Mera Intazar Krna(Mayur ff)new thread link pg 150 - Page 42

hey lovely update

Had so much fun reading it

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: dmgmjht4ever

reserved!

no one can take the second commenter spot now!

but I'll win for longest commenter

for sure...

EDIT

haha

I'm going to win!

actually,

maybe not

I do have homework

that too, social studies

grr.. I don't like hw

but who does?

whatever

coming to the part

awwww 😭

I feel so sorry for Mayank!

And don't say that you can't express feelings

I was tearing up!

I'm sad 😭😭

and mad 😡😡

Nupur! How dare you!

How dare you hurt my Mayank! 😆

hmmm maybe I will win

that is if Lina doesn't see this 😆

getting off topic

but seriously

you expressed Mayank's condition really well

nicely done👏👏

and 😲

nupur and sameer

no stupid sampur 😆

only Mayur!

okay

having a mixture of feelings

I'm

😲shocked that Nupur and Sameer are getting married (but I kind of saw that coming)

😭sad for Mayank and losing his love

and

😡angry at Nupur for doing this!

okay,

I think no one will beat me

if someone does

then I'll make this longer

and longer

and longer

...

and longer

see! I think that's what you should do for your parts

even though they are pretty long

but still

but then again,

school's starting

so I'll let you off the hook...

for now

anyways,

I should stop talking

(bad habit of mine)

then again,

I'm quiet

oh gosh,

I'm starting to blabber more

continue soon!

hey nidhi my dear...........itna lamba comment..........
anyways thanks a lot 4 liking it.......
i will try to update soon..........
i know you are really sad for mayank..........but don't worry main sab hiek kar don gi.........
love you.........🤗

Originally posted by: myownarea

u expressed the emotions very well rabi!!
very well done!! I could almost see Mayank's reactions and that was fabulous!! 👏

hey thanks a lot 4 liking it..........
i m really glad that you liked my work..........
thanks once again.......😊

Originally posted by: Naughtynatty

wow that update was too much to take !!
i mean mayank ka dukh dekha nahi gaya !!
it was a very moving update !!

hey thanks dear........
i m glad that u liked the update.........
it really means a lot to me............😊

Originally posted by: mannnnnn

lovely update
ye parhne k baad i feel k tum jaldi likho aur me parhun
update asap
i lv mayank gunjan bonding, so pure
em in lv wid mayank's lv intensity

thanks dear..........
main surelly jaldi update karon gi taki tum jaldi parho..........😆
thanks once again dear.........
n yeah i too love both mayank n gunjan's bonding n mayank's love intensity..........😉

Originally posted by: luv-myur

Hey The writing was good-and u were worried abt not being able to portray their feeling properly------but not at all--u portrayed it-their feelings were seen clearly.

So sad 4 mayank---u gave me a very big shock. I mean -mujhe pehle laga ki this dude 4m australia has something to do with them like he was looking 4 a girl so nupur could b one of them -that is what i was thinking but the big shock u gave was making them engaged.

I am totally wondering abt what is nupur thinking.

And yea-love the mayank and gunjan bont completely---but yaar i was expecting mayank to tell gunjan everything-so that their bond would be fully true. But i get mayanks perspective too-he dosen't want to get her tension.

Mayank--u r the man! Plz don't misunderstand nupur.

Plz-plz-plz make him realize that it was not nupur chatting with him.

Plz get the misunderstanding out of the way soon.

Thankyou 4 the update--i was waiting 4 it---------------but belive me i will definately be waiting 4 the next parts very impatiently.

Like the ff a lot-thx 4 it!

hey dear i m really glad that u liked the update n thanks a lot 4 liking my work.........
well you were waiting 4 my update.........it makes me feel nice
thanks a lot for this...........
well all this will sort out in next 2 or 3 updates..........
mayank will come to know abt everything..............n a biggest shock is in its way for you all
so wait 4 next update............
i will update next soon............
n dear thanks a lot 4 such a lovely comment of urs..............

Originally posted by: -Pooji-

Hey
Nice great Awesome Update
thankz for pm

hey pooja thanks dear.........😊

Originally posted by: Shafoo

tht was awesome part

thanks a lot 😊

Originally posted by: maria_awan

hey rabi i loved the nice use of emotion thanks 4 pm andupdate as soon as possible i am waiting4 it

hey maria thanks dear
i will update soon😊

Originally posted by: ~*mishu*~

u described the emotions very well!!
i could feel what mayank was feeling!
amazing part! continue soon

hey thanks 4 liking this update.........
i will cont soon...........pakka.....😊