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Posted: 15 years ago

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awesum part rabi.....Infact all ur parts are just fabulous !!

I really loved the third part !!! It was fantastic !! You have described Mayur's feelings so beautifully !!!

really awesum.....loved it to the core !!!

I just love mayu......he loves Nupur from the bottom of his heart !!!

Omgggg........ he's too cute !!

And...wat is this ??? Gunjan and Mayank........I thought they were cousins....like bro n sis...!!!

How can anybody even think of their marriage ???

And....plz...mayur ko jaldi mila do......I'm dieing to see Mayur's meeting !!

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Hey guys thank you all for ur comments n support......
i m really sorry guys as i didn'treply to ur comments this time....i m really very busy these days so im soooo sorry......dill se sorry....... 😛
actually i wanted to update now so that's why
aur waise bi guys what i could reply to ur threats.....hehe 😆
i have received so many threats even of my murder for this gunjan n mayank's issue
i never thought that you all will take it that much seriously
well this update will cool down you all
but its going to raise a new strom of damkies for me........😆
so i m ready for this now....... 😳😉
here is the next chapter.......enjoy n don forget to leave ur precious comments
i promise next time i will make sure to reply each n everyone......
do comment

Rabi.....

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Chapter 6
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MM: beta main soch rahi thi k abb teri bi shaadi kar don............
M: (opened his eyes at this n smiled thinking abt nupur as his wife).........meri shaadi?
MM: han..........aakhir mujy bi to baho chahiye na..........
M: maa itni jaldi kya hai...........(just faking this before his mom)
MM: jaldi kya.........ab to tum office bi jaane laage ho..........to iss liye main ab tuhari shaadi karwaaon gi.......
M: ok maa..........thiek hai.........lekin shaadi k liye larki bi to chahiye hoti hai na.........
MM: janti hun...........aur maine larki dundh li hai..........
M: (getting up from her lap)........kyaa??????.........kon?????
MM: beta main soch rahi thi k teri aur gunjan ki shadi karwaa don.........(she said happily)
M: (hell shocked........he at once get up from bed)........what??...........maa yeh aap kya keh rahi hain????.........main aur gunjan??????
MM: han beta.........main gunjan ko apni bahu banana chahti hun.........
M: maa aap yeh kya keh rahi hain...........(he could never even imagined it n his mom was saying this to him)
MM: lekin iss main burai kya hai.............wo tumhari cousin hai..........tum uss ko buhat ache se jaante ho........aur to aur..........
M: maaa please..........(he said out of irritation)
MM: lekin beta........
M: (not letting her say anything).........wo meri behan hai maa...........she is like my sister..........i love her a lot but just as an elder brother.............how could you even think abt this maa.............(he was really disturbed with this)
MM: (noticing the seriousness of mayank she too stood up)........lekin beta maine socha k............wo sach main tumhari behan to nahi na.......cousin hai aur cousins main to
M: maa please............(he paused n heaved a sigh n then spoke calmly holding her shoulders).........maa maine hamesha usse apni behan mana hai...........main uss k bare main aisa soch bi nahi sakta........app janti nahi aap ki iss baat ne mujy kitna embarrass kiya hai..........
MM: beta i m really sorry.........main to bas tum se pochna chahti thi..........agar tumhe yeh thiek nahi lagta to koi baat nahi beta...........just do what you want........ i won't force you for anything...........
M: (giving her a subtle smile).......thanks maa...........(he felt himself relaxed now)
MM: tumhari khushi main hi meri khushi hai...........(said smilingly)
he was about to sit on bed but just then he asked her mom.........
M: maa kahin aap ne gunjan se iss bare main koi baat to nahi ki..........(he asked as he didn't want to spoil his sacred relation with gunjan..........he dearly loves her as a brother)
MM: directly to kuch nahi kaha...........lekin bas thori si baat ki thi aaj dinner k baad
M: lekin kyon maa...........(again with exasperating tone)
MM: maine sirf sarsari si baat ki thi........main pehle tumhara opinion jaan'na chahti thi........
M: (getting up from bed n moving towards door)...........mujy gunjan se baat karni ho gi abi...........
MM: kahan jaa rahe ho...........???
M: kahin nahi maa..........aap jaa k soo jayie ........good night.........(he said slightly smiling..... altough he was really restless then but he didn't want to show it to his mom........he was actually very disturbed with all this..........)
MM: good night beta............(she also didn't want to ask anything else as she knew that he was distressed right now.......n its better to give him some time..........

Mayank went to gunjan room n was about to enter in the room but stopped at the door............n then decided to knock first...........for the first time he knocked at her door........he never cared about this ever before but now situation was a little bit different n awkward too.............he thought for a second n mumble........"i'll have to talk to her abt this......i can't bear this edginess anymore" n then knocked at the door............
gunjan came to open the door n was really amaized looking mayank at the door............n asked out of amaizment...........
G: mayank ...........tum kab se knock karne laage aur wo bi mere room main aane se pehle.........
M: wo..........(didn't know what to say n how to start.).........main ander aa sakta hun.........
G: well this is news for me mayank sharma is asking my permission...........(she said amusingly).......
n then noticing the seriousness on his face.........she got aside giving him way to come in.........
mayank came in .........not knowing how to start............it was really difficult for him to talk about all what his mom had said him a while ago to gunjan............
M: wo mujhy tum se kuch baat karni thi............
G: (till then she has sensed that something was definietly wrong)...........kyaa baat hai mayank.........(she said with concern).........
M: gunjan.............wo.........(oh god why it is so difficult.......he thought).......aaj maa ne tumhe kuch kaha kya...........dinner k baad........(finally he said)
G: wo.......aunty kuch baat kar rahi thi tumhari shadi k bare main........... lekin kyon?.......aakhir baat kya hai?
M: (heaved a sigh turned towards wall n finally said).........gunjan ........maa abi meri aur tumhari shaadi k baare main baat kar rahi thi..........wo chahti hain k ham dono shaadi kar lain.........lekin gunjan main kissi aur se pyar karta hun........buhat pyaar karta hun lekin agaar main kisi aur k sath committed na bi hota to bi main iss bare main kabi soch bi nahi sakta.........tumhe maine hamesha apni behan mana hai........aur yeh sab.......i mean i just cant understand k maa ne aisa socha bi kaise............
mayank said all this in one breath facing his back to gunjan..........n now was waiting for her reaction.......
n then he felt gunjan's hand on his shoulder............
G: (she said softly)...........mayank..........(mayank turned to face her n she continued).........mayank maine bi hamesha tumhe apne bhai ki tarha mana hai........tumhe iss baat k liye itna embarrass feel karne ki koi zarorat nahi hai............aunty ne jo kaha usse bhol jao.......unhon ne jo thiek samja wo keh diya..........ab iss bare main soch soch kar khud ko preshan mat karo............
M: (smiled now)..........i can't tell you gunjan how much relaxed i m feeling now............thanks a lot.........jab maa ne wo baat ki to..........i was so...
G: (cutting him off) offo mayank maine kaha na ab usse bhol jao...........n relax ok.........aur yeh sad sa chahra tumhe bilkul suit nahi karta..........now show me ur dimple wali smile..........
Mayank lips automatically curved into a sweet smile flashing his dimples............
G: hmm...........thats like my monkey...........(she said smilingly)
M: ok chashmish...........ab tum araam karo ..........good night.......(giving her a side hug)
G: good night.............(she said with a cute smile)
mayank turned to go but gunjan stopped him calling out his name............."mayank"
without turning he replied............."now what gunjan"
G: tum ne abi kaha tum kisi se buhat pyaar karte ho............kon hai wo? (she asked curiously)
mayank turned n smiled at her question...............n said folding his arms at his chest................
M: oh really...........you don't know
G: of course i don't know..............how would i know that whom you love...........
M: don't tell me gunjan.............tumhe sach main nahi pata i thought tum mazak kar rahi ho........sirf tumhe hi to maine nupur k bare main bataya hai...........aur koi to janta takk nahi..........(he was shocked as how could she forgot abt this )
G: (shocked) what??????...... nupur????? if i m not wrong ye wohi hai na jiss se tum chat kate thy.........almost 3 saal pehle........
M: of course gunjan..........
G: mayank.........woh jiss k bare main tum ne mujy london jaane se pehle bataya tha...........wo date aur......(still in shock)
M: han bilkul............yeh wohi hai.........
G: i can't believe this............tum abi tak ussi se pyar karte ho.............
M: kyon ab tak pyar badal jana chahiye tha..........(he said with a smirk)
G: i m amaized mayank..........anyways to phir mujy bi milna hai nupur se..........kab milva rahe ho mujy?
M: pehle main khud to mill lon............
G: kya matlab? (confused)
M: matlab yeh k i even don't know where she is?.......main khud usse dhundh raha hun.........i just hope k wo mujy jald mill jaye..........because i can't live without her anymore.....
G: mayank............its enough..........
M: (confused at her reaction) kyon kya hoa?
G: tum ne mujy jitne shocks dene hain wo aik hi baar main de do..............iss tarha bar bar shocks dene ki koi zarorat nahi.............tum kehna kya chahte ho k tum usse mily bi nahi itne sallon se
M: well milna to door ki baat meri uss se baat bi nahi hoi hai(adding one mor shock for her) ............waise the good news is k aaj maine usse dekha...........2 years 7 months 23 days........k baad
G: oh thats great............time yaad nahi kya..........?......
M: kya?.........time matlab?
G: tum usse 2 years 7 months aur 23 days k baad miley na...........to maine socha minutes aur seconds bi yaad hon gay........
M: tum mera mazak urra rahi ho..........
G: nahi nahi..........main kyon mazak urrane lagi.......i just wish k wo tumhe jaldi se mill jaye............(she said while smiling)
M: (sighed) ya ......me too..........anyways ab raat buhat ho gayi hai tum so jao...........good night
G: good night.........(said with a smile..)

Next Day

Mayank after returning from office got ready for the engangement earlier he didn't want to go there as sameer was just his one of the university mate n also a room mate, not a friend, he was not of his type.........sameer was used to alcohol n girls but now he himself was ready to go to engangement.......as sameer had again called him to remind him........ also because he wanted to go there........ not just there he actually wanted to go to the gatherings n functions like this......might be in this way he will come across with nupur.........he was in black suit looking gentleman........n handsome, dashing as usual.......
he entered the hotel where engangement was to held..........looking at the gathering he was sure that he is at right place.........he started looking here n there for sameer........actually he was little bit late....as now some girls were taking the girl in purple lehenga towards the sameer who was in a stage........ mayank smiled at the sameer n started looking here n there to fina any other friend of him........but as there were a lot of people he was not able to find any known face........he again turned towards the stage.........sameer was holding the ring in one hand n his just to be fiancee's hand in other..........as soon as mayank saw the girl who was going to be sameer's fiancee..........he felt as if the whole world has spinned across him..........to his utmost shock that girl was non other than his craze, his madness, his love, his nupur............the only word which he could utter was "nu..pu..r"...........he never ever expected this to happen.....just then sameer slid the ring in nupur's finger.........mayank felt as if someone has drew his soul out of his body......his vision became blurr because of unshed tears in his eyes.........he was trying hard to control his emotions ........after a few seconds nupur also made sameer wore the ring........mayank's grip tightened on the flowers which he was holding........n she was shyly smiling........ this was hurting mayank even more.........mayank moved two steps back........he was not able to stand here anymore......if he would have stand there more then something very wrong would have happened......
mayank quickly came out of the hotel........he was in parking lot..........he hurled the bouquet on the ground.........n punched hard his car with his hand, ..........he got in the car n drove away from the spot..........he was not able to bear this much pain which nupur has given him......he was driving recklessly with 125 speed........his vision was becoming blur again n again but he was not shedding even one tear.........he was strong.....he was man.... how he could cry.........no way........never.........but he was heart broken.........he was shattered ........the result of his this much wait, pure love was this deception ..........the girl whom he loved more than his life has become now of someoneelse........."why.......why........why you did this to me nupur.......why".......he mumbled clenching his teeth........

mayank stopped his car outside the sharma mension .........he came out of the car but was not going in.......he was trying to pacify himself but was not able to..........was just not able to...........he didn't want his mom or gunjan came to know abt his condition.............
after sometime he went in............gunjan n his mom were setting the dinning table.........they were amaized to see mayank back to home so soon..........then mayank's mom asked
MM: beta itni jaldi wapiss aa gaye.........sab thiek to hai na?
M: (with fake smile but noting meeting his eyes with her).....han maa sab thiek hai..........bas wo mere sar main dard ho raha hai........iss liye jaldi wapiss aa gaya...........
MM: ohh khair chalo...........sath main dinner karte hain........aur uss k baad medicine le lena..........
M: nahi maa..........main buhat thak gya hun............thori dair araam karna chahta hun..........mujy bhuk nahi hai.......aap kha li jiye.....(he said facing his back to his mom n gunjan n then without waiting for her answer he went upstairs)..........
MM: isse achanak kya ho gya...........gunjan beta tum mayank k liye coffee bana k lay jao aur usse tablet bi de dena..........khud to wo kabi lay ga bi nahi..........
G: ji aunty............main abi lay jati hun..........(she was also worried abt mayank...........she never saw him so much down ever before)

Gunjan went to mayank's room...........but he was not there......then she went to the terrace attached with his room.........mayank was standing there with his hands on railing staring at the dark sky........gunjan went upto him n also stood at his side looking towards the drak horizon.........there were only some starts n no sign of moon.....it was a dark night, not even air was blowing.....everything was silent n quiet just like mayank...........finally gunjan spoke still gawking at sky..........
G: kya baat hai mayank tum itne preshan kyon ho?
Mayank jerked out of his thoughts at gunjan voice.........he didn't noticed gunjan there........
M: gunjan tum............tum kab aayi?
G: (now sensing something is definietly disturing him)............mayank baat kya hai.............i have never seen you like this ever before.........if there is anything wrong you can share with me...........(she said with concern)
M: (fakely smiling)........nahi gunjan.......everything is perfectly fine........bas meri tabiet thiek nahi hai to issliye.......(again looking towards the sky)
G: mayank(making him face her).........tum mujh se kab se jhoot bolne laage..........just tell me whats the matter?
M: maine kaha na sab thiek hai..........agar koi baat hoti to main tumhe zaror batata.........(he didn't want to disturb her by telling her about nupur)
G: tum nupur ki wajah se preshan ho?.......(she guessed)
mayank closed his eyes at the mention of nupur's name..........he clenched his fist not letting him go weak......then he saw towards gunjan.......
G: (again spoke) don't worry mayank.......i m sure wo tumhe buhat jald mill jaye gi......
he was trying hard not to lose control over his emtions, his sorrow, his grief ........but at the mention of nupur's name the grief n pain took over him.........inspite of the hard control over his emotions a lone tear escaped his eyes...........

Palkon k bandan ko torr kar damman pay aa gira Mohsin
Aik ansoo mere sabr k toheen kar gaya

gunjan was stunned looking the tear in mayank's eyes........she had never seen him crying
G: mayank.......(she was really disturbed looking mayank crying)
M: gunjan..........wo......
gunjan wiped off his tear..........n said........
G: mayank...........yeh kya hai? (she also was feeling the pain mayank was going through which.......although she didn't know anything abt all wat had happened to mayank)........mayank please sambhaloo khud ko......
just then mayank hugged her.......she too hug him back.........n patted his back.....
M: i love her gunjan...........i love her.......(mayank's eyes were dripping now....he was heart broken......the emotions, the grief, the sorrow which he was trying to hide somewhere in his heart had took over him now.......who won't be such heartbroken when the reward of someone unconditonal love came out as such deception.....
G: (tears also forming in her eyes)......i know mayank... i know you love her........tum kyon itna preshaan ho rahe ho...wo jald hi tumhe mill jaye..........i m sure.........sab thiek ho jaye ga.........
M: (broking apart from hug and said ) yeah.....you are right.........sab thiek ho jaye ga......
he wiped his tears off n was cursing himself for breaking down infront of gunjan..........
G: mayank........yahan thand kafi ho gayi hai.........tum ander chalo aur thora araam kar lo.........
without saying anything mayank came in n lay down on bed............keeping his arm on his forehead.........
gunjan too came to the room n saw the coffee mug on side table...........
G: coffee to thandi ho gayi ho gi............main dosri lay kar aati hun...........
M: nahi gunjan...........mujy nahi chahiye...........i just wanna rest a while.........uss k baad main thora better feel karon ga............please...
G: ok............tum ab so jao aur iss bare main zyada mat socho............
she pulled the quilt over him n switched off the light........."good night"......she said n came out of the room closing the door...........
mayank was just laying on the bed...........he was trying hard not to think of all about what had happened today...........but again n again that ring in nupur's hand that too of someone else flashed across his eyes...........
mayank closed his eyes n again a lone tear escaped from his eye n got absorbed in his hair..........

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hey guys i don't know how is this update.........i have tried to make it impressive
but i m not good at describing the emotions so please bear with me..........
n guys i good news for you all as in next chapter mayank n nupur are coming face to face..........
so wait for next update to know the reaction of both...........
anyways as you all have seen i have changed my style of updating...........is it easy to read or previous one was better.............do tell me.........
now i m waiting for ur comments, dont remain silent.............do comment guys..........please

love you all
Rabi...

Edited by rose.mn - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Yippie yahooo......1st to comment

Wow Rabi

Amazing ..!!!!!! 👏

what a touching update yaar

I had tears in my eyes

loved the bro-sis bonding between Mayank & Gunjan

I'm really angry on Nupur how could she get engaged

I feel sad for Mayu😭😭😭

They way you expressed his feelings

I was feeling his pain while reading it

do continue soon

I'm dying to know how Mayur will come together

aur haan jaldi update karna

warna maar khayegi😆😆😆
😆
luv
Nidzy

Edited by mayurarti - 15 years ago

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Rabi

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Nidzyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
tumhari wajah se mujhy apna post edit karna para.............
tum kyon itni active ho yaar.......😆
maine note k liye post res kiya but dekha k tum pehle hi kar chukki ho.......... 😭😭
haaye pata nahi main kab tumhare jitni active bano gi.......😆😳
anyways congrats for 1st comment..........👏👏👏
love you dear..............😳

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Originally posted by: rose.mn
Nidzyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
tumhari wajah se mujhy apna post edit karna para.............
tum kyon itni active ho yaar.......😆
maine note k liye post res kiya but dekha k tum pehle hi kar chukki ho.......... 😭😭
haaye pata nahi main kab tumhare jitni active bano gi.......😆😳
anyways congrats for 1st comment..........👏👏👏
love you dear..............😳

Sorry yaar

he he he 😆 😆 😆

kya karu aadat se majboor hu

waise tujhe ek baat bata du mai bas abhi sone hi jaa rahi thi jab tera update ayaa

Fikar not...... ek din tum bhi zaroor meri tarha active banogi😆 😆 😆

good night

love you too

take care

bye...........................

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Rabi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#367

Originally posted by: mayurarti

Yippie yahooo......1st to comment

Wow Rabi

Amazing ..!!!!!! 👏

what a touching update yaar

I had tears in my eyes

loved the bro-sis bonding between Mayank & Gunjan

I'm really angry on Nupur how could she get engaged

I feel sad for Mayu😭😭😭

They way you expressed his feelings

I was feeling his pain while reading it

do continue soon

I'm dying to know how Mayur will come together

aur haan jaldi update karna

warna maar khayegi😆😆😆
😆
luv
Nidzy

hehehe i m ready for this earlier............ 😆😆
waise main koshish karon gi k tumhe yeh chance na don.........mere murder ka
dekha pehle bi nahi diya...........😉
btw thanks a lot nidzy dear
i m glad u liked it.............i was tensed abt the update
i mean main emotions ko thiek tarha se describe hi nahi kar paa rahi thi.........
but i m so happy that u liked it........
you know what along with mayank's un conditional n deep love for nupur mayank n gunjan's relation is my favourite..........n also dia n nupur's...........but abi tumhe uss ka pata nahi...........bas mujhy hi pata hai😉

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Rabi

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: mayurarti

Sorry yaar

he he he 😆 😆 😆

kya karu aadat se majboor hu

waise tujhe ek baat bata du mai bas abhi sone hi jaa rahi thi jab tera update ayaa

Fikar not...... ek din tum bhi zaroor meri tarha active banogi😆 😆 😆

good night

love you too

take care

bye...........................

well i just can hope about this.............😭😭😭

kabi na kabi o main bi ho hi jaon gi avtive...........

kehtey hain na umeed pe dunya kaaim hai..........😆😆😆

ok so good night n sweet dreams abt mayur..............😳😉

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Nikki

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: mayurarti

Yippie yahooo......1st to comment

Wow Rabi

Amazing ..!!!!!! 👏

what a touching update yaar

I had tears in my eyes

loved the bro-sis bonding between Mayank & Gunjan

I'm really angry on Nupur how could she get engaged

I feel sad for Mayu😭😭😭

They way you expressed his feelings

I was feeling his pain while reading it

do continue soon

I'm dying to know how Mayur will come together

aur haan jaldi update karna

warna maar khayegi😆😆😆
😆
luv
Nidzy