Mera Intazar Krna(Mayur ff)new thread link pg 150 - Page 18

Originally posted by: mayurarti

Hi dear

When are you going to update??????????

luv
Nidzy

hey nidzy..........how are u dear
well nidzy hopefully today or may be tomorrow
actually i m writing it now...........bt it isn't complete yet
even i haven't read ur ff yet........i m actually busy with this na

Originally posted by: rose.mn

hey nidzy..........how are u dear
well nidzy hopefully today or may be tomorrow
actually i m writing it now...........bt it isn't complete yet
even i haven't read ur ff yet........i m actually busy with this na

Well I'm fine thankyou
Its OK dear take your time
luv
Nidzy

Hey guys thank you all 4 liking this ff of mine n also 4 ur love...........
here is next chapter............hope you all will like it


Chapter 3
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

S: wo milna chahta hai..........
D: to kya problem hai..........mill lo usse.........tum bi to yehi chahti ho(she said carelessly)
S: wo nupur se milna chahta hai
N n D: wat?????????????????????????????
N: (completely confused) ye tum kya keh rahi ho suhaani?
S: han nupur wo tum se milna chahta hai
D: but why?.................why nupur?..........i m really not getting wat are you saying? please will you explain....
S: wo maine usee pic dikhai thi jiss main ham teeno thy aur maine uss se kaha k jo right pe hai wo main hun.........but pata nahi kaise wo samaj raha hai k nupur main hun...........i mean wo....
N: (cutting in)..........lekin tum usse ab bata do na.......
S: maine usse kaha tha lekin wo keh raha hai k main bahane bana rahi hun.............
D: lekin jab suhaani hi tum ho to problem kya hai.........tum usse kaho k tum suhaani ho
S: maine usse abi apna naam nahi bataya tha........uss din jab college main nupur uss se takrayi thi to uss ne usse pehchaan liya aur wahin pe kisi student se pocha nupur ka naam............aur ab wo milna chahta hai nupur se
N: please suhaani.............. yeh kya bol rahi ho tum.................(getting irritated)
S: wo kuch dinno main hi london ja raha hai............3 saal k liye aur wo jaane se pehle aik baar tum se milna chahta hai
N: suhaani............have u gone mad........(she said disbelievingly)
S: please nupur sirf aik dafa tum uss se mil lo..............plz mere liye
N: no way suhaani..............tum aisa soch bi kaise sakti ho
D: suhaani..........tum kya bol rahi ho yeh.........
S: (pleading dia)....dia please........main iss sab se thak chukki hun.........main yeh sab khatam krna chahti hun...............uss ne kaha hai k agar main uss se na mili to wo khud mere ghar aa jaye ga........
N: suhaani agar tum usse le kar serious nahi thi to phir kyon baat ko itna barhaya......
D: han suhaani.......aur wo tumhare ghar kaise aa sakta hai?........kahin tum ne usse ghar ka adress to nahi diya
S: nahi dia wo keh raha tha wo khud pata kar lay ga kisi tarha se............please nupur tum aik baar us se mil lo.........wo waise bi uss k baad london chala jaye ga..........please sirf aik dafa
N: yeh sab galat hai suhaani............main aise kisi ki emotions k sath nahi khel sakti...........
S: main janti hun yeh galat hai..........but mere pass aur koi rasta nahi hai.........please nupur sirf aik dafa
N: mujhy believe nahi ho raha k tum yeh sab keh rahi ho.............but i m sorry suhaani main yeh sab kabi nahi karon gi......kabi bi nahi.......
then she get up n was really mad on suhaani..........n said
N: main ja rahi hun ghar..........aur aaj k baad iss bare main tum mujh se koi baat nahi karo gi........bye dia
dia was also abt to go but suhaani stopped her
S: dia please help me na..........tum nupur ko samjao
D: nupur sahi keh rahi hai suhaani......yeh sab galat hai
S: please dia............i m tired of all this.........please help me (she said with moist eyes)
D: (looking at her condition) ok main uss se baat karon gi............but mujhy nahi lagta wo maany gi....but still i will try
S: thanks dia..........
after this dia also went to her house...........

--------------------------------------
Sharma Mension

Mama ji: tum apni flight confirm kyon nahi karwa rahe? kahin jaane ka iradaa to nahi badal gaya
mayank's mama ji asked while having dinner
M: wo mama ji............wo mujy kuch important kaam tha to isliye.........
MJ: kyon tumhe aisa konsa kaam aa gaya hai..........jahan tak mujy pata hai tum krte to kuch ho nahi(he said sarcastically)
M: (making faces at this but then said).....wo main khana kha k batata hun...........(he could managed just this to say)
gunjan was smiling at mayank n his stupid excuses
after dinner mayank quickly got up n rushed to his room without wasting even a second..........he didn't give any chance to his mama ji to ask anything from him..............
gunjan laughed at his this quickness n went to his room after making coffee 4 him


mayank was as usual busy with his laptop.............
G: yeh kya ho raha hai...............aakhir mujhy bi to batao k aakhir yeh larki hai kon jiss se tum itni chat krte ho
M: i m not chatting with anyone right now.............u can see
G: abi nahi kar rahe ho but krte to ho na.............
M: agar krta bi hun to main tmhe kyon bataon?.............
G: arry i m ur best friend na..........to mujy to batana hi pary ga tmhe
M: pary ga matlab?
G: ofoo batao na................
M: abi nahi.................waqt aane pe sab bataon ga............but not now chashmish
G: (getting irritated) tum phir shuru ho gaye...........main abi aunty ko batati hun........
M: han han tum iss k ilaawa aur kar bi kya sakti ho
then started their stupid n silly fight..............

----------------------------------------------------

nupur was ignoring suhaani since few day...........she didn't want to help her anyway.........suhaani tried a lot to convince her but she wasn't listining her

Bhushan Mension

one day suhaani n dia came to nupur's house...............
nupur was in her room as she saw dia at her door............
N: (smilingly) arry dia tum.....ander aao na.....wahan kyon khari ho
but as she saw suhaani behind dia nupur's smile disappeared..........
D: (noticing this) pleas nupur..........yeh sab kya hai.........ham kissi aur ki waja se apni friendship to kharab nahi kar sakte na
N: dia main bi apni frindship kharab nahi kr sakti...........but jo suhaani keh rahi hai wo main kabi nahi kar sakti
D: i know nupur yeh sab galat hai..........but sirf aik dafa tum suhaani ki help kar do......mere lliye please
S: han please nupur...........tumhe koi problem nahi ho gii promise...........aur waise bi wo kal london ja raha hai
N: kal?
S: han kal aur wo aaj hi tum se milna chahta hai............maine uss se aaj milne ka wada kiya hai.......
N: (completely shocked) aaj?
S: han aaj.........issi liye hi us ne kal ki flight confirm ki hai..........wo tum se mily bina nahi jana chahta tha
N: lekin
S: (hold her hands in hers) please nupur...........for me........just once
N: (after thinking a bit).......lekin main uss es kaise milon gi........mujh se yeh nahi ho ga
S: nupur kuch nahi ga.........sirf 10 minutes k liye
N: ok.............sirf tmhare liye(finally she agreed to help suhaani but she was really scared)
S: thank you so much nupur..............thank you so much
after they both hug each other
D: not fair...............mujy tum log bhool gaye..........
N: to tum bi join karo na hamien
then all three friends hugged together while having tears in eyes

---------------------------------------------
Sharma Mension

mayank was really happy today..........n has also confirmed his flight to london n was getting ready
gunjan came to his room.................looking him this much happy she said leaning at his room's door
G: kya baat hai aaj to buha khush lag rahe ho..........
M: yep..........aaj main buhat khush hun.......
G:oh really..............waise itna ready ho k date pe ja rahe ho kya?
M: han................shayad
G: (excitedly screamed)...........sachiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
M: gunjan iss main itna chilaane ki kya zarorat hai............
G: chilaon nahi to aur kya karon..............The Mayank Sharma for the first time is going to date...........wowwwww...........lucky girl
M: (smiled heartedly)......to kya hoa? nahi jana chahiye kya
G: arry of course jaana chahiye.............but uss ka naam kya hai
M: hmmm naam................nupur..........
G: nice name...........well i m really happy 4 you
M: thanks....lekin abi mujy chalna chahiye.........i m getting late
G: ok..........all the best
M: thanks.....................
after this mayank went to the place which they had fixed 4 date
n was waiting 4 nupur impatiently

----------------------------------------------------------


they were at the hotel where mayank was waiting 4 nupur
D: nupur u ok na...........
N: han dia (gave her a fake smile)
S: nupur tum preshan mat hona ok............wo kuch nahi kahe ga tumhe...........
N: han janti hun
after getting down from car...........she slowly move towards hotel n was hell worried,nervous n confussed as for the first time she was going to meet any boy that too like this........

Inside the Hotel

she entered the hotel n looked here n there...........no one was there in the hotel n it was beautifully decorated with red flowers................seeing the empty hotel she became more worried........she was just looking here n there then she saw a person whose back was facing her............her heart beat became too fast n loud........ too loud that she could hear her heart beating so fast...........she tried to calm her down n took few steps farward
hearing the foot steps that person turned...............it was no other than Mayank.....Mayank Sharma.........he was looking really handsome in jeans n black shirt.........
as mayank saw nupur standing there infront of him...........he felt as if world has stopped............he held his breath looking at the paragon of beauty infront of him...........he was lost in her.........
she was in white n red anarkali dress with a long shafoon dopatta.........in half open hairn with slightest make up
mayank was captivated by the striking elegance of her beauty n simplicity...........
when nupur saw mayank staring at her like this she got really nervous n confused
then started looking here n there to avoid his gaze but he was just lost in her
then after getting some courage she paced towards mayank.............n then mayank too came back to his senses..........she was standing exactly infront of him.............he then finally said
M: hi nupur........
but nupur didn't say anything. for the first time her own name seems very strange to her as mayank spoke it............
then mayank pulled a chair out
M: (gesturing her to sit)........please
nupur sat on chait hesitatingly
mayank too sat on chair opposite her............n was just looking at her smilingly placing his finger below his chin......he could see how much confused she was........as she was just looking in her lap n was constantly playing with the corner of her anchal..............
she wasn't daring to look at him...........looking at her mayank sligtly smiled in his peculiar way
he clicked her photo in his mobile n nupur didn't come to know that
then he said putting his mobile in his pocket again

M: well in think maine tumhe kafi preshan kiya hai............but trust me nupur i really wanted to meet you once..........issi liye maine tumhe tna force kiya
nupur still didn't look at him
M: i m not like other guys nupur............i have never met with any girl like this ever before........you are the first one nupur.........
at this nupur looked at him but then again looked down not meeting her eyes with him........
M: waise mujy nahi lagta tha k tum itna confuse ho jao gi............i mean chatting se to mujhy lagta tha k tum buhat bold ho gi
still she didn't look up n was not uttering even a single word
M: main kal london jaa raha hun nupur.......aur london jaane se pehle main aik dafa tum se milna chahta tha......tumhe dekhna chahta tha..........tum se baat krna chahta tha
nupur was just listining all this..........n was not saying anything............
M: (said restlessly)nupur please kuch to kaho............main tmhari awaz sun'na chahta hun
nupur looked at him again n finally after muttering up some courage she managed to say
N: wo...........wo.......main....(confused wat to say)
M: (smiled at this).........well thank God tum ne kuch to bola warna mujhy to doubt hone laga tha k pata nahi tum kuch bolti bi ho k nahi............uss din college k bahar bi to tum mujhy daikh k aise bhaag gayi thi jaise kisi alien ko dekh lia ho
at this nupur slightly smiled..............
"her smile is also as beautiful as she is" he thought
M: well great.....tum to hansti bi ho..............(he smirked)
N: (restlessly).........dekhiye aap galat samaj rahe hain...........
M: i know main ne tumhe galat samja tha........really i never imagined that tum aisi ho.........lekin ab jisse main dekh raha hun...........that is the reality.......u r really like my dream girl nupur
nupur looked at him disbelievingly n she never expected this from him...........she instantly got up n said
N: mujy jana hai..............mujy late ho raha hai (n turned to go)
mayank too get up n stopped her by coming infront of her

she became really nervous at his this sudden act..........she moved two steps back n looked at him nervously
M: nupur main tum se kuch kehna chahta hun
N: (her heart was racing now but somhow she managed to say).........k.....kyaa
M: (with really serious tone)nupur main kal london chala jaon ga..........3 years k liye..........
he paused.............n then said
M: i really like you nupur.................
nupur at once looked at him disbelievingly............
N: k..kyaa..........(she felt as if world is spinning around her)
M: han nupur...........i love you........uss din se jab main ne tumhe pehli dafa dekha tha..........chatting k duran maine aisa kabi nahi feel kiya tha aur na hi aisa socha tha.........you were just a net friend to me.........lekin uss din jab main tum se mila..............i actually never believed in love at first sight...........but now i believe...........main tum se pyar krta hun nupur............
he was confessing his love.............n nupur was just numb ..........she wasn't getting wat to say, wat to do........then she looked in his eyes ................there was so much which she was unable to understand.........

M: kya tum mera intazar karo gi?
this was one more shock 4 her...........she was trying to get out of the first one n he added one more
mayank again asked with so much love n curiousity............
M: i want to know nupur................kya tum mera intazar karo gi..........
nupur was hell nervous, worried, shocked, maladjusted, brainsick, confused at the same time...........
then to finish all this she simply nodded not meeting eyes n was just looking down............unaware of wat she was doing n wat could be its consequences
while looking at her nodding mayank's happines knew no bounds..............out of happines he simply hugged her..................shiver ran down her spine at his touch...........
"wat is all this happening" she thought..............she was scared when he hugged her out of blue............she felt as she was abt to fall on ground but she controlled herself...........
hug was quick mayank himself broke apart quickly n holding her from shoulders he said
M: main tumhe bata nahi sakta k main kitna khush hun nupur..............thank you so much nupur.......thank you so much..........
nupur looked in his eyes n was thinking was he saying the truth...............
M: (with serious tone)main wahan tumhara ban k jaa raha hun nupur, wahan per bi sirf tumhara ban k rahon ga.........aur main wapis aaon ga nupur...........sirf tumhare liye...........i promise main wapiss aaon ga..........
nupur was disbelievingly looking into his eyes.....n was wondering was he saying truth........maybe wat he is saying is truth but she didn't care, how she could care, she just can't......she was here just 4 suhaani...............she just wanted to go from there..........her pulse was running insanely as he was still holding her 4rm her shoulders..........
N: mu.........mujhy abi jana hai....(she managed to say him)
mayank let go of her shoulders n moved aside giving her way to go............
nupur slowly moved towards door n stopped at mayank's words
M: mera intazar krna nupur...............main wapiss zaror aaon ga
she closed her eyes at this
mayank was just looking her going...............n was mumbling
M: turn nupur.........just once..........turn nupur..............main tumhe aik aakhri dafa dekhna chahta hun......please turn nupur
but nupur started moving again...............
M: (mumbling again).........agar mera pyar sacha hai to tum zaror murru gi nupur.........
mayank was looking her going holding his breath.............
then nupur stopped n turned to look at him................
mayank gave her his sweetest dimple smile...................

n his heart was praying...................

jaaneman jaaneman
jaaneman jaaneman

ek naam tumhara le kar
hum jeete hain marte hain
ye ishq nibha dena tum
guzarish ye karte hai (mayank was looking at nupur with so much love, hope n believe in his eyes)

jaaneman jaaneman
jaaneman jaaneman
ek naam tumhara le kar
hum jeete hain marte hain
ye ishq nibha dena tum
guzarish ye karte hai (then nupur turned to go...............n mayank was just looking her going)

jaaneman jaaneman

tum khush ho to
hum bhi yoon khush rehte hain
tum rootho to
hum khud se roothe rehte hain
ye jaan lo bus tum se hi (he sat there on chair n was lookiing at the nupur's pic which he has taken few minutes ago............her eyes were lowered n was looking so pure, simple, delicate n gorgious in it.........)
hum apni khabar rakhte hain
tum bhool na jaana is ko
guzarish ye karte hain

jaaneman jaaneman
jaaneman jaaneman (he closed his eyes reminding their first meetin n also this one too n that hug.......he simply smiled n whispered................."i love you nupur...........i just love you")

jitna bhi hum
tum ko chaahe kam lagta hai
ye ishq isliye hi to
pal pal badhta hai
tum se he is jeevan ka
hum saara bharam rakhte hain
tum tod na dena is ko
guzarish ye karte hain (he prayed to god.............that keep everything always alright............for him n also 4 nupur............he closed eyes n mumbled........"mera intazar krna nupur" ..............)

jaaneman jaaneman
jaaneman jaaneman



nupur rushed to the car in which dia n suhaani were waiting 4 her.............looking her coming dia n suhaani heaved a sigh of relief............
D: nupur tum thiek ho na...........(with so much concern she asked)
S: kya howa ander nupur.............
N: (restlessly) tum log pehle ghar chalo phir batati hun.............
in the whole way nupur was just thinking abt the mayank n his words were echoing in his brain..........
" Mera Intezar Krna".....................
was he meant it wat he was saying...........she thought looking out of the window of car on their way to home.......
"no...........yeh sach nahi ho sakta.......yeh pyar wagaira kuch nahi hota"............she thought.........."but his eyes.........wat was in them?.......nahiiii.........mujy yeh sab nahi sochna hai........maine yeh sab sirf suhaani kliye kiya hay.........sirf suhaani k liye".............she thought n assured herself.......

Precap
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

nupur told everything abt meeting to dia n suhaani
Mayank went to london...............

----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

hey guys do tell me how was it.............i m really confused right now...............
n wat do you think abt this song.............did it suit the situation............i just loved this song n couldn't stop myself 4rm adding it here
well guys plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do comment......................

hey guys i hope now there is no confusion that why mayank wanted to meet nupur........
well i will try to update soon
n won't let you to do Intezar 4 longer time
do leave ur precious comments..........
any kind of criticism is most welcomed................
but all of you atleast tell me how was it

love you all
Rabi

*EDITED*

Rabi!!!!!!!!!!! Meri dost!

ur ff is great i loved it and thansk 4 pm dear i love mayur moment and his i love u

Hey Rabi

Lovely update!!!

oh wow dear what a update but poor mayank really worried for him 😊