Mera Intazar Krna(Mayur ff)new thread link pg 150

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surbhi tyagi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#401

wow dear , awesome update . loving it .........great work 👏

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Navi

@Navi_44

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Posted: 15 years ago

#402

Hey Rabi

awesome part..but feel soo sad for Mayank!!!!

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Divya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#403

Hey Rabi.. Nice update.. par yeh... Mayu is heartbroken and So Am I.... Why? this twist? yaar, please don't separate them from each other.. plz.. yaar..

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Senny

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Posted: 15 years ago

#404

Hey Rabi,

Very well written but nupur is not someone who would betray anyone, i ams ure she must have tried to clarify, she wouldn't just ignore mayank like this. I loved the brother sister parts throughout and even the mum and mayank parts were awesome. Later the brother sister parts very sweet. The best bit being the shocker of N's engagement. I am so sad now, Do update soon. Hugsssssssss.Keep up the good work.

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

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Posted: 15 years ago

#405

sorry sorry and extremely sorry for such late comments......

i guess i got busy........

i am really very sorry.........

and u know what?

pink is my favourite colour........

and this part made me cry buckets.........

i mean how cud u do this?

how?

why?

i felt the pain of mayu........

i didnt like that nupsi got engaged.......

but i guess i understand.......

loved the relationship of majan.........

awesome update!

i am waiting for the next one..............

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anam

@khan-anam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#406

Heyyyy rabi.....😊

MINDBLOWING yaaar...

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prerna_agrawal

@prerna_agrawal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#407

hey rabi......just read all the parts.....its really an awesome ff.....i really don't have words to describe.....i simply loved each n every bit of it!!!!.......thanx a lot for the pm by which u informed me bout this ff.......too good!!....while reading this latest part i had tears in my eyes!!.....it was so emotional........really love the storyline n the concept!!!............plzz pm me next time when u update it!!.........

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Varsha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#408

very touching update dear.....

it was so emotional......so painful......yaar !!!

I was literally having tears in my eyes seeing poor Mayank's condition .......😭

I can feel the pain.....the sorrow....the breakdown......he's suffering from !!!

I'm really feeling really bad for him !!!

And....Nupur....though may she's right in her own way but still how can she think of marrying someone else without thinking about mayank or trying to contact and atleast inform him once !!!

Its my personal opinion .......no offence to others !!!

I really liked Mayank-Gunjan bonding......they share a wonderful understanding relationship with each other !!!

Gunjan understands Mayank so well ......I really liked their scenes !!!

Alongwith Mayur's meeting ........ I would really like to read some Samrat's track too !!!

Anyways.....great update dear !!!

Plzzz.....update next part soon !!! Really can't wait !!