pari's gallery of one shots 12th os pg 35 - Page 11

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Posted: 15 years ago
it was just so so so beautiful!!!
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey, Pari...

Fabulos OS for valentine, dear.

Loved it.
Tahnks for pM, dear. Keep writing.
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update. romantic also.
too good os.
do write more os.
Thanks for the pm dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago



you write really well...........
awesome os



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Posted: 15 years ago
hey pari

awesome os


loved your os to the core



i must have read it some 100 times by now


simply good

love pebo
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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyyy pari
Loved this os
Really nice dear
Thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago

Lovely OS Pari!

Do write more and thanks for the PM!
Love
Mna
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Posted: 15 years ago

heyy guys this is another os on mayur,,, hope you will lyk it,,,,,,,

"sangam tera"

tring tring....... mayank woke up in the morning,,,,, sat on his bed,,,,,,,, or we shud say huge bed,,,,, with pluffy blankets,,, he was shirt less and whit trousers,,, he searched for the mobile,,,,,, still half a sleep,,,,,,, wen he got the mobile,,,
m: who the hell is calling in this early morning,,
he again lied on the bed and recieved the call,,,,,
m: hello........ (still in sleep...... )
caller: hey mr. sadu,,,,,,, kese ho,,,,,,'
mayank jumped from the bed,,,,,,,
a big 1000 watt smile appeared,,,,,,,,, on his face,,,,,,,, (gosh he was looking handsome)
he was in a state of shock but was really happy,,,,,
m: nupur,,,,,,,,, (only this thing cud he say,,,,, he was not in a state of speaking)
n: oh i wanna see that dimples which are on yur face right now,,,,,,,
m: gosh i wanna meet you,,,,,,
n: open the door idiot,,,,,
m: yur on the door??? (he said running towards the door,,) r u serious??
n: yupp........
finally mayank reached the door,,,,,,,
he opened it,,,,,,,,,
and nupur was standing there....
mayank's pov
she is still that beautiful..... and i tell you she looks angelic in white,,,,,
but his thots were interupted by the hug which nupur gave him,,
nupur literally jumped on him,,, (let me remember you he was shirt less)
n: i missed you so much sadu,,,,,,,,
m: i missed you too,,,,,,,,,,
parting from hug..
m: where were you stupid?? college ke baad aaj 3 years ke baad mil rahi ho,,,,,,,
n: mujhe andar to aane ko kaho,,,,,,
m: ab tumhe mere permission chahiye kya??? pehle to meri pocket se keys nikaal kar mujhe bina bataaye ghar mein aa jaati thi,,,,,,
n: ok ok..... mein aa rahi hoon..
she sat on the couch in the hall,,,
m: seriously tum kahaan chali gyi nupur? mujhe bataana to chahiye tha,,,,, mene tumhe kitne mails kiya,,,,,, tumne number bhi change kar liya,, aur,
n: wo mein austrailia chali gyi thi,,,,, work load ke wajah se email check nhi kar paayi,,,,,,,,,,,,
m; kkk,,,,,
n: ok ab tum jaao fresh ho ke aao..
he goes and cums back within seconds..
m: to yahaan kahaan reh rahi ho>>
n: donno,,,,,, i think kisi acche hotel mein.....
m: wat?? r u kidding me??
n: look mayank,,
m: okk,,, to nupur yahaan kese aanaa hua??
n: yahaan se guzar rahi thi to socha tumse milti chaloo,,,,,,,,,,, dumbo tumse milne aayi hoon itni door se,,
m: to you dumbo tum mere yahaan hi rukogina,,
n: but..
m: no if's no buts.... just shut yur mouth up..
n: is dis the way to talk to girls?? (in a little dramatic tone..)
m: ohh really??? wese mene 3 saal se kisi ladki se baat nahi ki to you know..
n: really???? i mean yes college mein bhi i was the only girl...... but after i went you had no,,,,
m: shut up nupur,,, you know i m not interested in girls,,,,,
n: wat????????????? i didnot know you were a ...
m: xcuse me,, (understanding wat nupur was thinking..) i did not mean that,,, i m a proper boy,,, not a gay,,,, cool... tum nupur har baat ko kitna galat leti ho...........

n: hush... (sigh of relief)
m: okk then..... tell me wat you did??? any boyrfrnds???
n: naah,,,,, and you,,
m: paaleees....... to tumhe tumhaara dream boy nahi mila jo tumhe,,,,
and he burst out laughing....
n: mayank ,,,,,,,
a little smile appeared her face too,,,,,, and mayank was still laughing..
m: you rememer that day???
n: hmm.......
fashback,,,
we see mayank and nupur sleeping on same bed,,,,,,,, in mayank's room.... actually nupur used to sleep sumtyms with mayank,,,,,, but only they shared bed and nothing else.......
just lyk best frnds....
it was 2.30 wen nupur woke up...
and mayank too was awake,,,,
so they started talking..
n: pata hai mayank i want a handsome guy with muscles,,,,, he shud be ntelligent, smart, loving ,c caring, responsible...
m: actually yeh saari khoobiyaan mujhme hai,,,,,,,, to tum mujhse hi shaadi karlo.... (in a joky tone)
n: sheeesh,,,,,, mujhe aise nights sote huye thode hi bitaani hai,,,,,,,,, (she said in a normal tone not knowing wat she said)
m: wat do you mean?? soke nahi bitaani to kese bitaani.. (he stopped in middle understanding her meaning).... ohhhhhhh kkkkkkkkkkkk..... did you just say...
nupur was hell embarrased,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
n: ok mayank i wanna sleep gud night... (she switched off the lights)
,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
present..
and mayank was laughing lyk anything,,,,,,,
m: i cnt believe it nupur,,,,,,, hum itne frank the............
n: seriously i cant forget those days.......... they were just too gud............
wen nupur slipped and fell on mayank and mayank lost his balance they both fell on the sofa placed near by..
mayank was on nupur,,,,,,,,,,,
they were lost.............
mayank broke ,, and made nupur stand,,,,,,,,,,,,
an awkward silence was prevailing,,,,,
m: so coffee?
n; tumhe banaani aati hai?
m: haan tumhaare jaane ke baad mere liye coffee kon banaata??? aur wese bhi ab mein world ki best coffee banaata hoon,,,,,
n: oh really,,,, so wat r you waiting for? go....
mayank goes to the kitchen followed by nupur,,,,,,,,
mayank made coffee and placed one cup for nupur,,
n: hmm,,,,,,,,,, yeh to sach mein word ki best coffee hai,,
m: really??? thanx ...........
n: mayank i wanna sleep..... mein bahut thak gyi hoon,,,,,,,,,,,
m: sure i hope you remember the path to my bedroom,,,,,,
n: yur bedroom??
m: to kahaan>?/ u loved to sleep on my bed......
n: ok,,,
nupur goes to mayank's room and jumps on the bed,,,,,,,,
n: i luv this bed,,,,
m: hmm,,,,,,,
soon nupur falls asleep...
taking advantage of the tym mayank finishes all his office work to spend the rest of the day with nupur,,,
soon his is done and nupur to wakes up,,,,
n: so wats the programme??
m: bolo,,,,, wese samrat gunjan,,,
n: haan wo kese hai?
m: bahut khush hai shaadi karli hai aur ek beta hai,,,,
n: really?
m: tumhe milna hai,,,,,,,,, mein phone karta hoon,,
n: nahi,,,,,,,,, i mean aaj ka day tumhaare saath spend karna chahti hoon,,,,,
m: sure,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
they go to beach,,,,,,,,,,,,
nupur and mayank are playing in the water,,,,,,, wen mayank gets lost in nupr,,,,,,
he is continuosly gazing nupur,,,,, nupur blushes wen she notices that he is gazing her,,,'
mayank comes forward and hugs nupur,,,,,
nupur too hugs mayank,,,,,,,
mayank slowly whispers in nupur's ears...
" i really missed you nupur,,,, really missed you,,,,,," he says wen tears start flowing his eyes,,
nupur : i missed you too ,,,,, mayank,,,,,,, and dont cry either i too will start crying,,,,
and the frndly hug unknowingly changed into a passionate hug.........
wen mayank pulls apart sits down his knees
m: i love you nupur,,,,,, i love you,,,,,,,,,,,,
nupur is shocked,,,,
n: idiot,,,,,,,, itni der kyu laga di kehne mein,,,,,, stupid,,,,,,
a 1000000000000000000000000 watt smile (i can die for that smile) appeared his face.....
he stood up......... caught hold of her waist........ pulled her closer........
m: i can guarantee i will not let yur nights get sleepy........
nupur blushed hard on this,,,,
and soon mayank came forward and kissed her lips..... passionately,,
nupur too responded with same passion,,,,,,,,
wen both were out of breath they broke,,
m: i was waiting for this moment from so long.......
n: aha,,,,, agar tum aaj nahi bolte to mujhe humesha ke liye kho dete,,,,,,,
m: wat? (confused)
n: my mmarriage was fixed with sumone else and i left my house and came to you with last hope that you will propose me and if not tomorrow wud be the last day of my life.....
m: dont you dare say that again...........
and they hugged.......
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guys,,,, waiting for yur comments..........

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Parii!!!
m the first one to coment!!!
hey hey hey!!!
this one was soooo cuteee!!!!
wow!!! mayur were sooo frank!!!
nd i really luvd this OS!!!
thanx 4 d pm... :)
Edited by A-N-S-H-I-K-A - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago


omg pari

even these many claps werent enough

i just loved your os

i mean they are the best

i jusst drool over them and this one toh

stole my hert yaar

im second to comment yay

keep writing more

thanks for the pm


love pebo
Edited by pebolovesmayur - 15 years ago

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