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Posted: 15 years ago
heyyyy pari
amaing os yaar
really loved it to the core
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awwww...that was the best os......2 gud...........keep writing........
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Posted: 15 years ago
pari
thats was awesoem os
i love all the os you write
lovley one
maynk and nups talk
and their friendly way
just awesome
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Posted: 15 years ago
write more Os pari....
me waiting to read more!
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyy guys this is another os for you all...... hopr you will lyk it

and plz do comment and press the lyk tab....

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love is the ultimate strength,,,


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mayank ran towards the ward no 73... yes in hospital,,,,,,,, he rushed
to the ward................

opened the door..... tears were already forming in his eyes....... and
he saw her,,,,,,,,,,,,, his nupur,,,,,,,, in that condition he at once
broke down,,,,,

all covered with vires..... she was on ventilator........ taking her
last breaths for sure........

his eyes showed his pain for nupur... his luv for nupur,.,,,

how cud she leave her lyk that...... he wont allow her to go.........

his heart was crying seeing her lyk that,,,,,,,,,,,

wen all these thots were roamning in jis brain nupur's mom broke the
silent......

nm: she has been permitted by the court for euthanasia.........

mayank looked at her in disbelief..........

wat did she just say,,,,,, euthanasia???? means death,,,,,,, death
with the patients permission,.......... nooo................

but he was not in a condition to speak......... he was shattered
seeing nupur's condition..............

wen he heard the word euthanasia, nupur's death his world broke for once......

but then he thot he wud make nupur change her mind........

nm: nupur wants you to make her die.. (she said sobbing) and so we are
leaving you guys alone coz i cant see my daughter dying and
....................... (she broke down and left..)

mayank was just standing there lyk a dumbstruck,,,,,,,,,

it cant happen,,,,, he and nupur are one................. one soul no
body not even god can depart them,,,,,,,,,

mayank's eyes widened seeing the blood lying over there..... buckets
of blood..............

he saw in how much pain nupur was...........

finally he came near her......held her hand.......tears were
continuously rolling down his and her eyes.....................

wen he noticed nupur wanna say sumthing...... but the frequency was so
low that he cud not hear......... he moved forward to hear her......

now his ear was very close to her lips.....

and she said, "mayank i love you"......... there was a breakage in her
words but..... mayank looked at her in a great passion.....

he cud not reply,...... he knew if he will speak a single word he will
break down.................

she continued.. " maynk i know ....i hav m..ade yo.u do th.e wo.rst
thing yo.u want in y.ur ly.k to do.,,,,,, but i .......... i ....
plz...... that... red,, tab,, press,, it...

m; no nupur......... i cant press that...... (he said with a hope ) i
love you,,,,,,,, i cant....... (he cried lyk hell)

n: mayank....... that will give me peace........... look wat my lyk
has bcum....... i cant move....... after sum days my eyesight will be
gone. then my speaking sense and then my hearing sense...... i cant
bear that....... and my every part of the body gives me pain and
nothing else........ each part is paining that much that i cant
describe,,,,,,,, (her eyes were dry as if all the tears were
evaporated)....... and i m speaking with a lot of pain,....... i take
every breath and it pains...... it hurts........ why do you want yur
nupur to get hurt.................... plz maynk plz................

m: par nupur,,,,,,, (he cried more, his eyes were completely red
now)......... why me?

and he knew nupur was in a great situation,,,,, she was in a great
pain....... her every cell of the body was ill and so everything in
her body was paining..... and slowly slowly her tissues will die and
she will die...........

n: mayank ,,,,,,,,,,,,,, mein , tadap.. tadap.. ke,, nhi,,, marna
cahti.... (her voice was breaking)

but lord knows mayank was right now in more pain then nupur..... he
sat on the floor on his knees ner nupur's head,,,,,,,,

n: plz..... i cant argue more.............. (she said in a naughty
smile) zindagi bhar bas tumse ladi hoon..... ab to ladte waqt bhi
saanse saath nahi de rhi,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, mayank plz.... for
the last tym,,,,,, that red tab,,,,,,,,,, plz...........

pain was there in her voice..............

mayank cried cried,,,,,,,,,,,, cried for himself that he cud do
nothing for his nupur, to save her, to bring her back...............
his guilt was making him cry............. he was crying on seeing
nupur in pain,..,

m: but,,,,,, (he tried to speak) you will die,,,,,,,,,,,,,, (tears
still flowing down)

n: i know....... (she closed her eyes for a moment.... then opened)
but i also know death wud be atleast better than this..............

mayank looked at her,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

n: plz...... maya..........

she cud not complete,......,,, doctor was right if she is going to
lose her voice soon and after her voice she wud lose her other
senses......

mayank looked at the red tab,,,,,,,'

m: i will do it nupur,,,,,,, do it for you,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

nupur tried smiling................

m: last wish,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

he asked while his expressions were showing his grief,,,,,,,,,,,,,

nupur cud not speak and cant move also....... how will she ask him?

m: i know,,,,,,,,,,,,,

mayank came forward........ on the top of her mouth,,,,,,,, a tear of
mayank fell on her cheek........ mayank moved towards her lips which
had already dried up.......... and kissed her........
passionately.............. but the fate was that she cud not
reply....... it was her badluck that the moment which she was waiting
for the whole lyf had cum but she cud not reply......... she lost her
control over her lips and tongue so she cant make them move..........
but mayank componsted that,,,,,,,,, gave her a heaenly kiss.......

finally he broke apart....... yes he broke apart not they,,,,,,,,,

he held her hands more tigtly..,,,,

mayank did want to lose her but on the same hand he did not want nupur
to suffer,,,,,,,, to suffer the pain she was going thru,,,,,,,,,

he looked at the red tab there,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

m: nupur...... hum ek hai......... aur chahe tum kitna bhi door jaane
ki koshish karo mein tumhaare saath saath hi chalunga............ i
love you too much to lose.............

finally tears came her eyes....... those dry eyes were filled with
tears now............... her vision was not clear now but she knew
that mayank is in more pain than she herself,,,,, and this mment will
be the toughest moment in his life.......... and she was sure pressing
the red tab will give her pain and then death but will give mayank
more pain..............

mayank looked at nupur for the last tym,....... and moved his hands
towards the tab,,,,,, held nupur's hands tightly...... as if holding
hands tightly wud stop nupur from going away.........

he once again looked at nupur...... her eyes were saying to be
quick..... she wants the called "mukti" soon............

mayank made himself ready for the moment.......... he moved his
fingers towards the tab and then.......

m: no................ (he moved his hands back).. i cant........

he hugged nupur,,,,, and did not leave the hug for the next few min....

m: i cant lose you..........

but then he thot..... wat lyf was she living......... a living dead
body...... no he cant do this to nupur,,,,,, she is on bed cant move
cant eat cant speak cant see and then cant hear too.............

"noo mayank" he told himself....... you cant be so selfish,,,,,,,

,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

after 2 hrs...

the doctors and nupur's relative finally came in the ward as mayank
did not cum out,,,,

they see that the red button was already pressed........ and there was
nupur's dead body lying there....

but soon they found out that there were two dead bodies......
one was of nupur and another of mayank...................
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the doctors say mayank died with a sudden severe heart attack..... but little did they know that his heart was already sold......... sold too nupur...... if his heart was with nupur then how cum if she dies he can live alive..................

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kisi mahaan insaan ne bahut sahi kaha hai...... agar kisi story ki happy endings nahi ho to wo endings nahi hai..... picture abhi baaki hai mere dost.....................

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we see mayur together............ happily ........ hands in hands.............

enjoying their moments at the most IN HEAVEN ...................
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I KNOW GUYS THIS WAS A REALLY SAD FF........ BUT IT JUST CAME TO MY MIND AND I WROTE IT......................

IF YOU DID NOT LYK IT CRITISISMS ARE ALWAYS WELCOMED,,,,,,,,,,,,,

LOVE

PARI,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Edited by pari.theprinces - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
dekho!

main first aa gayi!

wo bhi bina pm ke!

sorry i cant comment now!

i have tears in my eyes and i cant stop them!

i am a very sensitive girl....and i read this!

my heart is paining ans aching.......

and i am crying......

and i know what pain a person goes through when he has to face a situation like this! i can feel that!

i have no words to tell u if i loved it or not!

amazing story and a heart wrenching one!
😭

do write more!

love,
Mahak
Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey pari!!!!!!!!!

this os was wonder ful....................

it was so so......................... heavenly

hamesha pyaar ki jeet hi hoti hai

arre it was too good yaar

thod sad tha

but they were in heaven...................


oh par i just loved this os

i became so emotiona

that i almost started crying

i know how it feels to lose a loved one

kweep rocking

do rite more

but not sad ones pld

love pebo

ps: im first!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


mahi di

res is not counted😉
Edited by ..pebo.. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Pariiii!!!!!
why did u do thiss?????
it was soooooo sad!!!!
it made me cry!!!!
but srsly....twas veryyyyy well described!!!!
thanx 4 d pm... :)
Edited by A-N-S-H-I-K-A - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
It as sad but they are together in heaven
I literlyy felt some pain in my heart fdar
You are a fantastic ritter
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Posted: 15 years ago
😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Pari this is my condition after reading your OS

Very touching & heart breaking dear

I dont know how did you write it

I wud have cried buckets If I had written anything like this

I hate sad endings but you have written it very well 👏

keep writing more....happy ones dear sniff sniff....😭

Luv
Nidzt

😭
Edited by mayurarti - 15 years ago

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