Mera Intazar Krna(Mayur ff)new thread link pg 150 - Page 46

Originally posted by: zummi03

awesome update dear..
continue soon..

Originally posted by: Divya_kaldivya

Hey Rabi.. Nice update.. par yeh... Mayu is heartbroken and So Am I.... Why? this twist? yaar, please don't separate them from each other.. plz.. yaar..

Originally posted by: Senny

Hey Rabi,

Very well written but nupur is not someone who would betray anyone, i ams ure she must have tried to clarify, she wouldn't just ignore mayank like this. I loved the brother sister parts throughout and even the mum and mayank parts were awesome. Later the brother sister parts very sweet. The best bit being the shocker of N's engagement. I am so sad now, Do update soon. Hugsssssssss.Keep up the good work.

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

sorry sorry and extremely sorry for such late comments......

i guess i got busy........

i am really very sorry.........

and u know what?

pink is my favourite colour........

and this part made me cry buckets.........

i mean how cud u do this?

how?

why?

i felt the pain of mayu........

i didnt like that nupsi got engaged.......

but i guess i understand.......

loved the relationship of majan.........

awesome update!

i am waiting for the next one..............

Originally posted by: khan-anam

Heyyyy rabi.....😊

MINDBLOWING yaaar...

Originally posted by: prerna_agrawal

hey rabi......just read all the parts.....its really an awesome ff.....i really don't have words to describe.....i simply loved each n every bit of it!!!!.......thanx a lot for the pm by which u informed me bout this ff.......too good!!....while reading this latest part i had tears in my eyes!!.....it was so emotional........really love the storyline n the concept!!!............plzz pm me next time when u update it!!.........

Originally posted by: sushu96

awesssssummm...toooo gud yaar...luvd it......

Originally posted by: KrazyRiya

very touching update dear.....

it was so emotional......so painful......yaar !!!

I was literally having tears in my eyes seeing poor Mayank's condition .......😭

I can feel the pain.....the sorrow....the breakdown......he's suffering from !!!

I'm really feeling really bad for him !!!

And....Nupur....though may she's right in her own way but still how can she think of marrying someone else without thinking about mayank or trying to contact and atleast inform him once !!!

Its my personal opinion .......no offence to others !!!

I really liked Mayank-Gunjan bonding......they share a wonderful understanding relationship with each other !!!

Gunjan understands Mayank so well ......I really liked their scenes !!!

Alongwith Mayur's meeting ........ I would really like to read some Samrat's track too !!!

Anyways.....great update dear !!!

Plzzz.....update next part soon !!! Really can't wait !!

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Nups married Sameer

Its Biggest shock

How can Nups do this yaar

Its unfair totally unfair

Mak Nups realise or let them atleast meet each other

But didnt accepted this frm Nups

I thought the might meet

Really cried wit mayu yaar

Originally posted by: Sunshine Girl

😡..............samajh to tm gayi hogi..............mujhe pehle se hi tmhari neeyat par shaq ho gaya tha..............😡...............
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