YuNa FF ~ Yeh Pyaar Toh Hai ~ Part 8 Pg.10 - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
#21

hey....d part was awesome....waitin for d next part....do updt. soon....

wid luv

radhika

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Posted: 15 years ago
#22
nice update :)
yay they will be friends from now on!
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
Waiting eagerly for the next part, please continue soon!

Love Vibs x
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24
Part 5

The party continued as yuvi and naina became close friends.

R: ladies and gentlemen welcome to this fantastic party is everyone having fun.
All: yeahhh
R: well thats good i would like to congradulate the new couple and welcome them on to the dance floor.

Everyone clapped. ( naina was shaking her and then she saw yuvi bend down and put hus hand)

N: yuvi?
Y: may i
( naina started to blush as she took hold of his hand)
Yuvi took Naina to the center of the floor. He placed his on her waist as she placed her hands around his neck.
The lights dimed.

mere haath mein tera haath ho saari jannatein mere saath ho - 2
tu jo paas ho phir kya yeh jahaan tere pyar mein ho jaaun fanaa
mere haath mein tera haath ho saari jannatein mere saath ho
tu jo paas ho phir kya yeh jahaan tere pyar mein ho jaaun fanaa
mere haath mein tera haath ho saari jannatein mere saath ho

( yuvi spinned her out and pulled her closer to him)
Naina could feel his breath on her lips and she started to melt * kya ho raha hai mujko, why cant i stand still when he is so close to me*

tere dil mein meri saanson ko panaa mil jaaye
tere ishq mein meri jaan fanaa ho jaaye
jitne paas hain khushbu saans ke
jitne paas hothon ke sargam

(yuvi dipped her and leaned down) * whats happening to me why cant i stay away from her*

jaise saath hain karvat yaad ke
jaise saath baahon ke sangam
jitne paas paas khwaabon ke nazar
utni paas tu rehna hamsafar
tu jo paas ho phir kya yeh jahaan
tere pyar mein ho jaaun fanaa
mere haath mein tera haath ho saari jannatein mere saath ho

rone de aaj hamko do aankhen sujaane de
baahon mein lene de aur khud ko bheeg jaane de
hain jo seene mein qaid dariya woh choot jaayega
hain itna dard ke tera daaman bheeg jaayega

jitne paas paas dhadkan ke hain raaz
jitne paas bundon ke baadal
jaise ?sahaq? sa chanda ke hain raat
jitne paas nainon ke kaajal
jitne paas paas saagar ke lehar
utne paas tu rehna hamsafar
tu jo paas ho phir kya yeh jahaan
tere pyar mein ho jaaun fanaa
mere haath mein tera haath ho saari jannatein mere saath ho

(yuvi moved nainas hair from her neckand leaned in)

adhoori saans thi dhadkan adhoori thi adhooren ham
magar ab chaand poora hain falak pe aur ab pooren hain ham

The lights turned on bright and everyone started clapping. (yuvi pulled away from naina) naina was shocked at wht was about to happen

Y: * why couldnt i stop myself* he looked at naina and she looked at him and they both walked away from each other.

The party went well, but the rest of the party naina kept her distance from yuvi. YM started to notice this.

YM: beti whats wrong"
N: i am feeling kind of tired
YM: ok why dont you go upstairs
Y: ma kya hua
YM: kuch nahi, naina is tired.
Y: naina why dont you go upstairs.
N: teek hai (naina headed upstairs as the party sstarted to die down.

Yuvraj came upstairs and walked into there room to find naina reading.

Y: i thought you were sleeping
N: i couldnt fall asleep so i decided to read.
Y: oh ok ill go and change
N: ok

Ten minutes later yuvraj came out and headed towards the couch to fix his bed.

N: yuvraj
Y: mmm
N: umm....umm hum dost hai na
Y: ha kyun?
N: toh..um..
Y: toh kya
N: umm tum yaha bed par so sakthi ho
Y: nahi
N: k..kyun
Y: kyunki tum tara nahi ho jab ho tab
N: umm..um
Y: goodnight
N: good night

YuvrAj went to bed and so did naina.

N: *kitna sweet hai, its like He can read my mind.
Y: *i did the right thing but early why couldnt i stop myself when we were dancing, i think it was just the song"

The night passed on as they thought about what happened that night and slowly slowy they fell asleep.

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The next morning everyone was pretty quite same routine they do arti eat breakfast and yuvraj goes for work but something was different.

Yuvraj was about to leave for work.

N: ek mintue tumara lunch
Y: oh ha thank you
N: umm kya hum umm can we go somewhere after you get back from work.
Y: yeah sure but for what
N: i want to get to know you so we can become good friends.
Y: ok ill call you when i leave work be ready.
N: teek hai bye

Yuvraj left for work and naina did her work she helped in the kitchen and other things.

Ring ring ring ring

N: hello
Y: yeah naina i just left, be ready ok
N: ok bye
Y: bye

Naina waited for an hour, he still hadnt came.

Ring ring ring ring

Y: please leave a message after the beep. BEEP
N: hello yuvraj kaha ho tum, please mujhe phone kar.

Naina hung up, she had been waiting for a total of 3 hours and yet he hadnt come all of a sudden....

Ring ring ring ring

N: *it must be yuvraj*
N: hello yuvraj kaha ho tum.
"is this yuvraj's wife"
N: yes may i ask who this.
"im calling from sanjeevni hospital"
N: Is Yuvraj ok. ( she was worried she had never gotten a call from there.
"please come here as soon as possible we have to do surgery on him"
N: WHATTTTTTTT (naina couldnt believe what she had heard she dropped the phone and was shocked)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25
pehle toh u were gayab wid ur update n ur bak wid a bang n bada jhtaka ............lol
lookin 4rwrd plzzzzzzzzzz do a PM nice part:)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26
oo a update! fianllyyyy lol
nice one but you better update soon
this time cause i dont like cliffhangers
hehe
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27
finally an update...!!
n wid d update a jhatka...??!!
surgery on yuvi...yahan bhi suspense....!!
omg in every ff deir is a suspense wich has to be revealed...!!
nyways d part was grt...!!
do cont soon...!! n updt soon...!!
wid loads of luv
radhika
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
Hi,
Lovely and nice ff.
Keep it up.
take care
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
Finally you have updated..........lolz.......nice part......they have become friends and now also have started to develop some feelings for each other......great.......and a shock too.......superb......continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
yay a big thank you for listening to me and updating.......just to let u knw that i am a sucker for YuNa ff therefore i couldnt stop myself and asked u..............

great update..............y did the lights have t come on for.......we could have had a small kiss on the neck 😍

y is he being operated....hold on is it a prank.......is it serious..oh no more cliff hangers........plese kill the suspense and update quickly again plese!!!

once again a big thank you......and do update soon!!!

cheers for the PM

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