. They took there saat pheres and sat down again. The dulhah put the tye manglasutra on naina and sindoor. At tht moment naine thought her dream will never come true.

N: * ab sirf baghwan janta hai kai mein khush hogi yeh nahi is duffer se*

Now naina and her pati went and took the blessing of the elders. Soon it was time for her to leave. She was crying not only because she was leaving her family but because she wud never meet her rajkumar.

As soo. As she reached her new home the ceremonys of a new bahu coming into the house started. After everything happened naina was about to go to her pati's room when she was stopped.

YS - bhaiya bhabi ko kamra uthkar lehna hai
YM - yuvraj beta tumaru behan nah kaha toh karo

Yuvraj lifted naina up. While being lifted up naiane cud finally see his face.

N: * wow yeh toh bohat handsome hai kya muscles hai unka*

Being set down on the bed she came back to her sense. Yuvi walked to the door and locked it. He walked towards the bed. Naina felt scared now becuse he was a complete stranger to her. He bent down close to her about to touch her, she closed her eyes and ten seconds later she opened them. He was walking towards the bathroom with a towel and his night clothes. He shut the door.

N: wow what a room, very nice.

She saw the bed decorated with flowers. Tye door to the bathroom opened. There he was with a black tank top with pants. He threw his salwar on the chair next to the dresser. Hegrabbed a pillow from the bed and threw it on the couch. He was about to lay down when all of a sudden.

N: what are u doing? Why are you sleeping on the couch?
Y: tumse matlab? He said with anger
N: patni hoon tera hak hai mera jaana kahliya
Y: well patniji for ur info i dont even know u, maine tumse pyaar bi nahi karta, i hate women
N: meine kab kaha kai mein tumse pyaar karti hoon. And why do u hate women do u hate women so much
Y: i hate them because they are self-centered they always think aboutthem selves and never somebody else. Pyaar karta hai toh sirf paise kahliya. Kabhi sacha pyaar kar hi nahi sakti.
N: matlab?
Y: women are...

Before he cud finish naina slapped him

N: sharam nahi aata. Tumara ek maa or ek behan hai kuch toh sharam kar

Hearing tht yuvi's blood started to boil he felt hi cheek and went towards naina and trapped her against a wall. He was so close tht naina cud fiil his breath.

Y: mera ma or behan ki barhe kuch bi math kehna

Yuvi inched closer and closer to naina. She started to cry. He hit the wall hard with his hand and turned towards the couch. Naina slid down to the ground and cried. She cudnt believe that she got married to a man like tht.

Y: aur ha pyaar to ek stupid cheez hai sirf dard dehta hai mein koi pyaar vyar mein believ nahi karta.

He hit the light switches and went to sleep. All he cud hear was naina crying as nite slowly past away.

There was a knock on door. Naina got up at the sound sh was still against the wall in the floor. She looked around everything was the way it was last nite she got up.

N: ab kya karo maa hoga toh kya karogi mein *ill have to wake up yuvraj*
N: yuvraj utho

She saide shaking him, poking him. Someone was still knocking on the door

Y: hmmm leave me alone.

Naina went to the bed and messed up the sheets looking like they were together last nite.

N: yuvray utho darwasa paar koi hai
Y: leave me alone

Naina walked up ti the door she didnt know who it was but she didjt know wht tht person wud say whem they saw yuvi on the couch. She turned the nob slowly giving time for yuraj to wake up but he didnt she opened the door all the way. All of sudden she yuvraj's mom at the door in a state of shock.

Thts it for right now i will continue if people say it sounds gud and if it doesnt thanks for takjng the time to read

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Hey guys im back with another part, sorry i never updated, Its just i dont like the way its turning out and that too cuz naina is not in the anymore. So it seems worthless to carry on and i have no inspiration to continue. But the request of you guys i am. Sorry i wont be PMing because i cant remeber whom im supposed to PM so please check when i update. Thank You.



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N: Kya Kaha tune, You want to spend quality time with me. *i coudln't believe what i was hearing*
Y: yes, do, naina we just became friends, i barely know you, please give me the chance.
N: But Yuvraj, you cud have just told me you didnt have to lie to me, I hate liers.
Naina started to walk away from Yuvraj on higway. She couldn't believe that he would lie to her.
Y; Naina please listen to me, come on Naina where r you going. He said runnign behind her
N: Yuvraj leave me alone, go to your party, I'll catch a taxi back home, I dont want to go anywher with you.
As Naina started walking down the hill. There were Three guys coming her way.
Y: Fine im going byeWith that he left
Naina kept walking down the hill, she didnt notice the guys, until they whistled at her. Naina looked up and saw them walking faster. She turned around and started walking up the hill faster. The guys started to run and so did Naina.
N: Yuvi, Yuvi, Yuvi Bachooooooooooooooooooooo
She kept running in hope that Yuvraj will still be on top of the hill. But when she reached there, he wasnt there. As she keot running she rememeber the last thing he said. "Fine im going bye". Naina turned around to see if the guys were still following her but thy disappeared. she stopped to catch her breath.
Since Yuvraj had left, Naina decided to call him and tell him to pick her up. Naina dialed Yuvraj number
N: Helo Yuvraj
Y: Yeah what do you want
N: Where did u go?
Y: I left you told me to
N: PLease come back and pick me up.
Y: No
N: Please
Y: No
Yuvraj hung up. Naina was shocked
N: How can he hang up on me
Naina started walking, looking for a taxi. when she got a call.
N: Hello
Y: Where r u, im coming to pick you up
N: No i dont need you now, when i asked u, u hung up on me so no
Y: Naina just tell me where you at
N: No i wo...mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm..bachoo..........yuv.......bach......
Y: Naina Kaha ho tum, NAINAThe phone was cut
N: Bacho............mmmmmmmmmmmm...........Yuv...............


Well here is part 8 hope you enjoyed it and sorry for the delay. If u guys want PMs and are not on my PM list please let me know so i can add u. Thank you and once again sorry

These two are so stubborn.....lolz.....even at the time of crisis they can't keep away from arguing.....this was interesting......finally hope they would stop giving attitude and Yuvi would save Naina.....lolz....do continue soon!

attiudness packed with stubornesss at HILL!!!!!