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Posted: 15 years ago
#11
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awwwesome
update next prt sooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
thanxxxxxxxxxx 4 d pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12
Maria di love this OS a lot
thanks for this cute OS
really love Samrat helping Mayur's story
do continue part 2 soon
love you thanks again.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#13
Maria di
Awsome you started your own gallery of OS's
I am so happy
and this OS is superb yaar
want to read the next part so badly
I can't wait for tomorrow
and Sana happy b-day dear!
-Lina-
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14
awesome update dear
really luved it
it was are ally nice part
post next part soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#15
Pechan (part 2)
nupur is getting bored in her new house as she got nothing to do after decorating her house and lying in her room . on the other side mayank is lying in his room holding a book downward and thinking what happend to him the man dieing 4 book is nt interested in it infact he is interested in a girl a naukarani but she is human to kiya hua agar who waisi nahi jaisay mainay socha tha 😉
samrat enters nupur house with a lady and the lady si mayank mom as she is happy to enter the angel house
(flashback):
samrat goes into mayank room and saw him holding a book but thinking about some thing and he knows what he is thinking , i thought he is just attracked to a girl i mean nupur like a normal person is but he really is serious about nupur ,i thought nt to hurt nupur my she is my only cousin sis i loved her and i know how she will break down ifs she gets to know that some one breaks her hear bc of her cousin brother joke but its nothing like that , its all real and i will help mayank and nupur , may be they r made 4 each other but waiting 4 some one to make them united and that will be me the cool dude samrat , thinking all this samrat leaves mayank room and goes into his mom room and tells every thing and on the other hand he also tells nupur mom everything and they all are happy ready 4 the 2 i mean the real love birds meeting so he call mayank mom to nupur house as a excuse to welcome them
flash back ends😉
all are talking and nupur is sitting too and finally after too many talk she ask nupur to decorate her house (the real plan of mayur meeting)😉😉
and after many yes from other she says yes as samrat will help her too in that as he knows that best family ever .samrat takes her into mayank house and shows her the entire house but coming near mayank room he leaves by making an excuse of having water from teh kitchen and tell her to enter the room and have a look at the room , finally after 5 min she enter s the room and saw some one lying on the bed and that is the same guy that ringed her bell i mean her house bell and her heart too😆😆😆
as soon maynk realizes some one is in his room he turns around and says "tum yahan"
"who ......mein "says nupur as she gets nervous as samrat told this is mayank room his best friends
"mein mein kiya karhi hoon koi bakri (goat) ho kiya aur yahan kiya karahi ho"says maynk as he jumps from his bed and comes infront of nupur which makes her too nervous as she never in her life like she is standing infront of examiner 4 cheating😆
"mein ap ka ghar daiknay ayi hoon "says nupur catching her heart beat
"mera ghar kyun kal ka badla laina hia daiko who galti se hogaya tha jaan buj kar nahi kiya tah meinay aur khab dar jo meray ghar ki bell baji tumne "says mayank all in one breath
"oh hello kal tumne jo kiya mujay koi farq nahi parta diknay mein tik tak ho par akal se paidal ho tum bikul akray huay sand ki tarha ho "says nupur as she got her self defences flag too 😆😆😆
"kiya akra hua sand mein uar tum kiya jaru ki choki dar "says mayank ready to reply😃😃😃
"kiya meinay tum jaisa batameez insan a tak nahi daika ab to mera tumara ghar kabhi nahi decorate karun gi tumjaisay saru ko to mein na ..."says nupur in anger
"hold on tum yahan jaru pochna nahi karnay ayi ho "says mayank as he is getting confuse
"jaru pocha aur mein tumara dimag kharab hogaya hai lagta hai "says nupur
"kiya to tum naukarani nahi ho "says mayank
"naukrani kehany ki himat kaisi hui tumari mein interior decorater hoon
aur yeh ghar decorated karnay kay tumari mom kuch dair pehlay meary ghar ayi thi aur is liyay mein yahai ayi par abhi nahi karun tumjaisay idito ki wajah se "says nupur and leaves in anger
on teh other side samrat heard the noise and thinks loved bird aisay hotay hain kiya chalo ja kar daikaty hain kiya ho raha and he goes nears the room and nupur going leaving in anger having tears in her eyes samrat try to stop her but in vain and he thinks what happen here and wents inside the room and mayank is sitting inhis room holding his head and ask him what happen why was nupur crying and mayank told him all of it and samrat is now nagry on mayank
"kiya tera dimag kharab ho gaya tha tunay nupur ko naukarani samaja ,tu na "says samrat
"nupur us ka naam nupur hai tujay kaisay pata chala "says mayank
"who meri cousin hai idiot aur jab meinay daika tera pyar to mujay laga teri mada karni chaiyay to meinay nupur ko ghar decorated karnay kay excuse se yahan lay kar aya par mujay kiya pata tha tu apnay pyar par kulhari marany kay liyay khara hai great dude nw clebrate it ok i am going "says samrat who si too angry bc all his efforst is goen in vain bc nupur will kill him too nw if he knows the truth
"kiya yeh sab tuney kiya meray liyay "says mayank 😳
"nahi meray bhoot kay liyay idiot"says samrat
"i am sorry samrat i am soory nupur meinay usay hurt kiyay but but i am love her mujay pyar ho gaya hai usse and mein kiya kiya uskay sath uskiya samja "says mayank falling on his knees and tears rollong on his cheeks seeing this samrat comes near him and hug him and says ab ik hi rasta hai aur who yeh hai nupur ko sab sach bata dain aur i know she will be raedy 4 teh marriage but u will nt tell him the truth i will bc i know is waqt who tumari nahi sunay gi who gussay mein sirf meri hi baat sunti hai ok . and mayank says yes to samrat as he didnt want to make any thing wrong 4 having his love in his life
samrat goes from there and went into nupur house and know that she is in her room and cryong badly , he goes there and makes her sit and hugs her and tell her everything in the few days happen to mayank and she understand everything bc some where she loved her too other a person cannt cry 4 some one whom we dont care 4 . the truth was nupur bhuhan was laso in love with mayank sharma but she needed some time to listen to her heart and samrat knew this andhe left from and every one is quiet in both houses after two days samrat engagment function is started and everyone is happy and samrat is sitting one the stage with his love gunjun and looking very happy . nupur comes and hugs them both and congrates and start talking to her friends diya standing behing sammy chair and then mayank comes in a black suit and looking too handsome and nupur is looking at him continoulsy and mayank comes on teh stage and congrates the couple and looks nupur is standing behing samrat chair weraing red sari looking too cute and beautiful like a angel and then samrat gives him the signal of telling the love truth to her and he goes behind there and stand next to nupur and they r both quiet and samrat is getting irritaed by their silence and tell mayankto start the talk again and and finally mayank gathers courage and says "i am sorry nupur "
"its ok mayank "says nupur and leaves from there and mayank gets sad think she has not forgave him yet and then samrat goes to him and sak him to go behing her and mayank think he should try again and goes behind nupur . he enters nupur house and finally afetr many min search he saw nupur standing in the terrace lookibg at the moon he goes near her and looks at nupur who is staring at the moon like a kids her eyse full of joy and happiness .he keep looking at her like he is teh only girl that he is waiting 4 these years , hw veautiful she is looking in a saree her haors are blowing in air and he comes near her and moves the hairs coming infront of face and nupur looks in him is his eyes and just keep looking , after 2 min she lokks down
"meinay tumhay sorry kahan tha aut ab bhi kehta hoon i am sorry "says mayank
" aue mein bhi kaha tha its ok aur ab bhi kehti hoon its ok "says nupur and turns around but mayank hold her wrist and says "phir nazar kytun chura rahi ho "
"mein kyun nazar choraun gi tum se aisa to kuch nahi "says nupur
"acha to phir kaisa hai "says mayank as he know her condtion and her love in her eyes which makes her look down
"aisa wasa kuch nahi hai muajy ana hai pa mera hath chorain "says nupur struggloing to raelise her hand and mayank finaly relize her hand and nupur looks into his eyes why he left it thats the girl trick in love always
mayank understand why is looking at him like this , he put a hand in his pocket and get a ring out in his hand and bend down on his knees and says ""
"i love u nupur kiya tum meri bano gi hamesha kay liyay "says mayank
nupur is surpriesd to see a man doing this 4 her and she gets too happy a, gets soem tears in her eyes and sh etoo gets on her knees to get on mayank level
"meri tumari banun gi sirf ik shart par "says nupur
"kiya "says amaynk as he didnt expected this
"tum hamesha aisa hi mujay pyar karoge"says nupur and mayank smiles at her weet condtion and says yes and then nupur hugs her tighly as never to let him go and mayank hugs her too he as find he lady love and and he says "i love u nupur forever"
"i love u too mayank forever and foreever "
samrat is watching all this from the behind the doora and smiles and looks at the sky and thinks every one finds the true love and its true friends there is some made 4 u some wherein the world u just have to wait 4 a right signal from god and u have to trust his decision bc he never get any
thing wrong 4 us be he too loves us like we do😊
this is it friends hope u all like it and do leave ur comment and criticsam too , hope u like ur gift sana i tried my best and here is it u sweeti
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16
yeah i the first one to post my comment
dear ur tooo fast
it was an awesome update
just loved when mayank sayas kya tum naukarani nahi ho
nd i can imagine the reaction
it was just awesome
post the next part soon
thanks for the pm

mariam
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Posted: 15 years ago
#17
Awwwwwsome update dear
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
loved it
keep writing
luv
Nidzy
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Posted: 15 years ago
#18
awesome yaar!

i loved mayank's dialouges.......

i loved how it unfolded........

loved the story.........

thanks for the pm........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#19
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 fantastic update maria..hmm..
itz a FUNtastic ud jaan............keep rocking
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20
It was shoooooooooo shweeeeeeeeeeeeeeet part
Loved it
I got scared pata nahi kya shart hai thank god Shweet shart thi
Loved it

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