Mera Intazar Krna(Mayur ff)new thread link pg 150

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Divya

@myownarea

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Posted: 15 years ago

#371

u expressed the emotions very well rabi!!
very well done!! I could almost see Mayank's reactions and that was fabulous!! 👏

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Natasha

@Naughtynatty

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Posted: 15 years ago

#372

wow that update was too much to take !!
i mean mayank ka dukh dekha nahi gaya !!
it was a very moving update !!

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mannnnnn

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Posted: 15 years ago

#373

lovely update
ye parhne k baad i feel k tum jaldi likho aur me parhun
update asap
i lv mayank gunjan bonding, so pure
em in lv wid mayank's lv intensity

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luv-myur

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Posted: 15 years ago

#374

Hey The writing was good-and u were worried abt not being able to portray their feeling properly------but not at all--u portrayed it-their feelings were seen clearly.

So sad 4 mayank---u gave me a very big shock. I mean -mujhe pehle laga ki this dude 4m australia has something to do with them like he was looking 4 a girl so nupur could b one of them -that is what i was thinking but the big shock u gave was making them engaged.

I am totally wondering abt what is nupur thinking.

And yea-love the mayank and gunjan bont completely---but yaar i was expecting mayank to tell gunjan everything-so that their bond would be fully true. But i get mayanks perspective too-he dosen't want to get her tension.

Mayank--u r the man! Plz don't misunderstand nupur.

Plz-plz-plz make him realize that it was not nupur chatting with him.

Plz get the misunderstanding out of the way soon.

Thankyou 4 the update--i was waiting 4 it---------------but belive me i will definately be waiting 4 the next parts very impatiently.

Like the ff a lot-thx 4 it!